Thread2 Maan Proposes Geet Disposes [Link/T3/152] - Page 70

Originally posted by: aashluvsmaan

*wipes sweat off her brow*

phewww😳

now i can rejoice openly😉

btw when u planning to put itup?

i have a patient in like 5 mins IFFF they come on time😡

Originally posted by: harshithaaa

amazing update...loved it...nice leap

Originally posted by: Cloud9.

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Originally posted by: Speechless

Originally posted by: LuvScooby

I like this...every life and story requires an interlude to bring about change, something new. This interlude is a perfect example of integrity and flavor of this story remaining static while your story telling is dynamic

Originally posted by: softly_spoken

Originally posted by: jazzerette

<font color="#006699">Powercut...see this is what happens when you curse me...just came back!</font>

Originally posted by: jazzerette

Originally posted by: mystique_girl

Amazing interlude !!

Really loved your switch between static and dynamic - you related them very well to the changes in their lives...

I also wished to show how in case of some people a passage of time can usher in a change (Vardaan) and how in case of some (Geet) change is merely a formality. The static and the dynamic are always at play. But their inter-relation is different for different people.

So Geet is a bit more matured now!

I loved the last few lines about the sabziwala and finally Maan's entry ..

😆

He's here at their house directly from his posting and looking for Geet ? Isnt it so opposite to his nature portrayed till now?

Bingo again! It wouldn't be something you would normally expect from him. But does he realize it? And if he does...then how would he react?

Pls update soon 😃

Originally posted by: Cloud9.

Stern face *Ignores someone named Jazzerette Jinxed*