AR FF: Edge Of Ardor Ch.8 Pg 14

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RITIKA

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

awesum ff ... just read it ... plzz add me 2 ur pm list ...

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meina

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

great ff.
Want ur update

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Gaurav Shanbhag

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

awesome ff
cont soon
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meina

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

OK I love love love!!!!!!!!!!! ur ff and I haven't read that were armaan made out with an air hostess so Urs is my first and I loved its

Can't wait 4 ur next update

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meina

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Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Ok I love love love ur ff and I haven't read the part were armaan made out with the air hostess any were so ur ff is my first :

And I can't wait 4 ur next update
Dam!!!!!!!!!!! double update sorry

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@fanAR

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Posted: 13 years ago

#26

i just read the whole three parts .. first part was funny .. hehe. he was making out in plan and wrong name. it was cute Second part got me shock ... OMG marriage woh bhi itni jaldi. anyways i am excited about the marrrige i am excitred to read what will happen after marriage. Please update soon dear :)

great updates

p.s the first part had similarity with other ff but other then everything was really differeant , the marriage whole thing.

in the other ff, he make out in restroom but here he was behind curtins .. :)

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Ritu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#27

Hey!

I love this fanfic..it is amazing!

The updates are great!

please do continue soon :-)

take care..!

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Posted: 13 years ago

#28

Great parts! So does he plan on cheating on her after marriage? Cause he doesn't seem like the one women type of guy...
Nd what happened before? Cont soon!!

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WhiteAngels

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Posted: 13 years ago

#29

Took My Heart

Armaan walks downstairs with Riddhima behind him. They were ready to go for the talk that Armaan needs to have with Riddhima. Armaan opens the door when they hear,

"Armaan? Riddhima? Tum dono kahan jaa rahe ho?" Padma asks with Ananya beside her. Armaan and Riddhima look at each other.

"Oh ho aunty, inn dono ki shaadi ho rahi hai toh inko akele main kuch waqt bitane chaiye. Agar ek dusre ke saath waqt bitanye ge toh ek dusre ko jaane ge," Muskaan said with her hands on Padma's shoulders.

"Padma, Muskaan theek keh rahi hai. Shaadi ke waqt inko kuch ajeeb sa mehsoos nai hona chaiye ke yeh ek dusre ko jaante bhi nai hai," Ananya said. Padma nods. Ananya beckons Armaan to come to the side and he does. "Riddhima ko kuch mat batana." Ananya said in a low voice, looking at Riddhima. She was frowning because Anjali and Muskaan were teasing. "Agar tumne Riddhima ko dhuk diya toh main tumhe kabhi maaf nai karogi." Ananya walks away. Things have just gotten more difficult for Armaan.

Armaan and Riddhima go to the beach where there are small restaurants built for tourists and visitors of the beach. They get a table outside on the deck with their coffees. Both of them sat in silence. Riddhima thinks that Armaan will start since he is the one who wanted to talk to her. Armaan, on the other hand was a little nervous and didn't know how to start. Riddhima watches Armaan as he stares at the table and takes small sips of his coffee. Riddhima didn't like this quiet and worried Armaan. She likes the smiling and out going Armaan. It just made her feel gloomy when Armaan isn't smiling. Riddhima sees the wind making Armaan's hair fly in different directions which made him look totally hot! Riddhima looks at the ocean and watches the waves hit the shore then go back.

"Riddhima," Armaan said in a soft tone. Riddhima looks at Armaan with expectant eyes. Armaan looks up and reads her eyes. He knows that Riddhima wants to know the reason why he wanted to talk to her. "Mujhe tumse zaroori baat karni hai." Riddhima knew Armaan wants to talk to her but she didn't think it was too serious, but hearing Armaan's voice she could tell it is serious. Riddhima was amused and nods. Armaan sees her expression and smile. "Yeah, hum dono aaram se baat kare...it just doesn't go together." Riddhima giggles and looks down for a second.

"Bacho ki baat toh nai hai na?" asks Riddhima, looking at Armaan with eyebrows raised. Armaan chuckles and shakes his head.

"No, kuch aur." Armaan looks at his coffee cup then at Riddhima. "Riddhima, shaadi ke baad husband wife main toh jhagde hote hain and all. Kabhi kabhi woh jhagde kaafi had tak bad jaate hain."

"Tum kehna kya cha rahe ho?" By this time Riddhima is confused than ever.

"Main nai chatha ke humare beech jhagda ho jisse hum dono ko dard de aur hum ek dusre ke saath indifferently behave kare. I mean humare chote jhadge jo hote hain woh toh honge hi honge. Ek husband wife koi toh jhadge honge, lekin main itne had tak jaana chatha jisse hum dono ek dusre ko dekh bhi na sake," Armaan said in a soft and sincere voice. He was looking at her with the most lovable and adorable expression.

Riddhima felt her heart flutter at what Armaan said and how he looked at her. It's like he just took her heart with him saying that. Armaan's not that bad of a guy once you get to know him. Guys are weird and stupid sometimes, but they will always have a soft heart no matter what shield they put around them, or how strong they try to act. They can be sensitive when they want to or have to be. This is exactly what Armaan is like.

"Armaan, sach bolo toh mujhe nai pata humari shaadi ke baad kya hoga. Pehle toh sab itna jaldi ho raha hai ke mujhe dar lag raha hai," said Riddhima. "Shaadi ke baad agar hum koshish kare na jhagde ne ke liye toh kuch ho sakta hai." Riddhima said the beginning part with a chuckle and Armaan laughed a bit too. When he heard her last part, his laugh kind of faded and looks at Riddhima. She was smiling at him with assurance. Riddhima thinks that there can be a them.

Looking into Riddhima's eyes, he knows that in any possible way he can not hurt her. Otherwise she won't be able to take it and will break. Riddhima is too fragile and it's like a small pinch could just break her into pieces. Riddhima may try to act strong, but in her eyes it still has the innocence of a girl who just wants everyone to love her.

Armaan drives them back to Riddhima's place. He parks the car into the driveway and looks at Riddhima. Riddhima gives him a smile and Armaan smiles back, reluctantly which went unnoticed by Riddhima. Both of them walk inside and Armaan goes to the living while Riddhima goes upstairs. Riddhima enters her room to see Anjali and Muskaan.

"Riddhima, hua kya?" Anjali asks, pulling Riddhima down on the bed. Riddhima smiles at them and blushes.

"Iska matlab kuch acha hua hai. Batao na," urges Muskaan.

"Armaan ne mujhe bataya ke woh kya mehsoos kar raha hai. Woh chatha hai ke humari shaadi ke baad ke humare beech main aise jhagde na ho ke woh had se bahar chale jaye," Riddhima tells them with a cute smile.

"Aww that is so cute," teases Muskaan. Riddhima's cheeks turn red.

"Riddhima, kahin tum...Armaan ko pasand karti ho?" Anjali asks Riddhima.

"Anjali, abhi toh Armaan se mili hai. Itni jaldi Armaan usse pasand kaise ho sakta," Muskaan said, looking at Anjali. Riddhima looks up at them, biting the corner of her lower lip with her eyebrows raised. Anjali and Muskaan's eyes go wide. "Tumhe Armaan ko pasand karti ho!" Both of them exclaimed.

Riddhima shrugs. "I don't know. Lekin aaj jo usne kaha, usne mera dil jeet liya."

"Ridzi, tu toh badal gayi. Bilkul badal gayi," Muskaan said in shock and her eyes still wide open.

Riddhima laughs and stands up. "Agar tum dono ne kisso ko bhi kuch bataya toh main tum dono ko chodo gi nai," Riddhima threatens them.

"Don't worry Ridzi. Hum kisi ko nai bataye ge...sivayi Armaan ko," Anjali said. Anjali and Muskaan flee out of the room with Riddhima running after them.

Anjali and Muskaan were banging on the Armaan's room door and Armaan opens it. Anjali and Muskaan run it, but they see Atul and Rahul. They didn't have time to stop so Anjali fell on top of Atul and Muskaan on top of Rahul. Riddhima runs in and trips, but Armaan's arms as a reflex caught Riddhima. Riddhima looks up in Armaan's eyes in uneasiness. She was so close to Armaan and his arms were around her. It was a first that Armaan's arms were around her. Armaan looks down at Riddhima with a serious face. They hear someone clear throat and come back to reality. All of them turn their heads to see Billy, Ananya, Shashank, and Padma. All of them stand in a line with their heads bowed. Shashank takes a step closer to them.

"Tum ladkiyan, Armaan ke kamre main kya kar rahi ho?" Shashank asks. His voice was serious and he looked mad along with the rest of the elders. That is what the guys were wondering too. Why did the girls come in the room? "Koi kuch bolega?" He looks at Riddhima, Anjali, and Muskaan.

Riddhima, Anjali, and Muskaan look at each other from the corner of their eyes. They didn't want to get in trouble because they were in the guys room. No one wanted to take the blame either. They knew Shashank's temper. No one spoke for a while and all stood in silence.

"Riddhima!" Muskaan screams. Everyone turn their heads towards Muskaan. "Riddhima ka idea tha yahan aane ka." Muskaan nudges Anjali to play along. Riddhima's eyes go wide. They were blaming her? Seriously?

"H - haan," Anjali said. Riddhima looks at her sister mouth wide open. Shashank turns his eyes to Riddhima then back to Anjali. "Riddhima...Armaan se milna cha rahi thi." Riddhima just stares at them in shock with her eyes and mouth wide open. Armaan looks at Riddhima with a strange look while Rahul and Atul were just plain confused.

"N...nai Papa maine nai kaha tha. Yeh dono jhoot bol rahe hain," Riddhima tries to defend herself, but it didn't look life from Shashank's face that he is believing any of this. Soon, all the elders burst out laughing making the kids confused.

"Hum mazaak kar rahe the." Billy stands next to Shashank. All of them sigh in relief. "Aur Riddhima agar tum Armaan se milna chathi toh it's okay."

"Uncle - "

"Riddhima, ab Armaan tumhara hone wala pati hai toh tumhe usse milna ka haq hai," Ananya said with her hand on Riddhima's shoulder. Riddhima looks at Ananya and gives her a small smile, but it disappears a second after.

"Ab Armaan aur Riddhima ko akela chod do," Padma said. All of them walk out leaving Armaan and Riddhima alone in the room. The door shuts behind all of them. Riddhima was in shock while Armaan is still confused.

Riddhima looks at Armaan and sees him staring at her with a confused expression. But that confused expression turns into a naughty, teasing smirk. Riddhima sighs and turns away. There can be nothing done with this guy. A while ago he was all calm and sensitive, but now he's back to his old self. Though, a part of Riddhima missed this naughty and teasing Armaan.

"Toh tum mujhse milna cha rahi thi?" Armaan walks closer to Riddhima. Riddhima who is becoming conscious, so she moves back with her eyes on Armaan. "Hm?" Riddhima barely shakes her head. Armaan raises an eyebrow up with the smirk still intact. Riddhima's back is now against the wall and her big, hazel colored eyes are on Armaan.

"Ar...maan, mujhe...jaane do," stutters Riddhima. Armaan shakes his head looking down at Riddhima. One of his hand on the wall while the other one is in jeans pocket. "Armaan, please. Mujhe tang mat karo."

Riddhima looks away from his face to chest. His skin was seen because the first few button of his shirt were undone. Armaan's phone rings and he goes to pick it up. Riddhima sighs and watches him pick up his phone. Armaan stares at the phone for a while then looks up at Riddhima. Riddhima was looking at him questioningly. Armaan cuts the call, he does something else, then puts it on silent.

"Tumhe phone kyun kaata? Shayad kuch important hota," Riddhima said, pointing to his cell phone.

"Koi important call nai thi," replies Armaan.

"Lekin - " Riddhima starts.

"Maine kaha na!" yells Armaan. Riddhima flinches and puts her hand down. She was a little afraid now. She has never heard Armaan yell. Riddhima made a note to self that never get onto Armaan's bad side. Armaan sighs and closes his eyes for a second. "I'm sorry." Riddhima just stares at Armaan. "Tum mujhe akela chod dogi?" Riddhima nods and walks out of the room.

Riddhima walks downstairs to where Anjali, Muskaan, Rahul, and Atul were sitting and that is the dining table. The elders sat in the living room, talking about the wedding.

"Riddhima, tum toh jaldi bahar aa gayi." Muskaan winks at Riddhima. Riddhima glares at Muskaan and takes a seat. "Chal chod. Hum na gaane chun rahe hai aur dance bhi." Riddhima nods.

All four of them start discussing or rather yelling at what songs should be played and what songs they are going to dance to. The problem was that what Muskaan and Anjali picked, Rahul and Atul wanted. What Rahul and Atul picked, Muskaan and Anjali wanted it. Through the fight, Armaan came downstairs and takes a seat next to Riddhima. Apparently, it was the only one available. Riddhima looks at Armaan and sees him calmer than before which is good.

"Yeh lad rahe kyun hai?" asks Armaan, leaning his head closer to Riddhima.

"Jo Muskaan aur Anjali ko pasand hai woh Rahul aur Atul ko pasand aur jo Rahul aur Atul ko pasand hai woh Muskaan aur Anjali ko pasand hai," explains Riddhima. Armaan nods and looks at Riddhima. Riddhima was watching the four fight, but Armaan could see Riddhima a little afraid.

"Riddhima," calls Armaan. Riddhima looks up at Armaan. "Jo upar hua...I'm sorry. Main tum pe chilana nai chatha tha."

"It's okay. Hota hai." Riddhima smiles at Armaan and Armaan smiles back.

"Stop it!" Armaan yells. He was getting annoyed with them going back and forth. Everyone looks at Armaan. "Tum sab compromise kyun nai karte. Adhe gaane tum dono lo aur dusre tum dono." Armaan looks at Anjali and Muskaan then Rahul and Atul.

"Humne pehle kyun nai socha?" Atul said, laughing.

"Kyun ke Armaan is smart. Yaad hai hum Armaan se homework kara the?" Rahul asks Atul.

"Lekin kabhi karta nai tha," said Atul with a frown.

"Humari Riddhima bhi nai kuch kam," Anjali butts in. If Armaan can be praised by his friends then so can Riddhima.

"Haan, Riddhima mera saara homework karti hai," Muskaan said. All of them look at Muskaan with their eyebrows narrowed. "I mean main apna khud homework karti hoon lekin Riddhima meri madat karti hai." Another round of who is better started. Armaan and Riddhima just banged their heads on the table.

The elders walk in to know why all of them yelling at each other. They were shocked to see Rahul, Atul, Muskaan, and Anjali yelling but Armaan and Riddhima looking at them with helpless expressions. Anjali stops when she sees her parent's and her sister's in-laws. Anjali nudges Muskaan to stop and she does. Anjali and Muskaan will be in trouble by Shashank and Padma because they were yelling at their brother-in-law's friends.

"Ha ha chup ho gayi!" Atul said triumphantly. His smile fades when he sees Billy and Ananya. Rahul gulps and looks at Atul.

"Yeh kya ho raha hai?" Shashank asks.

"Papa, inn dono ne ladayi shuru ki thi," Anjali said. Rahul and Atul's jaws drop open.

"Nai, uncle! Inn dono ne shuru kiya tha," Atul defends himself and Rahul. Again, another round of fighting started on who started it.

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Many of you have questions, but that's the whole point of writing a story. You gotta keep reading to find out. My lips are sealed and it will take you all a lot of work to unseal my lips. LOL. That was lame. If you want a PMs, please add me as your buddy! I have already the next three chapters after this chapter, so if you want updates fast...comment!!!!

Edited by WhiteAngels - 13 years ago

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@fanAR

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Posted: 13 years ago

#30

res :)

please update super soon lol

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the update was really nice , i like it. i am so waiting to see what will happened after marrige. i am sucker for their marrige . i love marrige kind of FF. They sound good to me anyways now i am egar to know what araman have done , that his parents are so mad at him. what is he hiding lol.

OMG u have wrote 3 chpater already please update soon dear . i am so waiting lol.

Edited by fanAR - 13 years ago