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Posted: 13 years ago

#811

Awesome part. Waiting to read more and thanks for the pm

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gypsy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#812

Reserved...Reserved...Reserved...
Out of the first four, Three are still waiting to get EDITED.
Take some inspiration from regular updater like the *coughs* owner of this thread who updates regularly..
And

Edit..Edit...Edit..SOON people...
I have started with the next Chapter so EDIT it soon :)

And a special note to someone who is just TWO Chapters behind..Hurry up and don't laze around. You have off and I know it.

Another special note of another someone who is in a vanishing mode from the past few weeks. The T/S/F girls along with the owner of this thread are missing you so come back soon :)

Cheers,
Priyanka

PS: Nothing to say but the msg was looking incomplete without the PS so added PS..🤔

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gypsy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#813

Originally posted by: zARqaa_X
I lurved this chapter!
Thanks a ton :)

This is where we actually get to see the actual thoughts of a defenseless Armaan. It shows how overruled he is by his father, how much he controls Armaans life. And he says hes saving Riddhimas life for Tanya, but is he really? He keeps brining it up but is it to make a reason to why hes saving her, it could be that he is starting to have another reason like he wants to protect for himself but doesnt knoww it yet.

A's life was always surrounded by someone who used to guide him. First it was his Dad than Tanya came. Maybe directly they weren't guiding him but indirectly they were and now with his mind going in opposite direction because both Tanya and Mr. Malik have completely contrasting shades and with no proper guidance he's becoming a defenseless man. He needs a guidance that is missing in his life. :)

About his selfish reason I am not able to get the exact meaning of what you are trying to say. Can you clear this statement of yours because I really want to know your take on this side of his?

This chapter shows how he feels about himself, how he feels everyone else feels about him, its like he knows he was going to fail thats why hes not suprised but at the same time he is? LOl i have no idea what i am saying, its hard to write it in words.

Yup! this Chapter gave an insight into A's character..R and A both consider themselves as Failure for different reasons and this Chapter showed his side.

The situations were almost same. Last time, she sacrificed her life for Riddhima and this time. And this time... it would be Me. Like killing I was not scared of dying. It was her I was scared of. If it wasn't for her I would have ..

No! don't go there..You promised her.

I feel like theres another unknown secret in here, that only Armaan knows of, and maybe Tanya? that is why he is feeling this guilty about him being so selfish. Is it that Tanya couldve died for both Armaan and Riddhima? Or am i reading too much in to the lines? He knew what danger Tanya was in, so thats why he could be feeling so guilty about it

Oh trust me you are not reading too much. Our mind takes us to places we can't even think about..LOL..and About the secret..There's much more to Tanya and A's story that I have not shown till now..It will be revealed slowly through the Chapters..

I love the fact that even though their Father Son relationship is very selfish, he still trusts his father enough not to lie to him. It tells you a lot about the Father and him, what kind of standards and thoughts they have for one another.

He loves his father and his father loves him too. The act of showing is different for both of them..😊

I hope Joseph doesnt get hurt during this, its any life on the line.

Joseph was the key man in Father's Army, the shooter that needed just one bullet to finish the game. A single bullet and GAME-OVER. He was PERFECT in his job because it was him who did it That time. And it was him who was going to do it now.

That time. What time? When Tanya died? Did his Father make Joseph do it beofre and did Armaan see it? Or has he seen him kill someone else?

that time is a time that you'll get to know soon ;) and all your answers will be answered soon :)

I dont know why but i keep having this weird vibe that Armaan is going to sacrifice himself. I dont know if its your plan or not but the wya he thinks, the way he behaves its like hes ready for it noe, he knows his mistakes and just wants to make up for them by punishing himself. I dont know if im right or not, im probably not but it just that guilt he is living with, he just wants to let it go.

See guilt is an emotion that weakens you. It takes you towards sacrifice yourself. You think low about yourself and that's exactly what A's going through. He believes himself to be the reason behind Tanya death. Now whether he is right or not will be known when the death scene will be shown..

Another amazing part Priyanka! Well done!

Thanks once again 😳

Continue soon x
Will post the next Chapter soon :)

Originally posted by: zARqaa_X
Wow amazingly wrriten!

I loved reading Riddhimas POV again, i felt so sad that she had jsut given up again.

Im so glad he found her! :D But how did he? And was he the one who 'killed' her supposedly?

continue soon x

Thanks Zarqaa :)
The situations around her are making her think like that :)
Yup! A found her but how will be known when we'll come to A's POV.
No it wasn't him who tried killing her :)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#814

awesome part

well described , but

i miss the dialogues in this ff

i would love to read more dialogues from the charecter's

but that's only my view, dont take it otherwise

continue soon

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gypsy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#815

Originally posted by: akshad
loved it
finally armaa is gonna to find her
thanks for the pm
continue soon

Thanks :)
Yup! and he even found her now :)
Will post the next Chapter soon :)

Originally posted by: meriyaar
thank you for a great update.
sorry for not commenting on the last chapter.
it was very interesting and i like the way you write,
waiting for the next part :)
and thanks for the pm
tc
xoxo

Thanks for the comment :)
I'll post the next Chapter soon :)
You too :D

Originally posted by: meriyaar
omg! great update dear, was very shocking and interesting and wat a cliffhanger yaar!
can't wait for the next part update soon.
tc
xx

Thanks :)
I'll post the next Chapter soon :)
You too :D

Originally posted by: -DavneetKaur-

Hey gypsy its me again and let me tel u m loving the story nw...waiting for u to continue

Thanks Davneet :)
I am happy to know you are liking the story now :)
I'll post the next Chapter soon :)

Originally posted by: aish_loves_KaSh
great part
Cont. Soon

Thanks Aish :)
I'll post the next Chapter soon :)

Originally posted by: Cutiepie_KSG
Awesome update I feel very bad for armaan hez gng through lot poor soul... Hope he finds ridz soon thanx for the pm :)

Thanks :)
A and R both are going through a lot and it is going to continue in the upcoming Chapters :)
He found her and now it's the trust issue going on :)

Originally posted by: howardr07
Please don't be disheartened. You have a gift, you are excellent in writing ...do not give it up coz some people don't appreciate it. Keep going coz some of them do :)
Happy writing my friend!

Thanks so much and I can't tell how happy I am reading your comment because you are one of those few readers who's name is always in the LIKE list. It's always great to hear from readers like you..😊
I am continuing it for those few only. For rest I am not going to say anything.😳
I hope to see you more active on this thread by not just limiting yourself to LIKE. Do give feedback when you have time :)

Originally posted by: lifesucks123
That was a great update. I loved it. I hope riddhima is okay an Armaan doesn't end up killing himself.

Thanks :)
I am happy to see your comment :)
A found her but she's not going to be okay in the upcoming Chapters :)
Hoping to see you more active on the thread :)
Do reply when you have time :)

Originally posted by: ritu.j
Hey!
The previous updates were absolutely amazing!
I just read all of them at once...and there is not a single time that you havent made me want to read more. I really adore the way you begin and write the updates..:-)
The way you have described each and every emotion, be it pain, anger, love or obsession, touched my heart..:-)
It is always a pleasure to read your fanfic and I really hope you write more and more of such wondeful fanfictions :-)
Please do continue soon..!
Take care..<3
..xoxo..

Thanks :)
Great to see you on this thread :)
I am happy to know you are liking the story :)
Thanks a ton once again 😳
I'll post the next Chapter soon :)
You too :D

Edited by gypsy - 13 years ago

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gypsy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#816

Originally posted by: RheaKSG4eva
Hey Priyanka!
I'm sorry i was unable to comment on chap. 12..
I have exams from 20th and so i'm highly inactive here..
But i always make it a point to atleast hit the like button if not comment..
I will be inactive till March 26th.. coz i have Pre-Boards in Jan and the Boards in March.. and that's the reason as to why i won't be able to comment..

And this chap was written so well..
I could understand what kind of mental torture Armaan was going through..
Hope everything becomes alright soon..
Please cont. soon..
and don't forget to PM me please..
Thank u..
Love,
Rhea

Thanks Rhea :)
And all the best for the upcoming Exams :)
Ah..boards..is it 10th or 12th?
Do study well and you'll get good grades :)

On the Chapter comment
It'll take time because it's just the start for both of them :)
I'll continue soon and I am PMing you for the Chapters :)

Originally posted by: nIhArIkA
feeling bad for armaan...hope he saves ridhima in time..n ridhima forgives armaan soon

Thanks :)
He found her at last and now we are reading about the issue factor :)
R won't forgive him easily because of what she's been through bcoz of him :)
Hoping to hear more from you in the upcoming Chapters :)

Originally posted by: ksg_ritika
awesum part ... hope armaan saves riddhima soon ...

thanx 4 d pm n continue soon ...

ritika

Thanks :)
He found her but the trust factor is missing :)
I'll post the next Chapter soon :)

Originally posted by: Arians
Nyc update dear
thnx for pm
cont soon

Thanks :)
I'll post the next Chapter soon :)

Edited by gypsy - 13 years ago

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Aditi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#817

~And superlyk it is ~ ⭐️

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Deeksha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#818

Originally posted by: gypsy
Reserved...Reserved...Reserved...
Out of the first four, Three are still waiting to get EDITED.
Take some inspiration from regular updater like the *coughs* owner of this thread who updates regularly..
And

Edit..Edit...Edit..SOON people...
I have started with the next Chapter so EDIT it soon :)

And a special note to someone who is just TWO Chapters behind..Hurry up and don't laze around. You have off and I know it.

Another special note of another someone who is in a vanishing mode from the past few weeks. The T/S/F girls along with the owner of this thread are missing you so come back soon :)

Cheers,
Priyanka

PS: Nothing to say but the msg was looking incomplete without the PS so added PS..🤔

Hello there "The regular updater" *cough cough*

I'm going to edit right now.

Minaz, you are two chapters behind..?? She's going to threaten you like she threatened Ayesha.. Remember, "meany"

And Ayesha, be back on 5th please.

And Priyanka, you started a new chapter, *yay*..

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gypsy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#819

Originally posted by: qt4ever
I am so badly addicted to this ff!
Simply amazing
just fab!

Thanks :)

Originally posted by: vidu87
superbbb👏
thnx 4 d pm
cont soonish

congo 4 100 pages

Thanks :)
I'll post the next Chapter soon :)
Thanks a ton once again :)

Originally posted by: krazy4kash
hey

just caught up with ur ff

its amazing

loved it

different story

hoping ull update soon

thx 4 d pm

luv
kj

Thanks :)
I am happy to know you are liking the ficiton :)
I'll post the next Chapter soon :)

Originally posted by: adorableaisha
amazing...
the way u write abt der feelings is way 2 gud...

thanks 4 d pm...

aisha.

Thanks :)

Originally posted by: adorableaisha
wow...poor riddhima...
nice update...

continue soon...

Thanks :)
I'll post the next Chapter soon :)

Originally posted by: araja1234
Awesome part. Loved it and thanks for the pm

Thanks :)

Originally posted by: araja1234
Awesome part. Waiting to read more and thanks for the pm

Thanks :)
I'll post the next Chapter soon :)

Edited by gypsy - 13 years ago

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gypsy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#820

Originally posted by: moonlight2630
hey dear great update as usual feel very sad 4 tanya arman and ridhima just caz of arman's dad they all suffer i just want to shoot arman's dad .
arman is great lover he is trying his best to keep up his promise.
really happy to know that arman wants ridhima safe and fine i hope she safe is fine now arman is full in action to safe ridhima i wish joseph helps arman to find ridhima .
and yeah i received ur pm and thanks 4 pm and amazing update i love ur both FF u r always punctual in ur update so need to say update soon.

Thanks :)
LOL..you are the first reader who wants to shoot him..I have no problem..He's all yours, I am sure after shooting him you'll have a big fan following..One of them would be me for sure..😆
Yup! A loved her a lot and that's the reason why he's ready to go against his father :)
A found her but with the kind of circumstances around them, it will be difficult for her to trust him :)
Wohoo..I am punctual in update...Thanks a ton for this statement :) Love you for this. I am so happy because I am always consider the not so punctual one and hearing it from you..I can't express what I am feeling ATM ;D
I hope the others are reading it..LOL. :)

Originally posted by: moonlight2630
hey dear nice update love to read ridhima's POV you described her pain her thoughts her fear and feelings very well feel very bad for ridhima i hope arman safe her from his father can't see her in pain it's so painful.

Thanks :)
A found her but will he be able to save her. For that you need to read the upcoming Chapters :)

Originally posted by: zigzagway_sadi
H!!!
Plz..don't stop writing.. love this ff..

the part was awesome..

continue soon

take care

Thanks :)
And I am not stopping this fic anymore :)
I'll post the next Chapter soon :)
And you too :D

Originally posted by: zigzagway_sadi
Really nice update.. glad that armaan found riddhima..

looking forward to the next part!!!

thanks for the pm..

take care