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Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#21

Aha! Muahz xoxo...for being back! :-D

You have a knack for putting emotions into words and they turn out so right. Your words can put a clear image of the scenario and place the reader into the characters shoes to experience their feelings in that scenario. Kudos!

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Escapist

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Posted: 14 years ago

#22

Wow...at least you wrote something to satiate my desire for reading good work and that too on the romantic front... :D

Nice one...lets see how things shape up but Maan doesn't seem to be the ruthless and cruel man he seems more calm n collected and someone you wished for :)

Looking forward to it!

Cheers,
Fatima

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Posted: 14 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: mandymore
Beautifully written,luvd it
curious to knw whts maan thinkng abt d kiss 😊

Thanks Mandy. Now what is really Maan making of the kiss? Even i'm thinking about it.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: Dreamy_Mystique

but u make even the most rehashed themes look like a new book...
i have read ur works...
and i feel there is something really enchanting and intriguing about ur stories, that keeps me calling again and again...to read and reread it...and i am sure u r going to give us a wonderful visual treat that wud mentally stimulate my unused and rusted brain...

Oh! god now you are raising the bar for me...Thank you.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: jyoti_l
maaneet have some magic in them...which makes us think abt them all the time...😆
if u havent thought furthur then dont...just go with the flow...
write what u r thinking...
u r a wonderful writer n when u pen down ur words they also create magic...
we love to read what u write...😳

Well I do have some options, but not sure how much of it will come down in paper as is...I agree on Maneet and hence the decision to further this OS and not the other one.

Thanks again...

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Posted: 14 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: Holyna
amazingly written!! 🤗

Thank you :)

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Posted: 14 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: Boogleton.Schiz
I read the first part on the EHMMBH (phew! super long name) forum, I am glad I stumbled across this. Brilliantly written, I really didn't think they would get married (or you'd continue this)
I'm eagerly waiting to see what you have in store for us.

Oh! lord...you are here! Now I have to think of something that actually have to make sense...

Well it was surprising to me as well that I chose to write this one, just so you know.

Thanks for stopping by.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: richiii
loved it hasini...
continue soon...

Thank you :)

Originally posted by: maan-ki-sanjana
I loved it!😃

Thanks Sanjana

Originally posted by: sindu555
bookmarking 😊

I hope you get to read it.

Originally posted by: MSgayatri
nice start
luved it

Ah! thanks

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568124

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Posted: 14 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: Lyla
R...

Now what do I write for disappearing comments?

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Posted: 14 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: Ramhari
Welcome back Hasini
You were terribly missed.
The M&G version was great though the original one was equally good
The continuation was superb.
uh oh she was finally forced into marriage
She was so so guilty to have taken her sisters place
Reminded me of Roja movie.
Looks like Maan has something else going on in his mind
Wonder what his thoughts are
Continue soon
Happy Halloween
Hima

Thanks for catching on...exactly my dilemma in furthering the story as it carries many similarities to Roja. Although I do want to have my spin on it...Phew! but all ideas have been tried and tested now.

I have no intentions to prove anything with the story except to keep in touch with you all, so let's see how this unfurls. Ah! yes...the Maans in my FFs can't be dumb as an ass to just go by a kiss now, can they?

Thanks Hima.