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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: punam2712

<font color="#003300">WHAT AN EVIL CHARACTER</font>

<font color="#003300">THINKS MONEY CAN BUY ANYTHING</font>
<font color="#003300">HOPE SHE IS ABLE TO GIVE IT BACK TO HIM IN THE FUTURE</font>
<font color="#003300">LOVED THE PROLOGUE</font>
<font color="#003300">DONT MIND THE DARK STORY AS LONG AS THE END IS HAPPY</font>
<font color="#003300">WAITING FOR THE REACTION</font>



Yes punam he is an evil character! After all, he is darkness personified!!
Well we don't know yet what kinda character geet is!!! So can't say if she'll b able to give him back or not!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Mehek25

<font color="#000099">OMG Maan is so evil.</font>

<font color="#000099">U have chosen a very appropriate title for ur story.</font>
<font color="#000099">How dare he say...'I want Geet...for one night'.</font>
<font color="#000099">But well must admit its an awesome to the story.</font>
<font color="#000099">Pls continue soon.</font>
<font color="#000099">Thanx for the pm.</font>
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Thanks mehek!!!
He is darkness personified n it's true
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: nazsij

1st congrads 4 new ff...and thanks 4 the warning...hehheheee

awesome starting...he want her 4 one night...vo bhi geet ki family se hi poochliya...ek hi harkath se patha chel reha hai hum worst expect kare...pur kya karu aadath se majboor hu tho na padu ye tho nehi hone wali...so zyada heart attack dena math..loldedo tho bhi hume pehle se hi warn kardena...precautions lethe hai padne se pehle...lol...continue soon...



Don't worry I'll try to give warning b4 every update that would hv darkness in it... But gave the warning in the beginning that it's gonna b a dark story... So expect the worse!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: tushti-kiran



oh my GOD...Maan wants Geet only for one night... he is so evil...I am getting goosebumps...I am sure now Geet will give him good takkar...he doesn't understand that how can a family throw their daughter in front of him for money...

yaar please update more fast...I want to read more...thanx for pm



Sorry dear but gave the warning in the beg...
Ok I'm not sure what kinda character geet is in this one... So I wud say don't expect much unless it gets unfold... 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Simran_14

Ok seriously, my jaws dropped on <font size="3"><font face="Calibri">"Just for one night!!" 😆</font></font>


<font size="3"><font face="Calibri">Though some where I hadexpected this</font></font>


<font size="3"><font face="Calibri">This is an amazing dark story</font></font>


<font size="3"><font face="Calibri">Loved the prologue</font></font>


<font size="3"><font face="Calibri">Just awesome</font></font>


<font size="3"><font face="Calibri">Superb</font></font>


<font size="3"><font face="Calibri">Cont soon</font></font>


<font size="3"><font face="Calibri">Thanks 4 da pm</font></font>



Thanks Simran
n sorry if it shocked u
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: 97531

He is so evil in this,
want Geet just for a night...
continue soon dr.



Yep he is evil!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ssch

maan is so evil...

great update!!!!



Thanks dear
n yes he is evil...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Surya.Ravi

different & nice...😊



Thanks surya!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: aamirkhanfan

that's an awesome prologue...



Thank you dear😳 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: srirad

<font color="#9900ff" face="Georgia, 'Times New Roman', Times, serif" size="4">Awesome prologue...👏</font>

<font color="#9900ff" face="Georgia, 'Times New Roman', Times, serif" size="4">Maan is real evil..</font>
<font color="#9900ff" face="Georgia, 'Times New Roman', Times, serif" size="4">Continue soon😊</font>



thax dear
already gave the warning in the beg that it's gonna be dark

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