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Jyo.KG_dbhusain

@Jyo.KG_dbhusain

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Posted: 13 years ago

#941

omg what a GGREEAATTT part

luved it do cont soon:D

n about the pming thing im sorry i ight have been a part of that too but...,

but that was because my internet was disconected but i did read it at school durring my spare block( u might hve known since i left a msg on my ff too) n i did press the like button 😳

but now im back n will leave alot of comments😃❤️

sorry about that once again😳

Edited by kashluv4ever - 13 years ago

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Asma Khan

@crazy4KASH_AR

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Posted: 13 years ago

#942

Awesome part.
I liked the way Armaan took care of Ridz.
I wish Armaan may save Ridz from his father.
I hate his father.
This part was amazing.
Continue soon plz..
love
Asma

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blessed4

@blessed4

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Posted: 13 years ago

#943

Amazing update ...feel sad for Ridhima and hope Armaan's father doesn't get her !!! pl continue soon and thanks for the pm !!!

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Tahira

@cutie13

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Posted: 13 years ago

#944

I been a slient reader for a long time but I have to say that you are the one of the best writer I ever come across. I love it when you give each character his or her point of view. I really want to know why Ridzi was never with her real family. And poor Armaan I totally feel bad for this guy 😔... I hope the Father didnt kill her 😕... Please cont soon 😃

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Tahmina Aliya Begum

@-Aliya-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#945

Your updating so fast. not complaining at all! i just really need to get my ass in gear and catch up with commenting..

I saved the link to your Bromidic Story FF and had finally settled down to read it yesterday when i was utterly disappointed to find its been taken off. Lesson learnt: when the urge to read something takes over, don't ignore that instinct. Damn i should have read it while it was there. do you know why it was closed, Pri?

It wouldn't have been right to not share that with you.
So will you tell me why your username is gypsy? or am i missing the obvious here hehe

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Tahmina Aliya Begum

@-Aliya-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#946

Comment for Chapter 16 (i'll make it as shorter than the last essay if i want to comment for Ch17 early)

I don't believe this chapter was repetitive as you said. In fact i found it quite a light chapter. It was so beautiful to hear Riddhima speak out loud. The transition to her increasing courage is beautiful to read in this chapter. i remember that first time she had to eat with Armaan, wearing the dress he provided her with, she was so stunned in fear she fled. His very presence shocked her into deafening silence; even though she was always silent at first, the first few meetings with Armaan used to silence her thoughts as well, freeze her body and mind because of the consuming fear. Then slowly her environment and finally finding out that she does have some identity (Tanya-although she doesn't know everything, knowing about Tanya, i think, has made her feel she does belong, she does have someone to attach identity to) lead her to silent courage rather than silent pining. And now its full on determination to not let her questions go unanswered. And now finally that determination has been voiced; not in a weak, trembling voice, but her courage and need to know herself is so natural to her now that her question was an outburst, thoughtless, her questions just flowed out. Absolutely wonderful transition of R's character, Pri.

I felt the gentleness of Armaan's care here. I'm able to warm up to his character in this chapter. Even though, it was revealed to us that Armaan isn't all evil chapters ago, its only now in this recent chapter that i can connect with him. I feel he has softened his Blue Eye stare to a soothing gaze full of emotive concern towards Riddhima rather than a detached feeling of duty towards Riddhima although that is still there ofcourse. Armaan hididng his concern for Riddhima only increased her belief that he was faking everything, only strengthened her belief that she imagines any nice vibes she may feel from him. In this chapter when he shows his concern towards her more openly through touch, she for a moment believed he has some good in him. Once he stopped, her feeling faded. Which is why i think Armaan needs to continue to show his concern towards R so that she can finally believe it.

Expect Chapter 17 comment tomorrow hopefully =)

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soni4eva

@soni4eva

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Posted: 13 years ago

#947

wow dat was jus amazin beautifully written

luvd it 2 gud poor ridhima feel sowii 4 er

cnt w8 2 read more plzz cont soon

fanx 4 da pm x

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moonlight2630

@moonlight2630

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Posted: 13 years ago

#948

Hey dear fantastic update every thing was going very well arman caring ridhima he likes to talk with her that's nice he noticed ridhima's action alot i like the way arman protect ridhima he is very much concern for her safety and her health every thing is going so good and in the end u gave me heart attack no yaar his father so evil I hope arman save her on time from his father I hope ridhima is fine she is so brave .
I must say u r a deadly good writer I love ur writing style n thanks 4 PM .
Hey I m waiting 4 ur Bromidic story FF plz update soon this FF I love to read this FF plz update soon .

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@fanAR

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Posted: 13 years ago

#949

u are updating so fast , how i am gonna catch up with my comments . this is making me think . i better do before u kick me out of here hehe...

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Deeksha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#950

Originally posted by: -Aliya-
Your updating so fast. not complaining at all! i just really need to get my ass in gear and catch up with commenting..

I saved the link to your Bromidic Story FF and had finally settled down to read it yesterday when i was utterly disappointed to find its been taken off. Lesson learnt: when the urge to read something takes over, don't ignore that instinct. Damn i should have read it while it was there. do you know why it was closed, Pri?

It wouldn't have been right to not share that with you.
So will you tell me why your username is gypsy? or am i missing the obvious here hehe

Hey Aliya,
She has removed the story from IF :((
And Priyanka, you were supposed to share the story of your username, remember??