Maaneet... Just Like Heaven # 2 UPDATING - Page 5

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: maansee

👏so another thread

thank you
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Originally posted by: yashviagarwal

congo for new thread 😊 👏 😳

thanx buddy
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Originally posted by: ana56

congrats for the new thread

thanx ana
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Posted: 13 years ago
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dear ab ek update bhi de do plz
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congrats on new thread...
waiting for the 15th part...
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congo for the new thread dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i swear
i thought i had updated this one...
will update soon
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hey all
thanx for your love
here is the update a long one
a special thanx to my lovely priya. who wrote such a beautiful poem for me.
priya i know you love jlh the most hence i updated this first😉
for you
enjoy and dont froget to comment

PART 15:

As maan came out there was no one in the room. Ab kidher gai. Chalo acha hi hai gai.kia bana k rakh diya hai is ne maan singh khurrana ko. As he was brushing his hairs.

What did she mean by koi shoq nahi hai daikhne ka. Don't I look attractive. As he judged his body from all possible angles.omg she saw me all over and is still not attracted.am I no longer handsome…. Got to hit gym again.

Chiii maan to pagal hogya hai. Tu us pagal larki k bhoot k chakar me khud pe shaq ker ra hai . usko kuch nahi pata..

Kia nahi pata.

Maan's eyes popped open

Ummm ah kuch nahi

Kia nahi as she came infront of him

Arey baaba kaha na kuch nahi tumne kia baat krni thi

Wo she laughed wo me khudi problem solve ker ai ho. No worrys

What were you talking about khud ko daikh daikh ker in mirror.

Kuch nahi he turned her back to him.

What have you done.

Nahi batao gi jab tak mujhe nahi batao ge.

Dev kaha hai he turned around

Wo umm mujhe kia pata.

What did you do to him?

Mene kuch nahi kiya.

Geeet…..

And she started laughing

He dashed to dev's room where he was hanging from the fan upside down

Bro help me..

Tum yaha kaise pohanche

Us churail ki waja se.

As maan pulled him down.

Tere to churail khta hai agli baar tujhe main hall me ulta latkao gi.

Geet shutup.dev shhh khabardar jo mu khola

Subah bola samjh me nahi aya. Mujhe tum dono k mu se aik lafz nahi sunna. Pure din kuch nahi bolo get um dono. Or na hi aik dosre ko touch karo ge.

Samjhe?

They both nodded.

And maan went to his study.

Dimagh kharab ker diya hai in dono ne mera jab daikho naya tamasha.

Or ye chopra's k sath naya project shoro krna hai itna sara kaam baqi hai or in odno k hote we to kuch bhi nahi ho sakta.

As he crossed the lounge while reading his file.

There he spotted a guy wearing a check coat. Gray pant big ugly glasses. Looked like a guy from retro.

Hello Mr. khurrana.

Maan looked up at him and then at geet and dev who were looking at him with most innocent look ever on their face. Agaya aik or rishtedar iska.

Ye kab mara tha?

They both looked at each other. And smiled. He nodded sideways and went back to his file.

Maan Mr chopra kuch keh re hai ap se apke manners kaha gae hai.

Maan looked up clearly embarresed.

Oh wo me apne dhayan me tha

Hello mr umm

Chopra.

Maan raised his eyebrow. And right behind chopra geet and dev were laughing like mad.

Aik mint mr chopra me abhi aya . and he went near dev and geet

Her waqt fazool bolte ho abhi bolte we kuch jara tha.

They both looked at him while keeping their fingers on their mouth.

I m asking something

They fluttered their eyes.

Ahhh ok fine you can talk now ab bolo mu se.

Arey maan baita aap waha kia ker re hai or dev baite aap to jare they kahi

Ji dadima

Oh shoot mene inhai bolne ki ijazat de di. Ab phir aik naya tamasha.

mr chopra. Aap to office ane wale thy aaj sham ko as he settled in the sofa

Baite humne inhai ghar pe hi bula liya. Inki poti bhi ayi hai na sath bari pyari bachi hai ati hogi abhi and just then a girl appeared in ultra short dress

Sameera. Baite yeh hai maan.

Hi maan

Hmmm

Yeh micro mini kon hai.

I don't know

Thora maza chikhae daikh kaise akar k bhaite we hai as if smile kia hoti hai pata hi nahi. subah se dante jare hai..

No way.. are you serious

Wanna see

I wd love too.

PRECAP:
maan aap ka dhayan kaha hai.?

Maan just cdnt control anymore and burst out laughing.

The rest started laughing seeing him while he was swearing geet dev you are dead today

there you go a long update now i need long comments

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