|Redolence| NOTE On Page 32

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Welcome To One and All,

I am Amal. And most of you will know me as the writer of 'Yet Another Sunset' and few one shots. So this is my New AR Mini FF. Its going to be a short FF of probably 6-10 parts. I haven't done the proper calculation as yet. I just wanted to write it, now that I am free of my examinations. I wanted to experiment on a new theme, something I haven't seen before anywhere. Chapter 1 does not reveal it. You will have to wait for that one. I will be updating both of my works simultaneously. The title. I don't why this one came up. It was the first thing that came to my head when I was thinking about this story. Hoping that you guys will enjoy this one. <3

Love and prayers,
Amal

Redolence

Chapter 1: Seeking Answers

"Dad, what do you mean by a girlfriend?" his nine year old asked him and he choked on his coffee and spilled them as his boy gave him an innocent look.

"What?", he asked in disbelief, hoping he heard it wrong.

"Girlfriend, Dad. What is it? What do you do with it?," he repeated.

Armaan thought he would have a heart attack just then.

"Where exactly did you hear this from?" he questioned Ryan, bringing him closer by his shoulders.

"Everyone in school was talking about gf gf gf and all the awesome times with them. And I din't understand a word. So I asked Dave. He laughed and told me it means girlfriend and he laughed at me for not knowing it. So." he answered with pure impeccability.

"Okay.Umm. See its when. Mmm. Its when you have a girl as a person who is close to you." Armaan phrased his explanation as simply as possible.

"Then I will have more than 10 girlfriends right. Sneha, Tessie, Irene, Janet, Lucy, Jenny-" he tailed off to remember more names. His father slapped a hand on his cheeks, wondering how to close this topic.

"Ryan. Its not having so many people. It's just one person. Someone really close. A girl you can share everything with.Okay. Now go and change. Dad needs to go for work and you are coming with me, today. Okay."

"Mmm. Okay Dad." His little head hadn't understood the exact meaning. But his dad's orders weighed more and so he went to his bedroom to dress up. He had his vacations now and since his dad din't like baby sitters, he took him along to his work.

*

"What are you thinking, Ryan?" Armaan asked at his unusually quiet son, on this other side of the car.

"Nothing, Dad", he answered moodily.

"Okay." Armaan said, knowing well that Ryan would come to him if there was anything bothering him.

"Dad," he called after minutes of silence as Armaan stopped the car at the red signal.

"Yeah"

"Can we call mothers girlfriends?" His voice sounded strained.

Armaan suddenly found himself at a loss for words. What was he supposed to say to his son, who had grown without a mother for most of his life?

Gathering up courage, he replied honestly, "Yeah, something like that."

"So, that's why I don't have a girlfriend, right?" Although he voiced his doubts confidently, Armaan knew his little boy would burst open any time soon. He would sleep on Armaan's chest after crying out his heart's content, tonight. He knew it. Knew it well.

"It's not like that, Ryan. Your mom will always be with you. Okay. Just that you can't see her." he whispered, softly.

Ryan nodded.

*

"Dr.Armaan, I have a patient in ICU. I want you to give a consult." Rahul said, walking upto him.

"Yeah, I am coming" answered Armaan shortly.

Rahul gazed at his colleague cum friend and realized that Armaan needed a moment.

*

Armaan looked at the image of his sister and his jeeja ji, smiling. He reminisced everything. It wasn't blurred at all. It came to him in a flow. How their death in his 2nd year of medical school shattered him and his family. How he agreed to be like a father to his nephew. How he agreed to be the life time guardian to his sister's only son. It hurt. Now he knew that his for long son was missing his mother, just like he was missing his sister. What could he do? Deep down he knew the answer. But it wasn't that he wasn't ready. No one wanted to marry a man who already had a kid to raise, nowadays. He had wiped the idea of it long before itself. He got up, leaving everything to fate.

*

That's It Guys. Comments? Likes? Give me anything. I look forward to them. Love ya all


Links To Other Works

Yet Another Sunset(AR FF) https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1870672/yet-another-sunset-5-ar-newthreadlinkonpage150
The Avalon (OS Gallery) https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1640990
Index
Chapter 1: Seeking Answers On Page 1
Chapter 2: Speechless On Page 7
Chapter 3 : Him and Her On Page 17
Chapter 4 : Strange On Page 22


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Yes bacchi, my laptop is fixed 🤣 and its good that its fixed because now i can comment and hopefully make you feel a bit better...because it makes me sad when you're sad 😭 I'm sure everything will get better 😃 and OMKAJEN at the beginning i thought that the little boy was armaan 🤣🤣 and i got such a big shock when i found out that armaan was the dad 😲😲😲 and ROFL armaan choked on his coffee 🤣🤣 Once, i was drinking coffee and my mum told me that my sister made it and i was so shocked that i spit out the coffee on my mums face 🤣 My poor maa 🤣 i was shocked because my sister couldn't even spread butter properly on toast even though she was 13 then. she's 15 now 🤣Anyway, sholly bacchi i'm drifting off topic 😳 and the way ryan asks so cutely...what do you do with a girlfriend is so cute 🤣 and i LOVE armaan as the over protective father...it is so cute 🤣 he seems so protective of his little boy..and i can tell because he nearly had a heart attack 🤣🤣🤣 BUT SERIOUSLY I CAN'T BELIEVE THAT AMMY HAS A CHILD 😲😲😲 ROFL bechara ammy, he doesn't know how to explain...a girl who is close to you? 🤣🤣🤣 And then ryan thinks he has so many girlfriends...he is so innocent...i love this FF already 🤣🤣
and aww my ammy is just like me...because he doesn't like babysitters like me 🤣 I just don't trust babysitters 😳😳 When i have a child i'll never have a babysitter...i mean seriously who would let a random stranger look after their innocent cute child? 😕 There are so many stories about babysitters kidnapping children and killing them...i will always take care of my child myself...or have someone i trust take care of them like my best friend or sister 🤣🤣 But i love children so much...i wanna be a paediatrician when i'm older 😃 that would be the best job ever...looking after children all day 🤣🤣 when ryan said can mothers be girlfriends i was laughing so much 🤣🤣🤣 but then when i realised that ryan hasn't grown up with his mother...i felt so bad :( i completely misinterpreted this FF...at first i thought that this FF was about armaan who was married to someone with a child...and that person could be riddhima 😃😃 or i thought he was married to someone but he wasn't happy with them and he fell in love with riddhima. But now i'm shocked 😲😲 has ammys wife died? 😕
and OMKAJEN Ryan is so cute. And when you said that armaan knew that ryan would cry and sleep with his head on ammys lap, i was so sad, i felt like crying 😭😭😭 He's such a little boy and its harsh that he doesn't have a mother...why does this happen to people, how is it fair 😭 This has made me so depressed..i wanna hide in a corner and cry. Why am i so senti? Armaans sister and jeejaji died? Why do bad things always happen to good people...this is a question i've wanted to know all my life. Why? Why is a mother snatched away from her son? why is a brother left alone, missing his sister? why is a father separated from his son? Why is a little boy left an orphan? why does a man have to sacrifice all his dreams and hopes to take care of his nephew? I HATE THIS. That little innocent boy won't even remember his parents. And armaaan...i feel so sad for him! His sister and jeejaji died? I can't imagine living without my sister. Yes, we fight a lot but i love her so much...and i tell my sister everything..i tell her everything that i can't tell my parents...i can't imagine not having her in my life. I don't understand how armaan can live...his sister is gone and he has to take on such a big responsibilty, of a child all alone. What i'm liking about this FF is that its realistic...and only you can make me so depressed with your writing bacchi...but that shows me how good you are at writing :) and i wanna know who armaans sister and jeejaji is...because if its anji and champ then i might kill myself :| because i love my champ 😭😭😭😭
and C O N G R A T U L A T I O N S :) i am so happy that you started a new FF. and this storyline is so unique...this is what i love so much about all your FF's, they are so unique and amazinggg...they are just so different from other FFs! and now i've finished my bhashan...sholly for rambling so much! AND HAHAHAHAHAHA I'M FIRST. IT DOESN'T MATTER IF I'M NOT FIRST IN ANY OF THE OTHER CHAPTERS BECAUSE I WAS THE FIRST PERSON WHO COMMENTED ON THE FF. I WINNN...SHAME ON YOU SG...CHUDAIL, BHOOT, DEVILISH ANGEL, INNOCENT DEVIL, CSG...I BEAT YOUUU :P
Edited by kajen_hamesha - 13 years ago
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Amalll...OMKSG...This is just beyond my imagination my baby... you write flawlessly...Awwiee Ryan is so adorable...So Ryan is Armaan's nephew...Love the way you show the pain of A small kid who is craving for her mother love...Armaan and his bond with Ryan...Too adorable... THE CONCEPT AND THE STORY JUST TOUCHED MY HEART...Really really looking forward to more so do try to update soon...Take care

PS: I was wondering ki Mein kabhi 1st hongi phi ya nahi...😔

Lots of Love

GEET

Edited by sweetdesire - 13 years ago
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Okay So My Dear Basket..Here goes your comment.

Firstly, I Love the Title. Its meaning is Sweet smelling,as you told me...but more than that, I love the way it gives a warm,fuzzy, warmly tingling feeling. Beautiful,seriously. I Loved it :) You are a PRO,Basket...Why don't you just admit it?

Part 1 Was adorable! Ryan was super cute,asking what a girlfriend mean. It nearly cracked me up, LOL. And bechara Armaan had a hard time trying to explain it to him! :P Aww, that bit was uber-sweet. Made me smile like :) Aww Ryan doesn't have a mom? That broke my heart...So sad yaar! But I loved the relationship you showed between Armaan and Ryan. It is so sincere,true and hearttouching <3 Your writing is beauty basket, will make anyone,ANYONE go speechless <3 So he's taking care of his nephew's son? Thats so nice of him...Armaan,I Love you <3 Beautifully written,Basket <3

Part 2: I adored how you showed Shashank as a Good man 😲 Anyways, I loved their convo...and Riddhima's shyness. So Cute :D And he's clearly smitten by her MUAHAHA :P LMAFAO the next bit was hilarious! The nurses gawking at Armaan, as usual...:P But anyways, I would've done the same so LOL. Aww Ryan And Armaan together are so cute!! <3 Lovee <3 The next bit was cute again..And Shocking. Riddhima is mute? Good Lord. I can unserstand Armaan's feelings of heaviness..And I'm so curious now as to what will happen!

Update soon!
Love ya,
Your Armaan <33

Edited by ..Maitree.. - 13 years ago
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awesome!!
contd soon
plz pm me (:
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Awesome idea..do continue with it...
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OMKSG Amalll...I so love you yaar🤗...you are just the best...I am so so Happy...
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Originally posted by: sweetdesire

OMKSG Amalll...I so love you yaar🤗...you are just the best...I am so so Happy...


😳..I love you too dii. Happy because I am writing too much? Hahaha. I am not leaving a minute go waste when I can write. How I feel good now that my exams are done with. And I have nothing but writing in front of me? Pure content. <3333

Thank You everyone for that super quick response. Dint expect it within minutes and that too without PMs. Love ya all. <3
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EEKSS I AM SO HAPPYYY!!!!! i can't believe you're writing a mini FF...i'm so excited. now i'm gonna go and read the part :) and YESSS FOR THE FIRST TIME IN LIKE 3 MONTHS I'M FIRSTT 😃😃😃😃
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Originally posted by: kajen_hamesha

EEKSS I AM SO HAPPYYY!!!!! i can't believe you're writing a mini FF...i'm so excited. now i'm gonna go and read the part :) and YESSS FOR THE FIRST TIME IN LIKE 3 MONTHS I'M FIRSTT 😃


Nor can I. But I guess the temptation was too much. Heheh. I KNEW IT. I just knew you would bring that up. Hahahah. Read and tell me your sincerest opinions. <3 ya

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