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Posted: 13 years ago
mulakat
part 18


The day for which all are waiting is arrived with full of energy, enthusiasm, excitement and uncountable happiness. Wedding day start with haldi in morning and wedding in evening. It is most valuable day of couple's life.

Haldi starts. Geet is sitting in yellow salwar suit.


She is surrounded by all ladies. All are waiting for starting signal so that they can start their turn. Rano lovingly apply haldi first on geet's feet then on her hand and lastly on her face. She cares her forehead and kissed geet with moist eyes. Geet is is also feeling burning sensation in her eyes. Before they can say anything young crowd took charg under gidence of raji and start to apply haldi to geet. They didn't left single place without haldi. They all are equally having it on their hand and face.

Haldi se rang nikhar aata hai, ab dekhana jiju apni nazar hata hi nahi payenge

Are jiju waise hi nazar nahi hatate ab to unki khair nahi, kyun didi

With this raji side hugged geet. Geet is unable to speak due to the continuous butterflies in her stomach. Maan's name is adding fire to it.

At KM

At KM haldi ceremony is started. Dadi apply haldi on maan's face.

She said

Maan aap aaj ek naye jindagi me kadam rakhane ja rahe hai. To ye uski shurwaat hai.

Maan just smiled and nodded his head. Then annie took charge. She started to apply a lot haldi which start to irritate maan

Annie bus hogaya

Bus kaise ho gaya abhi to aapko bhabhi ke rang me rangne ke liye thodi haldi aur lagani padegi na. bus last

OK last and then stop

Annie smiled cutely and applies a lot more haldi. She then left place giggling, before maan catch her. Maan smiled at her mischieve. Dadi is having high time to control her laugher by seeing maan's condition.



Wedding hall in the evening

All family members of geet are waitng for barat. Barat comes will all loud sounds of music. Dancing and fire work is showing all over. Annie pulled raji also for dance. They dance for some time and finally maan come forward and takes blessings of elders. Rano greeted dadi. They all come in where jaymala has to be done. Maan's eyes are searching for geet. Geet comes down by stairs. She can feel gaze following her. But she didn't dare to look in those eyes. She knows once she looks, she will get lost in those. So she keeps her eyes glued to floar. She reached in front of maan few inches away from him. Still she doesn't dare to look up. She heard rano saying

Geet beta jaimala pehnao

Now she has to look up. She looks up and can see mirror image of her feelings at moment in those eyes. She shyly bends forward and place garland around maan's neck. She can clearly see now more happiness in those eyes which belongs to her now for forever.

Then maan place garland around her neck. She shivers due to his slightest touch. She can feel happiness is rushing through her vein. Maan is getting more happy.

Now it's time for havan. Geet and maan are sitting beside each others.


Panditji is chanting mantras. He told to bride and groom to start phere. He told them to hold the hands. The moment they hold hand, a current rush through their bodies. Their eyes meet which speeks their own language. They took 4 phere when maan is in front. They take later 3 phere when geet is in front.


Maan ties mangalsutra on geet's neck


and fills her maang with sindhur. They finally become husband and wife for life. This is happiest moment. This moment make them feel that they are made for each other,

ek najuk se par sabse pakke bandhan me bandh gaye sada ke liye

Now it's time for kanya daan. Geet's heart skips a bit. Maan can feel it. He holds her hand firmly assuring her that he is with her. Then they had dinner.

Now vidaai time. All are crying, but the satisfaction of getting achha damad can be seen on their faces. All are saying bye to Geet and maan.

They both get into the car. Geet is still crying. Maan holds her hand


and wipes her tears with other hand.

Geet ab rona band bhi karo. Main tumhe hamare ghar yun rote huye nahi lejana chahta.

She can see the eagerness in his voice for their new life's good start. She also want the same. So she nodded her head.

Aise nahi muskurake

She blushed with his authority and smiled to him.

They reached KM. geet and maan are welcomed with all rituals by dadi.


so how is shadi

comments karo na yaar

previous----part 17

next ---part 19

Edited by pritm - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Maaneet4eve

res


edited.

Written beautifully



thanks yaar
you make me feel good
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Posted: 13 years ago
Fabulous update dear, loved the way you explained their excitement for marrying each other.
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Posted: 13 years ago


beautiful...

now they are binded together for entire life...

thanx for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
PART 1
since i have just started reading it, i m thinking at this point that it seems to be a interesting read.i have enjoyed it too.
PART 2
i hope Maan follows her home, so he knows which is her house. i did not read any introductionds being done ?? does this mean that Maan and Geet have no idea about their names ??
PART 3
aha so my Question is answered. Maan not only stayed back like a gentleman aascertaining that
Geet reached home safely but he also knows her name and birthday . Lage raho Maan Babu !!!
lolz Maan is not only excited but so imaptient to meet her. loving Dadi too.
PART 4
hai hai hai mein to marjawa !! that is all i can say for this chapter.
PART 5
hmmm so everything is goin gon well oiled wheels but for some reason i m thinking everything is too smooth . what is the catch in the upcoming chapters ??
PART 6
oooh how sweet Geet and Rajji relation is.
lolz Geet and Maan forgot to exchange phone numbers ... hehhehehe !!
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Posted: 13 years ago
yeah...marriage done...it was beautiful
waiting for SR now
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: asdj

PART 1
since i have just started reading it, i m thinking at this point that it seems to be a interesting read.i have enjoyed it too.
PART 2
i hope Maan follows her home, so he knows which is her house. i did not read any introductionds being done ?? does this mean that Maan and Geet have no idea about their names ??
PART 3
aha so my Question is answered. Maan not only stayed back like a gentleman aascertaining that
Geet reached home safely but he also knows her name and birthday . Lage raho Maan Babu !!!
lolz Maan is not only excited but so imaptient to meet her. loving Dadi too.
PART 4
hai hai hai mein to marjawa !! that is all i can say for this chapter.
PART 5
hmmm so everything is goin gon well oiled wheels but for some reason i m thinking everything is too smooth . what is the catch in the upcoming chapters ??
PART 6
oooh how sweet Geet and Rajji relation is.
lolz Geet and Maan forgot to exchange phone numbers ... hehhehehe !!



thank you for analysis
hope you enjoy all other part also

hmmm so everything is goin gon well oiled wheels but for some reason i m thinking everything is too smooth . what is the catch in the upcoming chapters ??

every thing going smooth can't be digested na
but some times life suprises you with it's power
keep commenting
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Posted: 13 years ago
mulakat
part 19

After welcome every one left as they are tiered. Now it's only maan, geet, dadi and annie.

Geet aaj se aap hamare ghar ki bahu ban gayi hai. Par aap hamare liye hamari beti bankar aayi hai.

And she kissed geet's forhead.

Aap thak gayi hongi, jake annie ke kamre me so jayiye. Puja ka muhurat do din baad ka hai tab tak aap ko annie ke kamre me hi sona padega. Maan aap bhi ja ke so jayiye.

(there is puja done by married couple for happy married life before cosummation. Before that puja married couple can't stay with each other at night. It is strictly followed.)

Geet blushed on that and maan feel embrassed. Dadi smirked at their condition. These two days are definitely testing their patience. Maan half heartedly looked at geet and left from there. Geet also goes with annie in her room.

They both know this is going to happen but doesn't realize these days can be that much frustrating. Being in the one house and can't even talk alone. they only still glances from each others.

Now it is Thursday, their day or say day at end will bring their first night.

Both can feel the excitement. The day start with all pleasant morning.

They both had special bath. They get ready for puja.

It is first time after marriage they are sitting this close to each other. The feeling of unknown desire is increasing in between them. The close proximity is adding fire to it.

Puja started, both are steeling glances from each others now and then. Puja is going on for more than an hour.

Puja ends and panditji ask them to take blessings from elders. They take blessings. Now they sit beside each others for eating. All are looking to them from corner of eyes through out eating. When they finished one of maan's relative come and said

ab ye khayiye

they look at it. It is laung (clove).


She gives it to geet. Geet takes it and about to take it in mouth when lady said

akele hi khane ka irada hai kya? Isse aise nahi khate. Aap iss ko aada mooh me rakho. Baki aada Maan bhai saab apne mooh se todke khayenge.

Geet becomes red due to blush. Maan knows these people are not going to listen as it is also part of rasm, so he looks at geet and nodded.

Geet take laung and keep half of it in her mouth. She is feeling goose bump. Maan comes closer. He bends and takes half laung in his mouth. He controls himself from touching geet's lips. This proximity is testing his patience. He immediately cut laung by his teeth and move backword. He find geet whole red and lowering her eye lashes.

All clapped for them and teased them a lot. All day pass by cheering up and teasing session. Geet is getting nervous and excited for her apecial moment with her maan. While maan is also waiting for the moment when geet becomes his in all aspects.

At night maan is about to enter room when annie stop him.

Itni aasani se nahi bhai. Entry fees to dete jao.

Kya hai entry fees?

Ek lakh gyara hazar ekso gyara (1,11,111) rupaye

Itna specific kyun

Appki shadi bhi to 2011 me hui hai

OK

Maan give annie money. She kissed him on cheeks.

Thanks bhai. Ab jaiye bhabhi aap ka intazaar kar rahi hai

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Maan open the door and enter into room-- their room. Room is decorated with red roses. He can smell it. Candles are glowing. Geet is sitting on the bed with her legs folding. She is wearing a red ghagra choli. Her face is covered by duppatta. She can hear door opening and maan enering in. her heart beats are increasing rapidly. Maan comes near bed. His heart is also denied to beat normally long ago.

Maan comes and sit in front of geet. He is having high time to control himself. These two days created strom in him. Now he wanted to calm down all stroms with love of geet. Geet senses his presence; she curled her fingers in feast.

Maan slowly take dupatta in his hand and moved it to her head. He keeps looking at her. Her face is glowing. Blush on cheeks. Eyes are looking down. Trembling lips.

He touched her chin and makes her look into his eyes. She looks into his eyes and keeps looking in it. So much love and passion, all for her. She feel more blushed. She can't take more of his gaze so she closed her eyes.

Next moment she fells his lips on her fore head. A current passed through her body at such speed that makes her feel, she can lose any moment her heart beat. She opened her eyes to see him so close. They can feel each others breath. They can hear rising heart beats.

Geet hugged maan tight. Maan also hugged her with passion. They remain in hug for few min to sink in the presence, passion, love, night of togetherness, starting of new phase of life.

Maan slowly open the necklace hook and takes it off.


Geet shivers with his touch. Maan take geet's hand in his and started to ramove bangles one by one. Geet tightly shut her eyes. Maan kissed geet's hand.

Maan next remove dupatta from her head. He comes near her ear and removed her earings followed by kissing her ears.


Geet moves restlessly. But maan hold her and kissed her cheeks which becomes totally red. Then he kisses her jaw line.

Finally maan take her lips in his with all passion. Geet is also waiting for this. She started to respond. Their kiss becomes passionate one. Maan entered geet's mouth and taste every corner of her mouth. Geet can feel equal passion which is running in her vein at this moment.

Maan opened the dori of her choli. Geet shuddered with this act.


A new burring sensation passed through her body. Maan and geet separate for some air. Maan then move to her neck, kissing her and at the same time making her lay on the bed.

He slowly rise and once again kissed geet.


His hands are roaming on her back. He opened her choli. Maan start to kiss her every where on exposed part. Before removing her choli he placed geet's hand on his sherwani's battons. Geet opened the buttons of his sherwani. Maan then take of his sherwani. Geet is memorized by his body, the six pack abs. she get lost by looking at him.

She comes back to reality when maan removed her choli. She shied and hides her in his embrace. Maan is memorized with her milky skin. His hands are roaming freely on her back. He removed last barrier also. Now they can feel each other without any barrier. Maan started to kiss geet from neck. His teasing is unbearable to geet. He moved down to her cleavage. He doesn't leave a single inch on her skin of upper body untouched by his lip.

Geet is moaning continuously. This sweat tourcher is taking to new world. Maan then kissed geet on her lips. But his hands moved down and untie her ghagra. She totally get in to flow of maan now. Maan removed every barrier between them.

Theie bodies are glued to each others. The passion, desires are totally at top.

With a swift movement maan entered her. She feels pain but maan take her pain by kissing her deeply.

They both are in each others arm panting and sweeting. Geet kissed maan's chest on left side.

You make me complete maan

No geet we make each other complete and that to for forever.

Love you maan

Love you too JAAN

Geet's blush says it that she loved to be called jaan. She takes maan's lips in her to make him feel how much she liked JAAN,

MAAN KI JAAN




i am 😳

don't know how it come up

tell me how it is?

kanjusi mat karo

next part will be LAST part

previous --- part 18

last part


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Edited by pritm - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsome part



last part



plus epilogue tooo
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome for both parts
Emotions were beautifully portrayed in part 18
Part 19 was hot..i was also blushing
Cont soon
Luv
TC
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