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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Speechless

UFFF Tubah Tubah Tubah BIA see what she is telling me and spoiling me Control her


naeeki and pooch pooch will be apt here hi na sehar ??

Oy ..Is the mohtharma again started ..nagazir comment ...(is my Urdu OK madam)

Edited by magicia - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
ok dear...
but likhna kia hai... mjhe to kuch nai pata... aagay kia hoga... pura dimaagh khaali kerdia maine part 20, 21 or 24 main...
believe me meri tubelight nahi jali abhi tak... how will we write dialogues by reserving the thread...
i thought magicia have to write maan's pov about engagement... before confrontation
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ouch... i was just replying... abbb😲???
Edited by softly_spoken - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: magicia

res maans part


next u dev


oye u reserved and Bia posted 😉 now u write Maan's POV then we will start that idea of confrontation😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
Part 25 continue in many post ...


so me starting Maan next speechless reserve ,,u have to answer my questions ... and ...then u can select next person to answer ... ok ...u can ask me to write or ask geet


i will edit ..my part will come here
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: softly_spoken

ok dear...

but likhna kia hai... mjhe to kuch nai pata... aagay kia hoga... pura dimaagh khaali kerdia maine part 20, 21 or 24 main...
believe me meri tubelight nahi jali abhi tak... how will we write dialogues by reserving the thread...
i thought magicia have to write maan's pov about engagement... before confrontation
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ouch... i was just replying... abbb😲???


ab magicia will have u for her DINNER
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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 25 (read the posts below too ..Part 25 will be continued in three posts )


Maan was not able to sleep whole night , its defenitely not because of any mosquitos ..or any mosquitos Ka ithnee Himmat ki Maan ko katey '

Ok ..he cant tell how much he hate these species called woman ..(sorry for his poor biology knowledge)

W*F , she stood like a doll when Dev put the Ring , How can She ..Such shameless woman 'Ya ..for her ..a Gold digger She is 'For her she just want money '.Whether Me or Dev ..Koi farak nahee padtha '.Such a cheapo ..

When even being a Man I cant think of any other Girl after that night , how can she ???

Then the crap note ' What was that boy said ' it was not clear ..still he could understand who had given it '

:"I Want to Speak To You .." who the hell in this slum like HP want, dare to speak to him '

It must be her Only 'He was sure , she may be want him not to tell about that incident to Dev ,, Yes ..Bi** he was sure ..the way she acted happily during engagement . And the blushing ' he did not missed when he stared at her '

May be dev had already told her about his plan 'He even did not let me too know .about ..yes She was aware of that fraud is going to happen 'That's why she did not protested when he put the ring 'Now she want to speak to him ,..

Uff mera Kutha bee nahee jayenga ..

Then he remembered he don't have a Kutha ' So he has to .. Hmm then he thought what if somebody else want to speak to him ..about her ..Yes ..he must go ..

And if it is She ..then he will make it clear to Her '.What to Mess With Maan Singh Khurana ? Yes he will Teach her '

Then somehow he reached the spot shown in small drawing beneath the note ..

Well he little impressed , whoever sketched it might have real taste in construction , it did not took him any trouble at all to reach the small hut in the middle of field '

He saw ..dev already there 'His face really dimed 'he wished it could be her ..and ..its this stupid Brat '

Maan: Dev ..WTH ..You wrote me This ..( taking note out of his pocket ..) You want to speak to me ' Funny ..no weird ..u could have talked in the room itself ..then if the presence of that "unpad" bothering u ..u could have talked in English or phone '.

And u woke up 5 o clock to talk ..cant u wait 3,4 hours more till we take our leave from here '."

Maan was really frustrated ' , Even though he wanted to shout teach her a lesson and make her tell all answers he want ..he wished 'just to have a glimpse of her and here he ..waiting '''''''''''''...Continued... please Click likes of all three posts of us to appreciate our effort ... ...and Read the next 2 posts below for next part ...




Edited by magicia - 13 years ago
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Poor Dev was still hurt after seeing geet putting ring in Maan's finger and sat at the far corner shedding unseen tears of his failure when he felt someone's gaze on him. he lifted his head and saw a boy coming towards him and Before he asked him anything he gave him a piece of paper and ran away with out telling anything🤢...

Dev was confused and hurt 😔 he opened and found a Message...
Address XYZ
meet me at 5am
i want to talk to you
its important...

He was like 😲 who wants to meet me that too in a hut of handa's 😕 kon ho sakta hai???

he knew this is not maan's handwriting or wese bhi if maan wants to talk then he will just came to his room. he was still thinking about the person and Suddenly the image of Socked Geet came to his Mind and he smiled widely 😃 he too wanted to talk to her about this engagement drama and wanted to tell her about their plan⭐️and how much he liked her and Blah Blah Blah

He thought Phewww😊 ziada mehnat nahi karni pari mujhy and Geet herself called me to discuss and engrossed in his thought about how he will tell her about the Plan in the most appropriate way. he was restlessly waiting for the time and couldn't sleep the whole night...

Whole Night he was practicing how to make geet understand and also make her a part of this drama and in his excitement he reached the point Geet mentioned before time.

his little heart shattered💔 when he saw Maan coming towards the Hut he was 😲 WHAT??? Bro sent me a letter 😕 No why he did this what so important k woh subha tak wait bhi nahi kar sake😲 NONONO may be he came for morning walk [Stupid Dev]😉

He was shocked already and when maan shouted at him and threw the same page on his face and asked him why he wants him to come here?? 😡 Dev was Like 😭 MUJHY KIYA ZARORAT HAI bhala?? 😭 then he gave maan the paper he received and both brothers looked at eachother and then they saw a girl coming towards them with a veil covering herself ...

Dev's face lit up and he knew its Geet. he asked Maan to leave and that he will handle this and trying to be sensible

Dev: Bro i think she wants to talk to me not you... you must be upset about that Ring thing and wanted to ask about this... don't worry bro i'll tell her about our plan... she has right to know afterall she is the Main character

Maan didn't like the way Dev trying to Shoo him away he passed an angry glare and that glare was enough to shut Dev up... in their discussion's time geet reached near them ...😊 and Maan started walk to leave the HUT silently ...

Continued...

and want you all to Hit the Button, it really motivates me Love you all
Edited by Speechless - 13 years ago
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PART 25
(continue)
Geet's prespective:
She was restless.. yet extremely furious on both brothers Maan and Dev, on Maan for remaining silent and on Dev for showing such audacity.. Maan's silence was now pinning her heart.. what's going on with her life.. what her fate has in store for her..
From the silence of Maan, and his cold gestures, she could easily make out that, he was not oblivious to what had happened.. and the way Dev announced that his bro already put the ring, and the wicked grin on his face after uttering those words clearly indicate that he was not at all playing any friendly joke with his bro and bhabhi..

But then why he (Maan) came here with proposal for her and evoke those dreams in her, which she herself crushed and buried somewhere deep within, after that sinful night..

All happiness and joy that filled her after seeing him here shattered.. and she fell down from the nth cloud of her dreams.. straight to the earth..

She felt really hurt when he ignored her in the car after that night.. but this time the pain is even deeper and greater..

chaara gar har gaya ho jaisey..

ab to merna hi dawa ho jaisey..

mujh se bichra tha wo pehle bhi magar..

ab ke yeh zakhm naya ho jaise..

(These are few lines from an Urdu poem, off course not mine.. and I am unable to recall the name of the poet at the moment)

For an instance if she suppose that Maan is tracing her after that night, and wanted to trick her for that night, but what is with Dev, why He is doing this with her, what she has done with him, she even didn't know him..!or this is some joint plan of both the brothers..

No, she will never let it happen, she will confront both the brothers.. she will not let herself be the toy of both brothers with whom they will play and pass it to other, when one get enough of it..She wanted answer.. and she wanted it right now.. but she cant talk to them in front of everyone.. and then she made two chits.. and ask both the brothers to come to the hut in the middle of the field at 5, in the morning, no one will be awake at that that time to witness their meeting.. she gave one chit to a kid from the guests.. and signaled towards Dev.. And then her eyes searched for Maan, he wasn't in the hall.. and then she decided to send chit in his room later.. which she sent by another boy..

When she reached the hut.. she saw both brothers standing there surprised.. She saw Dev's face lit up, seeing her and then she saw, Maan leaving from there, anger was clearly evident from his face..

Geet - suniye, please wait I want to talk to you..
Maan's ascending steps, seized there, though he didn't turn, Disappointment that crept Dev's face hearing, Geet stopping Maan, was clearly evident.. He again tried to interrupt and asked Maan to go..
Dev - Bro, you leave, I will handle the situation and explain everything to Geet..
Geet (in determined voice) - No, I said I want to talk to both of you,

Dev was taken a back with her voice.. He found it better to remain quiet and let her say what she want..

Geet (with all her attention towards Maan only) - What do you guys think of me, a toy having no emotions, with whom you will play until you satisfy your desire and throw to other.. I will not let anything like this to happen.. I want answers.. what was that, which happened in the engagement.. what's your plan.. what do you guys want from me..?
Maan remained silent, the traces of the anger on his face were only going deeper.. his teeth clenched and his hand tightly bound in a fist, he was looking like a volcano, wanted just a trigger to erupt and expel all the lava out..

Dev got a chance again to poke his leg in between..

Dev - wait Geet let me explain.. It was all planned for Daadi..
Geet (questioningly) - Daadi..?
Dev - Yes, and then Dev explained her entire plan.. that actually he is the one marrying her and they are faking all this just for Daadi's health sake
She passed an intense look to Maan, she felt like hitting him right then and there.. how could he let his brother to marry the girl, he himself got intimate with..or he is so used to of getting intimate with girls that, that night holds no importance for him at all.. She took a deep breath and turned towards Dev..
Geet - Dev, can you please excuse me and Maan for some moment, I want to talk something really important with him..
Dev - What do you want to talk with bro..? I explained you everything.. this is it.. if you want to ask something you can ask me.. I will help you..
Geet (in stern voice) - Dev I already listened, what you told me, now I want to listen something from your bro..
The threat in her voice was such that Dev found safety in moving away from there.. Leaving Geet and Maan behind to confront each other
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Edited by softly_spoken - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Speechless


ab magicia will have u for her DINNER

Nops dear she cant eat me... She is Diabetic and i m just sooo

Edited by softly_spoken - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Me sleeping Guys ...Will read in Morning ...

Good night Speechless

Good Night Softly Spoken


Please read the message i send u ,,its important
Edited by magicia - 13 years ago

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