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wow
amazing updates!!!!!!!!!
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amazing! awesome! great!
continue soon
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di update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Sirf Mere Liye



Part 41

Its being 4hrs maan has gone to headquarters as he got an urgent call from commissioner…. Geet was in her room,, oops correction in maan's room…. And rest of the family except daadi was present in the hall….

Nandini: ye di di kaha reh gayi,,, kab ayengi wo?

Bindiya: let her rest na, waise bhi abhi aake karegi kya sare kaam to pinky hi kar rahi hain…

Pink y has already on her work done,, atleast half of them,,, she has started the decoration and with aadi she has manage to call the guest personally…..she took the seat beside aadi,, feeling tired and exhausted…..

Aadi: pinky tum kabse kaam kar rahi ho, thoda rest karlo….

Pinky: nahi aadi bohot kaam hain,,, dekho na kal engagement hain aur kitna kuch baki hain, caterers ko phn karna hain, flower wale ko batana hain, dj ka kaam bhi nahi huya,, she started crying,,, aadiii sab kaise hoga, itne kam time me, jiju will get upset with me na if I fail to it…….and that time maan enters the mansion….

Maan: kisne kaha jiju will be upset with u?pinky's face literally lit up, she got her huge smile on her face…..she stood up…

Pinky: jiju aap itni jaldi mujhe laga aap sham ko ayoge abhi to 1.30pm baje hain…..

Maan: ha wo pinky maine socha tumhari madad kar du, aur jayada kaam tha bhi nahi… commissioner sir ne mujhe abhi leave par vejh diya hain….. kyun ke unhe lagta hain agar maine abhi chutti nahi li to meri hone wali biwi bhaag jayegi….. itna kaam karunga to biwi ko to bhaagna hi hain,, he sigh and geet who was standing over the stairs made a big O,, as her mouth itself gone like a O…….. she barged in the hall…

Geet: hawww maan aap kitne bure ho, maine kabhi apko kaam karne se roka? He looked at her confused… kabhi apko kaam chodke aane ko kaha, his confuse face now visible to everyone….. kabhi kaha aap itna kaam karoge to main bhaag jayungi? Everyone giggle and maan lips automatically went on smirks…..

Maan stands up and now he is facing geet : geet maine kab kaha tumne kaha, maine kaha sir ne kaha, now she is confuse,, her confuse face is only inviting him to grab her and kissed her insanely…..

Geet: huh?

Maan: ha geet sir ne kaha ke tum ye kabhi nahi kahogi ke tumhe itna kaam pasand nahi ayega aur tum bhaag sakti ho, to tumhare kehne se pehle maine keh diya matlab sir ne keh diya… now geet is highly confuse with his no sense talk… she made a confusing yet cute face…..

Geet: hey babaji main pagal hojayungi,, maan aap ye sab kya bol rahe ho aapko pata bhi apki baate mere samh me bilkul nahi arahi hain, mere kya kisi ke bhi nahi,, pinky giggle to see the sight…..

Maan: tumhe samjh ne ki zarurat bhi kya hain,,, tum bas bhaago mat issi liye main aaya hu take he looked at her with a teasing smile taakkeee tumhe zayada se zayada time de saku, tumhare pass reh saku he was inching closer and geet understood his intention and actual meaning of his words…. He wanted to spent time with her,, no matter how many time they have love each other still the urge is very strong….. geet's cheek went red in shyness….. and maan entangle his finger with her…..she dipped her head in shy….

Pinky: accha ab bohot huya aap dono ka isharo me pyar,, abb meri madad karo…

Maan: sure Sali saheba, issi liye to aaya hu,

Pinky: abhi to kaha geet ke sath time spent karne aaye hain aur abhi meri madad ke liye?

Maan: aap bhi to meri aadhi gharwali hain,, he said and took the seat beside her holding her hand and that was annoying aadi….

Aadi: accha abb hume kaam pe dhyan de thoda…… geet looked at him and saw that he is restless……

Pinky: uff aadi tum bhi na, abhi tumne hi to kaha tha toda rest karlo abhi keh rahe ho kaam karo…. She made a big face…

Aadi: are pinky main to bas yunhi,,, matlab wo ha abhi sare kaam khatam nahi huya na, bohot kaam baki hain so isi liye main keh raha tha,, pls gussa mat ho na,,, geet raise an brow and looked at maan who was looking at them confuse…..

Pinky: accha thik hain,, chalo abb kaam pe lagte hain, workers sare decoration kar llenge hume abhi caterer se jaake milna chahiye aur flower wale se bhi….. aadi noded…..

Geet took a seat beside maan,,,, pinky and aadi got busy in the house works and in the phn calls……

Geet to maan: maan apko nahi lagta ye dono ke bich kuch chal raha hai,,, maan looked at her confuse,,, ufff maan apko sach me samjh nahi aata ke aadi bhai pinky ko pasand karne lage hain,,,

Bindiya: mujhe bhi aisa hi lagta hain,, jis tarha se ye dono ek dusre ko dekhte hain mujhe bhi aisa hi lagta hain…

Geet: aur abhi to aadi bhai maan se jealous ho rahe the,, maan's eyes popped out…

Maan: kya mujhse???bindiya and geet giggle..

Geet: hmm jab aap aur pinky baat kar rahe the hath pakad ke tab aadi bhai ka face dekha?

Maan got a hint now,, at first day he was drooling over her now this,,, he has a smirks on his face and evil smirks…

Geet: aap kya soch rahe ho,,, he smile

Maan: in dono ko milane ki,,, geet smiled… but ek baat samajh nahi aayi ye mujhse jealous kyun feel kar raha tha,, meri to shaadi bhi tai hogi…. Aur pinky she is a kiddo….

Geet smiled: maan yehi to pyar hain, apke pyar koi aur chuye ye aapko pasand nahi aata valehi aap unpe jitna bhi trust kare ya fir aap jante ho dusra insane galat nahi hain,, fir bhi hume ye pasand nahi aata hamara pyar kisi aur se aise baat kare…..

Maan frown: sabko aisa lagta hain?

nandini: di di iska matlab aapko bhi bura laga hoga jab maan ji I mean jijaji ka hath pinky ne pakra tha?

Geet: bilkul nahi,, mujhe pata hain maan ne uska hath sirf apne saali ki taur pe pakda tha aur more than that I trust maan, she said while looking at him deep in his eyes….. and maan could saw the selfless love in her eyes…

Nandini:lekin di di agar waha pinky ke jagah aur koi hota aur jijaji ne uska hath pakda hota ya fir uss ladki ne inka hath pakda hota to? To aap kya karti , kya aap itna hi trust karti? Kuch nahi kehti jijaji se?

Geet looked at him: to main inka murder kar dungi he gulped his saliva, he knew she is possessive about him.. nandini smiled satisfied but her smile not lasted long,, when geet said aur uss ladki ka chote chote chote chote tukre karke crocodile ko khila dungi,, nandini looked at her unbelievingly…. But geet laughed a loud but mujhe pata hain mere maan kabhi aisa karenge hi nahi…… he looked at her to see the depth of her love….. but could see something else beyond her answer…… she could never harm him,, and he knew it….

Daadi came there….

Daadi: aare tum log abhi bhi yaha ho, engagement me ring abhi tak nahi aayi… aap log jaldi xyz jewelers ke pass jayiye aur ring dekhiye jaake,, humne unse baat kiya hain…aap sirf jayiye aur dekhiye jaake…. Aur ha pinky aap bhi in dono ke sath jayiye…..

All left to the jewelers to pick up the rings and some jewelry… bindiya wanted to go but she was feeling uneasy….. nandini adi pinky were accompanied maaneet…..

Jewelry shop…………….

The owner welcomed them,, he is a good friend of maan's daadi…….

They keep looking at the rings…. But none was impressing maan,,, he wanted it to be special ofcourse it will be wear by the prettiest lady in the world so how can he compromise in it…….he was looking at every ring still he is not satisfied….

Geet: maan ye aap kya kar rahe ho?

Maan: kya?

Geet: aap har ring ko dekhte ho fir wapis rakh dete ho,, abb shop ki ring khatam hone ko aayi aur aapko abhi tak kuch pasand nahi aaya…..

Maan: uff geet main kya karu, mujhe kuch pasand nahi araha aur sabse badhi baat ye us ladki pe bhi to acchi lagni chahiye jo duniya ki sabse khubsurat ladki hain,, he said with all love in his eyes and geet blushed in her own way…..

Geet: accha to aap ring choose karo main thoda waha ghumke ati hu…. Maan nodded with smile and kept looking at her retreating figure…

The sells girl looked at him and smiled: engagement?

Maan smiled: hmm….

The girl: love marriage?

Maan: aapko kaise pata chala?

The girl: apke face se pata chalta hain,, aap usse bohot pyar karte ho…… maan smiled at her and carry on his process of choosing the rings….nandini comes there….

Nandini: aapne koi ring choose kiya? Maan was looking at the rings…

Maan: nahi, kuch accha nahi lag raha… maan was reaching a ring when nandini goes to touch it….

Nandini: ye kitna accha hain na,, maan took it from her slowly buy kept that that place..

Maan: utna bhi accha nahi hain…. Mere geet ke kabil nahi hain,,, nandini looked at and frown….

The sells girl goes to the somewhere for some time and when she come back she hand over a beautiful blue diamond ring which is really unique in sense, and very beautiful…

Sells girl: I think aapko ye zaroor pasand ayegi, ye hamare yaha to kya pure india me bohot rare milta hain, kuch khas khusnaseeb hote hain jinhe ye naseed hota hain I thing ur fianc is the lucky one..

same ring diff angle,, (don't know u guys will like it or not but i really like uniqe and smple thing)

Maan : actually the ring is the most luckiest thing in the world that it got the chance to touch my geet and get the pleasure to be with her 24 x 7……….. all the sells girl and boys and the shop owener himself was dumbfounded to see the love in his eyes and the word he have said….

Nandini: jijaji but ye didi ka size ka hain bhi ya nahi dekhna padega na ,,

Maan: hmm but geet hain kaha, he was looking here and there when nandini said

Nandini: ek kaam karte hain na, geet di di aur mera size ek hi hain, mujhe pehna ke dekh lijiye agar fit huya to ye lelete hain,,

Maan looked at her annoyed: nandini wo hamare sath hi hain abhi ajayegi we can wait for her,,, and then smile ye ring to sirf geet ke finger me hi jayegi,, kisi aur ke nahi…

Before nandini could say something geet comes there,,,

Geet: hogaya ring select???

Maan: mera to hogaya,,

Geet: mera bhi she cutely smile,, all the sells girls and the boys were already flat to see her beauty,, she was wearing a patiyala suit but she was looking ever so elegant and beautiful,,

now all can understand why he is head over heal in love but they were only seeing the outer beauty…. Maan maine le to liya but aap ek baar pahenke to dekho ye fit hota hain k nahi… he extend his hand and she slipped it in and it was perfect,, she was so happy and that was evident from her smile and everyone was looking at her smile that was enchanting his beauty only for better…..

Maan: hmm abb tum bhi try karlo,,he hold her hand and slipped the ring on her finger she looked at it amazed,,, it was indeed beautiful and she liked it from the bottom of her her,, he has a great taste…. But this is geet…. (tich sighed)

Geet: maan hum kuch aur le sakte hain??? Maan looked at her puzzled,, didn't she like it……the sells girls were shocked to see that she is denying to take it where every girl desire her would be husband could get it for them….

Sells girl: mam apko ye pasand nahi ? its so beautiful and one in a piece,, apko ye is town me to kya pure india me nahi dikhegi,,,

Nandini: di di kitni pyari ring hain,, aapko pasand kaise nahi…

Geet: maan hum kuch aur dekh sakte hain na….maan was understanding her polite,,, he cupped her face and made her look in to his eyes,,, the sells girl smiled at them..

Maan: geet kya baat hain? Tumhe ye ring pasand nahi hain?? Geet can not lie to him looking at the eyes which pour love care and authority…. Bolo geet tumhe ring pasand nahi?

Geet: maan,, wo….. ye bohot expensive hain, main isse nahi sambhal sakti…. she was looking ever so cute,, he smiled at her, he knew his geet very well that's why he ask that though he knew her dilemma….

Maan ever so gently takes her hand in his and slipped it in the ring finger…… everyone clap for them, actually they are so drown in maaneet love they even forget its not the actual engagement,,, the girl and whoever was thinking that geet might be some arrogant who wanted to show her dominance by rejecting the ring,, understood her turmoil…. She was so pure and her face was glowing like a new bride…… she was looking at him intently,, couldn't understand how much love he has for her or how could he understand her so much…..

Maan: geet ye ring sirf tum sambhal sakti ho, kyun ke isme mera pura pyar basa hain jo sirf tumhare liye hain, abb batao kya mere pyar ko aise thukra dogi… she rest her palm on his lips..

Geet: kabhi nahi….. he smiled and kissed her palm, her cheek turned deep red in shy,,

Sells girl: sir kya main isse pack kar du? Maaneet nodded…. Pinky came there…

Pinky: oye geet jaldi kar, sirf ring select huyi abhi thode kaam baaki hain,,, aur daadima ka phn bhi achuka hain, jewelry ghar se lenge,, jeweler ghar pe aaya hain… aur ha jaane se pehle hume jiju ka sherwani bhi lene jaana hain… so chal abhi…..

All were just going when geet's fell on a pendent necklace…. She was hust staring at that when maan noticed she is looking at something…. But he thought she is looking at a diamond necklace,, he comes closer to her and whisper..

Maan: bohot khubsurat hain na?

Geet absent mindedly: bohot pyara hain,, he smiled and signal the shop keeper to show that,,, but geet was still looking at the pendent which is not the one maan ordered to show,,, she feel a cold metal is touching her bare neck followed by his warm touch,, she shivered in his touch and close her eyes,,, maan was tying the necklace in her neck and then showed her the mirror,, and whisper close her earlobe

Maan: ankhe kholo geet, necklec ki khubsurti nahi dekhogi jo tumhare gale me jaake aur khubsurat hogayi hain….. geet felt her cheek is burning as his gaze is buring it….. she showly open her eyes but her eyes got widen as she didn't saw that necklace anywhere near…..

maan thought she is looking at it...

Geet ask in confusion: maan ye kya hain?

Maan looked at her equally confused: necklace hain geet,,

Geet: maan mujhe pata hain, lekin ye mere gale me kyun, I mean ye mujhe,,

Maan: sshhh geet he rest his finger on geet's lips,,, I know tumhe ye expensive cheeso me dar lagta hain k tum sambhal payogi ya nahi etc etc but tum isse itne pyar se dekh rahi thi I thought tumhe ye pasand hain so maine pehna diya and don't worry ye tum…

Geet takes off his finger and shouted: maannn,,,, chup bilkul chup…………….. (ye to maan ka dialogue tha na??😉)apko kisne kaha ye mujhe pasand hain, he looked at her with one brow raising…. Mujhe itna vari necklace nahi pasand,, I don't like it….

Maan: but tumhi to

Pinky comes there: jiju geet sahi keh rahi hain, usse vari vari gehno se allergy type hain, she didin't like all this stuff,,

Maan: but yehi to isse dekh rahi thi,,,

Geet: maan main isse kyun dekhne lagi, mujhe jab pasand hi nahi how could I look at it,,, then the sells girl comes to them and takes off the pendent and shows them which geet was looking at………….

Sells girl: sir I think mam ye dekh rahi thi…….

Geet looked at it and her face was glowing more than the moon…. Maan could see this,, he takes the pendent and come close to geet,,,

Geet: maan ye,

Maan: ssshhh… he just tied the necklace on her neck, and she feel the butterflies flying in her stomach,, and heartbeat juse rose with his each tracing finger… he was tracing the finger tip on nech line pretending to tying it….. both comes back to senses….

Sells girl: shall I pack this? Maan nodded………. But he didn't let her remove that……..

In the car…….

maan was sitting with aadi in the front and geet , pinky, nandini were in the back…. Geet was continuously touching the necklace with her finger….

Nandini: didi aap to keh rahi thi aapko ye nahi lena aur abhi uspe se apka hath hi nahi hath raha…..

Geet smiled: aur kabhi hathega bhi nahi,, kyun ke ye sirf mera hain,, she was sounding crazy but her inner meaning couldn't understood by anyone…

Pinky: oye geet tujhe ye itna pasand aaya?? Itna ke jiju ka diya wo expensive haar ko bhi itne baar ghurke nahi dekha tune jitni baar isse chuya hain,,, aisi kya khas baat hain isme?

Geet smiled: isme maan base hain,, everyone looked at her puzzle,, even maan couldn't understand her meaning… she said it while looking at the pendent she was touching,, 1st time he looked at it through the the front mirror and saw there is some later… its his name M…….

see the M latter

geet smiled….. and then pinky looked at it closely..

Pinky: oye teri,, isme to jiju k naam ka M hain, aur issi liye tujhe ye itna pasand aaya,,,,

Maan was looking at her with intensity like piercing in her heart…… she was just smiling the smile that only shows the love for him…………….

Precap: his sherwani,,, oops surprise entry of a male……


sorry for delay the engagement,, it will take a little more time... please bear my slowness...

special thanks to @Mayapari... thank u sweetheart for waiting so much,,, i have read every cmnt and i saw ur seperate attempt to make me update it... sorryyy for the delay,, and thank for the pm for everytime u did previously...

thank u guys for commenting and supporting me...

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update loved it
so entry of another male 😕
i will kill that nano one day😡
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Sweet !
nervous about new entry !
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update
entry of male it is positive or negative😕
nandini😡
cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanx...
yu made me feel spl!!!!!!!🤗
sorry for bugging yu!!!!
wat can i do...
m so addicted to SML😳😳
love ya loads...
reshu😳
Edited by mayapari - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update...

woh maan...kya choice hai...n geet ka bhi jawab nehi...d pendant was beautiful...

its really amazing...

really loved it...

thank u sooo much fr such a lovely update...

continue nxt prt soon...

waiting...
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanx a ton di!!!!
for updating!!!!
awesome di loved it!!!!!
omg adi jealous pf maan!!!
hahaha
oops possesive geet!!!
loved her ans!!!!
"ll murder maan n cut tat gal n feed her to crocodiles"
😆😆😆
wow awesome ring di!!!!
jus loved it...
not oly the shopkeepers are mesmerised even us by ur writing n potrayin their love so cutely!!!!!
y is nandu still here!!!!
kitni beizzadi ho gayi ...
use toh chulu bhar paani mein dub mar jaana hai!!!!!!!
wow di awesome pendant!!!!!!
loved it...
ISSME TOH MAAN HAI!!!!
awesome di!!!!!
ll be waiting for more updates
luv yu loads 🤗
reshu😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 41
nice part...
Nandini what the hell is wrong with her?
its Maan and Geet's engagement and the shameless woman was suggesting to try the ring on her...
seriously Geet should give a tight slap to her in near future...
cont soon...

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