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Posted: 13 years ago

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Episode 4:

He then packs his bag! Taking a long bag and resting its two hands in his shoulders he moves out of the room to the living room where his parents Naani & Bua are jus chatting with having some fruits in their they all look very excited (actually Meetha jus revealed that sona is coming) as they all start giving coments how they will welcome her there enters Rahul holding is bag quite unhappy and little excited!

Bua(nandini): "array rahul agaya ! yeh bag leke kaha ja raha hai????"

Meetha: "meine bataya tha na sanjay ka janam din hai 4^th December ko! Yaani kal ko! Aur har saal tho hum sab sanjay ke saath Mumbai se pune jaate hena uske ghar ! uski birthday party mein! Issi bahane Sanjay ke parents (Mr Shashaank kapoor & mrs Aruna Kapoor)'s se mulaaqaat hojayegi!! (whispering in her ears- aur Rahul surprise (sona) bi tho aarahi hai kal!)

Bua: "(gets excited) hmmm acchi baat hai"

Rahul:"(bending down near his mom & resting his face on her puts his bag down and says-) mom meine chaltha hoon !!! (has a very sad curver on his face)"

Meetha: "hey Rahul !!! kya hogaya haan?? Nahi jaana hai kya pune??"

Rahul: "(like he was waiting to hear it) mein soch raha tha ki mein aap sab ke saath hi chala jaatha hoon!! Wo kya hena meri gf ke bina dil nahi lagtha (smiles & stares at naani thn wakes up looking into his mom's eyes! He has a little unhappy feeling wich Meetha reads in his eyes)"

Meetha: "kya??(she thinks of his surprise suddenly tries to convince him) Rahul aisa nahi kehthe! Sanju tumara best friend aur tum har saak do din pehle jaate ho !! aaj hi pehli baar late jaa rahe ho!! Sanju tho pune b pahunch gaya hoga!! Ab tum jao Rahul usse 12 baje surprise nahi karoge???? Fir hum sab kal aajayenge!"

Rahul: "(in mind- right mein kyun apna plan cancel karo???? Waise b uss Monkey ko mail karna hota tho kar deti !! bahut enjoy kar rahi hogi apni doston ke saath!! Mein b karoonga!! Enjoy!!! Sanjay ke bday party mein haan!!! ) "

Vikram: "mere bte hoke last moment mein apna plan change karoge???? It should never happen my child !! wo kya hena ki………!! ( Meetha stops him b4 he could reveal it!)"

Meetha: "ab bas b kisjiye aapko tho mauka chahiye mere bete ko daantne ke liye!! Bechara kithna sunega aap ki lectures!!! Huh..! "

Vikram: "(shuts his mouth ) as you say my lord (to Meetha) "

Rahul: "ur right mom kisi ke liye mein kyun apna plan badlo!!?? Waise b us monkey se zyaada dosti tho sanju ne nibaayiye hai!! Kamse kam sanju mere baaton ka jawab tho deta hai unlik uss Monkey!!! "

Meetha: "(blushes softly) kya?? Tum sona ke baat kar rahe ho?? Kahin tum Sona ke baare mein baat tho nahi kar rahe hona??! "

Rahul: "(suddenly realises what he said!) Sona???? Kya Mom aap bina!!!?? (in a soft voice looking aside-" Waise b wo wahan apne doston ke saath enjoy kar rahi hogi !!!") "

Mom: "smiling acch beta as u say !!!"

Rahul: "oh no Mom dekona aap se baat karthe karthe kaise waqt beet gaya pata hi nahi chala!!! Mera train ka waqt hogaya hai mein chaltha hoon !!! (goes near his mom hugs her tight he has a bit of unhappy feeling. She kisses him on his forehead )"

Meetha: " accha tc beta! Love you beta J"

Rahul: "love you too Mom!! "( goes near his father ho jus came in from kitchen carrying an apple in his hand throws into his son. He catches it!! And then hug touches his dad's toes and hugs him)"

Vikram: "(slowly on his ears) kabhi kabhi disappointment bi kushiyaan leke aati hai!! Cheer up beta !"

Rahul smiles. He then goes near his Bua who touches his cheeks and says

Bua: "bless you Rahul samabalke jaana!!"

Rahul then goes near his naani and says in her ears

Rahul : "naani aaj aapke liye ek aur surprise hai aapke room mein hai mere jaane ke baad deklena! Love you juliet!!! "

Naani: "(blushing) daat!!!! Badmaash!!! Chalo apna kayaal rakna haan! "

Rahul wearing his bag taking back steps looking at every1 giving an flying kiss to all says-

Rahul: "byeee kal jaldi ayiyega! Cyaa tc every1!

Vikram: "miss you son!!!"

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

guyzz im posting the two epis today coz i had posted till epi 5 in MEMBERS LAUNGE (old thread) soo from tmrw im strtng wid epi 6...! il be giving precap nd recap from epi 6 😃

well so many of u who r keeping encouraging me from 'members launge' till 'FF' and new ones who r reading this story in FF im alwzz thank full to u... keep in touch wid tumse hi and dis diwali im coming up wid KRIYAANSH FF also sooo plzz encourage me in tat too 😳 ok here is nxt epi:

Episode 5:

Rahul moves out of the house he then stands near his bike wearing his glasses headphone on his head!! Making his bag comfortable on his back he looks up in the sky on falling star and wishes-

Rahul: "I wish mein Sona se baat kar saktha!!"

And then sighs and says

Rahul starts his bike while his mom comes running

Meetha: "Rahul bike deere chalana!!!! Ok "

Whole family then bursts into laughter!!!! Thinking about the surprise what Sona is going to give!

Rahul reaches station were he parks his bike! And one of his friend comes to take it back to his house! He rushes into his train which had almost started! He climbs the train and rinses his hair !!!

He moves inside while his 2 friends [abishek(abi) & siddhart (sid) ] come up to him they hug and then-

Sid: "howz you buddy?? Party mein kyun nahi aaye??? "

Abi: "haan yaar aaj kithna maza aaraha tha!! Aur tum party chodke beach pe kyun gaye the!!?? I cant believ this dude! Ho kya gaya hai tumein???"

Rahul: "kuch nahi guyzz chill out!! Bas man kiya tho gaya!"

They all then hav some talks & then they all rests down while Rahul goes near train door having tea in his hand!

He thinks –

Rahul: "sona yaar pata nahi kyun aaj bahut miss kar raha hoon tumein!! Kab tumse miloonga?? Kaise ho tum???"

Sona has boarded her flight she looks out of the window as says!

Sona: "(in mind- Rahul mein aarahi hoon!!! Bas 5 saal ki intezaar katham!!) "

She smiles and blushes. While Arjun is busy looking at avantika's photo in his waalet. He keeps it inside and then sleeps.

Sona is completely excited! She writes her life in her beautiful red diary..! she has written every second of her journey in her diary.

Rahul has reached his friends house in pune jus few minutes befor 12am!!

There is complte silence when they 3 slowly move to sanjay's room through his balcony.

They make him get scared through candles in their hands! As sanjay opens his eyes slowly while he sees candles all around him he gets scared he jus screems!! Wakes up!

Lights are on while there are quite 10-12 friends around him with his parents! they all wish him HAPPY BIRTHDAY together..

They all settles down after a warm hug with sanju.. they all move to the rooms while Rahul is lying in his bed he still thinks

Rahul: "why didn't she reply?? Teek tho hena wo??? Waise Arjun bi kaafi dino se mujse baat nahi ki!! Gosh kyun soch raha hoon yeh sab??!! Sirf ek mail hi toh hai?!! Actually siiirrrf ek mail hi toh akrna tha usse!!! Hhh!! Ah aha hhhaaa !!!! (shaking his head) Rahul jus close your eyes and sleep!!" he then sleeps..