1st ff on maaneet SIRF MERE LIYE THREAD 1 (link 2) - Page 20

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Posted: 13 years ago
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awsem panchayat ne saHI KAHA LEKIN MAAN IS ALSO true so now both calm
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: punam2712

LOVED THE UPDATE

MAANEET WEDDING IN DELHI
WHAT A THOUGHT
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thanks uuu dear,,,, and u r reading it already
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LOVED THE UPDATE
MAANEET WEDDING IN DELHI
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Posted: 13 years ago

Sirf mere liye


part 27...

maan: tum bhi to meri ho... geet smiled and kissed his lips,,, maan take a bed sheet and cover themselves...

next day...

4 of them decided to go delhi that very day,,, and distance was no so far so they decided to go by road...

they reached delhi in 6hrs,,, and stepped out onfront of khurana mansion...big bunglow,, geet's eyes popped out from her socket and she looked maan with suspicious yet cute look on her face... to which maan only smile, he wanted to hug her and bite those red cheek with is due to his staring...

maan: andar chale?

aadi: tu ja main ghar jaata hu, shaam ko milte hain,,, rest katlo tum log,, maan noded...

maan geet and bindiya make their way to the mansion but stopped by daadi,,

meet savitri khurana, strict, yet elegant love his children but couldn't tolerate indicipline,, widow,, she was the one who handle all the khurana companies as her brother(maan's grandfather),, husband, son, were in army and maan's father who was like her own son was police officer,, and so is maan so she have to take care of the wholle empair...she has only maan and bindiya now, with whom she live as her own son was always on border... (total kharus)

daadi: wohi rukiye,,,, itne din baad aaye hain arti to karne dijiye,,, she came with a arti thaali and did arti to maan and bindiya but stopped infront of geet,,, ye kon hain?

maan: daadi ye geet hain,,, maine isse dhandiwaal me ,,,,, shadi ki hain...

daadi looked at him: shaadi? shaadi koi gudde gudiya ka khel hain jo kisiko bhi ghar pe utha k laaye aur kahe ye hamari khandan ki bahu hain...

maan: ye koi bhi nahi, geet hain, uski ek pehchan hain...

dadi: andar ayiye... they made their way to the big hall... baithiye... pehchan ha? to geet boliye kya pehchan hain aapki? aapke papa ka naam kya hain aur kya karte hain? aur aapka khandan konse gharane se hain aap?

geet was not sure how to talk to her, what to tell her,, and what she wanted to know...

geet: jee mere papa but maan interupt,,,

maan: aap ye suru kar rahi hain,, hum itne dur k journey se aaye hain aur aap... and more over geet need rest,,, geet tum upar chalo...

daadi: upar?

bindiya: he mean to say upar k guest room me,, maan eyed her but she assured him...

all goes to their respected room... bindiya took geet with her and suggest the room beside maan,,, geet silently goes to the room...

maan: thanks bindiya u r a sweetheart...

bindiya: u r always welcome...she went to her room...

in geet's room,, she was blabbering after taking a refreshing shower,,, she was in her bathrob that was coming till her knees and she was standing over her cupboard...

geet: kya pehnu main? jo bhi pahenna, kuch accha hona chahiye warna daadi fir se gussa hongi,, pehle se hi wo mujhe pasand nahi karti,, but ainvey kuch pahenke gayi aur daadi ko firse pasand na aayi to,,, babajiii madad karo...but unhe kya pasand napasand wo kaise pata lagayu

a voice came from behind: main madad kar sakta hu...

geet was shocked to see maan infront of her like that,,, and that too shirtless...

geet: AAPPP? yaha kya kar rahe ho? mere kamre me kaise aaye,, she totaly forgot that she was in bathrob...aap yaha kaise aaye,,, maan take few step towards her slowly making her shiver...his eyes are making her nervous, that has only mischieve in it... maannn...

maan: hmm,, kya huya geet?

geet: aap aise mat dekhiye na...

maan comes realy close to her: kaise geet... he slipped his hand on her waist and pulled her towards him... their face was marely inches away tumne kaha nahi,, kaise na dekhu?

he was teasing her senses she knew it still she couldn't hold herself infront of him...

geet: maan aap yaha kya kar rahe ho? aur andar kaise aaye? geet tried to free herself but fail miserably and land on his his...

maan: maine kaha dur jao? nahi na,, to aise hi raho...

geet: maann... she slapped his hand which was on her waist...

maan: ouch,,, ufff main romantic horaha hu aur tumhe padhi hain main kaise aaya, jaise bhi aaya hu, chodo na, tumse milne k liye mujhe zameen asman ek karna pade to wo bhi kar sakta hu...

geet: wo main samajh gayi... but koi agar dekhega to kya samjhega...

maan: maine door lock kiya hain so koi chahe bhi to nahi asakta aur dusri baat, tumhe problem mere karib aane se nahi, koi ajayega is baat ka tha??? hmmm chalo i have solved ur problem, abb to kareeb asakta hu,, he came close to her neck to kiss it but geet slipped away...

geet: maan apne khud kaha tha sab shaadi k baad, to abhi aap jao..

maan: aare maine wo sab shaadi baat kah atha wo bhi tumhare liye kyun tum wo chahti ho lekin ye to kar hi sakte hain...

geet: ye??

maan with a teasing smile came close ye romance in our stlye and winked at her,, but geet throw a cussion at him and go far away,, now the chase began,, maan after geet but soon that land on the bed,, geet on top of maan...

geet: maan aap bohot bure ho...

maan take her beneath him: accha?? lekin maine kya kiya geet?

geet: aapne abhi tak nahi bataya aap yaha aaye kaise?

maan was touching her hair and her neck with his nose that was tickling her senses...

geet: maannn... bataiye na..

maan: geet ye room mere room ke bilkul pass hain,,, aur dono room ek door se jude huye hain... issi liye bindiya ne tumhe ye room diya hain,, taake main kabhi bhi tumse mil saku... sabko iss room k baare me pata nahi... daadi ko bhi nahi.. geet looked confused,,, arree daadi buya yaha hamesha nahi rehti,, bas kabhi kabhi aati hai,, jayada tor indiya k bahar rehti hain kaam se... ye mere papa ne banaya tha aur is room k baare me kuch khas logo ko pata hain...

geet: ohhh,,

maan: abb tumhari interogation khatam huya to main thoda pyar karlu? he nuzzle his nose in her crook of the neck and geet giggle...

geet: maan abhi nahi,, chodo but maan is maan no means he nuzzle more close to her making shiver her under him... he was giving wet kisses that was making her weak...

bindiya knocked at geet's door,,,

geet: maan hatiye bindiya hain,,,

maan: usse baad me aane se kaho...

geet: maannn... chodiye, maine abhi tak change bhi nahi kiya,,, hey babaji main iss halat me hu...

maan: babaji se nahi mujhse pucho tum kis halat me ho...

geet red in blush and anger: aap jayiye abhi k abhi...

maan get up from the bed though he didn't want to accha main madad karne aaya tha wo? konsa dress pehnogi ,,

geet: aap jayiye, mujhe madad nahi chahiye...

maan: thik hamari to koi kadar hi nahi hain,,,,and he goes to his room...geet open the door after changing in her dress...





will update next part tom then pm u all,,, for now i m really tired so couldn't do it...

Edited by tich.1990mg - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
TICH LOVELY UPDATE
SO DREAMY.
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