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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update...

but i feel something fishy with dis nandini...itne bad bolne k baujoot woh maan ko jijaji nehi bula rahi hai...dal mein kuch toh kala hai...i hate nandii n vikram both...

i really loved it...

its really amazing...

continue nxt prt soon plz...

eagerly waiting...
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 37
this Nandini doesnt give good vibes...
shes up to something...
but nice both Maan and Geet snubbed her...
cont soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
MSK DID ALL THE SHOPPING FOR HIS MSHTY
LOVE THE MAANEET MOMENTS
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Posted: 13 years ago
😆 oye Tichu tu lunch ke barie mein likhana hi bhul gayi.. but it was too passionate.. just loved it.. Maneet ka lunch skip kar diya.. now next update mein kara de.. 😉. Thanx for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
kahan ho yaar!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
plzzz update dedo...
waiting...

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Posted: 13 years ago

dear..😛..
...4 PMing me...😛
4 ur hard work...👏👏
me just ...
lov,❤️
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P.S.: plz donn't copy paste my comments...i only make it 4 my frndz...if anyone do it again as i saw many of my comments r copied i'll report it...u guys plz make comment urself...u can use my componets indevisual...but donn't coppied it whole as my post...😡
P.S.S.: Plz guys also comment on my stuff...i tried to post comment in everyones...but my most of buddies didn't comment...if u not liked tell also...plz guys...😲😕
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guys...me sad...i PM ed almost 500 but comment only...17-18...😕

i said u guys ealier if u don't like plz tell me...but it really hurts a lot...me try to reply each of u...many serials i don't watch but i read ur ff's ...checking out ur updated stuff's...n try to make a sweet comment which u guys liked...but u never check my any stuff...i really busy wid my studies...but also don't want to hurt my frndz...i try to comment ecah of u woh Pmed me...but only few of u ans my Pms...if don't want me to bother u...plz tell me...i never pm u.4 my any update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
but the update was small.

waiting for nxt pm.
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i never though i can get 64 likes on this ff,, thank u sooo much for liking and commenting on it... PM TOMORROW...

HAPPY HOLI GUYS,, HOPE YOUR LIFE WILL BLOSSOM WITH THE COLOR OF HAPINESS...

Sirf mere liye


part 38

Its 4 pm when geet open her eyes to see the most peaceful face on this earth,,,,,,, maan'he was sleeping ever so peacefully,,, she wanted to touch his features but she knew her one swift movement is enough to wake up maan,, and she didn't want to disturb him' but what is unknown to her that her one stare is enough to realize maan what she is upto' geet tried to remove his hand slowly that was rested on her tummy securely,, she slightly move her finger and traces his forehead and then his eyes to his cheeks,

and when she touch his lips she herself shivers,,, but quickly removes her hand and move his hand a little bit from her tummy,, but he grabbed her and that cause to fall back on the bed,, maan on top of her'she just startled'

Geet: aap jage huye the? Maan looked at her and nodded naughtily,,,, maan aap bohot bure ho,, agar jage huye the to bataya kyun wo main and she shied ,,,

Maan: bata deta to itna pyar kaise milta,,, aur geet tum aaj bhi itna sharmati kyun ho'. Jabke we

have made love for god knows how many times'..

Geet: maan plss,, sab niche intezar kar rahe hain,, hume jana chahiye'. But maan pinned her her to the pillow,,

Maan: koi intezar nahi kar raha, its being 4 pm.. sab to rest kar rahe honge'.

Geet : ok but mujhe abhi uthna hain, to chodiye na'.

Maan: nope'. Geet are u afraid of touching me, she looked at him astonished,, that probably the silliest question,, she denied of that and then he bend down and teasingly looked at her,, then r u shied to touch me, geet has a smile on her face understanding his meaning but choose to shut her eyes'. And he whisper to tum mujhe chune me sharmati ho geet,,, she nodded in no' then why u have stopped when ur finger reached my lips'. Her cheek become red,, and he bite that..

Geet scream: aahhh maan' u monster'

Maan: accha? Ye monster aur bhi kuch janta hain,, he started to tickle her,,, she was laughing like a maniac'.and the duvet they were in slide of exposing her curves'. Maan just lick the skin and geet moan..

Geet: maan'. maan was sensually kissing her neck and jaw,, it was impossible to hold back for geet, she clutches his hair pulling him close to her' he knew she has sore in her down as the previous powerful love making was wild and aggressive' so he has decided not to fetch it'. He comes to lips and kissed them,, geet 4 baj gaye hain, tumne kuch nahi khaya tha,, bhook lagi hain,, she cutely nodded her head'..

Maan smiled: tum fresh hojayo main khana lata hu,,

Geet: hum niche chalet hain na'.

Maan: nope, mujhe niche nahi jana, yehi sirf tumhare sath baithna hain,, she smile and nodded her head, and he was leaving when a naughty idea came in his mind,,, on the second thought u don't have to be fresh' tum waise bhi fresh lag rahi ho'. U r looking more beautiful in birth cloths.. she hide her face in her palm..

Geet: maan just go''. Maan laughed aloud and left from there'.. geet goes to have a warm bath''

Maan was in the kitchen only in his black vest and track'.. he has warm up the food,, and placed the food on a tray when nandini comes there'.

Nandini: are aap yaha kya kar rahe hain,, kisiko bula liya hota wo khana garam kar deta'

Maan: mujhe apna kaam khud karna aata hain nandini,, he was busy in his work ,, didn't gave a second look to

her'

Nandini: but kuch kaam ladkiya kare to hi accha lagta hain, dekhiye na yaha agar aap ki jagah didi aapke liye khana garam kar rahi hoti aur apko serve kiya hota to aapko bhi to kitna accha lagta,, maan smiled at her and so process further, accha aap table pe baithiye main apko serve kar deti hu, didi to sayad kamre me rest kar rahi hogi, she just stepped one feet to touch his hand to stop him but maan snapped it'.

Maan: main janata hu nandini wo rest kar rahi hain, wo mere kamre me hi hain,, so hum dono ek sath lunch karna chahte hain, aur har biwi apne pati k liye aisa karti hain lekin pati apne patni ke liye kare to wo aur jayada romantic hota hain'. He was leaving when nandini said

Nandini: hone wale pati,, aapki shaadi abtak huyi nahi,,

Maan: lekin hum pati patni ban chuke hain, he looked at her with a smirks and nandini stairs at him'. Nandini wo mere room me hain hum dono itne time se ek sath hain,,, aur baki zindegi bhi aise hi sath rahenge'. Nandini turn her head and meekly smile'. He left with the food'.

Maan enter the room,, and geet comes from the bathroom, dripping droplet from her hair'. Maan just looked at her mesmerized,,, the divine beauty was driving him crazy'but she didn't saw him as she was busy in tying her back dori'.. (girls hold on, she has wearing her usual salwar,, so don't run ur mind :p) she just walked to the dressing table but her face was down and she was trying har to tie the knot but failed'. Maan comes to her and brushes his finger on her neck; she shivered with the touch'. Maan comes close,, his breath was fanning on her neck and she closed her eyes'slowly he tied the knot but more like a torture to her,, as he was coming closer and then withdrawn himself from her,, she was tempted to hug him tight,, but froze to her step when she feel his warps on her skin,, he slightly brushes his lips on the neck and rested his hand on her tummy and pulled her closer' (tich scratching her head khana thanda hojayega,,, pehle kha lo fir romance)

He touch her crook of the neck with his nose,, nuzzling close to her,,, she can feel the heat was taking place,, he kissed her back,, slowly tracing down'.

Geet: maannn'.

Maan turn her around: tum hamesha mujhe itna weak kyun kar deti ho? She barely understand what he is mumbling '. Mujhse tumse ek pal ke liye bhi dur nahi jana geet'.. I can't stay a sec without you'.

Geet: main bhi to aapse dur nahi reh sakti,, aur aap kabhi mujhse dur nahi jaate,, main to aapke dil me rehti hu' to main dur kaise jaungi?

Maan just kissed her lips without any word'.. I love u' the magical word she always want to listen' no matter how many time he said this she wanted to hear more, no matter how many times they have made love to each other still the urge to feel each other is grew stronger' they wanted to be in the arms of each other, every moment'.

I love u maan'

They finish their lunch with little teasing little romantic and little naughtily,,,, its 6 pm when finaly maaneet manage to go downstairs'..

Bindiya: agaye aap dono,, uff in love birds ko ek dusre se fursat hi kaha hain jo hume time de,, geet face flushed in bright red' everyone laughed at her, and maan didn't seem to stop his teasing session,, aadi enters the mansion'..

Maan: tu agaya'.. kaha reh gaya tha yaar? Meri shaadi hain 5 din me aur tu abhi tak koi arrangements nahi kar raha,,,

Aadi: excuse me,,, ye meri bahen ki shaadi bhi hain,, aur geet ke shaadi me main koi kami nahi rakh sakta'. He said while grab a seat beside geet'.

Nandini: 5 din me shaadi hain, sab kaise hoga'. Hum koi wedding planner bulaye?

Daadi: ye accha idea hain,, hope is short notice me mil jaye'

Nandini: daadi mere friend vikram ki event management company hain,, maine usse bulaya hain agar thik lage to usse iss shadi ka contract de sakte hain'.

And then vikram comes to the mansion,, everyone greet them' he extend his hand to geet..

Vikram: hii geet,, but maan grab it and gave a little squeeze'

Maan: hello vikram, geet nodded her head with a little hii'.. I hope ghar dhundne me problem nahi huyi'.

Vikram: no, not at all'' so kahiye main apki kaise madad kar sakta hu, nandini ne urgently bulaya'.

Nandini: wo vikram, shaadi 5 din me hain lekin sab puri tarha se taiyar nahi hain, so can u arrange,,, but her words cut by aadi'

Aadi: wo actually maan maine bhi issi liye ek wedding planner ko bulaya tha,, she is new in this field but very talented'.

Nandini: shaadi sirf 5 din me hain aadi, aur ye bohot badhi shadi hain, vikram ek wellknown company ka malik hain and u r saying we can hire a new comer in such a condition, ridiculous,,aapko koi chinta hain bhi ya nahi '' aadi face become lost and that made geet furious..

Geet shouted: nandiniii,, apne badho se kaise baat karte hain ye bhi tumhe samjhana padega kya,,, nandini got petrified to see her rage,, she has never seen geet in such a temperament'. Aadi bhai se aise baat karne ki himmat bhi kaise huyi tumhari,, for ur kind information jitni fikar tumhe hain iss shaadi ki usse kahi lakh guna jayada fikar aadi bhai ko hain'. Aur jo kaam ek professional kar sakta hain woe k new comer bhi kar sakti hain, if she has talent'. Aur vikram ko bulane se pehle tumne kisise pucha? Nahi na, to fir kis haq se bhai se ye sab keh rahi ho,, ye mat vulo nandini ye ghar jitna maan ka hain utna hi aadi bhai ka bhi hain, wo iss ghar ke bte hain aur unhe pura haq banta hain mere shaadi me faisle lene ka,, wo bhi tumse jayada''. She finished her talk while nandini's face lost its all color'.

Nandini: wo didi,,,

Maan: hum pehle aadi ke laaye huye planner se milna chahte hain,,

Aadi was overwhelmed to see the love geet have on him' she is indeed a good sister and he is sure she will be a great wife of his best friend and a great daughter in law of this house'.. she sincerely thanked her through his eyes while she was potraying how much sorry she is feeling.. aadi assured her he doesn't mind all this'.

Maan: aadi,, wok aha hain?

Aadi: yehi hain bahar..

Maan: to ander bula' he got up to call her but she made her way to the hall'. And was startled to see the mansion.. its is huge,, her cute eyes gone big like mary go round and her cute chubby cheeks were spread further when she smiles like she is happiest person right now'.

Aadi: aare ye to yehi hain'. Ander aayo pinky' maan got from his seat to greet the sweet girl who was holding

a chips packets in her hand.. but one person is in confusion is it the same pinky?

Pinky: sorry aadi, itni badi mansion,, haayye main to dekh ke hi mar gayi'

Aadi: pinkyyy,,, abb choro ye sab aur inse milo ye hain maan,, mere dost aur jinki shaadi hone wali hain,, she looked at him while he extent his hand, she grabbed it

Pinky: sach me apki shaadi horah hain ? everyone suppress their smile and maan too'.aadi tried to distanced them'

Aadi: ha pinky sach me inki shaadi horahi hain, unse,,, wo dekho baithi hain,, before he could utter she said..

Pinky: GEET??????

Geet has turn to see the girl who was flirting her maan but the voice was so recognizable'

Geet: PINKYYY?????

Pinky just leave maan's hand straightly goes to geet: ye tu hain geet, I can't believe my eyes'.. she hugged her.. kaha chali gayi thi, pata hain main kitne ohone kiye kitni parishan thi main' sabse pucha tu kaha hain lekin koi nahi janta tha,,, I missed u geet' she started crying like a baby and geet too couldn't hold herself from crying'. Its being so long they aparted'

Geet: sshh pinky, mat ro na,,, dekh main bilkul thik hu'. I missed u too' I m sorry oinky plss tu rona band kar'

Pinky: mujhe chod ke kyun chali gayi thi tu? Main kitna pareshan thi tere liye,, tu thik hain na..

Geet: hmm'. Accha ye sab chod tu aadi bhai ko kaise janti hain?

Precap: oye hoye blushing?????

there are too many mistake sorry didn't get the time to edit it,,, and next part is in below,, have a look..

Hii guys,, sorry thoda late horahi hu aaj kal, not feeling well' so tell me hows it, I know no hot scene only sweet romance,, yaar geet thoda tired hain u know hehehe'. Next update kal'. And tell me how much nano is irritating u, and what do u wanna do with her??? Lol'..

love u sumi for the help,,, guys the 1st pix any many more pix i have upload in my ss is because of her and some of my frnds like radhika archana and mk... love u guys...

Thanks for the comments,, that motivated me to write this ss'. I never thought I would write so much in my life but thanks to my frnds over here who encourage me to the edge'but kash main ye IF k liye bhi keh sakti, I have srated giving the part there but the lack of interest in that is only discouraging me,, so I love my frnds here and over FB,, and thank u so much'''''

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Part 39…………

Pinky: mujhe chod ke kyun chali gayi thi tu? Main kitna pareshan thi tere liye,, tu thik hain na..

Geet: hmm…. Accha ye sab chod tu aadi bhai ko kaise janti hain? They took the seat and pinky began…

Pinky: geet main wo khanna uncle ki beti ki shaadi me busy thi, mujhe nahi pata tha venue me problem horahai hain,,, jab pata chala tab jaake dekha kisi don ki shaadi ke liye wohi jagah select ki gayi hain, unho ne hume chale jaane ko kaha, abb tu bol 2 din me shaadi thi venue kaise decide karte,, konsa venue late, cards diye ja chuke the sab set tha…. Main kuch nahi kar parahi thi,, wo jab main park me baith ke roh rah thi tab meri mulakat aadi se huyi….

Aadi: main duty se lout raha tha…. Uss hrs me park me isse baitha dekha to mujhe laga koi musibat me padh sakti hain… so maine pucha kya huya aur ye baccho ki tarha rone lagi…

Pinky: aur main kya karti,,, tab kuch sujh nahi raha tha,, uncle kya sochte mere bare me…. Geet looked at her then at maan and smiled…. Hmm then maine aadi se sab kaha aur wo mere madad ke liye ready hogaya,,, usne kya chakked churaye wo don ke,,, huh bechara mujhse mafi mang raha tha….. aur shaadi acche se nipat gayi….

Geet: aur ye sab se chal raha hain?

Pinky absent mindedly: shaadi ke baad se hi,, wo mera matlab tab se mujhe koi problem hota hain to main aadi ko bula leti hu…

Aadi: geet hum tabhi se dost ban gaye… maan looked at her with one brow up….

Maan: lekin tu to kisi ladki se dosti nahi karta na?

Aadi in typical manner: he he he he wo main wo,,, pinky bohot acchi thi hum ban gaye dost,, he gulped one glass of water,, and maan smiled slyly…..

Daadi: lekin geet aap pinky ko kaise jante hain?

Geet: daadi hum bachpan ke dost hain, hum dono hi hosiyarpur se hain aur delhi me sath me rehte the,, lekin mujhe padhai ki wajah se hostel me rehna padhta tha aur uske wedding plans ke liye idhar udhar jana padhta tha,,, wo to ye shokh ke liye karti thi but I think abhi isko thoda seriousness aaya hain, maine to kabse kaha tha wedding planning shoukh ke wajah career choos kar but nahi ye to sirf maza karna chahti thi….

Pinky: actually geet ye aadi hi tha jisne mujhe kaha main isme acchi hu aur isse professionally expand kar sakti hu,,, so here I m am… but mujhe nahi pata tha aadi ke wajah se main tujhse mil paayi…

Bindiya: tum dono to sath me nahi rehte the na….

Pinky: aap bindiya ho na? bindiya nodded… wo bindiya dii hum dono sath me nahi rehte the lekin aisa koi din nahi jata tha jab na milte the,,, we are like soul sister…. Bindiya was startled to her exclaim,, "dii" after sapna's death she is 1st one who said dii to her,, she recalled all the memory of sapna that brought tears in her eyes and maan notice that,, he knew she had missed the word….. aadi too notice that….

Geet: kya huya bindiya?

Bindiya: bohot din baad dii labz suna…. Sapna ki yaad aagayi….

Pinky: I m really sorry mujhe apko is naam se bulana nahi chahiye tha,, I m really sorry…. Aadi ne mujhe bataya tha fir bi,,,, she looked at the ground with a sorry face….

Bindiya: nahi pinky,, I m happy k tumne mujhe dii bulaya,, aur main chahti hu tum wohi naam se mujhe bulao….. her face literally got up….. she is cute and instantly click with everyone…. Her cute talk and chubby look melted everyone in a moment…except one nandini….

Nandini: lekin pinky ye bohot badha shaadi hai,, tum kar payogi ye sab..

Pinky: kyun nahi kar payogi,,, ye mere best friend ki shaadi hain,,, ye to mere liye sabse bada toufa hoga meri dost ko,,, uski zindegi in sare palme sanjona chahti hu main,, vale hi ye contrac mujhe na mili fir bhi ek bahen banke har kaam me main rahungi,,, yaha aane se pehle vale hi ye sirf ek profession tha but geet ki shaadi profession kaise ban sakta hain mere liye,,, geet's eyes become moist… she hugged her..

Geet: tu hi sab karegi meri shaadi me,,, tujhse behtar meri pasand koi nahi janta,,, aur ye pal maine apne sabse acchi saheli ke sath guzarna chahti hu….

Nandini: but didi iske kaam me to hamesha blunder hoa hain,, abhi issi ne to kaha…. Aur maine vikram ko keh diya tha k,,,

Geet: mujhse pucha tha ekbaar kehne se pehle,, aur nandini ye meri aur maan ki shaadi hain to I think hum ye sab decide kare to accha hain aur humse bhi badhi yaha baithi hain,, daadima… wo hain ye sab fainsla lene me,, tum mehman ho, kuch din ke baad chali jayogi to ye sab mamle me na paro to accha hain….

Nandini: but di di, main to sirf aapka bhala chahti hu,, ye pinky ye sab sambhal nahi payegi,,, ye to shaadi ke khaane me hi nazar garake baithi rahegi,,, pinky looked down with tears and nandini was laughing,,

geet shouted: nandiniii,,, mujhe lagta hain tum apna had baar baar vul rahi ho…. geet's blood shot eyes were enough to to make nandini shiver…. Maine ek baar keh diya hain agar ye shadi koi arrange karega to wo pinky aur ek baat,, mujhe lagta hain tumhe abhi hp wapis chale jana chahiye aur sirf shaadi ke din hi wapis aana chahiye… everyone was shocked to see her rage…. Maan tried to calm her….

Geet: nahi maan,, ye apna had hamesha vul jaati hai,,, pehle aadi bhai ki insult ki, abb pinky ki,, why she is doing all this,, she turn to her aur sayad ye vul gayi pinky meri bahen se bhi badhkar hain,,, wo mujhse tujhse bhi jayada payar karti hain, aur ye tub hi janti hain nandini but still,,, still u are doubting on her….

Nandini: I m sorry di di,,, dubara aisa nahi karungi promise,,,

Geet: main aaj tai ji phn kar rahi hu, wo tujhe le jayenge…

Daadi: bte aise chote mote baat pe gussa nahi hote… wo bacchi hain…

Nandini: really sorry di di,, abb kabhi aisa nahi kahungi..

Vikram: geet I think tumhe usse maaf kar dena chahiye she doesn't mean to hurt u or anyone..

Geet shouted: u just kept out of it vikram,,, ye hamare family ki baat hain aur mujhe koi bahar wale se suggestion nahi chahiye chahiye…. Vikran wake up..

Vikram: then I think I should leave…..

Geet: plss

Vikram left from there,,,

Pinky: geet tu gussa mat karna,, wo to pehle se hi aisi hain,, wo mujhe pasand nahi karti…

nandini goes to her: I m sorry pinky… pinky asuured her through eyes…

Pinky: geet ye teri shaadi hain, aise gusse me koi faisla karke ye sare pal pe khattas mat la…. Main to tujhe sir fkhush dekhna chahti hu,, aur nandini chali jayegi to tub hi khus nahi reahegi,,, plss gussa mat ho… geet calm a bit…

maan comes to them: Maan mujhe to mere Sali ki baato me dum laga,, everyone looked at him even more shocked,, and nandini smiled.. but her smile was lost when he said hmm pinky ne sahi to kaha,, itna gussa accha nahi hain,,, geet looked at him understanding his words… he is talking about pinky…. pinky abb jab geet ne keh hi diya hain to kyun na tum yehi ruk jao, shaadi tak…aur mujhe aur ek saali mili hain to mujhe uske sath bhi to time spent karna hain…usse geet ke secrets bhi to leni hain…. Pinky instantly hold his hand sure jiju,, mujhe aapko uske bohot sare secret batane hain…geet looked at her warning with her eyes…. Pinky just hide behind maan,, and he shield her… geet just looked away hiding her smile….

Aadi: to fir tum yehi ruk rahi ho pinky,, he was asking but more like he was confirming himself,, pinky nodded cutely….

They had their dinner together….and settle down in the hall.. except daadi as she was not feeling well…

Pinky: accha sun,, sirf 5 din hain to kal se decoration suru kar denge,, aadi tum meri madad karoge,, she said with authority that made aadi blush a little and gave a chanch to maan to tease him…

Maan: ha aadi, meri saali saheba jo kahegi wo karna….

Aadi: maan but mujhe report dena hain,, ps me tu janta hain….

Maan: wo sab main sambhal lunga…. Geet smiled at him….

Pinky: ok aap logo ne engagement ring li k nahi,, they gave her a blank look…

Bindiya: nahi pinky abhi tak kuch nahi huya,,,

Pinky: oh god kitna sab kuch karna padega….jiju kal aap aur geet bhi chalo,, ring lena hain,,

Geet: thik hain pinky….

Pinky: hum parso engagement rakhte hain uske agle din haldi then mahendi and sangeet,,, aur uske agle din shaadi…

Aadi: but pinky itna sab hopayega,, it will be really hectic,,,

Pinky: sab hoojayega aadi, ye mere best frnd ki shaadi hain, main kaise uske shaadi me kuch kami rehne du…. Wo sab fikar mat karo.. bas guest list bana ke mujhe dena,,,,kal subah card chapwana hoga… uff kitna sara kaam hain,,, aadi was looking at her in awe and maaneet werelooking at each other and then aadi pinky….

geet smirk at maan

Pinky: geet mere pass cards ke kuch sample hain,,, ye le she give her some beautifull card…. Choose karle,, kal dedenge chapane ke liye… aur engagement ke liye phn karke sabko personaly bulayenge…

Geet was busy with the selection of card… she was holding a white and red mix and a pink and red card…..

Geet: konsa de maan, main confuse hu,, maan rest his hand on another one,, golden yellow…

Nandini: ye jayada accha hain,, geet made a face and pouted…. Maan looked at pinky for help she instantly looked at the white and red one… and maan understood…..

Maan: nahi mujhe wo white and red wala accha hain,, geet looked at it smiling,, happy ,,, maan sighed thanking pinky,, and she giggle…..

Geet frown: tu has kyun rahi hain?

Pinky: nahi kuch nahi, main kaha has rahi hu….

Geet: thik hain tu abb rest karle,,, bindiya tum jao restkaro…..

Pinky: kya yaar itne din baad mile aur tu sone ja rahi hain….

Geet just looked at maan and he smiled….

Maan: to tum dono ek kamre reh jao,,, sare baate kahatm karo….

Pinky: ye accha idea hain, chal geet,, but geet looked at him worryingly,,, he nodded and she goes with pinky smiling….

Aadi: main bhi ye hi ruk raha hu,, kal bohot kaam hain….. maan gave his famous smirks but aadi leave from there…

Nandini goes to her room……….

Bindiya: pinky bohot acchi ladki hain…

Maan; hmm aadi ke liye thik rahegi,, bindiya looked at him amazed,, kya don't tell me undono ke bich jo chal raha hain tumhe samjh nahi aaya..

Bindiya: r u serious?

Maan: very much,,,

Bindiya: ye to bohot accha hoga maan…..ok chalo abb sone jao,, gdni8….

Maan : gdni8….

Maan tried to sleep at his best but couldn't,, he was in a habbit of holding geet in his arm securely…. He twist and turn but couldn't sleep a min… his restlessness was evident to see the condition of the bed…..

Precap: kya kare maan, ye neend aati hi nahi….

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Posted: 13 years ago
fabulous update but kyun roka us nandini ko chale jane diya hota i hope ki raat main vapus room main aa jaye kyunki use pata ho ki maan soyega hi nahi continue soon dear n try to update soon

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