(Ipkknd)ArHi FF - Forever Mine -NOTE pg 53 8/11/12 - Page 15

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Posted: 13 years ago
HEy really nice update and waiting for your next part
pls continue soon 😃
waiting to read how arnav will sort out things 😃 😃
thanks for the PM
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks for the PM hershi, i have to say your update was awesome and it was totally worth the long wait!
How cute is arnav, with his line of only my khushi can make proper jalebis!!!😳😳
🤣i cant believe arnav teased akash about payal! Arnav was totally on fire in your update!
Cant wait to see what payal has got planned, please update soon your ss rocks!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: AquaBluez17

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edit!!


So I finally read it!! Yay!!
Did you see? Our team work worked! I am first comment! Damn had to stay up to like 12 30 for this. Ahh it feels good though 😆😃

Soo, You are so silly. You hav portrayed Khushi in such an amazing fashion that I am speechless. She is totally like the way she is on screen! Believe in yourself woman!


Omg!! What does Payal hav in mind?? I wonder!!😃😃😕

Ahah!! Arnav teasing Akash!?!? 🤣 🤣
HOW CUTEE WUZ THT!?!?!
I think you need a round of applause for that. 👏

Poor Arnav! So confused yet so focused yet so lost. Hayee. Luv that guy. He is just perfect.

If you make me his daughter I will kill you. Just saying 🤣 🤣

Don't you just luv the length of this awesome comment?? Yes course you do.

Well read it when you are done getting yelled at 😆

And I finally got Sony Vegas! I know that made your day. It mine too!! 🤣

Soumi❤️


yayyy!!! LMAO sorry for making u wait that long!! i got caught up in writing the AA part...which i was having too much fun with...and im so glad everyone loved it hahaha!

I KNOWW!! ive always wanted to see a cute relationship between arnav and akash...but ofcourse arnav being arnav...i doubt we will ever get that! BUT awww thank u thank u *takes a bow* im so glad everyone liked it!!!

Yeah arnie love is a confused soul! hopefully we will get some awesome arhi scenes soon...maybe...i dunno...LMAO! BUT LETS SEEE

YES i adore the length of the comment thank u!!! AND WOOHOO!! finally hahaha...god u were going crazy with that!!! now u can make some awesome VMs woot woottt!!!

thanks for liking it soumi <3333

muah!
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh my god hershi... ⭐️

tat was just brilliant!! 👏
i wonder wat stopped u all these days...i should thank mya too i guess 😉
we wouldnt be reading this if it wasnt for her...
loved the update till now...and waiting for more..

like the payal in ur story ...she is useless otherwise in the actual plot...all she does is serve tea and shed tears in the background and recently tickling her sister...really girl grow up and take a stand...

arnav teasing akaash...how cute was tat...arnie boy does hava sense of humour...loved their brotherly convo 😊

should be one of the longest comments ive written
do continue to pm when u update and hope tat its soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG hershi u finally updated!! it's lovely... lol loved arnav-akash interaction!
I already know u r a good writer, still, let me tell u again... u r awesome dear... continue soon...

PS: I am harsha aka phoenixgirl previously... just changed my id
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: _mahi_

Okay before i start...HOLY SMOKES THATS A LLONGGG COMMENTT!!! i have never gotten such a long comment before!!! hahahaha woww thank u <3

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dayumm😲😲.. i can never beat mya😭.. but i guess i can be the second one to post lol😛.. n without any pm 😃.. see.. lol😆
feel so jealous of you mya.. 😲😆
oh lemme read!!🤣
LMAOOO!! its ok it happens hahah! and hehehe no worries...second is always great as well =) its the thought that counts!
EDITED lol😆
so i had to read the previous chapter to know what was happening haha😆
n i had been thinking about the line🤔 "who was hell bent to marry khushi" for few weeks now😆 n i was like where have i read this 🤣 n finally i realized that it was in your update
silly me lol!!😆
Yeahhh sorry about that lol! i didn't mean for it to take this long...i just had a major writers block writing khushis part...ive realized i can write Arnav's pov better then Khushis hahahah!! But yeahhh lol sorry again!!! and yayyy for reading it!
oh coming to your update😛.. well well!! it was superb⭐️... brilliant update hun!!👏😳
THankkk youuu!!!
first of all😃.. i prefer this strong and decision maker payal more than the real one in the show👍🏼
yeah she is really nice n stuff😉 in the show but i can only see her either thinking about akash,😉 handing water glasses to family members🤣 or tell khushi to sleep lol😆
i really liked the determined payal in your story!!😃
ME TOOO!!!! i hope she changes in the show...i want her to be determined like how she was when she forced khushi to quit AR and told off Arnav! i mean hello...where did that determination go!?!? so don't u worry...u shall see a strong payalia in my FF =D
n then i felt so glad to see khushi getting better😛 just coz Arnav said those calming words to her☺️ that everything would be allright😳.. just so sweet!!😛
yes hehehe...u know i had to have that in there! arnav to the rescue ;)
omg hahaha 🤣 seriously?😲 arnav said 'my khushi' out loud 😲😲🤣
the man is crazy about her...what can i do hahahahahha 😉
n i seriously cannot imagine arnav teasing akash about payal 😆😆
that means he was actually stalking [in a way😉] on akash haha.. 🤣😲
n people call him serious??🤓 heck no lol😆.. he is still that sweet and naughty brother of akash and payal😳😳😛
hehehehe hello he is arnav singh raizada...he presumes himself to be god...he should kno what his brother is upto...ive always wanted a cute relationship between the 2 hahah! im so glad everyone liked that part...i thought i was over doing it =/ but all in vain...since everyone loved it wooohooo!!!!
n i hope that arnav wont misunderstand khushi😕
pleaseee😛 i beg you not to make it like that😳
i have been getting tortured enough😭 about that hatred thing in about every other ff😕 lol
so please make it unique n i know u will.. 😳😳😳
yeah i haven't thought that far yet hahaha...im working on it...i definitely want something diffferenttt but idk lol...and i cant tell u cause then i would have to kill you 😉 heheheheh jk...it just won't be fun to read if i tell u what im thinking haahah! but rest assured it will be somethign different...good or bad...u decide after reading!😆
hope you had fun reading my reply oops a letter lol😆😆
i did thank u so much hun! keep em coming!
i want an update SOONER this time😃.. n i will make sure to remind you about it everyday😈.. oh not everyday ofcourse 🤣
hahahah thank u! and yes it will be sooner...i didn't mean for it to take this long...but dont worry updates will be sooner =) hahahah and please remiders are always welcome =D
n oh yeah😛.. the siggie is just soo sweet😳.. i really loved the pictures in it.. very creative👏...
omgg yeahh!!! isn't it awesome!!!! welll pics i would like to take credit for haha...i picked each one out my self and gave it to her...and then she made it for me...but she did a fantastic job...and omg i just found out u make sigs tooo!!! now i know who to bug when i need one hehehehehehehe
that reminded me that i need to make siggies for my ff's too lol😆
thanks to you haha😆
hahaah go for it!! and while ur at it...update ur ffs missy! im waiting hahah!
aite.. ttyl then..!!😳
ttyl!!!! thank u once again for reading and commenting...means a lot <3


phew...done! my comments in pink =D
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: tes_v1

Hello-Hi-bye-bye Hershi darhling!

Daat waaj bee-ooti-phul! Loved da waay Arnav bitwa waaj teajing Aakash bitwa aaand da vole kamaradariee da two bhaiyyaj share! It waaj phun to see da teajing and taanting betpheen the two bhaij and vatever starm ij aabout to shtrike their livej, I want theej two kapals to be haapy and alwayj there far each aaother. Anderstand? It waj great to see that Arnav babuwa keepj some infarmation aabout hij bhai aalso.

And Sankadevi parmeshwari and her sisjter, me loves! Let'j see haaw Nandkisor works hij majik for theej lubly butiphul jodis!

Waant to know vat dee sly smile on Payal jiji'j phace meanj and aalso vaant to see more teajing betpheen da two bhaiyaaj!

Don't dijappoint uj Hershey bar!;)

P.S: Hope you enjoyed reading this comment! 🤣 🤣 🤣


woww...this took me like a good 20 mins to read and understand LMAO! im like uhhh wait what is this word...no wait that word! hahahahaha

thank u for ur unique comment tia love <3

lmao yes i will try to abide by all ur demands hahaha! I loved the payal in here tooo!!! shes too weak in the show and i dont appreciate it lol!!

hahahah yeah asr teasing akash bitwa was cute...that was my fav part too!!!

thank u for reading love <3 i really appreciate ittt!!!

anddd lmao yes i understand and i did enjoy reading this comment lmaooo!!!

silly tia <3
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Suvi7884

fab update Hershi :)


thank u suvi!! im glad u liked it =)

Originally posted by: sarach

woww.lovec it..plzz add me to ur pm list and pm me when u nxt update..liked it so,.the convo between siblings..the courage of payal..and bro teasing each other...my khushi..and all that..love that
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Just checked..that im already in ur pm list post..but didnt pm me..


thank u so much! im glad u liked it =D Im so happy everyone enjoyed the sibling bonding time hahaha! i decided not to make a PM list...just add me as a buddy and u should get a PM =) and yeahh lol i think u didn't get one earlier was because i was too tired after i posted it...so sent out PMs the next day! but if ur on my buddy list rest assured u will always get a PM =)

Originally posted by: Kritianya

Fab update
plz next update jaldi karna
& do pm me whenever u next update


thank u! im glad u liked it =) if u added me as a buddy...u shall get a PM =) thanks again!

Originally posted by: annie.shona

hey .. gr8888 ff..

and gr888 update..

i hope whatever payal has planned achieves success :D .. lol .



continue soon

and plzzz do add me to the pm list..


thank u so much! lets see what payal has planned hahah! i really need to think this through! will update as soon as i can =) thank u once again! and if u added me as a buddy..then u shall get a PM =)

Originally posted by: ..-Sanzz-..

Loved It :) 😳 Awww, Both Are Sad Naa :X 🥺


thank u so much! im so glad u liked it =) Yes they are...but lets see how long it lasts 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice ss
Please pm me when you update
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: nayika

Aww it was so cute how Arnav said 'my Khushi' out loud! :DD Can't wait for Arnav and Payal to stop the wedding.


aww thank youu <3 im so glad u liked it! hahaha yeah he is pretty crazy! lets see what the two plan to do!

Originally posted by: devisridhar

i loved it

as usual it was rocking 😃
Arnav out of control 😲🤣
and he teased akash wow this guy is improving so much 😆
thanks to khushi who had conferred some black magic on the great ASR i loved it❤️
thanks for ur pm hershi👏 love u dear for the next update if u update it soon😆


thank u so much hun <3 im so glad u liked it!
hahaha iknow arnav was out of control! LOL i really wanted a cute relationship between arnav and akash in the show...hoping to get that...with the wedding track haha!! BLACK MAGIC??! lmaoo!! i wish hahahaah! thank u so much for reading! means a lot <3

Originally posted by: SiRul

waoo the aprt b/w akaash and arnav hihihi So cute asr teasing akaash bitua :P marvellous

thank you fr the pm


hehehe thanks! that was my fav part too hahahah! thank u so much for reading!!

Originally posted by: deeps_92

nice updt...

i loved both sisters bonding as well as brother...
payal decided to stop the marriage...
and arnav knew every thing about payash...
so nice...
thanks for pm...


thank u so much! im so glad u liked it! yeah i wanna payal strong in this one and not the weakling she is in the show. thanksss <3

Originally posted by: Zeee

wow! really good update. i hope arnav doesnt get anger at khushi when is revealed the truth

xxx


thank u so much for liking it! and i havent thought that far yet hahah so lets see how he reacts!!

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