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Posted: 13 years ago
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Too sleepy want to read it b4 sleeping . Pls make it fast
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Posted: 13 years ago
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🥱...aur kitna time??
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MAHSOOS
Part 14



people who have not read part 13
Part 13




"thank you bhavi"

Geet fearfully stood in the middle, looking at annies eyes, she haven't even got used to maans, now anny and take her to the party, what- what if...
Geet started to bite her nail...
"oh I am really exited to met your friends bhavi"
"au- I..." what she was thinking? She can't break her hope now and this may make up for the rudeness from the other day! She smiled at her self...
"chale!"
Anni swings her hand around geet while she supported her. Eve though the fear was there, she tried her best to get along...

Maan stood on the other side of the balcony with dev, talking about some business when his eyes fell on geet and anni...
"bhavi taking anni out?"
Maans ear instantly became active. "no! She is going to a party!"
"anni is with her!"
"what?"
"yes!"




Geet enters the party along with anni, she somewhere was embarrassed to see her self with a blind girl, but this was her sister in law, she possibly couldn't leave her alone somewhere, specially when she can't see!
"I will introduce you to my friends!"

Party went well until some of geets class mate started to make fun of her behind her back, specially with anni. They all rather found it amusing. Geet felt even more run down, if they behave like this with her, and if just in case they know her husband is blind to... She wiped her tear and slowly cut her self and anni before they make more fun of them... She felt hurt and betrayed by her own friends... & somewhere disgust towards them...

Maan was highly worried about anni then anything. Geet surly did not know how to look after and what if something happens... he waited as they returned...

Maan stopped both of them "how was it?" geet didn't bother to answer as she ran off with tears. Crying her eyes out, maan felt utterly confused, he could here her wimping.
"was everything alright?"
"yes, but we left suddenly"

Maan nodes and flows geet. She was wimping under the spread again. Every word from each student was buzzing in her ear, making fun of anni and most importantly making fun of her. She hide her self, suppressing her face under the spread much as possible...



Maan came by and sat opposite side. Wondering what happen... "geet! What happen?" there was no calmness, the usual softness in the voice have disappeared. It was rough, very tough,

"I hate you. Go way. I HATE YOU" she sat up, sobbing even further, wimping. Her heart cried louder with the fact how every, each one of them will create jokes if they come to know her husband is blind. She ran in to the bathroom hiding her self, wimping...

Maan didn't bother... maybe that's what she required time to her self..., time.
He couldn't possibly think what happen, instead he thought maybe she took anny that's why. He needs to speak to anny and advice her not go anywhere with geet.

Geet slowly walks out of the bathroom, looking down with red eyes, the crying have calmed her self yet she couldn't ignore the pain.
"tum tik toh ho!" geet jumped with his voice. Her wet face hides the new layer of fears... She nodes gently, walking passed, still looking down.
"what happen in the party?"
Geet nodes a no, she did not want to talk to anyone, if she does there will only be rudeness, just rudeness nothing els... and later when her mind back to normal she did not want to regret. suppressing everything within was the best option...
"geet.."
Her silence bothered him. So far all he gathered was she is very expressive and that's what he likes. He didn't want silent, something he can't read, something he don't know how to read...
"I don't like silent!" he simply replied, there was tint of anger there, a sudden anger she have seen other day when he was shouting with his mother.
They were standing facing one another, few inch apart, she looked up at his blank eyes, unable to digest the fact he can't feel the pain she is going through, specially when a husband and wife relationship should be special with anything, with any bond, let alone that be silent...
She took few step backward with more pain, smiling sadly...
"talk..."
Geet nodes a no, found out exactly what irritated him. What he hated, the silent...
Maan started to get irritates with it further, why she wasn't answering?
"talk geet" he held her arm tightly, suppressing her between the cupboard and him self.. His body pushed her further, without realizing how it was hurting her. Her chest pushed up against his wide rocky one, she tiled her face looking up in shock, resting her hand over his shoulder, then few drops of tear touched his shirt. He jerked instantly, moving backwards but swing his hand around her waist, while another came by to touch her face... "what happen?" his face softens instantly, she was fine before leaving, specially the way dev was explaining...
"did anny do something?"



Geet nodes a no again, he didn't remove his hand instead gently started to dry the tears off her cheek...
He felt the negative no, which made him wonder even more...
"I hate you, I hate you... I hate you... Ap bohot bure ho..." she wimped and whispered, hiding her face on his chest... His shirt became soaking wet... Maan engulfed her in his embrace, brushing her hair with another hand...
He slowly picked her up and carried to the bed.. Resting her, she was still sobbing, holding him tight...

...

It was dark ally, her pounding heart did not rest with her long legs, running in an incredible speed, dead end from one ally to another... Only little hinder of light that also in verge of disappearance. The strong wind slides her hair from one side to another , she stoped, lost, looking here and there for someone, petrified with the thought how helpless she is... The laughter was reaching out to her, a laughter that was making mockery of her every cell... "stop... STOP... STOP!" she held her ear tight to block every possible noise but nothing have happen... Nothing at all... But then suddenly all those laughter replaced by another voice, something that brought light back in her, something that she wanted to here, a voice of comfort, a voice that she was looking for... A voice...


...

"geet... Geet..." maan gently taped gees cheek to wake her up, he could feel the sweat crawling down. The hot body, she had fever. He sat up instantly, worried even further, now he have to find out what exactly happen... He could feel how sensitive she is, he took her petit body in his arm, covering the shivering body in his arm..
"geet.. .."
She lazily opens her eyes, peaking at her husband face. She cuddled up further in his warmness then running way... Then slowly closed her eyes back to look for the voice in her dream...

Maam rests her on the bed and quickly grabs a bowl of cold water and wet cloths, then took his first aid box taking a paracetamol and ibuprofen tablets...
He came by, taking her to his lap, feeling the face again and gently placed a cold cloth on the forehead.


thats all for tonight... now me run again
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Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#14
don't test patience


luckly first
nice part

so they are started to bear each other 😭
but geet really need time
i wonder what will happen
when maan comes to know about party
poor friends of geet 😆😆
maaneet closeness is good
they are proceeding in positive direction
Edited by pritm - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#15
rrr
yayyy...me 1st..i guess!!!!😆

omg keya love u for this damn awesum update...
geet is really very sensitive!!!
and maan...uff to die for...
he understand her each n every moments..
her emotions so very well...👏👏👏

it was sooo amazing...dun hve words to describe how i felt!!!!!
luvly babes...want more n more...👏👏
update soon!!!!

Edited by kawaii_geet - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#16
Wow nice. Geet got fever again.
I hope see open ups to maan. I can feel hw difficult it was 4 her .
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Posted: 13 years ago
#17
awww maan look after her so well
do continue
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Posted: 13 years ago
#18
Well at least she is feeling bad at what her friends did with anni...
i think she should make them realize what its like to be blind..
cover their eyes with blindfolds or even with her just to get a glimpse of what maan and anni arre going through...
eaasy way i reckon x
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Posted: 13 years ago
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simply one word
AWESOME
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Posted: 13 years ago
#20
Amzng updat. 👏 👍🏼
Loved it . ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️
Plzzz continue soon.

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