Thrd1 Darkness Personified!! Link to thrd2

Sara Khanna

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Posted: 13 years ago

#271

jazzu ... love you sweetie pie
now, what can i ask more for ???

you all are really making me jump in joy ... so much variety in dark stories ... you know how much i love these dark romance & wild love ... awesome ... this is real cruel-evil mighty Maan Singh Khurana ... the aura, the scene, the atmosphere you presented here is beyond excellence

do cont soon & do PM me
make the parts as long as you can ... no worry from my side ... go beyond everything in your creativity

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pinky6

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Posted: 13 years ago

#272

AWESOME ! UPDATE SOON PLZzz 😃

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Posted: 13 years ago

#273

Hey jazz awesooome start...

loved the 1st part...

really maan is so evil at such a tender age...

n feeling sad for geet she lost her father..

now what will happen when his evil eyes will fall on geet...

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Sara Khanna

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Posted: 13 years ago

#274

jazzu, indeed a dark one with lots of turns & twist

Maan is a 18 year ruthless boy, Geet was having only her father as her family, the whole atmosphere -- where you describe Maan, his evilness, his hunger, mohinder's state of mind, Geet's wait, her innocence ... i mean over all i am speechless jazzu jaan ... and a warning do write this as yourself, no burden, no restiction & no worry

do cont soon & do PM me

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RAJSHREE

@raj_202

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Posted: 13 years ago

#275

prolouge is too good then how will story cum out

will be waiting for parts

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Seher

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Little_Mermaid.

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

#278

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: azee11
<font color="#990000">awesome start...</font>
<font color="#990000">Poor Geet...such a big loss at such a tender age</font>
<font color="#990000">OMG!!!! he is so evil at such a young age</font>
<font color="#990000">I always love dark stories...waiting for the moment when he lays his hand on Geet</font>
<font color="#990000">PLz cont soon</font>
<font color="#990000">Luv</font>
<font color="#990000">TC</font>
<font color="#990000">Atiffa</font>