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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: FIRESafiReFIRE

ello.. here you go back again.. updating :)


just read two part
awesome
now getting next one
waiting anxiously
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow thanks we are waiting ... can read this on and on...
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG another update...
ohh its my lucky day i cant wait
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: paponecon

sorry to say...but want to say something...everytime geets behaviour like maan doesnt deserve geet...yea geet is beautiful (made by god), rich (for her family) and educated (she is not blind)...these qualities can be included in any ordinary girl...whats her special quality which differs her from other ordinary girl???????????but maan is now self made maan...he is blind but he conquired everything...his interest to learn and become independent...hats off him...if we really compare between them then we can say geet doesnt deserve maan...yes but in reality we know eye is the most important factor of anyone and in geets situation her reaction is justified...i dont waht i wanted to say...actually jo mann me ayi keh dali...really loved this story...loved maan...




lovely point... exactly geet looks at maan with an eye that a blind people deserves nothing... then who do you deserve.. past 18 parts was about that building up i am so glad you all understood that.. me more then happy...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: t_areeb

i found part 18 really sweet..

maan dont want that his family should feel bad sl he lied ..
and geet always want maan in front of her...and it seems pari listening to his music brought a bit possessiveness in her, when she hinted about the time
i really hope geet once looks at things from his angle




thanks t... me trying my best hope you like next few parts to😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: PaintedSky

Loved it !! How is ur study going on Fire ??



going good.. fell little behind this week so was up yesterday trying to catch up :(
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow early morning update lol
u r doing gr8...👏
Maan poor fellow remained hungry for his wife ...
I loved this Maan who respects his wife so much..
hope to see Geet coming out of this current phase soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
why we r not getting updates of seduction ???😃its says updating...😕
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Posted: 13 years ago
Mahsoos...Part 19



He walked off, leaving geet wonder, she sadly smiled.. Even a smile seems to be annoying.. Geet took her self to the sofa and feel sleep there...

As the morning sun appeared, maan was all ready while geet still sleeping like a pig. She was way to tired.
Maan came by and gently nudged her, he somewhere realized he shouldn't have spoken those words to her, maybe go along! He didn't want to be the one making her mahsoos what she really wants! She suppose to find it her self his words surly would have fallen in sympathy category!
"bebo!! Go way! Leave me alone! It's sunday!" she mumbled while taking maans hand under her arm, then gently rests under her cheek like a pillow...


Maan nodes his head at her childish behavior! Bebo! Who is this bebo? He sat on the sofa, trying to pull his hand back... "geet!"
"bebo, GO WAY before I through the pillow at you!"
"GEET!" maan angry voice came out? Who is this bebo?
Geet sat up with closed eyes and threw a sofa pillow straight towards maan. Maan catches the pillow with one hand before it smacked against his face and geet slowly opens her eyes just to realize there was no bebo! It was her husband! She bit her tongue instantly , stood up on the sofa... "I am sorry! I am sorry I thought it was bebo!" she takes the pillow from maans hand. Hugging it tight...
"bebo?"
Geet looked down in shame, smiling forcefully... "au- me- umm..."
"anyway! I am leaving! Get ready for your collage, the driver will be waiting for you!"
Geet twists the corner of her nighty... "can- can you drop me?" maan didn't like that sound, realizing it's probably his words that made er behave like this!
"umm..."
"au... - umm... Ok?"
"I will be waiting for you!"


He walked out while geet ran in to the bathroom, wondering why she asked him in first place, it's not he can see where exactly she was going!

Geet rushed in to the limo with 2 container of food... Maan looked at her instantly, he still haven't eaten anything... "au mama ne dia!.. One for me and one for you!" she passes maans one to the driver at the front while hers in the bag. Maan again was surprised, "mama?"
Geet looked here and there, thinking a answer to his useless question! "your mom! My mother in law!" she made a thick face then starts to smell the container, it indeed was the best smell...

Maan dropped her off, "come at 3! Not 3:30!" she steps out, licking her finger. Whole lunch was already gone, now he wonders what she will eat for lunch?"

...
"why you smell so nice?" armaan wondered, she was smelling of breakfast, it covered the whole room...
"au mama ne lunch dia tha. I ate them all." she made a baby face, looking at her two best friend. They couldn't stop them self laughing, this was there old geet, better then the day before who was acting all grown up and talking nonsense!
"what you will eat for lunch?"
"soca nahi!"
"so your husband taking you out?" anjali elbowed her with a wink! Her baby face instantly disapeare, she can't go out with him, god knows what he will do in a restaurant, although she wonders, do they have blind restaurant?

"umm..."

At lunch time she wondered around with her friends, wondering what to do! The collage canteen was rubbish, while she had no money! It would be her dads! She held her stomach!

Suddenly maans black limo came and stopped in front of the dark black collage gate. Geets heart skipped several beats, she surly did not expect him to be here at all!
"maan!"
"ji-ja-ji!" anjali shirked, nearly blowing geets eat off...
"are you trying to make me deft?"
"no! I bet he came to take you!"
"umm..." geets eyes wondered over the limo. He was waiting for her to step in...
"can I come!" anajili asked again... Geet twisted her lips, very annoyed. She couldn't say no, but she also did not want her to come! Luckily armaan came by and stopped anjali, "why you being kabbab me haddi!"
Geet looked at armaan with a thank you and hopped in to the limo...

Geet observed maan and the empty limo, lucky no pari! And she hated how he knew she probably waiting, all though she had no knowledge about him yesterday! How he was hungry for her...
"au... I- um..." she lost her words again...
"where do you Usually go for lunch?" maan questioned. Geet worriedly looked down, can he come? He can't see! What if... She panicked. Her mind wondered to look for another solution... "where do you usually eat?"
Maan kept quit for a minute. His face looked at him but not sure his eyes were gazing towards... "I do not eat outside. It's always have been home!"
Geets eyes widens and suddenly there was rapid heartbeat. For a moment she sat there frozen, trying to understand or put little memory from yesterday together...

"ap bahar nahi khate?"
"no!"
Some word reason there was little pain surrounded in her heart. She sadly smiled... Then looked everywhere els. She drank her saliva then slowly whispers "I want to go home!"
"umm.."
She spines around and orders the driver before maan could say anything... The whole journey was silent, quit... Nun spoke.. She even forgot that she had to be back in collage in 2 hours!

Maan steps out, walked straight to room while he could not here geets payel anymore... Mostly everyone was out, & avantika on her way...
"beta, that's a surprise! I only Usually see maan at lunch time!"
Geet felt even more bad... She twisted the duppata in her hand... Twisting the edge... "mama, au kabhi bahar nahi khate?"
"no! But I was more then happy yesterday that he did with you."
Geets heart skipped several beats... He didn't, he did not eat with her.
"I was about to go out, I will tell the chef to make you two something.."
Geet went in deep thought again. She really didn't expect this amount of surprise form her husband. But how idiot he why he didn't tell her. She worriedly looked everywhere.
"no... Mama I will make something..."
Avantika was over the moon, "well he loves Italian..."
Geets face lot up, she can cook anything except the complicated Indian dish. She throughs her bag over the sofa and ran in to the kitchen. Avantika laughs and walks off...

The kitchen was huge with 3 chef standing in line at the back. Wondering to help or not...
"mam would you like some help?"
"umm yes... Get me all this ingredient!"



part 18 -prev- next- part 20

mrs KHURANA COOKING😲
well.. here you go.. please comment and say
about the story..
me waitng...
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love you all and thank you for all the likes and commentsx
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Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 13 years ago

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