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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
loved it loads
thanks for the pm..!! :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
wicked teaser
cant wait
update soon please..!! :)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Cloud9.



And coming to Maan when he said "Must I?" somehow i felt like it was one more thing to push him and that maybe he would have given gift to her or atleast consider it

I didn't follow you here. When Maan said "Must I?" it was to show his reluctance albeit the fact that he would eventually go through with it. Are we on the same page here?


While Ajaipal's sincere blessings had touched the daughter in her and evoked the same emotion in her as she reserved for her father; on the other hand, Savitri's lavish gifts did hold their appeal to the girl in her.
As a kid i was inclined to gifts as well but later on I kind of well.. i dont like taking gifts rather I love giving gifts. 😆 I'm weird anyways moving on.. the underlined sentences.. damn Jazz show me your brains. I want to do aarti to it. I love one thing in your writing most. Every scene will be evaluated with a "Why" which is something we don't find often.

Lolz...ask my family or friends. Why has been my favorite question from childhood. Anything that can't qualify a Why becomes the center of interest for me. And a quest for me.

The sister's plans to get the gift and think of the possibilities was quite adorable. I am surprised that Sammy Di was also in this mission :) Sammy being the strict one among the three was the reason i assumed her to chide them but her involvement was a pleasant surprise indeed. True whatever we are sometimes the "girl" factor in us takes over.

Sammy is actually the lead prankster among the 3 sisters. She is the one who always schemes and others follow. The constraint of writing a FF has made me neglect this aspect of her personality and life of the Handa sisters.

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Jimzi2716

So they meet again & he bought book as gift...good going Maanbabu..."aakhir hote hote pyar ho hi jata hai"...😳I understand that line now...but did he just left giving her gift or they did they talk??😛

One more awesome update Jazz...😳


He had left after giving her the gift. That was all he could manage.

Originally posted by: Jimzi2716

Its really hard to understand sociology😆Good to see progress in Geet-savitriji's relationship..😳


Maan ko sabziwala bana diya...lol...but Maan will be happy to see that his Geet is too much in to the gift he bought for her...😉
Lolz...he did not gift her the sociology book.😆

Mr.Vardaan yeh toofaan ke pehle ki shanti hai...waiting for next move of his story too😊
Glad you are liking his story too :)

This one is too short ...I want one more Jazz...😛

nice update Jazz...😊

Edited by jazzerette - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Cloud9.


I like Vardaan a lot.. for my own silly reasons you already know. It did feels good to feel belonged. And it is indeed a blessing to feel so. Somethings which are so normal to many would be somethings others crave for. And i truly understand how Vardaan feels. I always have a bitter sweet feeling reading about him. I am glad that he knew that their affections are not genuine. We often forget somethings when we get what we want but it is truly appreciable to know that he knew their true colors and that he would not fall for it hopefully. But i like him more for enjoying the little happiness for the time being. At the line "It felt good to belong" my heart constricted. And the lines i underlined ... I well love them. How about a personal chat on this?😆
Sure! Whenever you are free :)
It is easy to sway when you find something that you yearn for. Sometimes you invite that feeling even knowing that it could affect you.

He knew that their changed affections were not genuine. He knew that they had a hidden agenda.

But still it felt good to belong.

"Aren't you worried Vardaan? All these changes, all these affectionate gestures'"

"I have nothing to worry about Adi," Vardaan grinned at his only friend, Captain Aditya Patel, "I have been emotionally scarred to the extent that I wouldn't feel the hurt of their betrayal. And when it comes to my inheritance, legally it is so secure that I wouldn't lose anything. Whatever they are planning to do could not be big enough to make me feel small again in life."

"Marriage did well by you."

"Hmm. It is a beautiful feeling to belong to someone. For someone to belong to you." Adi looked at his friend meaningfully.

Vardaan gazed at the languid flow of the river. Slow but steadily heading towards its goal.

Every man has it inherent in him; a need to feel belonged. Every man seeks a family.

And for all the strength I claim, my heart yearns for it too.
It does. For a man like Vardaan who never had the "love" from a family he sure wants to have a person to love him.. to be belonged. Jazzy get Sammy into the picture a pweej.
In due time!

Social change refers to any significant alteration over time in behavior patterns and cultural values and norms'Social change refers to any significant alteration over time in behavior patterns and cultural values and norms'Social change refers to any significant alteration over time in behavior patterns and cultural values and norms'Arghhh!! Geet slammed her book shut, "I hate Sociology!"

I tell you I read the very definition for 3 times and I didn't get it so i moved on 😆 typical me. I can understand Geet's hatred for the subject🤣
😆😆...btw if I tell you that by eliminating one word in this definition the sentence becomes easier to understand you will whack at me😛

Especially because I personally hate my own subjects.😆
I sometimes identify myself with Geet. In order to follow Mamma's orders I sometimes behave silly. Geet is involved in her studying so i don't blame her. Well you do realize I wouldn't blame her EVER!😆
Ofcourse *rolls eyes*

But I was amused at Maan's voice. Ah i can give all my property just to see his confused expression at that instant. And by property I mean BS😆
BS?😲
Update super sooonnn

Edited by jazzerette - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: bharadwajrad

Ah finally, thank u jazz dear...will edit comment after reading the update 😃


edited:
Loved Vardan's positive attitude...that poor fellow deserves more happiness 😊 Adi is cute 😊 So he is also an army guy...any chance of him becoming friends with Maan as he is going to Roorkee??
2+2 = 4!!! 😆
The interlude is superb and so is Geet's concentration...😆 so much that she didnt notice her poor fianc standing at the door 😆 haha 😃

I am so happy that Maan is back...but sad that you didnt write about Geet's reaction at his gift...not fair Jazz ji..I was waiting for that actually 😉
Everything has a time. Eventually you would know that too.

In all, I LOVED THE UPDATE!!!! and actually feeling terrible at the moment that I am gonna miss it for the next 3 months during which I know u would have update a lot...so wait for my extremely long comment that I am gonna write once I come back from my so called study holidays 😆
Love u jazz for the wonderful update that includes ah my favorite physics even though technically it doesnt mean the actual definitions of statics and dynamics but yes atleast it includes the terms that I so love 😊
will miss u loads dear...thank u and I hope u will update loads before I come back 😃
Hope you have rocking boards!!

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: abinash079

awesome update
u have taken a year leap good to see the pace of the story
continue soon


Thank you😊

Originally posted by: Remya_Pillai

small one but cute..

but who s ds sabziwaala😉?


As if you don't know

Originally posted by: ksasi

interesting.😉
who is the person at door step? is he maan?


I thought the color coding gave it away already!😆

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Vidushi89

Hmm...social changes...lol
Leap...great.
Nice part.

Thanks for the pm.


Heyya!

Glad you enjoyed the part.

Originally posted by: Krishnaluv94

Great update, Jazz! Loved the way Geet and S's relationship has progressed. Can't wait to read about Maan's visit! Thanks for the update!


Thanks yaar :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
😍
one step closer to update
😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
hiii jazzz lots of chummies to u...
so sorry for not commenting for ages 😭🤢...
but me was so busyyy with my so called studies...i finally got rid of my xams...so am enjoyin my few days of freedom before getting again tied up by my studiessszzz

how are u
and wishing you a veryyy happpyyy new year...
love u

muahhh

reva

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