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Tahmina Aliya Begum

@-Aliya-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1051

"Hink-beecawm, keen-kawn, keen-kawn...Hi see loo-see, loo-see-loo-see... Hi see-pee-see, lah see-pee-see. Mawm bah cawww, heen-kawwwn... Wee-wee-wee-wee-wee-wee-wee. Pa-kah-chee-ka-lah-ka-chee-ka, chee-kah-lah-ka-choo, brrrup-a-chee-ka-lah-ka-chee-ka, chee-ka-chee-ka-chee-ka-choo."

Mein khwabon ki shehzaadi, mein hoo har dil mein chaayee.

Baadal hai meri zulfe, bijlee meri angaraai.

Bijlee giraane main hoo aaye, kehte hai mujhko Hawa Hawaai.

^^blame Dee for the singing if it boggles you although Hawa Hawaai is darn catchy.
Congo on pretty much completing this thread. i'm so proud of how far you have come, Pri. Especially when your a writer who insists that you have low knowledge on novels and books and yet you manage to write so wonderfully and creatively. You must have a natural talent for it.

I also like the insightful thought you gave to Blue Eyes being the symbolism of essential survival (water) and therefore Armaan as Blue Eyes will be the essential person for Riddhima's survival

Edited by -Aliya- - 13 years ago

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Naina

@naina59

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1052

hey i love this ff... nice part and continue soon please i really cant wait...

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Nikki

@-nikki-

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#1053

yay! ur almost finished this thread 😃😃

update soon

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fri42911

@fri42911

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#1054

oh no! arman's evil father got riddhima again.

after going so much trouble to save riddhima, still he fails.

i am praying for riddhima's safety.

i hope arman'll find her soon.

looking forward to read next part!!!!!

please continue soon.

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@fanAR

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#1055

Hey Pri jii 🤗 i am here agian, today is kind of relaxing day for me. i am so happy, i can be lazy and sit around as long as i want hehe 😆 i am excited for day , so i thought i should come here and should edit one of my late comments which are pending here 😊 like good girl i am here 🤗

coming to chapter 11 i am way back, i still have not read the latest update like last two 😔 i will today hopefully

oh my gosh ... did u saw how ridz talked about failing in life in last update, here he is talking about failing how he is not doing what he have promise to his love like duty,he wanted to do. But after his dad, he can't do anything and failing miserably. there is some similarites in bith characters.

reading this update, he is cahnging; the way his afther wanted him , he is like that anymore or trying to be changhe. how his father tough him stuff like if he wants anything he can have yaar. he's gonna help her free. i am so happy that he relize that keeping her sick and under so much pain wil not help her. He's gonna free her from all this pain emo and phy, now i am so eager to read the next update ..(i have but i am reading again :)))

i so hope she get her happinese soon , i know it's not soon but i really do hope yaar

wait did i tell u the dream part was intrigued , dreams are many kind we all have but here is talking about it bad dream sadly his fatrher have made his life like that yaar.

the update name is always something to look forword too.. yes free it is, he is free her.

Please kill his father, i don't like him lol. 😡

i am gonna be back in hour again to edit even though the thread is kind of ended hehe... 🤗

Congratulations🤗 🤗 🤗 Happy 150 Pages prii jii .. u are amazing writer, your updates are riddles and they always leave me to want more. u are doing great job!!! Keep up the wonderful work 👍🏼

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Nikki

@-nikki-

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#1056

Originally posted by: fanAR

Please kill his father, i don't like him lol. 😡

same... i wish he dies

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Raveena Kaur Lalli

@xxreenaxx

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#1057

Hi, ima huge fan im sorry iv been absent the last few chapters its coz i didnt get a chance 2 read them!!! Ur absolutly awswome!!! Lile the attitude!!! 2 right u go through soo much time, u want 2 know ur being appreciated!!! Keep it up!!! Theres nOthing wrong with asking for ur rights!!! Lol!!! :)

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Raveena Kaur Lalli

@xxreenaxx

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#1058

Omg u ar truly amazing!!! What a cliff hanger!!! Ud better update soon missy!!! Omg that was mind blowing!!! Bloody hell!!! Lov lov lov lov lov lov lov!!!!ABSOLUTLY AMAZING!!!!