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Posted: 13 years ago
chapter eleven
ok cheif is involved
loved mayur conversation👏
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chapter twelve
omg. I hope mupur's mom will be fine
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Posted: 13 years ago
chapter thriteen
this case is really full of suspense
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chapter fourteen
its very short update
ek saath saare parts parhne ka maza aa gaya
👏👏👏 for the writer😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Sorry for all the mistakes….the story is about to reveal..in this and next….dont worry about me..i will recover thanks for ur wishes…..this maybe updated soon as ff is already written yet with GMYH ..im trying not to but can be late….sorry for that..

Mayank: ok guys, be very careful…u all know the ear pieces is connecting all of us together and the other device to the team, even than cant say it loud se u all know ur codes..as soon as ur proceeding to target signal everyone, anyone of us getting the target will rash to the camp(mayank's house) without thinking anything. We have to act smart, target is just meant for us, n so as the area of target..Evry thing clear

YES…

Best of luck n lets rock…there is no space of any mistake in this…arriving back dead or alive, but should have success in hands…

Lets go..

Changing themselves in to bullet profs, putting the weapons inside, checking everything..Jumping inside the jeeps, they strt proceeding towards the destination….

Reaching the area, the look around it..

Mayank: ok all u guys will be backing us…get divide in four gps, and surround the area…

Cops: sir….

Mayank: take position…

Okay..bhushan u to take ur position

Nupur: yeah bhushan kaun hai bhai….

Mayank: bhushan…pls..no argument….Bj u to…

Benji: BJ…so cool I like it baby…

Mayank: n sa..

Benji: nhi,…yeah naam nhi is k nam devdas….

Nupur: wah I like it..

Samrat: BJ tu zara ghar per mil….

Mayank: shutup n conc…all take position

Nupur: lets dance….

Benji: why this kolavary kolvary D…

Mayank: tu gana kyun gar aha hai

Benji: bhushan ny kaha lets dance jo k last bhi hosakta hai…tu background score my child….

Mayank: uff…tum log …irritating ho buhat

Benji: but yaha tu black background per no moony moony….

Nupur: ji..its all dark to conc…at positions..

The strt moving towards the area..

As per plan the cops are gonna attack first this area..they didn't knew about the underground camp..so was asked to attacked first…to distract the kidnappers that attack is by police not CSi..plus that's how four of them will be able to make cops not get vikram

The break inside and shot many there…

Mayank: target under approach…move to it, move from left bhuhsan…

Nupur: teri bhushan ki tu….mein bhushan nhi hooon

Mayank: dkho…ghar per bana na sharma yaha confusion hojati hai jani…wasy ghar per tu tum ko itni BIWI k role mein nhi hoti…han

Nupur: ghar chalo phir batati hoon..

Samrat: ahem ahem…yaha hum bhi hain

Benji: abay kyun rukha abhi agay k plan tu sunay dayta…

Mayank: agay k plan yeah hai BJ k enter all..its time…

The break inside ..

Mayank: bhsuhan down, BJ left…..

Reaching down from there they look all around but was to calmness around…

Mayank: all at the count plan need execution …

Nupur: game began in…3….2…1….

Reaching done….the threw the gas all over, and can now hear the coughs all around…

Benji: okay the oldies are out time to attack…

Mayank: approach target…

But next the fire was open on them with…the cant threw bombs as its basement..and tht so no to solid….

It was hell dark there so the need to light up…

Mayank: vikram run up….

He called deliberately knowing vikram will run…The stupid person did so n was caught as nupur saw a person moved…

Nupur: bj target to ur left….grap it

Benji moved to that way, making his way by shooting two in his way, but some one griped him from back n place dagger on his neck to cut him, he grip his hand n turned it to around but in between benji cheek got a bit cut….placing the knife in the attacker stomach, he moved it to the side to make it cut deeper….throwing him to ground he rash to the running person..

Benji: OMG chicken is running…need to catch him…he grip him from neck

Benji put sack on his face n made him faint ….n pulled him out and as per plan rushed out from there….

The fire was still open them..

Mayank: we need the others two alive….

Samrat was moving more near, inside with face all the fires and firing it to , he missed that some one was cuming behind from him to

Nupur: down dev D….and she shot…oye neechay kyun nhi hoa peachy tere koi rishtay daar tha

Samrat: teri tu mera nam dev D……ullu..anyways thnks….

The bullets finished and they were now on there own…though it was almost at fininsh yet the still need some one …

Cleaning the area they further move inside the area where it was lights….

Samrat: dude I got the target two

Mayank: cool adios…(bye)

Samrat: singing off…

Nupur and myank proceed inside….

Mayank: from back, quite n steady….they are here..

Nupur: I doubt its they….he is here…..

Mayank: may be but cowards don't stay alone….

He felt some one behind him..

Mayank: looks I got company….

He turned around and shot but received a shot himself to….

Ahh….the bullet brushed his leg, he moved to him hit his leg, and arm to drop his gun…

And received a hit at his head by him….punching him back….with his elbow on his nose…he make him drop on floor….

Nupur: freeze dear….u cant move….

But he did, hitting her in her leg making her fall on her face, griping her hand he twisted to break, but turning around get a hit on himself…

Having no other option Mayank shot his both legs making him unable to move…

Mayank: ur okay

Nupur: yup…ahh..almost….

Mayank: cover his face….

Cops arrived at the place

Nupur: drop him in my jeep…and take him to bureau hospital….surveillance around him shud be highly tight….no body is allowed to be around him, doctor I'll ask to attend,

Cops: yes ma'am…

Mayank: no…I want him to be with me…

Nupur: mayank..he

Mayank: wht I said….no arguments..

Nupur: fine….

Dropping him with mayank….the rushed to the camp…already down the basement of Mayank house a doctor that was also attending shilpa wa there,

the enter basement, where party was set, with two person tighten and were rested in chair..and the other two where having argument

benji: saaly tujhy mera moo hi mila tah cut lagny ko…mjhy tu kisi larki ny dekh bhi nhi….ab kya hoga

Samrat: oye yeah tera saal kab se hogaya…

Benji: abay tu saaly k baray mein possessive hora hai….oye mayank ur bleeding

Mayank: kaha yaar yeah tu ketchup hai…he said sarcastically

Benji: acha tu ruk mein burger lay ker ata hoon..kyun bhabi..aj khany mein kya hai…he said hiting on her arm

Nupur: aHHH…benji teri tu….ouch

Benji: kya hua…

Nupur hath toota hoa hai….aur tu maar raha hai….

Mayank place the a cloth tightly around his wound….

Mayank: kam per lago we don't have time…

Removing the mask of all three of them..the sat infornt of them with a wicked smile on there face….

Mihir, Vikram and Rahul were shocked to there wits yet Rahul has still a smile on his face

Rahaul: mayank Sharma…tum ko kya lagta hai tum bacha pao gay sab ko…abhi bhi kuch nhi hoa…2 hrs aur hum sab free hongay..

Mayank smiled…

Mayank: I told u will not even reach near them….

Rahul: but u failed to safe ur mom..she is in coma…aur tum ko tu yeah bhi nhi pata k dehli mein yeah tumahri biwi zara sa bach gai warna

Mayank: about my mom..that's the news I disclose …do u thing it real…n about nupur…tum is bar kuch nhi ker pay na nhi ker sako gay….if u were eying on us day n night ….i I was eying u 25 hrs of day…

Nupur looked at him surprised…

Samrat: yeah kiya chal raha hai…shocked…kya bol raha hai yeah

Mayank: mihir wasn't the person who attacked maa, and nupur..

Nupur: me…when I was attacked..

Mayank: at Delhi n at Mumbai….

Nupur: wht ..at Delhi ….how cum and Mayank Mumbai per tu mjhy per kahabi attack nhi hoa….

Mayank: at that time u were asked to handle khurana's murder..and u were shot and so was hospitalized for almost 20 days and by the time u were out of that case and came to Mumbai…..

And attack here at Mumbai…..u remember the time we want to khuran's house to ask them to arrange money(chapter 12)….at the road side…

Nupur: road side ..wht….she knitted her eyebrows….

He smiled…mischievously…

Mayank: the kiss…

Samrat: ohhh sardak per…..

Mayank: there was someone at ur back about to shot u whom I shot…

Nupur: but I didn't ..

Mayank: u didn't felt it as….he looking smiling n teasingly as the were busy kissing….and didn't heard anything …as my guns was with silencer…and mom true I was bit late at that….

Nupur: n u didn't told me…..ur…

Mayank: leave it we need to concentrate on case…

So Rahul u actually failed….

Mihir: but u cant proof anything….anything….have u able to reach to gunjan

Mayank looked at Samrat and he nodded in no with fear n mayank face turn pale…and vikram looked to all of them not getting or registering anything

Mihir: he chuckled… she is with us….so want her alive….or dead….

Vikram: wht

Edited by drfizaahmed - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
API...
apne update kiya!!!!!!!!
apki toh tabiyat thik nhi thi na...
ab apki tabiyat kesi hain?????

apko pata hain aj hum phir udaas hain n uske liye hum "WWU" parh rahe hain...
ek dam shuruat se...😳
pura parhne ke baad hi hum comment edit karne wale hain waha...😳
ap apna dhyan rakhna...
love u lodsss API...🤗


Aesome update API...
truly rocking...
full on avtion n suspense...By God!!!
loved it to d coreee...
aww...
My MayUr got hurt...
mujhe toh pehle se hi iss Vikaram par shaq tha...
abhi Gunjan ka kya hoga????
hopefully all of dem wud b fine...
Beautifully written API...
u hv became brilliant in writng TRILLER ffs...
n wah!!!!!! kya likha tha i loved d sarak wala suspence...😳
loved it lodss...
love u API...🤗🤗🤗
Edited by 18anila1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: 18anila1

API...

apne update kiya!!!!!!!!
apki toh tabiyat thik nhi thi na...
ab apki tabiyat kesi hain?????

apko pata hain aj hum phir udaas hain n uske liye hum "WWU" parh rahe hain...
ek dam shuruat se...😳
pura parhne ke baad hi hum comment edit karne wale hain waha...😳
ap apna dhyan rakhna...
love u lodsss API...🤗

tabiyaat thik hai bus...kal yeah update kerna bholl gay thy..so ja kerdiya
aur ap kyun udass hain Ab ki wajha se tu nhi...tareqay hain yeah bashing k aur kuch nhi bus...
aur koi baat hai tu baatoo
chahein tu Api se khabi bhi baat ker sakti hai..
apky WWu per coment k shidaat se intezar hai humain..
aur apk direct link wala pm..zara halat thik hojy tu zaroor kerain gay
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Posted: 13 years ago
thrilling update...
one by one sara suspence khulta jaa raha hai...
aur abhi bohot sara khulna baaki hai...
looking for the next...
update soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
interesting updt fiza
cont soon
thanks for the pm

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Posted: 13 years ago
that was an amzing update..
truely..
wow..
what a suspense...
it revealed..
i am just speechless.. to say about the update

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