Mayur OS Gallery- First Attempt

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey you guys, so I'm an avid reader but for once I decided to try my hand at writing. I absolutely adore the FF's and OS's of writers such as Fantasia, Mulan and Shivi and became inspired to write one. Please comment and criticize ! Silent readers press the like tab !

So here it goes:

Good Morning Beautiful !- Nupur woke up from her deep slumber only to find herself being cradled in the arms of a special someone. As she fluttered her eyelashes and blinked to get a clearer view, the telltale blush appeared. A shy smile adorned her face and she stared, as if in a daze, at her most prized possession. It was none other than her Sadu Sharma/ worlds most adorable, handsome and loving husband greeting her with his ever so husky voice.

A very good morning to you too, Mr. Sharma. Nupur replied as she snuggled closer to him.

He propped himself on his elbows and leaned closer to his wife to get a better view of her beautiful face. He brought his hand forward and caressed her cheeks with a hypnotizing motion, adoring her skin as if it were made of glass. He chuckled to himself as he saw her cheeks turn into a deep crimson hue.

Ofoo Nupur, its been 2 months of our marriage and you're still blushing ? I must change this habit.

She gazed at him while furrowing her eyes as if to question "how?"

He winked as a naughty glint overtook his otherwise deep, soulful eyes. Well honey, if I told you, the explanation would be futile. How about I prove how to make you more comfortable around me? He leaned dangerously close and tilted his head.

Mayank, no ! Abhi aapko ready bhi hona hai ! If you have forgotten hubby dearest,let me remind you, you're supposed to return back to office today after your three month break ! Gotta keep up with all the praises in the magazines of you being the very best in the finance world honey, now go get ready!

Ahan, someone's been reading a lot about me ? So much for the arrogance you showed when we met on that business trip !

Nupur giggled as she saw her husband pouting ! That was because its absolutely bizzare to confess your love, that too after a mere 2 hours to a stranger in a business conference!

Well, you know what they say ! When its right, its right ! Now how about you let me wish you good morning in a proper way?

Nope, not at all ! You are going and getting ready, office nahin'

Nupur gasped as her words were cut short by Mayank's lips inching close to hers

She immediately closed her eyes in anticipation of what was going to come next.

Mayank noticed this and smiled meaningfully. He quickly withdrew his face so as to tease his 3 month old wife a little.

Acha, if you say so then I'll go and get ready.

Nupur's eyes snapped open as she noticed Mayank moving away.

Maine toh aise hi keh diya..

She lowered her eyes as she realized what she was going to say !

Nakhre ! Women and their sly ways..

WOMEN? I see, you seem to be knowledgeable about them and their ways. How about you elaborate ? Nupur glared at him as her nose began to get red.

Mayank bit his tongue as he realized how dangerous this generalization was going to prove.

Nupur, tum bhi na ! Why are we discussing these matters, I was just generalizing !

You better be, otherwise... Nupur stated meaningfully while bringing him closer aggressively with the collar of his shirt. His elbows lost balance and he struggled to stabilize himself on top of Nupur

Otherwise what ? Asked Mayank with what appeared to be a smirk but was actually him hiding his grin.

Otherwise, you are sleeping in the guest room tonight !

Is that a threat ? Mayank asked as he raised his eyebrows ?

Samajdaar log khud hi samajh jate hain, replied nupur with a smirk that mimicked Mayank's

Really ? Main samajhne main nahin, samjhane mein believe karta hoon. And with this Mayank placed his lips on Nupur's to convey his love, appreciation and promise that he would always be faithful to his one and only Morena Express.

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SAISakura16 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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It's a very cute OS!!! Mayur are adorable as always!! Please do keep writing!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey dear it was so cute n adorable...😳
luvlyyy one...Do write more...n u do write well sweets..😳
Annu😃

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Posted: 13 years ago
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That's refreshing and an admirable first attempt. :D

You should write more.
Thanks for the PM :D

- You-Know-Who :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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First & foremost- thank u annu di 4 pming me abt her os.

Kiran m honourd by ur mention.
Very cute os. U shud deffo write more:)
one thing dear-do use invertd commas for dialogues.

Happy diwali!
kirti123 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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lovely os
do write more😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awww... this is such a beautiful OS sis!!! <3
thanks tyo anu i came across this through her pm and trust me u should carry on writing dear casue u write BEAUTIFULLY!!! <3 l oved the romance, love in teh air aura of the OS!! :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Annu_Arti_Mayur

hey dear it was so cute n adorable...😳
luvlyyy one...Do write more...n u do write well sweets..😳
Annu😃


THANKS A TON GIRL FOR PM-ING PEOPLE <3 love you for it !
crazymayurian thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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this is an amazing piece of writing
and i must say u should continue writing
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey it was adorable n verry cute OS

do write more n plz pme en u do

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