New MG FF:Tied by the sacred knot..t 2-link added - Page 11

Originally posted by: JayaR

Hey Amanda...

Just went thru ur ff... and I loved the story track...

a very good start... please add me to ur PM list...

and yes update soon... and a tiny-miny request... please give us a long update...

Originally posted by: maaneetmaahi

hey its a nice ff
please continue soon...

Originally posted by: vibhashekhar

Its awesome...i loved the ff a lot...please add me to your pm list...

PART 3

Geet was sweating profusely.She looked around his magnificent yet modern bedroom.She was hell scared.What if something really happened like that?

MAAN'S BEDROOM

"kuch nahin Ann.Just a bad dream."Geet said.

Ann gave her the glass of water from the table.Geet gulped it down.

"waise Its 10 and You're not asleep yet?"she asked.

"Actually bhabi I was not feeling sleepy,So I was strolling along the mansion and thats when I heard your scream.wo sab chodiye,bhai kahaan hai?"she asked.

"He's in the study Ann"Geet said.

There was a silence in the room.Geet broke it by asking,"mmm...Do u mind me sleeping in ur room tonight?"

Ann looked at her and Geet could reckon she saw tears gathering in her eyes when she replied,"of course not bhabi"

~*~

Geet entered Ann's room and was spellbound by the decors and interiors.The room was fully furnished in pink and Geet was spellbound.

Geet sat on the bed and looked at Ann's red eyes.

She asked her,"Do u wanna sleep Ann?"

"Nahi bhabi I'm fine"she said bending down to read a magazine.

Suddenly Ann felt a hand on her forehead and looked to see Geet touching her forehead with a worrisome face.

"Ann when was the last time u had a nyc 8 hour sleep?"she asked.

"woh.."Annie trailed off..

Geet was shocked.Ann had not been havin enough sleep and that is the reason for her low grades!!

Geet quickly snatched her magazine and placed it on the nearby table.She took two pillows and placed one behind her back and leaned on it while she placed another pillow on her lap.Ann was shocked.She couldn't understand what she was doing.

"Come here"Geet said pointing towards her lap.

Ann was overwhelmed at this gesture.She didn't know how to take this.The only persons who had cared for her really were Ragini and Dadaji.Maan hated the sight of her as he believed it was only cos of her his mom had died.

Yes!Mrs.Neesha Anvar Khurana had died while giveng birth to her.

Vicky was a special specimen.He always used to joke around.Though he used to love her nothing could be compared to a mothers love,isn't it?

Ann lied down on Geet's lap and there was something in her heart which told her Geet could give all the mothers love she craved for.

"pata hai bhabi!I hav this phobia of darkness but if I keep the lights on I cant sleep.I've been like this for more than 10 years ever since Maan bhai scolded me."

"What?He scolded you?"she asked caressing her hair lovingly.

~*~

It was a typical Sunday at the Khurana-sorry sorry-It was the birthday of their Barbie doll-like dadaji called.

The servants were busy decorating the Eastern wing of the palace.They dared not enter the West wing as they knew If Maan was disturbed when he was in his study-THEY WERE DEAD!!

But poor Anvesha was dressing up in a cute pink frock which Vicky had selected.After showing her dress to everyone she had only one person left to show it-her eldest brother Maan Singh Khurana,the lion himself.

Ann and her friends slowly moved along the wall and Ann peeped into the study.Maan was working out his arithmetic sums.

Annie had always known that Maan hated her but she always wished one day he'd lift her up in his arms and cuddle her close to him and tell her that he loves her.

Ann signalled her frnds and tiptoed inside the room.

She slowly tugged on his pants.Maan looked down from his log book to see his 7 year old sister standing with a cute and an innocent smile.

He was furious.How dare she enter my room?he thought.

He bent down and grabbed her shoulder forcefully and hissed"How dare you enter my study without my permission?"

Ann had tears flowing down her cheeks cos his hold pained.

"Get out before I punish you"he said in a threatening tone and pushed her on the floor.

Ann stood up and ran away.The birthday party was cancelled.

~*~

When Ann finished her story Geet could feel tears prickle her eyes.She looked down at Ann who was now fast asleep on her lap.

She knew from day 1 that something was wrong in the Khurana family.But what??

She wiped her tears away and said to herself in a determined voice,"No matter what I'll make the Khurana Khaandaan a real family-yeh meri kasam hai!"

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~TO BE CONTINUED~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Guys Hw was it???

Pls do press like button and comment..

Love u all...

Amanda..

Originally posted by: Gurmina-rks

PART 3

Geet was sweating profusely.Se looked around his magnificent yet modern bedroom.She was hell scared.What if something really happened like that?

MAAN'S BEDROOM

"kya hua bhabi??"Ann came running to her.

"kuch nahin Ann.Just a bad dream."Geet said.

Ann gave her the glass of water from the table.Geet gulped it down.

"waise Its 10 and You're not asleep yet?"she asked.

"Actually bhabi I was not feeling sleepy,So I was strolling along the mansion and thats when I heard your scream.wo sab chodiye,bhai kahaan hai?"she asked.

"He's in the study Ann"Geet said.

There was a silence in the room.Geet broke it by asking,"mmm...Do u mind me sleeping in ur room tonight?"

Ann looked at her and Geet could reckon she saw tears gathering in her eyes when she replied,"of course not bhabi"

~*~

Geet entered Ann's room and was spellbound by the decors and interiors.The room was fully furnished in pink and Geet was spellbound.

ANN'S ROOM

"Aayiye na bhabi"Ann called out.

Geet sat on the bed and looked at Ann's red eyes.

She asked her,"Do u wanna sleep Ann?"

"Nahi bhabi I'm fine"she said bending down to read a magazine.

Suddenly Ann felt a hand on her forehead and looked to see Geet touching her forehead with a worrisome face.

"Ann when was the last time u had a nyc 8 hour sleep?"she asked.

"woh.."Annie trailed off..

Geet was shocked.Ann had not been havin enough sleep and that is the reason for her low grades!!

Geet quickly snatched her magazine and placed it on the nearby table.She took two pillows and placed one behind her back and leaned on it while she placed another pillow on her lap.Ann was shocked.She couldn't understand what she was doing.

"Come here"Geet said pointing towards her lap.

Ann was overwhelmed at this gesture.She didn't know how to take this.The only persons who had cared for her really were Ragini and Dadaji.Maan hated the sight of her as he believed it was only cos of her his mom had died.

Yes!Mrs.Neesha Anvar Khurana had died while giveng birth to her.

Vicky was a special specimen.He always used to joke around.Though he used to love her nothing could be compared to a mothers love,isn't it?

Ann lied down on Geet's lap and there was something in her heart which told her Geet could give all the mothers love she craved for.

"pata hai bhabi!I hav this phobia of darkness but if I keep the lights on I cant sleep.I've been like this for more than 10 years ever since Maan bhai scolded me."

"What?He scolded you?"she asked caressing her hair lovingly.

~*~

It was a typical Sunday at the Khurana-sorry sorry-It was the birthday of their Barbie doll-like dadaji called.

The servants were busy decorating the Eastern wing of the palace.They dared not enter the West wing as they knew If Maan was disturbed when he was in his study-THEY WERE DEAD!!

MAAN'S PRIVATE STUDY

But poor Anvesha was dressing up in a cute pink frock which Vicky had selected.After showing her dress to everyone she had only one person left to show it-her eldest brother Maan Singh Khurana,the lion himself.

Ann and her friends slowly moved along the wall and Ann peeped into the study.Maan was working out his arithmetic sums.

Annie had always known that Maan hated her but she always wished one day he'd lift her up in his arms and cuddle her close to him and tell her that he loves her.

Ann signalled her frnds and tiptoed inside the room.

She slowly tugged on his pants.Maan looked down from his log book to see his 7 year old sister standing with a cute and an innocent smile.

He was furious.How dare she enter my room?he thought.

He bent down and grabbed her shoulder forcefully and hissed"How dare you enter my study without my permission?"

Ann had tears flowing down her cheeks cos his hold pained.

"Get out before I punish you"he said in a threatening tone and pushed her on the floor.

Ann stood up and ran away.The birthday party was cancelled.

~*~

When Ann finished her story Geet could feel tears prickle her eyes.She looked down at Ann who was now fast asleep on her lap.

She knew from day 1 that something was wrong in the Khurana family.But what??

She wiped her tears away and said to herself in a determined voice,"No matter what I'll make the Khurana Khaandaan a real family-yeh meri kasam hai!"

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~TO BE CONTINUED~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Guys Hw was it???

Pls do press like button and comment..

Love u all...

Amanda..