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Tamalika Basu

@sukklover

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

dear...😛

4 pm me ..😃.

4 new thread...

👏🥳

👍🏼4 ur

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ur updates...really

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tons of n

4 u..🤗

lov,❤️

Tama

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Simran_14

@Simran_14

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

on the new thread

amazing update loved superb cont soon thanks 4 da pm

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swetha10

@swetha10

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

congrats on the new thread...

nice update..

awww poor maan..

continue soon

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Seher

@Speechless

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

for new threadyou are doing great

she trapped both Maan and dev and she kissed dev and then she walks out with sameer Poor Maanshe broke his heart mercilessly

Originally posted by: zeynab111
Hurting so much that I cannot hide it any longer and a
river of tears flow down my cheeks to my pillow.
Crying until I cannot anymore.
Words the invisible knife that goes deeper with each
word spoken until it makes it through.
Words that then make a knife slice downward more each
time with it's painful intention.
In the end, what is left is a broken heart, sitting inside
depressed crying in pain.
My mind can't stand the heart this way.
Thoughts fluttering in of the possible solutions all no
good to be thought; let alone acted upon.
My heart feels so weak it can't go on; there is no hope
or support.
Time to end it, my heart can't take any more and either
can I.
slowly taking a knife and slicing my will to
live.
Sitting in the corner in the fetal position, my face to the
wall and my back to the rest of it all.
Silently awaiting my fate as the blood trickles all over and my blurred vision sets in.
Could this be the end?
Oh please let it be!!
I can take no more.
Set me free of this life and bring my heart to the joyful
beats it once had.
Bring me to the place of ecstasy and harmony so that for
once I may be happy.

fabulous job... waiting to see MAAN in action n revenge mode cont. soon

Edited by Speechless - 13 years ago

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punjabi.princes

@punjabi.princes

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

awesome part!

can't believe she would hurt maan like that

con't soon!

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504887

Suspended

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

awesome awesome updt
congozzz 4 d new thrd
omg omg omg maan is so heartbroken
geet blocked all her guilt
poor maan saw geets truth along wid his bro
awww maan was in tears
geets behaviour was really b****y types but no worry msk is here
geet thinks maan has lost d key in his pain ocean but she doesnt knw dat theres always a 2nd key duplicate key to get thru d lock
luvd d precap
go show her msk who u rly r
cont soon
thnx 4 d pm
btw d english translation of d song was hilarious lolzz
zee u just rock!!!!!!!!!

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Nickname : Zee

@Mrs.ZSK

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: ananya95
awesome awesome updt
congozzz 4 d new thrd
omg omg omg maan is so heartbroken
geet blocked all her guilt
poor maan saw geets truth along wid his bro
awww maan was in tears
geets behaviour was really b****y types but no worry msk is here
geet thinks maan has lost d key in his pain ocean but she doesnt knw dat theres always a 2nd key duplicate key to get thru d lock
luvd d precap
go show her msk who u rly r
cont soon
thnx 4 d pm
btw d english translation of d song was hilarious lolzz
zee u just rock!!!!!!!!!

hey ananya!!!🤗

aww thank u for such a long and beautiful comment!!!!

hahaha i think this is the second time u have told me that i rock 😳😆

yes she is a spoiled brat who right now acts very b****y.

there is a reason for everything though.

But yes Mr. Maan SIngh Khurana is here...

and boy does he have something planned for Geet.

oh yes...i didn't even think of i like that...but yes there is always a duplicate key , which he will definately use to crack through her.

hahaha did i translate it wrong ...is that why it was funny 😕 😆

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Sehar

@-SmexySmile-

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

congratzz on the new thread...
loved the update...

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Nickname : Zee

@Mrs.ZSK

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: Speechless

for new threadyou are doing great
she trapped both Maan and dev and she kissed dev and then she walks out with sameer Poor Maanshe broke his heart mercilessly

fabulous job... waiting to see MAAN in action n revenge mode cont. soon

awww thank u so much dear!!!!

i feel so flattered for the luvly comment😳

yes there is no words to describe how ruthless and cruel Geet broke Maan's heart. She even used his own brother to do the deed.😭

Everything has a reason though...why did she do this.

Maan will not let her go so easily and will come closer into her life to get his answers.

Is she thinks that this is the last of Maan she will see of him ..she is dead wrong.