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keya

@krazy4kash

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Posted: 13 years ago

#931

hey

i've been a silient reader all along soo i guess now i'm gonna reply

i agree with your note. i'm apologetic for my silent behaviour. i do really like your ff

so update soon
and have you moved your mbs ff somewhere else if its not on if . because i loved that ff and was hoping to read it further

kj

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Sunita Tandel

@KaJen_addiction

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Posted: 13 years ago

#932

hey Priyanka!
dat was a superb part!
loved da way u've shown Armaan's concern 4 Ridz...nd how he helped her!
his father found Ridz!...hope Armaan is able 2 save her b4 its too late!
cont soon
thnx 4 pm
luv...Sunita:-)

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roshni_A

@roshni_A

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Posted: 13 years ago

#933

Oh ..how i wish this chapter never ends...sigh* and more than that i wish i could know what Riddhima felt at those times...

Its a unique human characterization on part of Riddhima where she is ready to trust whom she thought as her 'certain' death to save herself from a danger that is still 'uncertain' to herslf..so in a way its Riddhima's own yearning and craving to trust somebody, especially the BLUE EYES...there is a part of her own heart which wants or wishes the blue eyes to be her savior, a person where she can lay her trust...but the other part is in denial and most of it is because of Armaan...he had kept so many secrets to gain her trust...

So, may be its only a beginning...and i just wish his father hav not found her and he is not late this time...

pls ..pls continue soon ...can't wait for the nxt part...

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sweetnandu

@sweetnandu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#934

awesome part

luvd it

thnx 4 d pm

cont soon

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naureen

@Norz

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#935

awesome part

one thing i dint get is

how tanya came to know that riddhimais her sister

hope armaan find riddhima soon

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Bhavya

@Bhavya8

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Posted: 13 years ago

#936

OMG!!!!!!! Priyanka this was amazing!! One of my favourite chapters so far! And it's so long too!!! I think outing it in Armaan' pov was such a great choice , it showed how vulnerable Riddhima is an his concern and care for her. Also the action and tension in this chapter was so well written. And I'm beginning to see a new dynamic in the AR relationship, the way Armaan wanted to thank her for eating and how he enjoys her expressions. I know he still thinks about Tanya a lot but I see hope for AR. But the end, Armaan must feel so guilty and poor Riddhima she's just being dragged around by these men a pawn in their game and she doesn't even know he whole truth! And of course when you chose to end the chapter at that point I jus t thought Nooo!!!!!! But I'm so eager for the next update! Thank you for pm and I can't wait for more!!