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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part Seven/7


People all around ..Spirituality was all around….Lik jst placing first foott there…Geet got every answer.But where was Maan…she searched here n there..But not in front of her site..then a baba….fakir baba came in front of her..even She not noticed..her eyes were serching only hm.

Fakir Baba: Bacchi kis ko dhond rahi ho….(high tone)

Geet: Nahi baba kissi ko nahi….main yahan pehli baar ayi hu…isliye patta nahi kis taraf jaana hai…

Fakeer Baba : tumke patta nahi kahan janna hai..per tumko kahan janna hai yeh to uper walle ne taay kar rakka hai..jisko tum dhonnd rahhi ho woh tumhare andar hai….bass pehchan nay ki jaroorat hai…tumhare har swaal ka jawab tumhare hi pass hai…allah tumhare madad karre..n he left…

Sham Lal came after parkin car.

Sham Lal: Geet bacchay challo sajada kar lay..nahi to der ho jayegi…aur malkin bahut preshan ho rahi hongi..

Geet: ji kaka (n she covered her head)

She went for Sajjada in dargah..moving around she felt a relief after days n lil smile came out on her face….she had got answers that was possible after Fakeer baba's sayings…

She was not searching Maan now…but a resless soul felt relief ..n she was ready for home..but she found Maan on Mazaar in front of her.Maan got up ..He found a glimse of Geet in between that crowd..but Geet was in sudden shock..n she hided herself behind a wooden door….

Maan: kyo lag rahha hai jaise koi mera picha kar rahha hai….(self thought)

Addi :Sir lets go

Maan: hu…

Geet hided her face with her chunri jst her eyes were uncovered…n she was moving backward…taking her feet back….n suddenly she clashed with Maan who was behind her…

Maan: sorry….but it is not my fault …plz walk in right way not back ward..(he was sorry but he was rite)

Geet said nothing but she had felt it was Maan.so without facing him she looked with thief eye n ran from there.But her bangle fell there.which Maan noticed

Maan : hey madam ur bangle…rukiye (he shouted)

But no effect..she not heard him..n asked Sham Lal to go home.

Maan to Addi : Ajeeb ladki hai..apne bangle yahin chod gayi..it seems to costly.

Addi :Ji sir patta nahi kin kin dukho k marey log aatay hia..hoggi koi dukhari….dukh main sabh bhul gayi hogi .aur is kadde main screw hai..screw gir gaya hogga n issi wajah se yeh kadda gir gaya

Instead of leaving that bangle ….he put it in his pocket.

Maan: yahan kya patta kis ko du..I should keep this..lagta nahi she should get this…coz we can't wait her..we ll giv it to orphanage fund .

He smiled n they left.

Geet had pair of kaddas on in each hand ..she lost that one which she noticed in car

Geet: kahan gaya kadda…n she thought for a while n remembered Maan was calling her..might b this reason.But she was not worried about that..but lil bit relived... Maan was not able to saw her….n Fakir baba gav her the way to find n get happiness

She had forgot her phone in car…so Rano's calls remained un noticed…around eight she reached home..

Rano: Geet where was u…U know how much we were worried ( she blasted n slapped her )

For Rano she was a child small kid even now..n she slapped in that way..Geet knew this.

Geet: sorry Maa ( when ever Geet found her mother upset n in worse mood she called her Maa instead of Mamma)

Tina:where was u baby?( she held Geet in her lap)

Till shamlal came.He knew Rano's habit n to support Geet he came .

Sham Lal: Malkin baby pe mat gussa hoea…woh peer baba ki dargah per Sajada karne gayi thi…unhone shopping mall me kissi se sunna tha..k bahut ruhaniyat (spiritual) walli aur duk harne wali dargah hai hum wahi gaye thay.

Rano noticed tears in her eyes..n hugged her…

Rano:Geet meri bachi kahan kahan bhatak rahi ho tum …..apne swalon k jawab k liye..per beta main tumhari maa hu darr lagta hai jab thOdi der ho jatti hai tumhe…

Geet: Maa don't worry..I felt ..I got my answers there…I ll try to do my best…to b happy ..to make all my dear ones happy..(she hugged her )

Rano: Sacchi

Geet: Nani muchi..Maa I m hungry

Tina: Geet we were waiting for u…change ur cloths n join us at dinner.

She had dinner with family n she was in deep sleep after that ….

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Jass

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Edited by Jass.KN - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wonderful part but jab tak ye pata nahi chalta ki geet kyun aisa kar rahi hai tab tak confussion bana hi rahega i know ki ye story process hone ke baad hi pata chalega par fir bhi i really want ki jaldi hi pata chal jaye geet ke aisa karne ki vajah n i m soo soo happy i m first to comment 😊

Edited by sakshi04 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#63
awesome part...

geet now knows who she was searching for...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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part 7 ...

awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Osum part dear. . Faculus. . To goodi. . . Thanks dear waiting 4 next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome n thnks 4 pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Osum yar. To good. .
Edited by ANGILS.KALI - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#68
Awesome update..
hmmm geet following him???
interesting... does she knw him???
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Amazing update, so now maan has the kada of geet , hope he soon meets geet face to face and also knows that geet is the girl whose kada he has.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome updates
Just loved it
Loved the way geet is hiding from maan
Her behavour when maan is in front of her what might be the reason of it m still wondering..
its really interesting
what baba said to geet in darga was superb..
do continue soon
wateing for to know the reason behind geets mysterious behaviour
thanks for the pm

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