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Posted: 13 years ago
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Episode 2:

But then she satisfies by seeing "MISSING YOU" !! she then says

Sona: "Riya ki bacchii mein wahan nahi hoon so Rahul pe line maar rahi hai??? Muje wahan aane do aisa kabar looongi ki Rahul se baat karne ki baare mein b nahi sochegi haan…! And hey Cartoon agar uss Riya ke taraf aank utaakar b dekaana then ……!!! (She all of sudden realises her over reacting and then covers her face and starts thinking)

Sona: " yeh kya hogaya hai muje??? Kya hai yeh feeling? Kyun jealoue ho rahi hoon! Jab ki muje pata hai ki Rahul uss riya ko Bhaav tak nahi dena waala?? Kyun apne aapko riya se compare kar rahi hoon?? And yeh kaisa junoon hai??? Rahul ke naam sunthe hi muje yeh kya hojaata hai kyun mein itha pagal ho jaati hoon???? ( she hits her seeing to the clock!! OH NOOO !!! its 7am!!! Shit!! Im late!!! Baag sonaaa!!! Aaj tho Ritz & Simran tuje Maar daalenge !!! "

She then rushes to wash room!!

A smart handsome guy wearing a white T-shirt and a Deep Brown Jacket with blue jeans riding a very stylish bike very fast & having headphone on his ears and shaking his head to its rhythm with his helmet on his head he suddenly stops his bike infront of flower shop! He then removes his helmet with the style then shakes his head shakes his amazingly stylish hair and then removes his head phone! With his cooling glass in his eyes he looks like hero for whom every girl would love to have! Its Rahul!! He sees his watch –


rahul: " Freaaak!!!!!!! 8.30pm!!! ithna late!! Mom ko kaha tha ki 6pm thak gar pahunch jaonga!!!! Ab tho tu gaya Rahul !!! aaj tho meri girlfriend ka birthday bi hai!!! Hai bagwaan bacha lena aaj!! (to shopkeeper-) Bhaiyya jaldi se ek lovely flower bouquet dona…

Shopkeeper shows different flower bouquets kept in show !! Rahul then poist out to the 1 which different from all other flowers which is made of red and white roses with light green leaves around!

Rahul: " bhaiyya wo waala do jo sabse upar hai (he shows it)"

Shopkeeper keeps his hand on tat bouquet!

Rahul: " haan wahi .. hmmm yeh dek ke meri girlfriend shayad muje maaf karde!! ;) accha kithna hua? "

Shopkeeper: " oh sirji aap ki choice tho bahut acchi hai! Kisse de rahe ho aap yeh kisi girlfriend ko tho nahi?? Accha yeh 350Rs ka hai ji! Pack karke do? "

Rahul: "haan dijiye! Aur yeh lijiye aapke paise!! Girlfriend ko hi hai bhaiyya!! Wo girlfriend jo sabse special hai! Accha dijiye!

He keeps it in his bike infront wears his helmet gives a stylish smile and then goes in his bike with full speed!!

He reaches home! He bangs the door as he is quite tensed that he is late! Servant (kailash kaka) opens the door!

Rahul: "kaka aap ? mom kaha hai ???"

Kaka just opens door wide before kailash kaka could speak he rushes inside! As soon as he moves towards the living room he sees no one is around ! then he hears some voices from the stairs

[ what were those voices of?? It was Sonam who called Meetha( Rahul's mom) … its his parents room where Mr vikramjeet & Meetha talking to sona on the phone in speaker mode.

Sona: "hello aunty kaise ho aap sab??? Aap sabki bahut yaad aarahi hai! Bahut mis kar rahi hoon aap sab ko!!" Vikram: "araay sona betiyaan hum b kahan tumare bina kush hai??? Waise tho I know tumara Bhai tumari bahut kyaal raktha but fir b pooch raha haoon kaisi ho beta?? Meetha: oh hoo aap bina wo ithna door se phone kia hai pehle baat poochlo! "waise sona beta humsab teek hai " pehle tum batao kaise ho aap? Waise kya baat hai itni urgent se phone kia hai and aisa kyun kaha ki tabi baat kijiye jab Rahul ghar mein naho?" sona: "aunty mein India aarahi hoon ………. Yepppiee!! Wo Bhaiyaa ko Aagra mein kuch kaam tha so hum dono india aarhe hai!! Bhaiyaa Mumbai mein muje chodke fir wo Delhi chale jayenge ! waise meine tho bata diya hai ki chahe kuch bi hojaye mein tho aapki paas hi rahoongi and meri studies ko Mumbai mein hi poori karoongi!! Haan!! Aur Bhaiyya maan b gaye!!! Aap sab se milne ke liye bahut bekaraar hoon!! Meetha: "sacch mein??? Wow it would be so nice sona!" Vikramjeet: " haan sona tum yahan jaldi se aajao bahut boring hai Mumbai tumare bina!!! " Sona: "haan Uncle hum 11am ke fight se aarahe hai! Actually meine soch ki mein Rahul ko surprise doongi!! Isiii liyeee……… (says in a long tune)" Vikram & Meetha blushes looking at each other! Vikram: "hmmm good idea waise b uska b tang keechne ka mauka mil jayega!" Meeta: " haan tum jaldi se yahan aajao tumare intezzaaar karoongi teek hai" ]

There opens the door and Rahul enters inside! Meetha & Vikram are in shock mode and they switches the fone off!

rahul: "mom koun aaraha hai??? Kisse baat kar rahe the???"

meetha: "Rahul tum?????? (Murmers –"vikram Rahul se kuch mat kehna il handle it!") Rahul tum????

Rahul: " ofcourse mom mein hi hoon!! Lekin aap kisse baat kar rahe the?? Haan ?! kuch chupa tho nahi rahe hona?"

Meetha stares at bouquet in his hand and Rahul hides it in his back.

Meetha: "kuch nahi wo meri saheli se baat kar rahe the! But yeh yeh kya hai haan tumare haat mein?? Aur tum aaj ithna late kaise agaye haan?? Maine kaha tha ki nahi 6pm baje se pehle aajana??!!!!

She moves to his catches his ears as squeezes it!

Rahul: " mommm!!!! Aacha ab sorry haan!! Actually mein wo mere friends ke yahan gaya tha ! sanju ka birthday hena parso isliye surprise plan kar rahe the!!! "

Meetha: "surprise plan kar rahe the ya fir party mein gaye the?? Haan Joot mat bolo Rahul tumari maa hoon mein sab samjthi hoon!!

While Meetha is scoulding at Rahul vikram giggles hiding his face .

Rahul: "dad!! Dekona!! Mom muje daant rahi hai!! Meine aap se permission leke hi club gaya na!! " (he laughs while Meetha stars at vikram)

Meetha: "vikram tumne hi bigaada hai isse!! Haan "

Vikram : "(laughing) accha Meetha sorry (holding his ears) ab beta bada hogaya hai ! hena Rahul (hits slowly on Rahul's head)

Meetha smiles and hugs Rahul!

Meetha: "accha Rahul waise aaj tum late aaye isse muje koi problem lekin koi tumara bahut der se wait kar rahi hai use kya kahoge?? "

Rahul: "oh no!! girlfriend!!! Freak !! mom aap bina baaton mein laga leti ho!! Ab deko ! chalo batao kaha hai wo?"

Meetha: "I think wo terrace mein honge jaake deklo!! "

Rahul: "haan kaise bool saktha hoon mein wahi tho unki fav jagah hai chalo mein usse manake aathi hoon! "

Rahul runs upstairs ! there sits a very old lady still beautiful sitting in chair and a girl is pressing her legs!! That girl is cute naughty sister of Rahul! Its Kushi! Rahuls younger sister…! She sees Rahul coming … naani lijiye aagaye janaab! Dekiye iss baar b late agaye haan aaj mat chodna naani !! acche se sabak sikaana! Ok (laughs looking at Rahul while Rahul stares in a cute loving Angry face at kushi!!!

Rahul: " (Rahul bent on his knees) Oh my dear juliet aaj tumein yeh romeo party chodke bag ke aaya hai!! C'mon ab gussa chodo aur yeh foolon ko guldasta accept karo plz(moves forward with bent knees each time while saying - plz plz) plz plz! Naani gusse mein hai but she could not control her laughter bursts out to laughter
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Amazing work!! 👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
#13
OMG OMG this is turly Awesomeee i loved how you Write Episodes n your write style so good yar i enjoy to read each &every world i Througly Enjoyed :)

kee Write more waiting for d next Episode :)


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Posted: 13 years ago
#14
great... really liked it... thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very very nice amazing update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Episode 3:

Naani: "accha ab yaad ayi apni girlfriend ki?? 6 baje se intezaar kar rahi hoon!! Iss baar tumein acchi se sabak sikaaongi haan!!!! Pehle yeh baata aaj ithna der kyun lagaya??? Station bi nahi aaya muje lene ke liye! Shaam ki pooja mein b nahi aya?? Kya baat hai bato muje!"

Rahul: "uffo !!! tum girls bina har baat ko ithna badana zaroori hai kya?? But meri cute si girlfriend ko kya gift doon? Hmm pehle yeh lo naani ! (he handed over the bouquet to naani. She looks happy now and his parents hav a little impressed mood) waise mein aapke liye ek aur gift b laya hoon but wo mein yahan nahi ander doonga sooo chalo chalo!!!"

Pulls his naani's hand helps her in getting up and takes to the mandir (a small mandir built in their garden) ! infront of the lord Ganesha in the mandir there is an BOOK! It's the holy Bagwathgeeta! And along with a it a beautiful moorthi of lord Krishna! Naani is quite surprised and evoked by his thoughts and his gifts.

Naani: " muje pata hai Rahul sirf tum hi muje samaj sakthe ho!! Bahut dino se sri Krishna ki moorthi kareedne ki soch rahi thi aur tumne mere liye la bi diya!! Kush raho beta! Kush raho!! (she sits infront of lord Krishna and touches it with devotion and then holds it around her test)

Every1 pray to god and then leave back to home! Rahul is in his computer in his room & quite sad! Now and then he keeps checking his mail and he has quite sad feeling and also an irritation & worry carves round his face! His mom enters catching a glass of milk in her hand! She keeps it in table and sees at Rahul ! Rahul didn't realise his mom's entry to the room and still busy in refreshing the page to check wethr any new mails hav come' now Meetha comes forward wipes around his hair hugs him from back and asks in soft voice-

Meetha: "kya hua beta ithna pareshaan kyun ho?? Sab teek hena?"

Rahul: " hey mom tum kab ayi?? Well sab teek hai (he gets stares at mom and then searches something in wardrobe while Meetha puts a glance on his computer she understands that ther are no mails from Sona since a week and tats the reason for his worry)"

Meetha: "lagtha hai aaj Sona ne mail nahi ki ! Am I Right???"

Rahul: "c'mon mom mein thodi na us Monkey ke liye pareshaan ho jaonga!! Waise b usse mail karna hota tho kar deti !! muje koi farak nahi padtha! Mein fresh hone jaa raha hoon!"

Meetha: "accha teek hai dood tho pee lo!"

He rushes inside the washroom!

Meetha: "(in mind : sab pata hai muje tumein kis cheez se farak padtha hai aur kiss cheez se nahi! Hmmm ab tho sona ki mail nahi usse hi yahan lana padega!! Dil mein jo pyaar usse hoton pe kabhi na kabhi tho aana chahiye!!!)"

Sona is well dressed and rushes out to her college to meet her friends Ritz and Simran! Sona is dressed with a lovely pleasant white tank top with black jacket and knee length jeans! When she gets down from the car she looks like a Sprnig time beauty come alive walking in a stunning manner with her sun glasses on her eyes she has no competition! Her friends run towards her hugging her very tightly & showing an Missing expression in their face! Then thr comes her other classmates who gives her roses, orchids, and bouquets and number of greeting cards to wish her all the best for future and giving an warm farewell. Sona, Simmi(simran) & Ritz(rithika) then move towards river side walking step by step! Simmi and Ritz look quite unhappy! Wher as Sona looks quite excited and happy.

Simmi: "sona yaar tum chali jaaogi tho hum sab kya karenge??!! We are gonna get too bored and left alone yaar!!! " (a sad curves her face).

Ritz: "exactly simmi!!! Kisi ko yaad aye ya na aaye hum dono tumein bahut miss karenge!!! (Even she has a sad face and she stops walking noticing that sona is not listening to them instead she is in her dreamworld)

Ritz & Simmi: " (close to Sona's ears) SONAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Sona: "(comes back from her world understands the situation nd starts sayin-) oh soory guyzz wok ya hena aaj mein bahuuut kush hooon!!! Aisa lag raha hai ki mein India nahi balki Heaven jaa rahi hoon!! Wow badly missing my country thse and now I can be there!!!!"

Ritz: "so bahut kush hona hum dono ko chodke jaane ke liye!!! Very bad!!!! Huh..! (simmi & ritz sigh'. Simmi is abt to cry)

Sona: "(runs behind them hugs them together!) yeh tum dono se kisne kaha??? (She turns them around & continues) jabse New york aayi hoon tum dono ne hamesha meri saaat diya hai!! And I can never forget that!! Aur tum dono ko chod ke jaane ke liye muje accha nahi lag rahi hai!! But as u both knw na ki mein India se kithna pyaar karthi hoon!!! I jus wanna go home!! My place My world!!! (She openes her hand wide enough and experiencing the serene nature! )

Simmi: "isliye excited ho ki India jaa rahi ho ya fir'''!! (wid an nagging tone)

Sona: "tum dono ko jo samaj na hai samjo!!! ( again closes her eyes and breathes the serene nature )

While Rahul in his Balcony is dreaming of her like how big might she hav become how wud she look and also has an sad curve coz of not getting her reply for his mails! He wonders wat might hav gone wrong! Y she didn't reply?!!

Edited by nams_love_d3 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#17

Really cute chapter!! 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
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lovin it girl still waiting for that fifth episode to come hahha im like sharukh khan yaar: aur paas, aur paas, ... hahahha
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Posted: 13 years ago
#19
ty guyzz for ur support but still im nt getting gud reviews its discouraging me!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#20
Awesome epi totally loved <3

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