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Posted: 13 years ago
u r welcome dear...
waiting for the next update ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
how much time is it going to take u to update the next part dear waiting ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
I am soo sorry for the delay actually my laptop's battery was dead 😭 and i lost the charger somewhere😭 anyways just found it šŸ˜‰ so here's the next part .. oh and Thank you everyone for your lovely comments 😃 And i have answered to your comments on page 36 .. :)
PART 6
It had been thirty minutes since maan had given the blue prints to geet .. she was sitting in his cabin on the sofa studying the blue prints carefully .. and maan on the other hand would steal glances at her and and then curse himself for doing so .. He was about to pick the next file to read the documents when geet's scream startled him

Ho gayaa ! Ho gayaa .. she screamed and started jumping totally forgetting the fact that she was in her boss's cabin .. Maan looked at her and first got angry but then seeing her jump like a kid he smiled .. Yes after 4 years he smiled for the first time ..

Geet came running to him like a kid and said

Sir Sir ! look ho gaya .. I have found the flaw ' I win I win !

Win ?? Ms geet this was not a bet ! He said amused that she thought this was a bet ..

Wo I don't know but when Vicky use to give me a challege tou he use to get me a chocolate if I completed it so you will also get me and yaa because you don't know much about me tou I don't like fruits and nuts in my chocolate I like the plain one ' I thought I'll tell you it will be easy for you to buy .. she said and smiled widely ...

Maan on the other hand was shocked .. what is with this girl .. first she thought I had put a bet with her and then she wanted chocolate that too no fruits and nuts what the hell and Vicky who is this Vicky ?? a sudden wave of jealousy ran through him and he couldn't help but ask ..

Vicky ?? Is he your boyfriend ?? he was actually totally aazd at himself also for asking such a question he still didn't understand why was he bothered or curious ! But her answer amused and relaxed him ..

Boyfriend ?? Chi chi chi baba ji she said looking upwards .. Then to maan .. nahi sir he is my best friend and very close to me .. aap aise gandi batain dimagh main mat laya karain .. It is not good .. if you think like this na tou aapka mind dirty ho jaee ga .. Aur aap do you watch a lot of films ?? No wo kya haina sir us main aise batain hoti hai .. You know romance and all adult stuff aap na dekha karain it's not good ..

He wanted to laugh at her talk but controlled himself and said

Hmmm .. Pehlay bataoo flaw kya aur kahaan tha ??

Nahi pehlay chocolate ..

NO way ! tell me the flaw ..

Jaeeyayy then I won't tell .. pehlay chocolate promise karain phir I'll tell ..

Acha fine ! now tell ..

She then explained to him what the flaw was and he wa soo amazed and impressed by her and cursed himself .. Oh god maan how could you be soo dumb .. This was such a minor flaw and you couldn't figure it out .. but ths geet she looks soo smart I must say Ranbir ne recommendation tou achi di hai ..

Hmmm ! Now go..

Go ?? She asked .. Mister go anhi Thank you ya good kehtay hai .. ek tou aap sir mujhain samajh main nahi ata do you like love the word 'hmmm' jab deekhoo 'hmmm' 'hmmm' 'hmmm' .. good morning .. 'hmmm' .. sir yee file 'hmmm' .. maine kar liay ..'hmmm' .. chocolate dain gay 'hmmm'.. aree chocolate say yaad aya aapne mujhain chocolate promise ki thi na dain .. waisay main aapko thori linency day sakti hoon aap shaam ko ghar janay se pehlay mujhain chocolate day daine theek hai ?? aab sir main chalti hoon .. mujhain buhat kaam karna hai .. Bye bye !

Saying so she went from there and it took a few minuted for maan to registered what all she had said and now she is gone .. did she just make fun of my saying Hmmm .. hell ya she did and I didn't say anything .. I maan singh khurana was quiet how is that possible and what did she say she is giving me lienncy and I should bring her the chocolate by evening ?? main kya lagta hoon uska boyfriend ya husband jo uskay nakhray uthaoo aur baat sunoo .. boyfriend ?? husband ?? ye beech main kahaan se aagayee .. maan ye tujhain pagal kar day gee ..

Geet went outside his cabin to the reception area where she met pinky ..

Hi ! I am geet .. she said and extended her hand for a hand shake to pinky ..

Pinky just kept starring at her and so was adi.. Geet felt a little weird seeing both of them stairing at her like this .. Then piky broke the silence ..

You're Geet na ?? The handa's one and only daughter ?? Geet handa ??

Ummm yaa but how do you know me ??

Aree ! Main pinky chaadaa ! Hum dono saath he tou parhtay thay XXX college main ..

Oh pinky ! Saying so thay both hugged each other ..

Actually pinky .. Vicky they all were class mates.. After college ended..Pinky worked and couldn't keep in touch with geet.. Adi also was in the same college but use to keep a distance knowing her brothers..

Geet ye hai adi!

Adi .. OMG ! you were the one na with oily hair and big glasses ?? who was a nerd and parhai kay elawa kuch nahi ata tha ??? jab dekho Yes maam .. yes sir .. kehtay thay ??

Saying so she started to giggle and so did pinky ..

Haan haan ye wohi hai .. Said pinky laughing loudly ..

Nahi ! main aab kisi se nahi darta .. aur nahi aisa kuch karta hoon ..

Acha ?? Asi sir jab Maan sir aatay hai tab kya hota hai ?? asked pinky ..

Tab tab tou kuch nahi main thori na darta hoon Maan sirrr seee ..

sirrr aaa aap pp

The girls turned around and saw maan standing there and when hey heard adi stammer.. geet couldn't control her laughter and started laughing ..

Maan was coming out of his cabin when he saw geet talking to pinky and adi .. He was hell angry .. he hated the fact when people use to chit chat in office ..

Geet .. he yelled ..

Geet stopped laughing and looked at him with disappointment ..

Jee sir ! she said looking at the ground .. she was dissapointed at him yelling at her and her disappointment didn't go unnoticed by maan .. He calmed a bit and said

You should be in your cabin ..

Well sir I would be if I know where it is ..

Adi ! show Geet her cabin .

Yee ss sirrr .. he said fixing his glasses ..

Geet looked at him and started to laugh again.. Without realizing maan is there she said ..

Adi tum tou keh rahay thay tum kisi se nahi darte aur tum ne apni purani aadat choor di hai ??

Adat konsi adaat ki baat ho rahi hai yaha ?? said maan making them realize his presence '

Nahi kuch nahi sir wo tou mera aur adi ka beech ki baat hai .. haina adi ???

Adi only nodded nervously ..

Maan did not like this.. Did she know adi before that she they were talking about secrets .. He did not know why but it bothered him.. He instructed her the next assignment and went from there.. Everyone sighed in relief..

Oh god geet aaj tou tum mujhain marwa he deetii .. Geet only laughed..

Acha geet ye bata tu yahaan kya kar rahi hai ??

Pinky main yahaa head architect ki post main select huwee hoon and haan pinky and adi aap donoon please kisi ko mat batana kay main Handa's ki beeti hoon please ..

Par kyun geet?? Asked adi ..

She then narrated the whole story why she wanted to work and all.. They both were impressed at her thoughts and nodded in agreement.. Adi then showed geet her cabin which was right next to maan only a glass window separating them both .. She sat down and started to work on her next assignment ..

Please do comment and tell me how was it ?? 😃

PRECAP : A project going out of hands .. will geet save it ??

Telling about her boss at home !!

Edited by NaimaMSK1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome updt
just luvd it
aww started with a stare a fight stare irritating a stare bak bak...list goes on & on
luvd their convo
awww maan impressed wid her
cont soon
thnx 4 d pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
res iam going to sleep will comment later after reading full
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Posted: 13 years ago
AWESOME OHH GOD I JUST LOVED IT ITS AMAZING...🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsome update
kitna bolti hai geet
maan toh gya
bring more J factor
nd maan cumg to knw abt his bro relation wid geet
nd ranbir ko bi
a hug btween geet nd ranbir in front of maan

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Posted: 13 years ago
part 5
wowww loved the way our princess was going on n on
n maan was trying to find a flaw for the past 3 hours now that is something rare
waiting to see if geet finds the flaw or not

part 6
wowww awesome
geet is sooo sweet like a small baby
n maan jealous already ha ha ha
n adi not scared anymore then that day the sun would have rised from west pakka
n pinky n geet n adi friends from colg nice
n awesome precap
Edited by hinal_maaneet - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome updt
just luvd it
omg geet is so childish & maan amused
chocolate ke badle main flaw
lolzzz
luvd their convo
they were so adorable
pinky adi were good too
cont soon
thnx 4 d pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome ... superb ... loved it ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...


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