FF -MAHSOOS- MAAN & GEET- THREAD 4 - Page 16

u truly write out of d world sweety...
oh i just luved how maan got angry at her slightest ignorance...it was sooo sweeet...
d way u described maan feeling his wife i went speechless can't describe wat i felt in words n dere dialogues simple yet dey had d deepest of impacts...wow keya u r brilliant...
again d morning part where she was wid nt but still turned n gave some attention to maan so dat he doesn't get angry was super cute...
n d last part where she asks him dat does he know her likes n dislikes...i was simply bowled over by his reply it was truly deep striking d depths of ones heart lyk d way it affected geet...hats off keya
n geet's reply was marvelous...
waiting for more yaar...my days can't b complete without reading mahsoos at least once...:-D

Loved the update.. Geet showering all attention on nt but maan also gets his share..lol..what happened between dev nt why they seperated..geet wanting to know him but their type of love is completely different..

awesome...mehsoos is really special...

Awesome update...

Hey sweetie pie...awesome part yaar...
Tell GEET to hv sum patience yaar...
Let him explore his beautiful wife...
Itni ghaai kyu hai iss ladki ko...
Let him enjoy too yaar in his own special way...
Whts cooking b/w Dev n NT...???!!!!!!
last part was just awesome...
Dil ki baat dheere dheere zubaan par aa rahi hai...
Continue soon dear...wud be waiting...
Love u loads...take care n keep writing...!!

I really really lived t especially how maan is feeling jealous of his sis in law...lol...

Awesome part...

so touching, very sweet inded please continue soon, eagerly waiting