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himani

@Sour Skittles

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Posted: 19 years ago

#101

omg omg omg..... ur fan fic is simply awesome!!! 😃 but i have a question how can kripa forget angad????? isnt that like IMPOSSIBLE????? lolz anywayz plz cont.soon 😉

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kashish

@Kashiish

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Posted: 19 years ago

#102

THX FOR UR COMMENT I'LL CONTINUE LATER

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kashish

@Kashiish

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Posted: 19 years ago

#103

okie i'll continue since i have nothing to do

PART 15
kripa leave's from the hospital and went to buy the medican. and after that i kinda got night cause she was stuck in traffic.

angads house
angad was on the bed no one was home cause they were all gone on a vacation. Angad was at home home looking at kripa picture and thinkiing the whole day was passed and kriap didn't come. he was missing here when the beell rang

he went to go open it and it was ovisley kripa. and saw her and turn away( dry)

k- hey
angad aviod
k- am sowie
a- come in
she came in and sat down. angad was still avoiding her
k- angad am sowwwie plz try to understand i had to get ur madicain and there was so much traffic
a- avoid her angain
k- fine am going 😡
she was about to leave when angad grabbed her hand and pulled her towards him
a- where u going
k- home
a- why
k- cause ur beeing mean
a- and u didn't even come see me at the hospital ( and mad a kiddish sad face)
k- okie i'll tell u wat happened tells sit down
So they both sat very close to each other like very close. Kriapa then told him everything what happened that night .

k- but angad can i tell u something
a- wat
k- when i went to eat ice-cream with privti it was really really fun 😆 ( and mad a jokish face)
a- wat
angad got up and started chasing he around the house. and kripa went starigth to his room and locked the door.
a- kripa open the door am gonna get u
k- no i want to see ur room first
when kripa entered she saw that his whole room had piture of her and the wall were full of her pic. she started cry 😭 cause she could belvie that he loved her so much.

a- kripa open the door plz i won't do anything
she slowly opened the door
angad saw her crying
a- kripa wat happen
k- angad i love u so much
a- love u too
then all of a sudden angad started tickly kripa
she started to laugh
k- stop it angad 😆 😆 😆
a- no what did u say downstair u had fun with pritvi haaa
k- nnooo i was joking plz angad stop 😆 😆
angad finally stoped 😆
they both sat on the bed
k- ooo did u have ur medican
a- ooooo i'll have it later
k- no u have to have it now go
a- plz later
k- no then am not going to talk to u
a- okie okie can u plz go get for me
k- let me think nooooooo 😃
a- plz my back it aching cause u mad me run after u
k- okie then
after a few second
k- here
a- can u give it to me
k- fine
so kripa gave him the medicain and went to put it back when she came back the room was dark
k- hello angad
no one answered
k- angad plz come out
no one answered
k- kripa slowly entered the room
angad jumped aand said BBBBBBOOOOOOOOOOOO
kriap yelled , angad was laugh
k- uuuuuuuuuuuu and started running after angad
then suddenly kripa angd triped and fell on top of kripa on the bed.
there were both looking at each other in the eye. angd got closer and closer and then they both kiss on the lips. for a long time. and then finallyy they got apart
k- ooo angad i love u sooo much
a- so do i, i love u soooo much if u leave me agian i will die
k- don't say that cause if u die then i'll die to i love u. aj ke rat tummara naam karte how

and angad started kissing her all over the face and everywher and slowwly went to her neck and slowly went down and down. kripa lifted angad head angad she started kissing him all over his face and then they both continued doing more romantic thing cough cough 😃
you people can image the rest and that eough for today i'll continue tommorow okie i hop u like it and sorry bout my hindi mistakes and my mistkes i made sorry 😳

Edited by kyph05 - 19 years ago

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nabeeha

@nabz8888

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Posted: 19 years ago

#104

thank you for getting a-k together in this post!!!!! 😃 it was a nice update and continue soon, i am looking forward to more!

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Prakriti Singh

@prakriti

Dazzler

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Posted: 19 years ago

#105

nice job! verrrry romantic! lubed it!

LUB,
Prakriti 😊

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Taniya

@taniya_22

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Posted: 19 years ago

#106

thiz part was fab...i loved it...it was really ROMANTIC...u were makin be blush😳 a lot...😆lol...on a serious note it was absolutely gr8...just love ur story...so try to cont. soon...😊
LUV Taniya

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Arsheen

@jjknlvr91

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Posted: 19 years ago

#107

great job awesome loved it continue soon 😳 😳 😳

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apra

@apra

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Posted: 19 years ago

#108

good part continue soon please 👏

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kashish

@Kashiish

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Posted: 19 years ago

#109

PART 16
NNNAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYYy
pritvi woke up saying (see saw exzactly wat angad and kripa were doing )
p- this can't happen( he was sewweting)
so pritvi call kripa on her cell and now no picked up so then he called angad house and angad pick up

a- hello ( in a sleepy voice)
pritv did say anything
a- hello
k- angad kaun hai ( in a sleep voice)
and pritvi heard and was shock
a- i dont noe kripa no one saying anything
k- lets go back to sleep
and angad hang the phone
p- nnnnnnaaaaaaa this can't happen kripa can't do this to me nnnnnnoooooo 😡
kirpa u can't do this to me watch wat i dooooooo to angad And laugh out loud in a evil smile.

in the morning kripa got up and saw angad sleep. she remembered wat had happen last night and was smiling. and was about to go to the washroom when angad grabed her hand. and pulled her towards him.
a- where do u think ur going
k- going to take a shower
a- so do i 😉
k- no angad plz yesterday was eough
a- really 😉
kripa hitt angad as a playish way and was about to ran when angad grabbed her and pulled her towards the wall and they were so close
k- angad charo muje
a- naaaa
k- plz
then angad went close to her lips and then they
both kiss for like for a long time. Then she push him
k- that enough noe and ran staight to the washroom.
a- I LOVE U 😃 😃
y- yayyaya love u too
Then angad went in the other room and took a shower
he was done before kripa and waiting for her. but then she finally came out wearing this nice with and black shirt and wearing black shirt.
k- ready how do i look
a- wow u look.mmmmmmmmmmm......... ugly 😉 (and started run and kripa ran after him)
k- ur so meeaan 😡 don't talk to me i don't wan't to go 4 breakfast with u. 😡 and turned
Angad came from the back and hugged her
a- am sowwie i was joking u look sexy
kriap avoided him
then angad gave her a kiss on the cheek and sowwie common lets go.
k- fine lets go

hopr u like it?? 😃😃😃

Edited by kyph05 - 19 years ago

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kashish

@Kashiish

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Posted: 19 years ago

#110

Continue from the other part i left off when they left for the resturant.

So they go out and when they leave pritvi comes.he enter khanna house and see noe one there so he goes up in angad room and sees that the bed was all messed and he had a falsh back on what happen that night between angad and kripa. he got sooo mad 😡 he mad a big meesss in the room. he through the bed sheet on the floor and saw kripa's picture's in the room and ripedd allll them up and messed up the whole room.( stupit pritvi) 😡 😡
and left.

in the restaurat
angad and kripa got there seat and sat down and had breakfast. and then left for shopping and they had so much fun. then they went for lunch and then they went to a fair and then to the cn tower. they had so much fun. then they went for dinner after the dinner they were leaving when suddely and fell.

k- ANNNNNNGGGGGAAAAADDDD

that it for noe i'll continue tommmorow
later i hope u enjoyed the 2 seperate parts and
sorrie once agian about he spelling mistakes 😃