You Found Me - ArSh OS (For Sri) Epilogue PG 6 - Page 2

Originally posted by: kashmayurfan

Beautifuul os 😊 Totally luved it!

Thank you! I'm so pleased that you enjoyed it! 😳

Originally posted by: zARqaa_X

OMG wow that's an amazing OS <3

It was perfect :D

Oh wow, thank you so much! 😳

Originally posted by: -Aliya-

OMG this was soo dreamy! You should write more.

I loved how you described everything. it did make it sound very fairytaleish and so magical. I literally had held my breath in their intimate moments because you described so thoroughly and intimately, i felt like it was just them in the moment. Absolutely wonderful. srishti you hell of a lucky girl to have this piece of writing written for you =)

but please do consider writing more OS's or even better FF's

Thank you for such a lovely comment! I'm really pleased that you liked it so much and that you thought I described everything well. I'm also flattered that you'd want to read more of my work. I do want to write more on KaSh and I will certainly try to bring some more OSs or an FF. 😳

Originally posted by: SabzKaShGrAnd

This was one of the best fairytales i have ever read...i actually went to a trance while reading t...totally unaware of the world...it wd always remain sth i wd go back and read over and over again...can u plz plz p;z write an epilogue for thsi plz???

Oh wow, thank you! I am really honoured that you'd go back and read it again. I'm really happy to know you thought it was that good. An epilogue - sure, why not? I'll give it a shot and post it soon. 😳

Originally posted by: ksgforever10

Oh Man <3 You're such a wonderful writer. I Loved each & every part of this OS, And especially the title which executes the summary of the whole OS So deeply!😳

I Loved it how you spoke about the desperate emotions inside Armaan's heart, and his loneliness before he found her. I Enjoyed myself thoroughlly while reading this OS! Would love to read your other works if you'll write any. Thankyou so much for PM otherwise I Would have missed on this one! :(

AMAZINGGG Work!👏

P.S-HAPPPY BIRTHDAYYY Sriii <3

Thank you so much hun! Your words have totally made my day. You are such a great writer yourself, so hearing these praises from you is one of the highest compliments ever. I am so pleased that you enjoyed it and thought I executed the story well. I could honesty have gotten a whole ff out of this, I had such a strong feeling of what both of them were feeling, it was hard to cut down and keep it short. 😆 I was inspired by the song by The Fray, so credit to them for such inspiring lyrics. And oh wow, sure, I will PM you when I write something else. 😳

Originally posted by: angelina_angel

nice one

Thank you! Glad you liked it!

OMG ! That was MINDBLOWING...

Originally posted by: -KaShti-

OMG!!!!!!!!
😃😳
Thank You Sooo much Anuuu 🤗🤗🤗

Reserved :p
=))

🤗

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MY GAWD!!!!!

🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗ANUUU 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

I am so grinning like anything after reading aliya's reply below😉...WOHOO I am so Lucky...HUAHAHA🤪😳

YOU ARE suc h TERRIFIC MIND BLOWING WRITER MAN! I am so Looking forward for more!

I Sooo loved it jaan...!
😳
hat was TRULY PURELY MAGICAL!...thats the word that come instantly!
Realy Magical.!

I felt so Like in Heaaaveeen , with the world in slow motion, a romantic tune at the background, The atmosphere so white and pure ..absolutely Serene... with fairies angels magics love anddd KaSh in front...

I swear this has got to be a Unique writing something like this I am reading for the First time...and I am so very in Love with this.!
and to TOP THIS ONE was for MEEE :D:D:D

so making me go...☺️☺️☺️...ooolalala...☺️☺️☺️

Perfect description, nothing more nothing less, simple Apt!

I generally skip few detailed descriptions in some of the stories coz of the lack of time for sure, studies and all not allow me much, so like you know I have to read the stories which are descriptive in a bit fast forward motion. :p
but i could not help it here...i have read each and every word with all the punctuations and all here. not once and thrice by now.

RESRVEDDD! :p

Awww, Sri, I am so happy that you liked it!!! 😳 I was so nervous cause you know na, I totally adore your work, so I was thinking how will she like it...and awww, your words are making me feel so humble. Am blushing like mad. Seriously hun, am so thrilled that you felt I wrote it well and that you liked the atmosphere I created. I have this liking for masked balls and the idea just came to me by random and I thought how awesome would KaSh and dance and fairy lights be? So I wanted to try and paint a picture of that, and I am so happy you felt it was magical. That is such a compliment. I am so touched now. 😳 Thank you hun! 🤗 And awww, I had to gift you s'thing a bit special na. Wanted to make it as good as I could for you. Knowing you liked it this much makes me so glad that I penned it down. 😳

Originally posted by: Laila.N

OMG ! That was MINDBLOWING...

I can't get over the feelings you put in that part...wow...

I totally loved the scene, everything was so intense, so beautiful and enchanting... Just like a fairy tale...

I loved the intense dance and their connection during that part... Then they both unsettled feelings without exchanging any words...and finally when she came back, the dialogue was just perfect, right amount of words to make it outstanding.

I read every sentence thrice at least... I just think it's perfect !

And you're writing style is totally amazing, conveying well every feeling. You use the right word in the right place, everytime ! I just love it so much !!

Gosh, please try to write more, and do definitely pm me your work. Would love to read more from you :)

Take care,

Laila

Oh wow Laila, thank you so much for this lovely comment! I am delighted that you thought it was that good and that you felt I wrote well. 😳 It means a lot to me that you feel I got the dialogue just right, because that is always the part I worry about the most, especially striking the right balance. Thank you again for your kind words, and yes, I will for sure write more and I will remember to PM you about it too. 😳