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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome n i think she must be having heart problem n Sangeeta's heart must be given to her thru transplantation n thnks 4 pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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My updates r ready but not getting that response so no courage to mov forward

Jass sad
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Edited by Jass.KN - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congrats !!!!!! 4 d new thread ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

awesome ... superb ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36
part 4
nice part...
Geet knows Maan?
how?
does Maan too know Geet?
cont soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37
I love u with the passion put to use
In my old griefs, and with my childhood's faith.
I love u with a love I seemed to lose
With my lost saints. I love u with the breath,
Smiles, tears, of all my life; and, if God choose,
I shall but love u better after death.

(poem by Elizabeth Barrett Browning..here I replaced thee by u...according to old english )

Sometimes some illogical reasons hav big reasons behind them remain out of ur thinking so they become illogical.
Part Five

Inder told Rano every thing .Geet said even not a word..but Inder came back jst due to her wish to b with Rano .She straight went away to her room

Inder: Rano I can't understand …out of my thinking …talk to her.(he put his one hand on waist)

She went to Geet's room.where she was on stomach

Rano: Geet…talk to me.(she shouted as she was worried)

Geet again remained in such a position.no effect on her..that her Mom was there

Rano:Geet get up …(she took her arm..n pushed Geet to her lap)

Geet looked at her n tears came out on her cheeks

Rano hugged her tightly.

Rano :tell me Beta I m ur mother..beta kehtay hai Maa apne bachon k liye kissi bhi hadd takk ja saki hai per unki taqdeer nahi badal sakti...tum he batayo main kya karu k tumhari har takleef dur ho jaye...(tears came out of her eyes)

Geet: Mom I know..u can go to any extent for me.But trust me Veet is no more in my heart.Even I don know why I m behaving so.(she started to cry aloud)

Rano: plz beta…don cry..

Geet: Mamma I m so tired I want rest….

Rano: Ok beta…as u want.

Geet was alone in the room restless…She asked no to dinner…n she was continuously thinking some thing..Around 9 she made a call

Geet: Ji main Geet bol rahi hu…

On other side there was a male voice

'Ya beta tell …so we hav in ur mind " that man was Geet's Uncle…her Massi's husband Ram Walia a known businessman having chain of famous shopping complexes all over north India.

Geet: Mausa ji how can I forget ..how r u ?

Ram: I m fine..what about u ?

Geet: Mausa ji main to theek hu per aap yeh nahi keh aktay k main apko yaad nahi karti

Ram: I m jokin beta ( he laughed)

Geet: ok let it go..I made u call for special reason …U r looking for a very good construction house .And ur Jalndhar project is pending jst for this.

Ram: Ya but why u r talking about that ….any reason

Geet: Ya actually Mr Maan Singh Khuraana..Owner of KC is here in Jalandhar..u should met him. in country inn easily(she disclosed her reason for call)

Ram: unko kon nahi janta …but how u came to know he is in jalandhar?( he was amazed)

Geet: Actually me n papa attended fuction today in Delhi.There we came to know.

Ram: oh ur Papa told me about that function….so tumko yaad raha I need a person lik Mr Khuraana.

Geet:Main nahi rakhugi then kon rekhega.(she laughed)…But met him before after 9:00..he ll b buzy after that.(a lil talk about Maan made her happy)

Ram: oh u hav all information...

Geet: No mausa ji ..I heared this from him as I cam to know his visit .But don't forget to inform me about meeting…As I imformed u .

Ram: Ok beta .

N Geet said good bye to him.It was quite possible that Maan gonna say yes to Ram…Coz both Maan N Ram were top business tycoons…In their respective field..n to work with each other that was good for their business.But even Geet didn't understand how n what she was doing.She spent sleepless nite.Even at breakfast she was looking at watch when around 9:30 she got a call from Ram

Inder: who is there Geet ?

Geet: Pa its Mausa ji..(she took call)..Mausa ji I m not getting u properly let me go outside…

She came out making excuse that there was no proper signals.

Ram: Ya ..Geet…I met Mr Khuraana ..after going through my project…he is willing to move ahead.(he was too happy)

Geet: Really Mausa ji

Ram: Ya dear…even I invited him for a dinner.. tomorrow…chahta to main aaj he tha..but he has to attend a conference around 6 .

Geet: But where?( wanted to know venue)

Ram: At Cabana Chandigarh road

Geet: oh I know place.(lik she was asking...She knew place n could reach there without help)

After lil conversation ..she came in n gav this news to her parents that Ram gonna start his venture at jalandhar..he himself lived in Jalandhar.

It was about 11 when she declared that she is going to Jalandhar.She was lil bit relaxed and her change in behavior made Inder Rano happy.But why this sudden change

Rano: But Geet why u wanna go in sch hurry ?

Geet: Oh Mom aap bhi na..u know my best friend Misha is going to Canada..tomorrow morning so I wanna meet her..if aaj nahi gayi to kal kaise milugi usko…plz Papa…N u need not to worry Massi hai na..(she begged lik a child)

Inder: I no Geet if ur Massi Tina is there no need to worry..But u r not goin alone…Rano also gonna go wth u .(he declared)

Geet thought for a while n said yes….

Around 12:30 they left for Jalndhar..but It was jst a excuse that her frind is going she jast wanted to reach there….at any cost…they reached Jalandhar by five.

At Walia resident

Geet dropped Rano

Rano: Geet came out…whey r u sitting there ? (she held Geet's hand)

Geet: Mom I hav to buy some thing for Misha I forgot…plz let me go I ll come out soon.( she said)

Rano: ok take car with u

Geet: ok Mom

N she left from there but asked driver ShamLal(their most trusted driver working for them from 20 years ) to move toward Cabana

Sham Lal:Geet baby apko to gift lena tha.( he was surprised why she asking to move out of city)

Geet: Ji Kaka …u know Cabana is not jst a resort but a great shopping complex is there n I heard things r really great there..so I asked u.( again a lie)

Sham Lal:Ok baby as u wish

It was around 5:45 when she reached Cabana.and asked Sham Lal to wait for her in Parkin area…

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tons of thanx


Jass


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Edited by Jass.KN - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 6


At reception there was a girl about her age

Girl: yes Mam what I can do for u ?

Geet: Miss can u tell me where is conference hall

Girl: But Mam why r u asking for that..?

Geet: I m Geet Handa..Mr.Inder Handa's daughter ..owner of Legacy hotles...if u can't tel me where is that call ur boss.( she was too frustrated)

Girl: but Mam.

Geet: plz do it fast.

Girl made a call to owner of hotel Mr Khanna n Geet was not a new name for him as daughter of Inder Handa n niece of Ram Walia … He met her…in many parties in Chandigarh n Jalandhar.

Mr Khanna: Miss Handa…nice to met u ( he welcomed her)

Geet: even me…Mr Khanna I was going to Jalandhar…but I got information that there is a conference here...I m making my way in hotel businss so I thought I should also attend this where top businessmen r present ….it gonna help me in future…but I hav no invitation…

Mr Khanna:Oh no problem in that ...but Miss Handa that has been delayed for next month due to certain reasons ..I m sorry ..but if u want any type of help we r here at ur service

her father was much bigger name then Khanna …so this was Khanna's good luck to find her here…But when there was no conference so it was no need to stay there…so she left..from there…she was too upset…coming out of Mr Khanna's cabin. She was passing through the balcony when she heard a known male voice …Ya MSK was there..shouting on Addi

Maan: Addi what's this ..tumko check kar lena chahea tha before coming here…u know how much time u wasted.( he was busting on Addi lik wanna eat him)

Addi: Sir check kiya tha..but mujhe nahi patta tha k at a moment aisa hoga.( he said in low tone...placing her glasses )

Maan: ya I know ur habit..u never know ….I postponed Mr Walia's invitation jst for this…n if we r important for him ..he is equally important for him …( he put her one hand on his waist as usual)

Maan's back was toward Geet..she was jst watched Addi n She hided herselh behind piller .But the jingle of her bangles were enough to get Maan's attention he looked backward.

Maan: Addi tumne kush sunna..?

Addi : Ji sir…agay se main dhayan rakhuga..maine sunna jo apne kaha.

Maan: Addi u r too much ..I m not asking about what I said….u heard any other voice…jaise koi ho yahan ( he was inspecting )

Addi : No Sir…except u n me…but ya look at that service boy..woh jar rahha hai…

Maan: tumhara kuch nahi ho sakhta…chalo abb (he nodded his head n left )

But he was lookin behind lik someone eyes were chasing him.

Ya she was chasing him for which she came a long way..without any reason..without letting any one know…If he was coming to her house tomorrow ..so there was no reason to follow him.Maan was felling uneasy restless so he declined Addi's perposal to viist famous Dargah near by

Maan: Addi u should go..I m so tired…ask manager to arrange a car for me.u take my car.it ll b late

Addi: Sir I know u r much tired..but Sir plz u should visit ..u ll get much peace..n I know keep faith Peer Baba apki zindgi ki har mushkil dur karegay .

Maan thought for a whill n he said yes

Geet: Peer baba ki dargah..mujhe bhi janna chahea..shayad mere bhi sawalo k jawaab mil jaye .(self thought)

As Maan n Addi left .She came running to her car.

Sham Lal: Geet babi aap to gift lanne gayi thi….per aap to aise hi aa gayi.

Geet: Ha woh Kaka ..pehle aap us gaddi k pichay chalea..main apko batati hu..

Sham Lal: Per Babai

Geet: plz Kaka

N Sham Lal started the car started to chase MSK.

Geet: to Kaka aap preshan mat hoea..gift ghar pahunch jayega….actually mujhe peer baba ki dargah per janna tha..per rasta nahi patta..maine who jo gaddi main ja rahhe hai unki baat sunni who bhi wahi jaa rahe hai…so I thought I should follow them

Sham Lal: Per babi malkin gussa hongi….

Geet: Kaka mujhe pata hai aap sambhal langay…plz aap jantay hai na..main kitnay mushkil daur se guzar rahi hu..agar uper wallay se nahi kahungi mujhe himmat denay k liye to kise kahungi..(she had tears)

This made Sham Lal much emotional..coz his family was working for Handa family from generations. And Geet was jst lik his own grand child .

Following Maan ..atlast Geet reached Dargah .where three day Uras had been started.

lov

tons of thanx

Jass

hey friends I m writing jst it for my dear ones..hop u ll lik..I need appreciation so that I can take it to peak ..give me response..if u go through..plz comment n hit lik otherwise thax...want something more tell me..new idea new readers r more welcome

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice one... geet following maan is she knows him already confussed...😕
Edited by nishha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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lovely updates...

hope they see each other there...

continue soon..

thnx for PM...

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