1st ff on maaneet SIRF MERE LIYE THREAD 1 (link 2) - Page 21

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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update...
waiting fr more...
maan sooo romantic...loved it...

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Posted: 13 years ago
oho!i hope daadi vl not b a threat for geet...
luvd maneet's romance..!
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 27
nice part...
glad that all the horrors are left behind...
cont soon...
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Sirf mere liye part

28...

maan: thik hain hamari to koi kadar hi nahi hain,,,,and he goes to his room...geet open the door after changing in her dress...

bindiya: kitna der karti ho geet? pata hain na daadi kitni strict hain,, unhe late aana bilkul pasand nahi...

geet made a cute complaining face: maine kya kiya ye to wo m,,,,,,,,,,,,,

bindiya: maan? maan aaya tha yaha?

geet: nahi mera matlab hain k,,

bindiya: jhoot kehne ki jarurat nahi hain,, i know wohi aaya hoga... aur abhi bhi wo hamari baate sun raha hoga,,,

maan was leaning on the room from his room to hear bindiya's statement he strainghten himself... but bindiya shouted abhi thik se kyun khare horahe ho, baate to sabhi sunli... meri galti hain maine geet ko yaha rakkha,, aaj hi main tumhe yaha se before she could complete maan was there holding geet in one hand,,,

maan: don't u dare...

bindiya: agaya na line pe, sach samne agayi na,, tumhe hi the yaha aur issi liye geet ko late huya ready hone,, maan keh rahi hu sudhar jao...

maan caught off gaurd... ha main tha kya karogi tum? arree meri biwi hain wo..

bindiya: abhi tak puri tarha se bani nahi... pura vidhi vidhan baaki hain abhi... waise bhi daadima to,,,,,

maan: daadima kya?

bindiya: umm wo kuch nahi tum dono niche chalo... she wanted to leave but geet hold her hand and make her sit in the bed and she herself sit infront of her in the floor...

geet: tum itni tense kyun ho bindiya? aur mujhe pata hain daadima mujhe pasand nahi karti...

maan: aisa nahi hain geet...

geet: maan mujhe pata hain daadima mujhe pasand nahi karti,, aur kare bhi kyun, unhe na meri pehchan malum hain, na meri parivar... kuch bhi to nahi pata mere baare me,, kaise wo apne pote ko kisi aise ladko soupe jisse wo thik se janti tak nahi...

bindiya was deep thought and unknowingly she said: janna chahe tab na...

maan: kya??

bindiya: kuch nahi,, geet ne thik kaha,, i think hume geet ko daadi se acche se milvana chahiye aur impress karwana chahiye, hain na geet? geet noded her head in yes...

maan: tum ladkiya kaha kaha se idea dhundke laati ho, both the girl took two cussion and throw to him,, dimaag hogi tab jaano ge na both said in union... and giggle,, maan was happy to see the most importend women in his life laughing and giggling...three of them make their where daadi was waiting for them...

all off them were in the dinning table,,, a huge dinning table with 12 chair set... maan was seated in the middle,, daadi has seated beside him... and geet either side , right side of maan...

daadi: apko pata hain na hume late bilkul pasand nahi...

maan: sorry daadi,

daadi.. hmm, suru kijiye... there was 3 kind of pasta and noodles,, maan was looking at geet who's eyes like any moment could be out from her socket... and her face was showing completely YUCKKK

bindiya knew it geet doesn't like italian or noodle she hate it... she like only indian masaledar khana...

bindiya: geet main kuch aur layu khane k liye?

daadi: kyun kya huya? iss khane me kya burayi hain... ye maan ki bhi favorate hain...

maan: daadi geet ko ye khana pasand nahi,, she hate continental... he was smiling but daadi was fuming...

daadi: pehle batana chahiye tha, hum kuch aur order kar dete... aur continentel me kya burayi hain,, aur aap hi to hamesha naraz ho jate the jab bhi kisi din aapka fav pasta nahi banta to...

maan: daadi to geet ke liye kuch aur bana dete hain...

geet: nahi maan, main ye kha lungi,,

maan: nahi geet mujhe pata hain tumhe ye bilkul pasand nahi,, kuch aur banwa lete hain...

daadi: jab wo khud keh rahi hain wo ye kha sakti hain to tumhe kya problem hai,,,,

bindiya: lekin,,,,,,,,,,,

geet: main kha lungi,, don't worry...

geet was trying to digest the food,, the smell she didn't like...but have to bear it for her love...maan hold her hand under thr table and squeej it,,,geet was lefty and maan hold her left hand, so geet couldn't eat with right hand,, she was having difficulty to hold the spoon in her right hand,,, she was pleading maan with her eyes to let of her hand...

daadi: aap aise kyun kha rahi hain geet? aapko spoon pakadna nahi aata? ya aapke ghar me hath se khaate hain?

bindiya: nahi daadi geet lefty hain...

daadi: to left hath se spoon pakde, right se kyun pakda huya hain?

bindiya : koi chode tab na wo left se khayegi...

geet was giving maan deadly glare and that was enough,, maan let go of her hand...but geet didn't like the food she played with the food for sometime and when all finished their food she also get up to go the room... but daadi stopped them,,

daadi: maan aaj tum ghar pe hi rehna, rest karlo... aur shaam ko meri frnd shaila aur uski poti aslesha arahe hain,, to ghar pe rehna,, daadi was giving geet a meaning look... geet understood what she wanted to say but maan was lost in something else... bindiya saw the pain in geet's eyes...

maan: daadi mujhe aaj hi report karna hoga, commisnor,,,,,

daadi: maine unse baat karli hain,,, aur wo maan gaye hain...now go and take some rest...

geet silently goes to her room and bindiya wanted to go to console her but maan stopped her...

maan: bindiya mujhe kuch kaam hain tumse,, chalo... bindiya looked at the retreting figure of geet... but decided to talk to maan about it,, but he was too busy in his world to listen to her...

sometime later maan goes to geet's room...geet was reading something, actually she was lost in her thought and book was just a thing to show that she is lost in the book...

maan: geet,,,,

geet: hmm...

maan: ye lo?

geet: kya hain maan?

maan: logi to janogi na...

geet take it from his hand ,, a tray full of food,,,

geet: paratha and dahi...

maan make himself comfatable in her bed beside her : hmm, maine dekha tha tumne kuch nahi khaya tha...

geet: lekin ye banaya kisne...

maan took a bit af the paratha and dip it in the dahi and hold it infront of geet...geet open her mouth without breaking

her eye contact with him..

geet: ye aapne banaya?

maan: nahi wo bindiya,,,

geet: maine bindiya k hath ka khana kha chuki hu, ye uske hath se nahi bana aur daadi k samne kisi noukar ne to nahi banaya hoga...

maan took another bite and fed her: hmm, bindiya ne madad ki, tumne kuch nahi khaya tha...

geet was in tears: maan aap mujhse itna pyar karte ho,,, aapne ye sab, itni takleeq,,

maan: sshhh geet,, maine kaha na tum bhi meri ho to apno k liye itna to chalta hain,, aur main kaise sehta tum aise bhooki rako,,, waise bhi tumabhi kamjor ho,, and then he slowly come close to her and whisper mer sath itni kamjor geet nahi chalegi u know, tum jaldi thak jayogi he was smiling like teasing her and geet smacked his hand with the pillow but accidently she hit his hand where he get a burn mark...

maan: ouch

geet: kya huya maan dikhaiye,,, ye kaise huya?

maan: kuch nahi geet jarasi,,,

geet: ye jara si hain? kis angle se ye aapko choti lagti hain,,, ye huya kaise...

maan: wo main,,

geet's eyes were moist: ye parathe banate waqt huye the na?

maan: nahi geet...

geet: main bohot buri hu maan, mere liye aapko kitni takleef sehni padhi main but maan sealed her lips with his,,, geet muffle in his mouth but he didn't let go beside he waited patiently for her response,, soon she repond... their passion their love was bigger to remove slight pain of their hand or any tension that she is going through... but there was someone who was witnessing there cute fight,,

bindiya was standing outside of geet's room: i hope tum dono k pyar ko kisi ki nazar na laage,, main tumhare duniya me dukh nahi dekh sakti... aise hamesha ek dusre ka hath thame rehna...she goes from their...

inside the room maaneet's kiss was to passionate that they forgot about the time,, maan slowly takes her dupatta off and came to her neck,, her milky white skin always invite him lavishly... he bite her neck like claiming her, geet moan in pain and passion,,, her hand goes his neck,, she was pulling his hair slightly slightly giving pleasure to him... he slides down his hand in her kurti squeezing a little... and came back to her lips,, passionately sucking her lower lips... and she his upper lips,, both were not geting enough of each other... they were drowning again in their plessure...they were kissing for the last 30mins still they didn't want to part from each other... (tich thinking ye dono saans lene ki jarurat nahi hain kya :p)

slowly they control each other and finished the kissed with a peak on the lips...

maan: geet ye khana finish karo,, mujhe kuch kaam hain aur shaam ko taiyar rehna...

geet noded her head...

7pm...

daadi's guest were coming,, maan wanted to go to geet but daadi stopped him to recieve the guest... geet was feeling low as she could understand why this get together was happening now...geet comes down clad in white anarkari suit looking like a pari,,, though daadima was little impressed by her choice and as she was looking not lesser than a angel herself... but her fat EGO stopped her to looking at the angel, and she recieve the guest aslesha and her daadi shaila,, savitri devi's frnd... aslesha was wearing a red dress coming to her knees,, looking sexy... she sensually walked to maan and extent her hand to him but maan's eyes were glueded in geet who was coming to next to him... he was blown away to see the beauty of her...and aslesha too noticed that so she decided to stand next to him so that geet have to stand infront of him... maan was angry and anybody can guess that but daadi ignored his look...bindiya stands next to geet...

all of them cames to the living area and get their seat...this time maan was clever enough to sit beside geet, and bindiya seated aslesha beside her to which she only get glare from daadi...

daadi: so aslesha done with ur graduation...

aslesha: yeah daadi... now i m doing modelling,, two big company is ready to sign me...

daadi is little dissapointed but she manage to put up a proud smile...aslesha's daadi eyed her to what she is telling them... and aslesha manage to cover up...

aslesha: mera matlab, offers aaye hain lekin main soch rahi hu,, dad ki company join karu, bohot hogaya ye modelling...

daadi was relief now: hmm aapke soch bohot acchi hain... aap hamare ghar pehli baar aayi hain, aapko gharka tour dete hain...

aslesha's daadi: savitri hum abb old ho chuke hain, inhe hamary compant acchi nahi lagegi, baccho ko ek sath jaane do hum yaha baithte hain...

daadi: hmm ye thik hain... maan aap aslesha ko ghar dikha dijiye...

maan: main?

daadi: koi problem hain?

mischevoious thought played in his mind: nahi daadi, main dikha deta hu... chalo aslesha,

both stand up to go then maan said: geet chalo, yaha kya karogi?

geet's face was dull like she was thinking something...

maan: geet,,,,,

geet: ha?

maan: chalo,,,

geet: aap jayiye, main kya karungi aap dono k sath?

maan: hum dono nahi bindiya bhi hogi aur tum bhi to nayi ho,, is bahane tum bhi dekh logi... lets go...

bindiya: chalo geet...aslesha doesn't like the attension she was getting from maan.. but she can't say anything right now...

precap: tour of the mansion and dinner oops mirchi...

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Posted: 13 years ago
Hello Animationstich...😊
what an update..
just loved it
Flower Scrapsfor this update
and lota of kisses
Good Job Scrapskeep it up...👍🏼
for update...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: meena..

Hello Animationstich...😊

what an update..
just loved it
Flower Scrapsfor this update
and lota of kisses
Good Job Scrapskeep it up...👍🏼
for update...😃
Flower Glitters



awww its so beautiful dear,,😳😳 u took so much time and effort for making this,, i love this,,, thanks a lot, love u 😊
😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome, brilliant parts
loved them
loved maaneet
oh ashlesha is here but she will only bring maaneet more close
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: tich.1990mg


awww its so beautiful dear,,😳😳 u took so much time and effort for making this,, i love this,,, thanks a lot, love u 😊
😊

no need of thanks u deserves it andin frndhip no thanks and sorry
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
hating this dadi
please don't make her negative and i m sure whats playing in her mind that she wants that Aslesha and Maan to get married..
hope that doesn't happen
cont. soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
hate dadi😡

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