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ojaswi

@ojaswi_kajen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#411

wow awesome update...

AR moment is nice...

loved it...fab one...

tammana is soo disgusting...

i hope everything goes well in der lyf...

loved it...cont soon...

waiting eagerly for d nxt update...

thnks for d PM...:)

Edited by ojaswi96 - 13 years ago

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Maria Ahmed

@Maria151994

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Posted: 13 years ago

#412

Originally posted by: teenorchid
here comes me... I am very lazy... I become a turtle when i knw i had to give a long comment... Wheee.finallly um hereee...
Yarrr they kisssedd like reallly...woowww... And armaan loves shilpa nd is going to confesss tonight...greattt...and he did say i love u and shilpu kissed him...wohooo...
Shilpa getting ready according to armaan's taste was really sweet. Wats up wd tamana yar.. Sid doesnt deserve her.. He deserve much bettterrr..
And nxt wd be pm party..my gooodesss. U ll make us cryy..hailaaa aisa kya likhne wali ho... Waiting fr that...loved the partt totallly nd thanks fr continuing it..love u...

first of did you really wrote this coment that too through mobile awwsome yar love you for this
i loved your comment
soory didnt write any pm part,yar i am not comfortable writting it i tried but i myself blushed soo much that i delte it loll😳..SO I was lisetning to song bhi mujhme mai..and with in 30 min i was ready with update so sorry for bursting your bubble loll:)
thankx again for your coment:)

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Maria Ahmed

@Maria151994

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Posted: 13 years ago

#413

Originally posted by: ojaswi96
wow awesome update...
AR moment is nice...
loved it...fab one...
tammana is soo disgusting...
i hope everything goes well in der lyf...
loved it...cont soon...
waiting eagerly for d nxt update...
thnks for d PM...:)

thankx for the comment
i dont know i have the feeling i had failed to impress you:(

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ojaswi

@ojaswi_kajen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#414

Originally posted by: XxDeansChickxX

thankx for the comment
i dont know i have the feeling i had failed to impress you:(

no not at all...srsly i loved it...acc mujaa lambi lambi comments dena athi nahi...i cant express my feelings by commenting...m a bit week in hindi..soo..u know...but srsly i loved it...:):)

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Maria Ahmed

@Maria151994

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Posted: 13 years ago

#415

Originally posted by: ojaswi96

no not at all...srsly i loved it...acc mujaa lambi lambi comments dena athi nahi...i cant express my feelings by commenting...m a bit week in hindi..soo..u know...but srsly i loved it...:):)

oh when i myself was new here i too dont know how to comment long loll
thankx alot for your comment dear
it meant a lot:)
love
maria:)

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blue_lotus22

@blue_lotus22

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Posted: 13 years ago

#416

Awesome... beautifully written, as always.
Loved AR moments.
Update next part super soon.
Thanks for the pm, take care.

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Niketa

@desir

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Posted: 13 years ago

#417

Maria baby a heart wrenching part beautifully written by you baby ans the song was suiting best and i really was crying hearing the song and reading the part the friendship armaan, riddhima, sid was this is not the end of their ''yarian'' its awsome, fantastic, too much emotions and the way riddhima hurted herself physically and emotionally and armaan's support when he himself was broken and sid feels to trust her but broken and riddhima feels that something going to happen bad was actually rrue part was really heart wrenching but you could not do this to us we need to know what happened between riddhima and tamana when riddhima is called by tamana, and why armaan was blaming and hating himself and then i need to know what tamana actually did this too many questions baby and i really want answers of these question so please this is not the end of ''yarian'' at least not on this note its my request

with lots of love

nikita

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Maria Ahmed

@Maria151994

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Posted: 13 years ago

#418

Originally posted by: niki.5
Maria baby a heart wrenching part beautifully written by you baby ans the song was suiting best and i really was crying hearing the song and reading the part the friendship armaan, riddhima, sid was this is not the end of their ''yarian'' its awsome, fantastic, too much emotions and the way riddhima hurted herself physically and emotionally and armaan's support when he himself was broken and sid feels to trust her but broken and riddhima feels that something going to happen bad was actually rrue part was really heart wrenching but you could not do this to us we need to know what happened between riddhima and tamana when riddhima is called by tamana, and why armaan was blaming and hating himself and then i need to know what tamana actually did this too many questions baby and i really want answers of these question so please this is not the end of ''yarian'' at least not on this note its my request
with lots of love
nikita

this was the coment i was waiting for
sorr others but after reading her comment i gusess no one else read the part! sorry if i hurt some one
nikki api the concept of yarian was like that...why arman hating himself??what tamana did??it will disclose soon..it was the end but then ir realise i didnt show their friendship..in future you will soon in sha allah!
love
maria:)

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Niketa

@desir

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Posted: 13 years ago

#419

Originally posted by: XxDeansChickxX

this was the coment i was waiting for
sorr others but after reading her comment i gusess no one else read the part! sorry if i hurt some one
nikki api the concept of yarian was like that...why arman hating himself??what tamana did??it will disclose soon..it was the end but then ir realise i didnt show their friendship..in future you will soon in sha allah!
love
maria:)

Hey maria baby thanks for telling me but here i am a little disagree with you, you showed their frienship in each and every part of ''yarian'' i meant whole 11 parts how armaan and sid was there when riddhima is in pain in her so called love issue and sid and riddhima is there for armaan when he needs in his mother issue and armaan riddhima was there for sid to share his happiness whether it's for tamana or anything else, but ye sid do want to see what was that thing which breaks the scared bond of friendship and that too so beautiful friendship sorry if i sound greedy but i don want to find the answers which was running in my heart and mind regarding ''yarian''

p.s.and as a writer and more as a reader i feels kii humein story koo aisee mod par nahin chodna chahiye jahan dimag aur dill meiin questions ho rehni chahiye sirff oos ff kii achii yadein aur kuchh aisee bhi joo humein rulaye par questions nahin

p.s.s sorry if i hurt u, but i do want that u please continue so hope to see you solving the mystery

god bless baby

take care

with lots of love

nikita

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Maria Ahmed

@Maria151994

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Posted: 13 years ago

#420

^api this ff will be continued dont you read my previous note i guess you dont,these lat two parts were by me reast will be mine one of great freinds
yeah agree with you i showed already how there freindship meant to you..but that time they were alone now they are in RELATIONSHIP..thas what the difiifcult situation when you are in love and had great bond with opposite sex ..means Now in next season they become more mature and will realise there freisndhip until now they were teenagers and was easy going ,they dont get the chance to learn what actualy friendship is but now when they seprate from each other they wil learn what actually there freindship meant to them!
it ios definately not the end as i left question behind!
These four person will go through now difrent things
some one will learn what actully his/her one mistake had done,some will learn the true meaning of love and relationship ,some one will learn what actually trust is in a relationship

I hope you got my point and you not hurt me its is actually important to know the feeling of other while you writting a story
thankx !