(MN) 'U R MY GUIDANCE'...4th chapter

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princess-mahum

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Posted: 13 years ago

#41

hey everyone... hope u all doing well... so here is the 3rd update...!

sorry for the late update... 😊

chapter: 3

aj diwaali thi... so i was bizi in decorating my room... i was missing my family so much... so i called mom n wish her, dad n big bro..!. or ghar mai main akela tha...

Wo bhi nai ayee jab k she promised 2 come...! i was getting bored, i had crackers n everythng but dint want 2 do anythng... akele karta b kia... so maine socha

samne wale park chala jaun... jahan hamesha Ronak lagi hoti hai... i went there, but aj bohot kam se log dikhe mujhe...! i was jus walking k mujhe samne pardhi white

bench per wo bethi mili... she was in shocking pink dress, opened hairs, but she was sitting in dat way k uska face us k baalon mai chup rha tha... sar jhukaye kuch s

ochre thi i gues...! kisi udaas pari se kam nai lagre thi kher mai us k paas gaya... Hi Nupur...! meri aawaz per wo chonk gai n mjhe dekhne lagi... i dun knw kis gehri

soch se jaagi thi wo... "Aaap...?" she stood up... "betho na" mere kehne per wo beth gai n mai bhi usi bench per zara hatker beth

gaya... "kaisi hain?" ... "fine...!" ..."herat hai tm aj k din yahan...? akeli...?" wo chup rhi...!

"umm... acha maine kaha tha na k tm mere ghr ana... or aj toh diwaali b hia.. i thought tm bizi hogi tyaariyon mai toh mai nai aya...!

but ab tm bhi akeli ho n mai b akela hi hun toh kiun na ham sath celebrate kren...wht u say???" she started thinking sumthng...

i added.." if tm comfortable ho..."... "umm... per... mai diwaali celebrate nai krti..." ... kyun? maine heraangi se pucha...

bas yunhi... umm kher dats fine.. chalo phr ghr chalte hain...!

"reallyyy?" maine sudden aisa kaha toh wo mjhe heraangi se dekhne lagi... "umm i mean chalo...".."hmm" then we left for home...

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"Ao ander...umm welcome... so here is my small apartment..." she smiled...! n came...

she dint c very much at my house... "umm so nupur... thank u so much tm yahan ayeee mujhe frnd smjha mjhpe trust kia..."

"hmm... tmhara naam kia hai..." yeh kehker she gave me a big smile jaise she wanted 2 tell me dat how mad i am, ab naam puchre hn

... " umm... mera naaam..? pata nai..."

n: "btao na..."

m: "tmhe shayad maine pehle b btaya tha...so ab khud socho..."

n: " mujhe kab btaya han...?" she spoke in arguing tone...

m:"acha? bhul gai... jab tmari kisi frnd ne pucha tha mera naam taxi mai..."

n: "konsi frnd ne...?"

m: "aaa... ab naam toh yaad nai..."

n: (she laughed on this...) "dekha... bhul gae... n mjhe kehre ho jab k maine toh us time suna b nai hoga coz i was not listening ur convo..."

m: "ahan y dats so?"

n: "kiun k mujhe shok nai dusron k matter mai bolne ka..."

m: " haww... u r trying 2 fight wd me..."

n: " nai toh...was i?"

m: "haaan na... (wd fake sad cute face)

n: oh em sorrie...

m: hahaha are nai... mujhe bht acha laga tmne itna pyara lara bhi... lets make this fight a lil long..."

she smiled" nai... umm mai zada nai bolti..."

m: "jhoootttiii kitna toh boli abhi..."

n:"han wo bas aise hi..."

m: " acha tm plz apne mood ko aise hi rkho or idhar ao balcony mai..."

N: kiun...?

m: dhakka dena hai tmhe... huh tm b na.. ao toh

n: acha,,,,

she went in the balcony:

n: wow.. yeh diye... tmne sajaye...

m: jee.. yahan noker toh hote nai...

n: hmmm i see... dats really beautiful...

m: umm yes... but less than sum1.. (while luking at her)

n: kia matlab...?

m: nia kuch nai...

n: hey whts this?

m: yeh patakhey or phuljhari...

n: oh acha.. but phatakhey toh allow nai hote

m: hain... toh phr kia karen,,,

n: phuljhari jalalo...

m: jalalo means...? tm nia jalaogi?

n: nai mjhe dar lagta hai...

m: dekho yeh nai chalne wala... koi dar war nai... akele kia maza aega...

n: but,,,,

m: but wat kuch nai...

maine phuljhari chalai n then insisted her 2 play wd me...! wo bht dar rhi thi... n mjhe mana kiye jarhi thi but i jus wanted her

2 enjoy...!

M: yeh pakro mera hath... dekho kuch nai hota...

usne darte darte mera hath pakara n i got bizi in moving Phuljari,,,, she was cntinuosl luking at him...! mjhe pata toh chal gaya tha but anjaaan banaa rha... i was liking k wo maghrooor si larki mjhse bht frank hore thi kitna...!

we enjoyed alot... then we came back in the room:

"so... tmhe mera ghr kaisa laga...???? "

"nice...acha hai tmara ghr...!" i smiled n said.." its

not home... its just a house..."

"acha...? kia farq hai home or house mai...?" usne bethte hue kaha n as a joke...!

"ummm... farq yeh hai k home GHAR hota hai or house MAKAAN... jahan apne na hon use ghar nai makaan kehte hian.."

"ahan,,, or jahan jaanwar hon... usey...?"

i shocked..." what? janwar...???hehehehe... ab ghar or makaan mai janwar kaise agae...! "

"umm... em not talking abt home or house... mai toh...! she sudden stopped n started luking on the wall.. jahan meri family pic lagi hue thi...! "umm yeh kon hain...?"

"yeh meri family,mama, papa, bro n mai... thehro mai tmare liye khane k liye kuch leker ata hun ...!"

"hmm..." she was still watching on the wall...!

after 10 mins i came... n she was not there... i putted dat tray on the table... n use dhundne laga...! kuch dair bad she came from the washroom...! her eyes were red as she cried...! "hey kia hua tmhe nupur...? r u crying?"

"nai..." wd low voice...

"dekho plz em wrrying btao whts the matter..."

"kuch nai mjhe ghar jana hai... bye"

"what? aise kaise? kia meri koi bat buri lagi...! kch toh bolo"

"nai bas tbyat nai theek... " she carried her purse n as jus about 2 go... magar i hold her hands...! she stopped... then turned tears were on her cheeks... i was in tension... bat kia hosakti hai aise achanak yeh ise ho kia gaya... i dint know whts the matter

wd her, she cudn't stop herself n she then hugged me tightly...! i was in delima... was shocked... the girl who wasn't even wanted 2 luk at me... whats rong wd her.. she is hugging me for no reason jahan tk mjhe pata hai...! she hugged me so tightly dat i hardly save myself 2 fall in the floor...!

press like tab if u like... n comment plz 😳

Edited by princess-mahum - 13 years ago

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arjunratirocks

@arjunratirocks

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Posted: 13 years ago

#42

o god! pata nahi kya hoga just waiting for next part so many question r there i hope to get my ans. in next update

lovely update

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Anila

@-Anila-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#43

nice part...
loved it...
thanks for d pm

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Faria Ferdousi

@Faria.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#44

wow it was beautiful update dear

but what happened to nups
why she was crying???
i hope mayur ki bis kuch galad na ho
fab update
loved it
keep updating

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samira

@-Samira-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#45

Thanks for updating it was lovely part thnx for the pm

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Sujata

@SujaLuvsMayur

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Posted: 13 years ago

#46

OMG

pata nahi ab kya hoga?????????????

i think nupur missed her family ... or something secret in her heart...

i hope mayank could find the reason behind her shocking behavior...

bdw, very nice update.

balcony scne was superb..

u remind me mjht diwali scene ... it ws too cute..

loved mayur a lot.

continue soon

thanks for the pm,

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Gul

@DhanakZ

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#47

so unexpected update dear

ye Nupur to shock pa shoak da rahi ha

thanks for pm

cont soon

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princess-mahum

@princess-mahum

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Posted: 13 years ago

#48

chapter: 4

Mujhe nai pata tha, whats wrong with her... y she is crying, y she was in pain dat she cudnt cntrolled n hugged me, jis se wo bat b kam hi karna pasand karti thi... May be dat was because of her family, she is feeling alone, i guessed... mai yeh sab soch hi rha tha k use kia bolker cheer krun, she was still in m arms... "Nupur" mere awaz dene per she came back in her senses... She luked at me... her eyes were red, she was luking my face questionaly, she was in anger, she was in pain...It seems dat she is mad at me.. but aisa kiun hoga? i left this thinking right there...! "nupur u ok? wht happen?" when i said, she pulled me away... What have i done? y she did so...? wo mujhe strange lagti thi but itni bhi nai k bilawaja hug kare or bilawaja peeche karde gusse mai... is she mad or what? "whats wrong?" i said shockingly... "Maine kiya kia?" i was not aware frm her feelings, that was so strange as her...! " Shut up..." she said this to me wd hatred voice n carried her purse, n went from there...! Main wahan per ek statue ki tarah khara rha... "SHUT UP????""WHY????" "MAINE KIA KARA???" yehi sawal mere dimaagh mai the... mai toh bas usey cheer krne chala tha use acha feel krane k liye laya tha but...! i was ver disappointed by her behaviour... Fine if she was missing her family then??? i miss them too... n fine if her family has left her, may be... so whts m fault in this? y was dat harsh "Shut up?" 😭

Main laita hua tha, after finishing all work of home, kaafi ghar phel gaya tha coz of diwaali... I was reall missing my family... nd aj Kashish ko bhi... pata nai kiun? shayad pata tha... cOz jis strange larki ki attraction ki waja se i was avoiding dat innocent girl, she made me feel bad 2da, jab k maine usa kitna khush rkhne ki koshish ki...! How can people be so mean? Can they think dat sum1 putted his all efforts 2 bring a lil smile on her face? No...! Fine, em not gOnna see her again... Em like a fool jo us k peechey peeche bhaag rha tha...! But wo...? such a ungratful... apne pains n sorrows yad agae toh mujhse share krne k bjae mjhe hi bura kehker chali gayeee...! DISGUSTING...

Next Day:

she was at her work's place... performing her duty wd all sincerity but she was more emotionless than before... Her eyes were swelled, jaise koi sadiyon se na soya ho... kiun? It was most desired question but wd answers... Us k work ka time khtam hochuka tha... I was in Taxi Stand, waiting for passenger... Hame phir milna likha tha so ham mile... she was in white top n blue jeans, opened hairs, she had a bag in her hands, winds were blowing so lightly as her hairlocks moving here n there, bhttt dooor se arhi thi, door se bhi usey pehchaan gaya ache se... my eyes sticked at one place... then i realized k i shud ignore her... mai nai chahta tha k wo meri taxi mai aye, coz usne jaisa behave kia mere sath kal, she must be feeling ashamed but was not in such mood 2 listen sorry, coz mai gusse mai bht pakka hun...! nd aisa hi hua... wo mujhe bina dekhe samne kharey hoker taxi ka wait krne lagi jaise usne mjhe dekha b na ho... ya shayad ignore kardia ho... well i prefered 1st one.. Coz its pretty good 2 think..! zarur usne mujhe dekha nai hoga...! nd dats true she dint... coz jab usne mjhe dekha toh wo mujhe ghoorne lagi... na chahte hue bhi uski nazar mujhper thi... jaise use mujhse nafrat ho... i was trying 2 not luk there but na chahte hue b nazar pardh re thi... i jus wanted 2 know, yeh kia chupa rhi hai...! mujhe aise dekhre hai jaise maine iska kuch bigara ho, is she physco? nO... ofcourse not... i found her the most strangest person in the world... What she is doing n hows she behaving was out of my mind...! Finally mai car se utara n us k paas gaya, cOz mai janna chahta tha k whats wrong wd her? mere sabar ki inteha hOgaee thi...!

precap: the reason of her strangest behaviour will cum 2 knw,,,,!

hey guys, here is the short update...em extremel sorry for the extremelyyy short update but em very biziii abhi kuch days tk ... 😒 but i want k short short hi sahi per update krdun... hope u will understand...! so here was the suspense n u r gonna hate me for this😆 by this update n behaviour of nupur i wnted 2 give u lil idea abt reason 😊 plz press like tab if u like it n leave comments 😳

Edited by princess-mahum - 13 years ago