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congrats for the new thread..
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Congratulation 4 new thread dear……!!!!

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MAHSOOS...... Part 35
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Back to the office, maan walked in his dad cabin, who was busy organizing some events held by some special Brail school at the same time, collage who gives opportunity to young students to learn this new language to be more familiar at the same time understand the world of blind people.
"don't you think it's good?"
Maan takes his seat opposite, going through list of the collage, gliding his Hand along.
"of course. It's very good idea."
"this will advertise our company further" mr John happily smiled. "where is anny? I haven't seen her for long time!"
"why don't you come home? We are always there." maan picked that topic up on purpose, even knowing how much his father hates coming home.
"no!

It wasn't long before maan took his exit, making his way to pick his wife up, who perhaps probably impatiently waiting for him. He loved that thought, loved it allot. The limo stops just on time as geet arrived. The scorching sun was killing her fair skin. She rushed in to the cool limo, drinking water. "it's to hot! I wish this sun to disappear" geet made a baby face, complaining. Maan swirled his hand around her, bringing close to the AC.
"how was your day?" both questioned at the same time. Geet couldn't stop laughing. Giggling...
Maan loved the thought how they always think exactly the same... "we have to go and pick bebo up."
Again bebo, maan cursed the name, and became irritated. "jiju is not coming with her!" maans ear caught the sound jiju, yet still his irritation did not go down, he want geet all to him self. All her attention to him. "and bebo have surprised to. She is expecting..." geet cheekily smiled. Taking maans hand and resting on her tummy... Maan really wasn't sure what she was up to, he just became more lost in her warmth... "we don't want baby now. Do we? We want to have like bebo and jiju having. After 3 years..."
Hmm, maan barely got to know his wife, and then children, that's something!!! Umm...
"pata hi, bebo told me she have little bump that's visible..."
"when do we have to pick her up?" maan wondered...
"in few hours..."
Geet was supper exited while maan was worried. She always talks about bebo, when ever they have time, bebo always buts in, and if she is here, will geet be with him?
Maan gently took her hand, softly creasing, inhaling her scent.
"tell me about your day. I hard from vicky papa doing a big project!"
Maan smiled, he never really shared his interest with anyone. Not everyone wanted to know his fascination about the world of black. Something that is hard to express, specially when you can't imagine and that's what makes it special for the people who can see, specially his students. "it's very interesting. We will be personally visiting selection of collage to promote."
"that sounds wonderful... " she rests her head on his chest, "do you know I always wonder what do you do in office... Umm... Well those book you read at home..."

They were so lost in there world , that maan failed to realize that car have long stopped. Geet sat there with leg cross. Explaining everything and specially how she will arrange a surprise for Kripa to help armaan...

Later on, maan Sat on the bed, observing the book of relationship, gliding his hand and hearing his wife. Running from one end of there bedroom to another then to his study room then back again. Her bangle plaid with her each movement. And speech, he can clearly say she is worried. But about what?
"what happen? Why do I feel you are so tensed?"


geet bite her lips, why shouldn't she be? After months her bebo is coming, how will she react by seeing her husband, and then she never seemed happy when ever she spoke about maan... "umm... Au... Kuch nahi..."
Maan rests the book on the side and pulls her on to his lap. He looked straight at the wall, while his hand gently creases her cheek, "I know you are worried. Your voice telling me..." geet with awe looked at him... He never stops surprising her.
"you can tell by my voice?"
"you are so close to my heart that I can tell anything about you..." geets eyes filled up, she looked at him with hunger... With love..



Maan slowly brings his hand up, gently resting, feeling and analyzing her skin with care... Her heart beat was rising, he slowly glides his hand in a line from her cheek to her collar bone, he felt the skin toned, and the feather eye lash close... "am I hurting you?" he worriedly asked. Maan never have done this, feeling someone's skin with so much passion, it felt nice, a nicely feeling that was demanding more.
"no... I have told you this morning, do this more often..." maan smiles, and trails his hand up to feel the dimple, which indicates she was smiling, he required no words any more or to here her laughter to feel what was in her heart... He trailed his hand down, the pallu came in between, geet moved forward. Slowly slides her hand on his bicep then under his arm, gently messaging it's way to his back...


Maan came forward to her shoulder line, and trailed his lips along to feel the smooth line... He could feel how each hair of her body pointed towards him, almost they also wanted his touch... He kissed each part with time, each place with his sweet lips. Everything about her was inviting, everything about her was far better. More he explore the more he leans how beautiful she is. His hand trails to her slim waist, under her sari, feeling the hot flesh. But before they could continue, geets phone rang in an incredible speed which made geet jump while maan brought her even close to his hug...
"it's bebo..." geet picks her phone up, quickly scrolling down. "she will be landing soon. We should leave..." geet still could not gather her self to speak, lost in maans sense. His each touch was so deep that she could almost feel his heart... She slowly moves back a little, looking at maans eyes... Which again had no feeling, but that did not matter any more... It's never the look, it's never the image... Because her husband can't see, yet she was so dam confused how did he make her feel this special with few second touch...
"what's wrong?" maan worriedly faced from one place to another, she was quit, and this wasn't his wife...
Geet nodes... Then slowly comes back to his embrace... "kuch nahi..."

The limo was ready, maan open the door for geet. He patiently waited for his wife to step in then him self...

Through out the journey geet couldn't express her worry, but maan have guessed it correct with her pounding heart beats. He faced her worriedly, gently resting his hand on her cheek, "is something bothering you?" geet nodes a no, sweetly smiling, suppressing her self to him... But maans heart did not listen... He also worried in her unknown worry...

Finally they arrived, geet could have guessed bebo will be screaming towards her with a huge hug. And she did, her hand slowly slips way from maan which he highly disliked. "bebo" she screamed...
They hugged and laughed while geet felt NT tummy, stroking and teasing. NT was rather petrified looking at maan, wedding day, she was so busy with arrangement that they had no chance to meet... She actually have not met anyone in gees family and living with them for a week, hopefully everything goes fine.
"hi..." NT forcefully smiles. Surly just like geet, she wasn't also happy with this marriage, and just like her sister she also promised never to return home and that's why she is around geets...
"hello..." maan smiled. He tried to be formal as possible, she is the first member of geets family he will be meeting properly...
"shall we go?" geet nodes, she kept looking at her sister who looked at maan in surprise, he had no stick, walking through crowded people with black sunglasses, now who would guess he is blind... Oh she was doubting...

Driver opens the Limo, and all of them drove back. And they arrived, NT was more then surprised with the over loving family, even though this was her first time, they were so nice and kind almost like she already knew them...

In dinner table, avantika along with few maans bua made sure NT get the proper food as she was 4 month pregnant...
"where is dev?" maan wondered, he was always late, but today, it was first time geets family member showed up, it did not look nice. NT was rather shocked seeing maan, so independent, geet was serving her hubby while everyone els was trying to feed NT, they were rated, over worried that she also traveled by her self... But NT eyes was more shocked when she seen dev... She dropped her spoon instantly while dev with tears in his eyes...


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Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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waiting. . .. .
Me 1st . . .
Whoop me 1st so happy its d 1st tme. . .
Awesum update
Maaneet scard .
Loved d update .
Maan z feeling dat geet may go away 4m hm . .
I loved d update.
Cn v get mre updats plzz
Edited by luv_DD - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congratulations for new thread dear...!!!!!
awesome update...!!!!!!!!!
Edited by MaanKiGeet.. - 13 years ago
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⭐️ congrats on new thread ⭐️

waiting for update 😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Congrats dear..
now me off to read the update

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