(MN) 'U R MY GUIDANCE'...4th chapter

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Posted: 13 years ago
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heY guYs... em gonna rite a new ff On maYur...! i knOw i hve mY pending 2 ff's
r also there foh updating...i'll update them verY soon...! 😊
em gonna write below... the characters will be known 2 all of u verY soon...!
chapter: 1
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America k sheher "San Fransico" mai taxi chalate hue aj mujhe dusra hafta tha... aj kiun k
weekend tha isliYe bht busY schedule tha... har taraf lOgon ka hajoom(crowd), or sardi b
bht zaYada thi... mausam sard hone k bawajood log ghumne phirne k liYe nikle hue the..
Yeh europeans log week mai 5 din kaam karte hain aur weekend per mukammal aYaashi
or parties...! inhi dinO mai meri earning hOti thi...
"Taxiii...!" ... mai mission street se turn lene laga tha jab side per kharri 3 larkion mai se aik
ne haath hilaYa...
"Yes mam...!" maine taxi rok ker darwazaY khole toh wo teeno ander beth gaein oor address
btaYa...
"Alrite mam...!" maine taxi aagaY barhaaYee or U-turn lelia...10 se 15 mins ka raasta tha...
" kahan se ho..." ??? apas mai bat karte karte aik ne mujhse pucha...
"india se..."!
"kabse ho Yahan...??? " dusri ne baat agaY barhaaYeee...
mai bolne hi laga k pehli waali apne maqsad per agaiii... " acha aik favour karoge...? "
mai samajh chuka tha Yeh kia kehne wali hain...
"kaisi favour...? "
"kisi store per ruko or hame 2 bottles vine dedo... Yeh hame leker desakti hai magar isaY
peena pasand nai hai..." (us pehli wali ne beech mai bethi hue larki ki tarf ishaara karte
hue kaha jo tabse khamosh thi) " Yeh hamare office mai job karti hai or bas taxi share karne k
elawa or koi favour nai karti...
"isaY khareedna b pasand nai hai..." dusri wali ne bat agaY barhate hue kaha..." agar tm hame ledo
toh ham tmhe zYada tip denge...!
"sure..."! or maine unhe bottle laker dedi... bhala mujhe kia aitraaz hota... i know its all
not good mai khud nai peeta magar mai nai toh koi aur unko khareed kar dedeta... actuallY
is mulk k law k mutabiq above 18 Years koi b larka Ya larki vine Or cigrette nai khareed sakte...
so mere na dilane se wo 2no konsa na peete so ismai koi harj nai tha...

Agle din weeekend per mai isi club k samne khara tha... raat k 2 baj gae the...or tamaam club band hore the..
is waqt Yahan se ache costumer mil jate the... mai idhar udhar dekhra tha jab meri nazar in teeno per pardhi...
wo club se nikal rhi then... mai taxi ki line mai sab se agaY tha isliYe ittefaq se wo mere paas hi aaYen thein...
"streeto...!" unhone bethte hue kaha...
wo dono nasheY mai thein or partY ki batein krhi then..apne apne boYfriends k bare mai batein suna rhi then...
jab k teesri wali is baar bhi khamosh thi...!
"tmaara naam kia hai...?" fair complexion wali ne mujhse pucha...
"maYank... or apka?" maine bat agaY barhaate hue puchlia...
"mai gunjan, Yeh shilpa..." isne us khoYee khoYee, kam bolne wali larki ki taraf ishaara karte hue kaha... "or Yeh nupur"..
jo un dono mai bethker bht ajnabi si lagri thi... Yunh jaise aaam si cheezon k darmiYaan koi khaas cheez rakh di jaYe...
"ap log streeto se Yahan har weekend per aati hain...? "
gunjan boli..."har weekend per nai, bas kabhi kabhi... han Yeh Yahan job karti hai..." usne nupur ki taraf ishaara krte hue kaha..
" lekin abhi toh aaap log pichle weekend per bhi aaYen thein..."
"tmhe kaise pata...???" shilpa ne heraangi se pucha...
"jab aplog Yahan hangout karhe the toh maine hi apko ride di thi..." maine Yad dila dia...
"oh toh wo tm the jisne hame vine leker di thi... kher mujhe bhook lagre hai..."
" mujhe bhi, gaari roko mai pizza le lun..." domino k paas se guzarte hue nupur ne kaha...
maine gaari side per rok di...
"tm khaoge...?" shilpa ne pucha...
" no thanks..." maine kaha toh nupur utar ker pizza le aYee...
maine mehsoos kia tha k nupur kam-go (taciturn), different toh thi hi magar mujhe bilkul bhi lift nai karwati thi... Yahan tak k
utar kar fair dete hue... thank u kehte hue mai muskuraaYa tha magar isne koi response hi nai dia... jab k dusri dono nasheY
mai hone k bawajood bhi good-bYe kehna nai bhooli thein...lekin isko toh shaYad in dono ka mujhse bat karna bhi na-gawaar
guzarta tha..., waja mai nai jaanta...!
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if u want me 2 continue this... then i'll...definitelY...its all up 2 u all...i 'll respect ur
decision...! 😊 waiting for ur precious comments 😊 staY blessed... !!!
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kirti123 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#2
nice concept and start
hope you manage to continue ur ffs soon
thanks for the pm😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
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really new and nice concept
do write soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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its very nice concept.Waiting for Nupur 's side to reveal.😊
Its ur 3rd ff and i hope u will b able to update regularly and complete them.
Best of luck.
Plz update other ff too.
Thnx for pm dear.šŸ¤—
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome concept...
loved it lodsss...
plz do continue soon...
love ya...šŸ¤—
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congrats for ur another ff.
the concept was great.
mayank as cab-driver in san faransico ...n nupur was a working woman.
i was shocked to see gunjan in this avtar.
bt the starting was awesome.
vey nice
waiting for nupur's side of story.
she was too silent.
continue soon
thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice start yaar waiting for next part and thanks for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow beautiful start dear
lovleyyy
hey plz do contit
and add me to ur pm list

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Posted: 13 years ago
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AglaY din chutti ka din tha... or ghar itna phaila hua tha... wO samaitne ki himmat mujhmai nai thi upper se bhook...!!! so i thought
i should gO in the village resturant for mY breakfast... it was too much near from mY apartment...! wahan pohanch kar bas apna desh
Yad agaYa,,, indian songs... indian khana...! maa k haathon ka khana Yad agaYa...! kher mai khana khaa rha tha jab wo ander aYee...
aaj wo akeli thi, uski dono dostein us k sath nai thein...counter per order kar k wo washroom ki taraf chali gaiii...wapis aYee toh
khana table per lag chuka tha... while pulling the chair she saw me...
"hiii...!" maine us k dekhte hi kaha...
"Hi...!" majburan usne bhi jawab dia...
"aap is indian resturant mai...?" maine bas baat karne ka bahana dhoonda...
"ismai konsi ajeeb bat hai...!" isne is andaaz se kaha k mai b apne sawaal per sharminda hgaYa,,,
"aaj apki friends nai hain ap k sath...?"
" wo har waqt mere sath nai hotein... wese bhi wo meri friends nai neighbours hain..."
"u know, 2 Years hgae mujhe Yahan ae hue... n Yahan paas mai hi mera studio hai..." maine ise Yun bataYa jaise wo meri
purani bichri huee dost ho šŸ˜† but dat seems k she is not interested in mY stories... toh mai b chup hgaYa...
"Excuse Me...!" isne plate apni taraf karte hue kaha toh i realized k she is reallYY not interested in mY companY as she was there
2 take her meal...!
"oh.. sorrie han... ap khana khaaYee araam se... ummm bYe..."
"bYe...!" isne aise kaha jaise uski jaan chooti hO...!
"umm... enjoY ur meal...!" maine jate jate ruk kar phr kaha...!
"hmm... ab ap plz... mujhe akela chorenge..?"
"oh sorie...! bYe... final wala..." n then i paYed mY bill n left...
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Apne mail box se letter nikaal kar upper aYa... Maa ka letter tha... har hafte maa ko fone karta tha magar phr bhi maa har
dusre din mujhe letter likhti thein... aik hi laadla beta jO tha maa ka... šŸ˜‰ mujhe maa ka letter pardh ker bht acha lagta tha...
... har letter mai aik hi baatein hotein thein phr b i loved them... sab letters
mai Yhi hota k MAIN BOHOT UDAAS HOGAIII HUN... KAB AOGAY WAPIS?
then ITNIII ZID KAR K GAE THE AB SHOQ PURA HOGAYA TOH JALDI SE AJAO TMARE BABU JI OR MAI TMHE BHTTT YAD
KARTE HAIN... phir... KASHISH KI TAREEFEIN OR MUJHE BAAR BAAR YAD DILATEIN K WO MERI AMAANAT HAI IS BAT
KO HAMESHAA YAD RAKHUN...!
kashish or mai bachpan k dOst hone k sath sath cousins bhi the...! bachpan se hi sunte arheY the k bare hoker ham dono aik
dusre k life partners banenge...! toh Wo waali feelings toh ham dono mai hi thein k ham aik dusre k hain...! n aik dusre k hi honge..
hame aik hona hai...! or sach bolun toh Kashish mai bht kashish thi... naazuk pariYon jaisi... maasoom si... bholi bhaali...
sharmeeeli si...Maa toh usper jaan chirakti thein kabhi kabhi toh mujhse b zYada laad uthati us k or kiun na uthaein... unka aik hi
toh bhai tha n unki aik hi beti toh thi Kashish...
FLASHBACK:
maYank was packing his suitcase... kashish was helping him out...!
K: Yeh apka shaving box...
M: hmm use wahan bag mai rkhdo..
K: jee acha..
M: n Wo passport... use plz mere coat ki pocket mai rkhdena Yad se...
K: hmm...
maYank luked at her, n he found her eYes red...
M: kia hua tmhe?
K: kuch nai... (she put her eYes down so he wudn't watch her red eYes)
M: tm ro rhi ho? are pagal mai konsa hamesha k lYe jarha hun... aaunga toh apne hi desh apno k paas hi... in sab k bina thori
reh sakta hun mai...
K: toh jaa hi kiun rhen hain ap?
M: zaruri hai... mai wahan pardhna chahta hun...!
K: toh Yahan b toh pardh sakte haina...
M: nai mai babu ji k paison se nai apni mehnat ki kamaiii se agaY bardhna chahta hun...
K: ... ap... mujhe bhulenge toh nai na?
M: pagal hogai ho...? pagli kahin ki... aisa hosakta hai bhala? ab smile kro warna mujhe jana acha nai lagega..
kashish smiled n maYank put his hands on her cheeks... n said gudbYe 2 her...!

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Barish bht zoron se horhi thi.. mai raat gae tk kaam karta rha tha so subah dair tak soYa hua tha...ankh 4 bje khuli toh bhttt
bhook lagi hue thi... khaana bananeY mai kuch time lagta so mai fresh hoker bahar nikal aYa... i bought sandwich n then i was
just exiting mY taxi from parking toh meri nazar US per pardhi... wo bus stop per kharri bus ka intezaar krhi thi... barish ab bhi
zoron se hori thi...
"hi...!" maine gaari us k qareeb roki...
"hi...!"
"mai drop kardun...?"
"no thanks... 3 min mai bus ajaegi..."
"mere sath aane mai kia harj hai..? barish hore hai... bus toh stop per utaaregi mai ghar per utaarunga..."
"ok...!" unexpectedlY she agreed...
"apki tabYat theek hai...?" wo kuch sust siii lagri thi aaj...
"temperature hai"...isne bataYa toh mai smajh gaYa k isliYe wo meri taxi mai bethne ko tYaar hogai...
"job se arahi hain...?"
"haan..."
"tabYat khraab thi toh apko aj rest karna chahie tha..."
"chutti afford nai karsakti...pehle hi part time job karhi hn..."
"theek hai magar sehet ka khaYal rkhna zaruri hota hai Yahan toh bimaar hona bhi koi afford nai karsakta..."
" 33 barmingam street...!" meri baat k jawaab mai usne address bataYa toh mai chup chaap drive krne laga...
"ander aenge...? " khubsurat apartment k samne gaari rokne ka kehker isne Yakeenan murrawat mai pucha... lekin
mai sach much utar aYa...šŸ˜† jaane kiun mai inkaar na karsaka, shaYad mujhe uski la-taaluqqi, ignorance n attitudes ache
lagte the...! mai us se puche bagair hi ander agaYa...!
"apka ghar bht acha hai..." dil kia uski familY k bare mai puchun magar kuch zYada personal hona acha nai laga...kher maine bat
bahaate hue khudi pucha...! "khana khaYa aapne?"
"nahi...!"
"phir toh apko pehle kuch khana chaie... phir med lein..."
"han mai dekhti hun kuch..." her face was getting red coz of fever...
"ma sandwich leker aaYa hun ap wo khalein, mai abhi gaari se leker ata hun..."
"nai plz mai nai khaungi..."
"dekhiYe aap takalluf na karen... ap bahar kaise jaengi itne bukhaaar mai?"
"mai khana ghar per hi banati hun toh ap plz fikr na karen...!
"reallY...? ap pardhti b hain, job b karti hain or khana b ghar per bnati hain...?"
"hmmm..." usne kuch khaas jawab nai dia toh mujhe laga wo araam karna chahre hai...
"ok mai chalta hun..."
"ok...!" wo Yakeenan isi sentence ka wait krhi thi,,,
"agar ap bura na maane toh mai kal apki kheriaat pata karne ajaun???"
"sure...!" wo or kia kehti bhala šŸ˜†
"thank u"
"bYe..." she said...
"hmm...bYe" i smiled n left...!

COntinue Soon... waiting for ur comments 😳
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nice part yaar and do continue soon

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