~DiL sE~ d3 FF IMP NOTE PAGE 129 - Page 7

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Its so cute they r getting naughtier not bad😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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EPISODE 4:


Rey and kria feel a little awkward while rey sees that there were almost 5 missed calls from one their friend from 'Passion for life' club…


Note : Imran is a great friend of Rey and Kriya who is also a member of Passion For Life ...


R: "DAMN!!!! (receiving the call) hey hi Immy!! Hello tum tumne caaalll????"


Immy: "dude?? Wats wrong wid u??? don't u know that today we hav a meeting????"


Kria gets up and moves towards washroom…


R: "wat??? Damn bool gaya !! sorry dude mein wo wo.."


K: "kya hua??? (turning around)"


R: "(he is was giving really an astonished look and also some weird expression..) haan ok kab kab hai?? I mean meeting kab hai??"


I: "ab meeting nahi buddy ab punishment club ka princi tum dono ki band bajane waale hai deklena!! I mean wo tum dono se milna chahthe hai!!!!! so 9am sharp plzzz be there!!"


R: "haan haan ofcourzz sure il be thr dude! Don't worry!"

He cuts the call and still there is a Q mark expression in kria's face..


R: "kria …? Wo wo actually Passion club ka meeting thi but we missed it!!"


K: "kya??? Sab tumari wajah se hua!! Meine kaha tha kal wo party mein nahi jaate but tum kabhi meri baat manthe ho??"


R: "huh..??? mein nahi manta tumari baat!! Woow ab blame mujpe daal diya??? Kal party mein mujse zyaada kisne enjoy ki??? Batao muje???"


K: "haan wo thodi enjoyment ki tho tho kya hua? Tum tum muje leke gaye the! Le jaane ke liye meine nahi kaha tha!!!"


Like alwzz they start fighting…

Jagda karthe karthe kria just observed the big round clock on their bedroom!


K: "(opening her mouth fully wide) 8 baj gaye???"


R: "wat?????"


K: "rey!!! Baago !! agar yeh meeting miss kardi na tho princi humein chodenge nahi chalo jaldi karo!!!"


R: "haan chalo chalo…"


Kria gets into washroom while rey gets himself choosing his dress! Rey got dressed up and he waiting for her in the living room!


R: "kriaaa??????? Kria c'mon!!! jaldi karo!! Tum ladkiyaan tayyar hone mein kithni waqt lagaathe ho??!!"


K: "haan aarahi hoon bas ek min!!"


R: "ek min keh keh ke chaalis minute hogaya!!! Kria agar tum nahi ayi na toh toh mein akela chala jaonga!! Don't blame me thn!"



K: "rey bas 1min aarahi hoon…"


R: "k—r—i—a(he just turns around while he sees her coming downstairs so gracefully walking down…! She was looking just like an angel!! So prettily wrapped herself white dress of knee length)"


K: "rey chalo!! Sirf 15min bacha hai… chalooo (she moves front of him while he still standing drooling at her) (she turns bac finding that rey s not next to her) REY???"


R: "haan haa haaannn !! haan chalo!!"


K: "rey?? Kya hua tumein???"


R: "kuch nahi chalooo (he pulls her out..)"

They get into the car and he starts driving


R: "tumse kuch kahu???"


K: "ab mujse baat karne ke liye tumein permission lena padega???"


R: "actually tum aaj bahut hmmm bahut…"


K: "bahut kya??? (expecting him to say beautiful)"


R: "bahut s s s sexy lag rahi ho!!!! (laughing loudly)"


K: "haan????? (she starts blushing her cheeks is completely red now!!!!)"


There is complete silence unless and until they realised only 5mins left for 9am!!! And they hav to drive to the place wich is 10 mins far!

Rey starts driving very fast while kria???

Wat will u all expect her doing wen she in a hurry or in trouble? OFCOURSE HER UNIVERSE JI!!! 😆😆


K: "universe ji plzz plzz humein time par pahuncha do!!!"


rey stops the car and looks at her .. she is still busy praying to god..

he looks at her same old innonsence!


R: "kria??"


K: "hmmm hum pahunch gaye???? (looking at her watch) 9!!"


She smiles and rey has alwzz been fida upon her innocent smile!

Thn there comes the Immy (Imran) ..


I: "hey guyzz!!!"


Kria and rey greet him and they both go inside the a big college…


Passion –for life is a very big club in NY monitoring its branches and competitions all over the world… this club is actually the part of one of the biggest college in New york- New york university for science arts and commerce And Management studies. (I am nt giving much intro abt college as its really not required!! Im only focussiing on Passion club)…


Kria and rey enter the college move towards the club wich is at the back of the college.. club itself is a colorfull building next to the college in the campus.. the both along with Immy enter the club and move upstairs towards auditorium where arrangements are going on for a competition in a day or two…


Rey and kria with a frightened expression move forward while front of the stage stands a middle aged man looking at some files from his assistants and giving them some instructions!


Kria & rey in soft voice at each other.


Rey: "damn princi kithne gusse mein nazar aarahe hai! Humein meeting miss nhi karna chahiye tha…!!! Damn damn!!!"


Kria: "haan !!! sab aapke wajah se!!!!"

While rey stares at her!!!


Kria: "I mean tum tumari wajah se!!"


Rey: "ofcourse!!! Kria mam toh kabhi apni galti maanthi nahi!!! Huh..!!"


Kria: "rey???!!!!!"


Kria: "kriaa!!!!!"


Fighting fighting they didn't realise that they were standing infront of princi and he was staring at them to finish fighting!


Princi: "aap dono ki jagda khatham hogayi toh mein kuch bol saktha hooon"


Rey: "haan (casually) ek min!(-to man) (to kria-) haan kria kya keh rahi thi meri wajah se haan??? Party pe.. (while kria sees princi and is

making signs at rey showing princi is looking at them) kya??? Kya kar rahi ho (turning towards princi gets a shock) huh…?? Aap aap!! Haan wo mein yeh keh raha tha ki wo.."


Kria: "good good morning sir! Aap humse kuch baat…"


Rey agreeing wat kria is saying…


Princi: "haan mein toh atbi baat karoonga na jab tum dono apne fight se forssat milega!!!!"


Rey: "sir!!"


Princi: "(laughing) accha chalo.. batata hoon…"


Princi rey nd kria are walking speaking while immy is busy instructing the members to arrange stage for oncoming performance…


Princi: "jaise ki tum dono ko pata hai humari club ki ek sabse bada competition yaani YOUTH FESTIVAL har saal India mein hota hai..

Har-ek ko apni talent dikaane ki mauka b deta hai and unki talent ko sahi raasta b… so yeh competition apne aap mein ek prestigious competition hai..!!


Rey: "ofcourse sir!! YOUTH FESTIVAL tho har saal successful raha hai! And acchi feedbacks bi aayi hai! So I think iss baar b youth festival ko successful hoga!! And new talents get their chance to win..!"


Kria: "haan sir hum pura koshish karenge ki iss baar b youth festival successful rahe!"


Princi: "haan issi baare mein baat karna chahtha tha.. guyz ek problem hogayi hai..!"


Rey: "problem??"


Princi: "haan wo mein chahtha tha ki iss baar YOUTH FESTIVAL Mumbai mein raka jaye and wahan ke baar mein yahan sabse zyada tum dono jaante ho and tum dono tho club senior members b ho soo tum dono ko agle 2 mahine tak ke liye India jaana hoga!"


Rey & kria: "wat??????"


Princi: "muje laga tum dono yeh baat sunke kush hojaoge??!!! Well you don't have a choice ! you both have to go!"


Kria: "sir but wo hum chutti…!!"


Princi: "sorry guyzz as i said you both don't have a choice! Tum dono india jao chuttiyan manao and saath saath youth festival b sambalo!"


Princi went away leaving rey and kria with weird expression on their face!!! Immy comes to them seeing at their faces!!


Immy: "hey guyz!! Tum dono kush nahi ho??!! I mean u both are going to MUMBAI!!!!"


Rey: "kya kush!! You even know kithni badi responsibility hai! I mean pure 4 saal baad socha kuch dino ke liye chutti lekar India jayenge Mom se milenge doston se kuch waqt bitayenge but..!!!"


Immy and kriyaansh move towards the coffee shop sitting around in table in the coffee shop…


Immy: "hmm ok ab agar mein yeh kahoon ki youth festival kounsi college host karegi tho tum dono kush hojaoge??"


Kria: "matlab???"


Rey also has a Q mark expression!!


Immy: "guyzz cheer up!!! St.LOUIS host kar raha hai YOUTH FESTIVAL!!!"


Kria: "wat???? Huh…??? (happy) really???'


Rey: "are u sure??? I cant believe this dude!!! St.Louis???? I mean its amazing!!"


Immy: "guyzz actually its not that amazing! You know peechle 3 saal se St.louis mein koi progress nahi hua hai!!! Youth festival ke liye 2 colleges select hui thi! St.Louis aur Xavier's ! you know Xavier's college ki academics St.Louis better hai!! St.Louis have hardly won any competitions these years!! But meine St.Louis ki previous history ki basis par princi ko manaya hai! So now its your responsibility to make this Youth Festival a grand Success ok??


He moves off while rey and kria leave to their house..


Rey and kria leave to their house.. kria and rey is all lost! They were in complete silence from club to house!



reviews!!!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
#63
Amazing!!!!! Plzzz cntinu!!!!! It's awesum!!!!! Plzzz update soon nd pm me!!!!! Luvd it!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#64
awesome...left speechless!!!! 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#65
yar ur writing is osm
pls PM me wen u post d nxt chap
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Posted: 13 years ago
#66
wow...kriyansh ki khati methi nokjhok haan..ye dono kbi ni sudhrenge..n kria ka universji se bond..plz get sum more kriyansh scenes..n finaly dy r goin 2 deir colege jahan se unki lv stry shuru hui..nams n priyanka plz jaldi jaldi likho n ya pm me fast ;)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#67
mumbai n st.louis hehehe thts gonna b fun
waiting for the next one
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Posted: 13 years ago
#68

They are coming back!!!!

Wah!!!Good job.

Waitin for the next part

Please update it fast and Thanks for the PM

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Posted: 13 years ago
#69
It was tooo good yaar.👏 ⭐️ Next update jaldi karna...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#70
wooohooo!!!! kyab baat hai! hahah shaadi ke baat bhi unke jagde bahut cute lagta hai! its so sweet! i loved it😃 great job!

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