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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow awesme
superb update again.
Plz update next part soon..
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome part👏.
I loved it.
continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Omg m waiting 4 the precap 2 happen
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome , brilliant part
continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome part...
That Bobby darling part was hilarious..
One look at MSK and geet's plan will fail...
Lets see how they welcome him..
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Posted: 14 years ago
welcum bk x
wow awsum update luvd it
cnt w8 2 read more
plzz cont sooon fanx 4 da pm x 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thank U Reva...😃

Yash is back...specially for U 😳 😆

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Posted: 14 years ago

PART 4

The whole college was gathered to see the first ever guy in their college. All the corridors,verandahs,grounds were filled with students like never before.Geet and gang were waiting near the front gate to welcome their new 'friend'

In this world,rich and full of feminity,entered he,Maan Singh Khurana!
The way he made an entry in his bike would have raised atleast 3500 heartbeats, 'dhak dhak dhak dhak dhak dhak' oops may be 3499 coz,minus Geet Handa! However not even Geet had the gut to present him those cosmetics after seeing his masculine aura! Is that we call the X factor!



In short it was a ,'he came,he saw and he conquered' moment!
The whole college stood their frozen,including some senior profs! Except Geet,there wasn't even a single person who couldn't stop admiring his looks,his style and ofcourse his toned body!
Very well aware of his star image, Maan parked his bike in style. As he took off his goggles,he could already hear the loud gasps of around 3000 girls! He walked to the VC's room with a smirk.


Geet and her friends stood frozen,their face all gone pale and white. Just then came an announcement from the VC's room.
'All girls are required to assemble at the auditorium immediately'

The MIT auditorium was filled with chirpy and vibrant girls.Suddenly there was pin drop silence as all those eyes fell on the only handsome guy following the VC to the stage.
Maan stood beside Mrs.Juliet as she moved towards the podium.
Juliet: Dear girls,for the first time in the history of MIT,a young man is joining our college. I believe he will be a good friend,guide and collegemate for you...
As Mrs.Juliet went on and on about this historical development in MIT, Maan's eagle eyes were scanning the hall. Somehow again and again,his gaze was fixed for a few more seconds at the far end of the hall. He couldn't help but admire the features of that girl,her rosy lips,almond brown eyes,curly hair...she lukd like a doll. He curiously stared at her as she pouted her lips
cutely as if someone had just snatched away her candy.Well,that naturally made him curious coz all others were staring at him as if he is some greek god.Being the Maan Singh Khurana,he is used to that kind of looks. But this girl,the aversion in her eyes for him was wat that attracted him the most. However his chain of thots were broken as Mrs.Juliet concluded her words.
Juliet: All i want to say is,plz don't treat Maan like an alien enemy. And now i would request Maan to say a few words to U!

As the crowd applauded,Maan lukd baffled.He never saw that coming.
On the other hand, at the far end of the hall,Geet could never miss the embarassment that she saw in his eyes. Now thats her chance.How could she not take the advantage of his lack of confidence to address a female crowd!

Out of the blue,NT came to the stage and welcomed him with a bouquet on behalf of the students.
As Maan Singh Khurana stood on the podium,the applause faded to hear what he had to say to them.
Before he could utter a word the same girl,
Geet(yelled at the top of her voice):oye chak de phatte!
The crowd roared.

Geet was xtremely happy. This is more than enough to break him,thot she. As if reading her thots, he started with a smirk,' Dear sisters...'
The crowd howled.
Geet happy!
Maan:ab ap logo ko aise bulane ka mera bilkul bhi mann nhe he,so Dear friends!

The crowd applauded heavily.
Geet frowned.
Maan: Actually,this is a 'correction home' for me,u know like a rehab! So its all ur responsibility to make me a 'good' person.

Geet(yelling):oye phikar na kar soniyo,hume jo bhi ata he apko 'sikha' denge..
Maan(smirks):mujhe jo bhi ata he wo..me bhi apko 'sikha' dunga!

NT,Tasha and group gave a thumbs down mocking Geet n Co.

Maan(continues): i don't have any hope that i will complete my term here.If in any case i behave like a gentleman,its only for Nivi aunt..sorry ma'm's sake.girls, plz don't misunderstand me.

The echoing applause showed how the students have welcomed their new friend,
ofcourse xcept Geet and Co.

As the applause faded, Mira walked upto the stage and made an announcement,'Friends, now Geet Handa will give a welcome speech for Maan on behalf of the students'

And then he saw her walking upto the stage. Strangely,he liked everything about her even though he could read her intentions very well.She moved to the podium giving him a filthy look.

Geet: My dear friends, this 'new college-mate' is obviously a 'well-built' 'well-lookin' and above all 'well-spoken' young man! Aren't we lucky? So i have planned 'a welcome song' for him!

The crowd clapped and whistled.
Geet: Jeena yeha marna yeha iske siwa jaana kaha...
Nivedita: Geet! Is this a welcome song?
Geet: sorry ma'm. To phir ek naya song gati hu 'ooh la la' latest he ma'm aur kaafi hit bhi he.

And then she started dancing around him


ooh la la ooh la la ooh la la ooh la la..tu he meri fantasy.. Na na na na na chu na na chu na na chu na na chu na na ab me jawan ho gayi...

Maan stood there trying hard to supress his laughter while the audience cheered up for Geet.
Finally Mrs.Juliet rose up from her seat.
Juliet: Geet! Come to my room NOW!
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PRECAP: MAANEET FIRST ENCOUNTER ON MAAN'S FIRST DAY.

Hope u enjoyed this one.

I am trying to be close to the original version. 😳
Your comments really give me confidence. So plzz do press LIKE and let me know ur COMMENTs.

Edited by madhubala123 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
superb update lovely
so maan got his girl from first look but wat abt our jhalli geet
she is seeing him a as if he is an alien
omg wat a start from maan cool yaar
and geet dint left any sign of defeat she too gave awesoem song yaar
and ooo trouble for geet has arrived by miss Juline
and wat a precap our maaneet encounter omg me in love with their talks and fight
continue soon me waiting
thanx for pm

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: zohafarheen

superb update lovely
so maan got his girl from first look but wat abt our jhalli geet
she is seeing him a as if he is an alien
omg wat a start from maan cool yaar
and geet dint left any sign of defeat she too gave awesoem song yaar
and ooo trouble for geet has arrived by miss Juline
and wat a precap our maaneet encounter omg me in love with their talks and fight
continue soon me waiting
thanx for pm

Thank U for the comments 😃

she too gave awesoem song yaar:😆 😆

our jhalli geet:pata nhe kya hoga 😳 but thats the right word for her 😉

will update asap...


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