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wen r v getting an update Sweetiee..
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Awesome update!!!
Yeah..I know NT is Geet's sister and she wants the best for Geet...But the question is "What is best for Geet??" that she needs to realize...
She has seen Maan...But has she spoken to him??Has she seen him walk with her stick??...No..
When Geet has no problem, why does she have..
Geet and Maan are coming closer & closer...Confiding in each other...
Maan can sense Geet's troubles through mahsoos but can Geet sense his??😕Plz solve this...
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nice update hate that NT please get her soon out of maaneet life as soon as possible or she will create mu between them
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After a long long time I really liked ur
Ff,the way u have written the story abt
Love is just fab.love is all abt.mahsoos
Whether a person I'd blind or not"
Love is a emotion that comes or is
Made up of feelings ,feelings so strong
That it could withstand storms of all kind
If u have the person whom u love standing
Next to u.

So well done with this ff.pls keep
It up

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OMG. Hurry!!
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Amazing update... Urghh nt again:/.. Can't wait for the following updates x
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MAHSOOS...... Part 38
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Geet slowly wakes up from her deep sleep, sliding her self way from her husband warmness... When maan firmly held her hand. "it's to early!" he slowly touches his clock, feeling the time. "5am!"
Geet bends over, smiling "mr khurana, I hope you realized last night I changed it! It's 8am!" geet giggled. While maan jumps up & rushed to the bathroom...

Maan dropped geet off to her collage, then he quickly made his way back to the office. It's his annual day, a day where he personally speaks to each students. Khurana have contracted & recently brought a E-university for blind people. It's have been just over few years, but few years considered as new. Mr John have introduced many different rule along with many Disability resources. It wasn't just for blind, it was also for other people and along side normal collage student.

No doubt pari was there, who have achieved an A and looking forward to work in the khuranas...
"I am very happy for you" maan happily smiled. Facing at her with a smile.
"thank you maan"
Mr John joined along with few other people.

Geet back at collage made her self supper busy by taking the responsibility of the patty, who she done it rather too big and rather too romantic, in some extent it looked cheesy.
"yak! Yak! Yak!" armaan yelled. He held a script written by geet. "how can you tell me to do this geet. Romantic??? I am a science-student- I-describe-things-in-minimal!" he spoke in sarcastic mannor. Geet gave him a angry glare.
"then say By-By to -kripa!" she gave another annoying glare and walked off.
"no- no... Please ruk yar. I was joking. Ok give it to me I will do it!"
Geet snaps the paper back, no way she is letting him to read this now... They fought for a while and eventually armaan won.
But it wasn't long before he burst out in laugh by seeing the cheesiness.

Maan came by and collected geet. She was indeed very fowl mood. Crunching the paper in her hand. "what's wrong?"
"au armaan, I will make juice of him and feed it to dogs"
Maan suppressed his laughter. "what have he done?"
"he laughed at my script that I made for him to say it to kripa!" she made a baby face, crossing her leg, the resting her cheek over maans heart.
"let's here what you wrote for her!"
"well... Umm..." she makes a straight face. Opens the folded paper. Then little cough. She spoke like a true Robot. "kripa, I love you. You are my world. This surprise is for you. Now listen to this, I will try t..." maan couldn't help him self before geet could continue she burst in laugh.
"Maaannn..." she twists her neck to his face. Making a baby face. Oh she wanted to hide her face anywhere. Specially after this. Now even her own husband laughing.
"chado!" she scrunched the whole paper, trailed the window down and threw it way.
"no.. No!" maan felt the cold air and then the paper running way.
"I was joking!"
"ap toh hamse bath hi math kijiye!" she closed the door bang shut...

Maan walkes in to there room after dinner...geet had no mood of talking. And specially to maan. He slowly walks close. It was only 12 noon. They had early finish. "are you angry at me?" geet nodes a no... And slowly starts to take off her payel... Then her cloths. Still looking at him angrily. She spines around, facing her back. "open my zip!"
"zip?"
"the think that holds my cloths!"
"oh!"
He slides his hand on her back to feel the top bit then confusingly feels her. What she was doing?"

Geet stood up and looked at him mischievously. One by one all the cloths were off, except her inner. She put a silk top on and then just walked off from the room.
"geet?" maan wonders where is she. "geet?" he stands up and walks to his study. "where are you?"
Geet stood at the corner. Knowing even little smell would be enough for him to locate her and even the slittiest noise.
"geet, you know it won't take me a second to find you!" he stood in the middle in his sleeveless top and a baggy Tracy. He twists his head to the side, the black eyes looked hungrily everywhere. His ear pointed upwards, clearly viable how it was concentrating even for the slightest noise... Her sweet smell, her sweet aroma...
Geet gazed upon him from the back, hungrily her eyes observed his each muscle. She could already feel the wetness between her leg.
"you know this trick of your won't work..." maan twists him self, facing directly at her... Her little pounding heart gave it way. Much as geet hated it, she loved him even more for that. She tiles her head sidewards anticipating for him to come closer. Licking her lips. His each step pushed her further to the wall...
He came right close, resting his hand on her waist.
"I like that" she smiled.




"I have told you, I can mahsoos you..." geet blushed at his expression. Gazing upon his dark eyes again. His hand slowly came up, trailing his thump up her cheek, then stroked it's self down.
Maan could feel the song of the pounding heart. Song of her sweet breath.
"how do you mahsoos me maan?" she looked up with delight, resting her hand on his heart...
"do you want to know?"
She nodes a yes... Slowly, coming in to his warmth...
"how do you know it's me standing there... far way... with no noise.. no smell?.. "

A small smile formed in maans cheek. He could feel how his wife was fascinated by him. And it was the truth. He require nothing to feel her, feel the essence of her heart beats... Feel her rapidness... Feel the beauty of the skins. It's like a butter, the warmth almost could kill him anywhere.

Before maan could parts his lips to explain again, a intruder was there. NT! Which he cursed. Every time he tries to explore his wife with his mahsoos someone will be there as a distraction...

Geet closed her eyes in anger to... She quickly changed and opens the door.
"bebo?"
"at last you are here, let's go shopping!"
"per..."
What? Comen..."
"I can't... Maan is home.. And I..." before geet could open her mouth to say a big no, NT pulls her out and straight to the car.

Maan stood there in anger. He dis plan something for there day, but now it seems like everything will go in vain. It was like her trips again, he impatiently waited in the house, waiting for her to come back. Maan hated when geet was free and not with him. If he had the courage they would be together. His anticipation was left no where, his heart was with geet, then what possibly he could do...

After about 3 hours of wondering around maan walks in to his music room...





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