1st ff on maaneet SIRF MERE LIYE THREAD 1 (link 2) - Page 51

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mayapari

oh wow awesome update di!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

nicely written...
oops maan ke hote hue she s reading book...
not done😉😉😆
abb us ko bore lagra hain na!!!!!!!!😳😳
kya kare bechara geet s the oly entertainment now!!!!!!
😆😆😆
oh dev n bindiya!!!!!!!!!!
awesome going...
oops JEALOUS maan...
abhay n piya...
new entry...
already lovin it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ohho these guests i tell yu!!!!
ufff😡😡
magar jab tak maan hain no tension dude!!!!!
jus chill😎
waiting for more updates
luv ya
reshu😳



thank uuu reshu, u r a sweetheart dear,, thanks for the lovely sweet cmnt... its really means a lot for me...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Sirf Mere Liye


part 44


thank u sooo much guys for all the sweet cmnts...




everyone knew maan's anger so kept their mouth shut….. engagement was going to start when some people enter the hall with nagada and dhol….

Maan: ye kon hain?

Geet turn to looked ,, and saw a grp of people entering the hall, with dhol… her face lit up literally ….. her eys search for one…. Abhay piya pinky smiled at her where maan being confuse look here and there to find her view…..

Then someone enter the hall wearing a sherwani walked upto her……

Hii gorgeous…. Geet has a cute smile on her face on seeing him but still was searcing someone else….

sid aka siddhant modi

Geet: sid tum yaha? Kab aaye…

Sid: aaj hi aaya hu pinky ne bulaya abb jab tere sare frnds ko bulaya to siddhant modi ko kyun nahi bulata… acche ye maan hain na? maan who was confuse got the hint that he is her friend,,, so many friend and they boys,, gosh he could burn them whenever they touch his geet,,, whether it would be a friendly touch or hug…..

Sid: hello maan,, main sid hu, geet ka frnd more like a brother,,,

Maan smiled: hii…..

Sid: abb jab geet k family agaye hain hain to ceremony suru kare?

Geet: sid wo,,,,

Sid: wo bhi hain, lekin vao kha raha hain….tu janti hain na…. grand entry marega…. She giggle….

And then all heard the sound…..

Ishq hai,

A group of people with dhol enters the house……….. and a guy comes out

Teri aankhon ke matvaale

Kaajal ko mera salaam

Zulfon ke kale kale

baadal ko mera salaam

(He comes towards geet and started dancing with her……his shoulder was touching geet side way,, like back forth and then he goes to the center…)

ghayal kar de mujhe yaar

tere paayal ke jhankar

hey soni sone,teri soni,

har adaa ko salaam

Salaam-e-Ishq.Ishq Ishq

Salaam-e-Ishq,Salaam-e-Ishq Ishq

Salaam-e-Ishq

(he bend down like doing salam and one his leg was moving up n down)

Ho Salaam-E-Ishq Salaam-E-

Salaam-e-Ishq

Salaam-e-(2)Ishq hai….

Geet whisper : ARMAAN……..

Sid whisper to maan: her best buddy,, but maan tried to go towards her ,, and then suddenly a girl comes out from behind……..

Ho teri mastaani anjaani

bataon ko mera salaam

Rangon mein doobi doobi

raaton ko mera slaaam

(She goes towards geet and smiled with a teasing smile….)

Khwaabon mein kho gayi main

deewani ho gayi main

soney soney aisse soney

har adaa ko salaam

Salaam-e-Ishq.Ishq Ishq

Salaam-e-Ishq

(she goes to armaan and join him in the dance)

Ho Salaam-E-Ishq Salaam-E-

Salaam-e-Ishq

Salaam-e-(2)

Ishq hai….

The group came and dance while singing the song….. sid abhay piya too join them….

abhay n geet

Geet to maan: riddhima,, his girl frnd… and smiled… he hide his face in embarrassment…. He knew she could read his eyes,,, he was little jealous…. Geet tried to go from there but maan held her hand…..and just then piya comes there


Oh tere hattha bich mahendi ka rang khila hain

tujhe sapno sa changa

Mehbooh mila hain

She pulled geet and riddhima pushed her towards maan,,, who just catch her on right time…

Meri banno pyari pyari

Sari duniya se nyari

Isse doli me tu leja doliya

Doliyaaa…….

Both the girls hugged geet and hugged maan side way,,, and took a promise to take care of her.. and maan assured with his eyes…..both of them goes towards their respective partners….. maan comes close to her from back….

Teri meri nazar jo milli pehli baar

ho gaya ho gaya tujhse pyaar…

(he make her turn to see him)

dil hai kya dil hai kya

jaan bhi tujh ko nisaar

maine tujhe kiya aitbaar

(geet looked at his eyes which has only love,, she blushed and sang)

ho main bhi toh tujhpe mar gayi

deewanapan kya kar gayi

meri har dhadkan betaab hai

palkon vich tera khwaab hai

( maan pulls her)

Ho jaan se bhi pyaari pyaari

jaaniya ko salaam

Salaam-e-Ishq.Ishq Ishq

Salaam-e-Ishq,Salaam-e-Ishq Ishq

Salaam-e-Ishq

All the frnd comes over there and dance the signatured step,,, they bend down doing salam,, while maaneet were only looking at each other…..

Ho Salaam-E-Ishq Salaam-E-

Salaam-e-Ishq

Salaam-e-(2)Ishq hai….

Geet goes towards dev and pulled him in the dance,, he did some step and then goes towards bindiya….

Main tere ishq mein do jahan vaar doon

mere vaade pe kar le yakeen

keh raha aasman keh rahe hai zameen

tere jaissa dooja nahin

He was looking at bindiya,,, and when she looked at the pair of eyes which is trying to convey something yet she fail to understand or her past doesn't give the permission to gave a second hope…..there was so much pain what arched dev's heart…geet comes there and so was pinky.

Ho aisse jaadoon na daal ve

naa aaon tere naal ve

jhooti tereefein chodh de

ab dil mere dil se jod de

Aadi comes there

ho jo abhi hai dil se

nikli uss dua ko salaam

Salaam-E-Ishq

Salaam-E-Ishq,Ishq,Ishq…Salaam-E-Ishq

Ho Salaam-E-Ishq Salaam-E-

Salaam-e-Ishq

Salaam-e-(2)Ishq hai….

Salaam-E-Ishq Salaam-E…(2)

Ishq hai

The light went off,, and maan sits on his infront of geet on his one knee,, and extend his hand

sorry for color of dresses :(

Rab se hai iltija maaf kar de mujhe

main toh teri ibaadat karoon

Aye meri soniye na khabar hai tujhe

Tujhese Kitni mohobbat karoon

( She hold his hand he stood up,, her eyes was filled )

Tere bin sab kuch benoor hai

Meri Maang Mein tere sindoor hai

sanson mein yehi paigaam hai

Mera sab kuch tere naam hai

(Maan sang)

Ho dhadkanon mein rehne

waali soniye ko salaam

Armaan comes there

Teri aankhon ke matvaale

Kaajal ko mera salaam

Zulfon ke kale kale

baadal ko mera salaam

They were spining aroud maaneet one by one,,, piya sang

Khwaabon mein kho gayi main

deewani ho gayi main

And then abhay sang

Oh ho soney soney aisse soney

har adaa ko salaam

all the grp started dancing in the middle except bindiya as she is expecting can't dance that much… and ofcourse dev would not alow her,,, daadi pinky aadi bindiya was watching them and maaneet were in the center dancing enjoying…..

Salaam-e-Ishq.Ishq Ishq

Salaam-e-Ishq

……………………………………………………………………………………….

All of them hugged each other,, specialy armaan gave a tight hug to geet…..

Geet: abb chodega?

Armaan: ek baar chod diya to dekh tujhe kisi aur ne leliya,,, maan looked at him shocked,, and all other laughed at him…. Geet too giggle,, where riddhima just smiled like hiding something…..

armaan and riddhima

Armaan looked at maan top to last and gave a warm smile……

Armaan: geet ka dhyan rakhna,,,

Abhay: abb apni geet ko uske maan ke pass deraha hain,, thoda emotional hogaya na,,

Piya: aur nahi to kya,, thank god geet ko apna maan mil gaya warna ye armaan ne to iska bodyguard banne ka contract liya tha jaise, har waqt geet geet geet………… abb to tu riddhima riddhima bol sakta hain….

Riddhima: are tum log ye kya baat leke baith gaye chalo engagement ceremony suru karte hain,,,

Sid: hmm ab to geet k asli family bhi aagaye,, hum…………

Maan noticed there is something in riddhima's eyes,, as she is sad,, and wanted to hide something….all of them move from there while maan stop riddhima….

Maan: hi riddhima,,,

Riddhima smiled: hii maan…. Chalo mohurat ka time hogaya…..

Maan: I wanted to talk to u,,,

Riddhima: hmm?

Maan: kya huya, tum khush nahi lag rahi ho,,, tumari ini acchi frnd k engagement hain aur tumhara face itna gam chupaye huye hain, she looked at him, with little tension….

Riddhima: aisi koi baat nahi hain maan,,,

Maan: sayad tumhe pata nahi, main ACP hu,,, logo k face se jhoot pata lagana mere liye koi mishkil baat nahi hain,,,one single drop of tears made its way but she quickly wiped it as armaan comes there…

Armaan: hey maan, lets go na, she is waiting for u….. his voice was little low….. maan node and goes to them where geet was waiting for him with a beautiful smile,,,he forget every thing and was looking at his angel…. They sat on the couch and pandit chanted some mantra and they exchange their ring,,, everyone clapped for them….

………………………………………………………………………………………………………..

Riddhima: why u behaving like this?

Armaan: what maine kya kiya,,

Riddhima: sabko dikh raha hain armaan…

Armaan: oh plss, meri wajah se nahi tumhari wajah sse,,, wo tum ho jiss ki wajah se maan ko shaq hote hote reh gaya,, thank god main time pe agaya,,, nahi to..

Riddhima: nahi to kya,, geet ko sab pata chal jata ? accha hota, atleast usse apne sabse acche dot ki dil ki baat to pata chalti… jisse wo sabse jayada jaane ka dawa akrti hain…

Armaan: riddhimaaa,, ek aur labz nahi,,

Riddhima: ha janti hu, tumhe uske khilaf ek baat bardast nahi,, lekin maine job hi kaha sab sach kaha….

Armaa: just stay away from her…. He walked out leaving riddhima in tears… they were in the terries.. riddhima turn to leave when she met maan, who was a silent spectator of all this…..

Riddhima gasp: maan,,,,,,,,,,,,,

Maan: ye sab kya hain riddhima?

Riddhima broke in tears,, and hugged maan,, he too tried to console her…..

………………………………………………………………………………..

Maan comes to geet,, to talk to her but she was busy in her frnds,, so he made some excuse and called her in the room….

Geet didn't knew that it him,, who made that excuse to call her as bindiya said she needs something…. When geet enter the room maan just grabbed her arms..

Geet was too shocked to react but she doesn't need eyes to see him,, she can feel his touch…

Geet: maan aap yaha?

Maan: tumse kuch baat karni thi,,

Geet put her arms around his neck…

Sorry for the abrupt end,, and for the short part…….
will try to update soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
me first 🥳
awesome yaar
loved it
what is armaan and riddhima hiding?
cont soon
Edited by meena.. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
seems like arman loves geet or something like that
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Posted: 13 years ago
Superb lovely ab yeh dono kya hide kar rahe hai i know some thing related to geet ..i am waiting for next part thx for this great part and pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
dnt tell me armaan luvs geet
seriouslyyy dimaag ulta phulta ho raha haiii
wt happened next waitinggg
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome...
luved geet's friends..
hmm whts with armaan n ridzi???
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
full of masti part

loved it


thanks for pm

bye take care
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
great update
wat are armaan and Riddhima hiding
thanks for pm

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