I slept last night waiting for the update yaar...
So read it now n commenting...
Tht was an awesome part sweetie pie...
U r describing Maan's Mahsoos very well...
Just remember 1 thing tht in a blind man's life,
The Mahsoos,the feel of a thing or person is important...
Thts how he/she formulates his life...
God has taken his 1 sense but he has made other senses even more strong...they hv gr8 listening n feeling power...
If u keep these 2 things in mind thn u wid defo write a gr8 FF...
N I see,u r very much successful in tht...
Tht is the reason u get so many likes n comments...
The reason I wrote all this is bcoz u said u feel scared abt how the update wud go...so this shud tell u tht ur updates r just awesome n out of this world...
Tht is y u see us hanging around for ur updates...
Now abt this update...it was again amazing...
How much ever I try to think tht NT is good,she proves me wrong everytym...
I Thot she wud have a thotful chat with her baby sis but nhi
Yaha par to vo Khufu hi childish act kar rahi hai...
Ok m counting this act of hers as her mood swings...
M still anticipating tht she's good...
Maan's POV at the beginning was also awesome n also the last part...how he is trying to kno his wife...
U hv beautifully potrayed his feelings...
Aahhh,this Armaan is another namuna...
Khudko to apni GF k baare me nhi pata aur GEET ko Bol raha hai...kaise kaise log hai is duniya me...
in real world also,khudki galti chipane k liye dusre ki same galti point out karte hai naaki apni galti sudhaare...
Me to kehti hu,GEET tu usse help hi mat kar to chup chap line pe aa jaaega...
Bohot zyaada shaana ban raha hai na...
Give him dhamki tht if he says Sumthing abt her hubby again thn u will not help him...
This wud bring him on track...
Aur ye NT aur Dev ka chakkar kya hai...???
Palle hi nhi pad raha Kuch...
Shayad dono relationship me rahe honge n this NT wud hv rejected him for his blind sibblings...
tht makes a difference between NT n our sweetheart GEET...
Ok now I guess mene Kuch zyaada hi analysis ho Gaya hai pure update ka...I kno u wud be bored reading such a bbiiiggg comment...so me yahi ruk jaati hu...
Thnkx about for the update n PM...
take cate n keep writing...!!!!
Love u Loads...muahhh...
TJ...!!! :) :D
Edited by Tammana_Maaneet - 13 years ago
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