Thrd1 Darkness Personified!! Link to thrd2

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todayzstar

@todayzstar

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#251

Poor geet...
Eagrly waiting 4 nxt prtt...cntnue soonnn

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zunaiba5

@zunaiba5

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#252

Thnx 4 pm

Poor geet she lost her mother and now father ...

pls do continue

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blue24

@blue24

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#253

Awesome
Just loved it
The way maan was introduced his power its awesome..
Geet lost her father that too on her birthday sad for her..
Wateing what vl happn next
Do continue soon
Thanks for the pm

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soni4eva

@soni4eva

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#254

wow luv it superb

poor geet maan is soo evil

cnt w8 2 read more plzz cont soon

fanx 4 da pm x

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saam123

@saam123

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#255

jazz awesome strating

u r right it's not so easy

to go with this story. have

to be a strong enough to

see another world & a new

maan with all the darkness

u done a marvelous job so

go with the flow. ready to konw

about all new world of darkness.

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Mehek25

@Mehek25

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#256

A very good start to the story Jazz.

I agree with u that u should go with the flow of the story, and write what u and only u think should be happening in the story.

So what if Maan is darkness personified, so what if he never changes...so long as the story is interesting will love to read it.

Pls continue soon.

Thanx for pm dear.

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 13 years ago

#257

Congrats on the new SS! all da best! Jus read the intro, character sketch, prologue n part 1! Loved it! Its different! Intense n emotional n wonderful! Update soon! Perfect start!