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Zahra

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Posted: 13 years ago

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hey Pihu dear...finally time mili to read the update...these 3 days have been like hell...lol...i was so missing u sweetiee...

i loved the update...no doubt in that...haha...

c'mon annie...chutti to honi hi thi...after all it was the best and perfect couple ever in question...and the dont you know that with maan around geet can excel in all and vice-versa...haha...thatsy i love this your bro this much...lol...

what is this maan...you told her that she looks nice on blushing...but what about that "wo"...wont u ever let us know what is it...or have i missed it...

maan you better not tease geet...or she knows how to do the same with you...dont u know she is a punjaban sherni...lol...even she knows about teasin blackmailing n all...haha...

omg...maan...were you scared of dadi that you even lied to her...well it wasnt really needed...because hamari intelligent dadi ko sab pata hain...

have i heard it right...maan will give her sazaa...i thought ke DMG wali sazaa hogi...hihi...thpugh i guess it's quite early for them...lol...well...neva mind...this will come later...haha...

geet...dont worry...he is faking anger...but what is this...geet saiyng suniyeji...i so love it when she says this...it sounds so sweet from her...oh no...maan's kahiyeji...this time am gonna faint...lol...

see...didnt i say that he is faking anger...this mobile phone...maan you should switch it off at times...

maan gifting geet those dresses...well could he be any sweeter...i love him...n now he is even taking geet with him...this trip gonna be an awesome one...

but then the precap...i wonder how geet will feel about this...

continue soon n thnxxx for the pm...

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Divya Nair (aka Piya)

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: zahra15

hey Pihu dear...finally time mili to read the update...these 3 days have been like hell...lol...i was so missing u sweetiee... Was missing u too Shehzadi

i loved the update...no doubt in that...haha...😛😛😛😛😛

c'mon annie...chutti to honi hi thi...after all it was the best and perfect couple ever in question...and the dont you know that with maan around geet can excel in all and vice-versa...haha...thatsy i love this your bro this much...lol... Yes u r right Maaneet r the best

what is this maan...you told her that she looks nice on blushing...but what about that "wo"...wont u ever let us know what is it...or have i missed it... No Shehzadi u did not miss it but i have already told u abt it

maan you better not tease geet...or she knows how to do the same with you...dont u know she is a punjaban sherni...lol...even she knows about teasin blackmailing n all...haha... Yes 😆😆😆

omg...maan...were you scared of dadi that you even lied to her...well it wasnt really needed...because hamari intelligent dadi ko sab pata hain... Supersmart Dadi

have i heard it right...maan will give her sazaa...i thought ke DMG wali sazaa hogi...hihi...thpugh i guess it's quite early for them...lol...well...neva mind...this will come later...haha... Not right now dear aage k updates mein saza mil jaagega DMG wala😉

geet...dont worry...he is faking anger...but what is this...geet saiyng suniyeji...i so love it when she says this...it sounds so sweet from her...oh no...maan's kahiyeji...this time am gonna faint...lol... 😳😳😳

see...didnt i say that he is faking anger...this mobile phone...maan you should switch it off at times... Yes i too feel the same

maan gifting geet those dresses...well could he be any sweeter...i love him...n now he is even taking geet with him...this trip gonna be an awesome one... There r many maaneet moments ahead

but then the precap...i wonder how geet will feel about this... Don't worry aboutthe precap dear well i have a surprise for u in this trip

continue soon n thnxxx for the pm... Love u dear

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Divya Nair (aka Piya)

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Divya Nair (aka Piya)

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PART 52

Geet: Kya main bhi aapke saath Amritsar jaaungi

Maan: Ji aap bhi mere saath Amritsar chalengi wo kya haina main ek pal k liye bhi tumse dur nahi reh saktha

Saying so he places a kiss on her cheek and leaves

Annie: Geet ye tu akele khade khade muskura kyun rahi hai? Kya baat hai?

Geet: Annie main Maan k saath Amritsar jaa rahi hoon ek meeting k liye

Annie: Toh usmein itna muskurane aur sharmane ki kya baat hai...tu toh aise sharmarahi hai jaise k kisi ladke ne tujhe kiss kiya ho

Geet: Haan aisa hi hai

Annie: Kya? Sach mein

Geet: Mera matlab hai nahi tu bhi na Annie kuch bhi bolti rehthi hai chal wo chod main abhi jaakar packing kar lethi hoon warna late ho jaaungi ok chal bye

Annie: Are sun toh Geet

Geet goes away

Annie: Ye ho kya raha hai bhai bhi kal se ajeeb harkathe kar rahe hai aur ab ye Geet bhi...

Outhouse

Geet: Aaj toh Annie ne pakad hi liya tha shukar hai babaji ka k usse kuch samaj mein nahi aaya

Geet: Chal Geet jaldi se packing kar le warna unhe ek aur bahana mil jaayega tujhe tang karneka

She starts her packing

Meanwhile,

Maan: Adi tumne humare tickets book kar diye?

Adi: Ji Sir tickets book ho chuke hai

Maan: Toh ek kaam karo unn tickets ko cancel karwadho

Adi: Cancel? Magar kyun sir? kya aapne Amritsar jaane ka plan cancel kar diya hai?

Maan: Nahi Adi Amritsar toh hum ja rahe hai par plane se nahi par apni car se

Adi: Iski koi khaas wajah Sir I mean jahah tak meri jaankari hai aap logh plane se jaldi pauchenge car se toh aapko aur bhi time lag jaayega

Maan: Adi tumse jitna kaha jaaye utna hi karo jaau jaakar tickets cancel karwadho

Adi: ji Sir

Adi leaves

Maan: (thinking) Chalo ab Geet k saath kuch extra time mil gaya

Maan: Ghar jaakar packing kar letha hoon. Dev aur Adi office ka kaam samal lenge

Adi was really confused

Pinky: Adi Sir aap itne pareshan kyun ho?

Adi: Pinky Maan Sir keh rahe hai k tickets cancel karwadho ab aisa bhi koi karta hai kya bhala chalo main tumse baad mein baat karta hoon

Pinky: Tickets cancel karwadho iska matlab Amritsar trip cancel... Geet ko kisine bataya hai bhi ya nahi main abhi usse inform kar dethi hoon bechari warna uhi packing mein apna waqt barbaad kar degi

Pinky dials Geet's number

Geet: Hi Pinky dekh filhaal main bahut busy hoon packing karni haina Amritsar jaa rahi hoon na isliye

Pinky: Wahi toh main bol rahi hoon k Maan sir ne Adi Sir ko tickets cancel karwane k liye kaha hai

Geet: Kya? Tickets cancel karwadi?

Pinky: Haan ab tickets cancel karwadi iska matlab toh yahi haina k trip bhi cancel ho gayi

Geet: Unhone trip cancel kardi aur mujhe bataya tak nahi thik hai nahi batana chahthe toh yahi sahi main bhi unse baat nahi karungi

She cuts the call

Geet: Trip cancel kardi aur ek baar mujhe batana zaruri bhi nahi samjha chado main hi pagli Amritsar jaane k khwab dekh rahi thi

Geet: Galti toh meri hai na koi gal nahi agar wo nahi jaana chahthe toh yahi sahi mujhe bhi nahi jaana

By that time Maan comes back

He notices Geet in an angry mood

Maan: Ye Geet ko kya hogaya itne gusse mein kyun dikh rahi hai aur ye kapdo ko yaha waha kyun pekh rahi hai

He enters her room

Maan: Geet...

Geet: Mujhe aapse koi baat nahi karni main aapse naaraz hoon

Maan: Naaraz ho magar kisliye naarazagi ki koi wajah bhi toh hogina ya aivai nakhre dikha rahi ho?

Geet: Main nakre dikha rahi hoon ya aap... pehle toh itne saare umeede dilwadi aur phir unhe ek hi jhatke mein todh bhi diya

Maan was not understanding anything

Maan: Geet tum saaf saaf batugi k problem kya hai aur meri galti kaya hai?

Geet: Haan haan kyun nahi aap jaise k kuch jaante hi nahi haina?

Maan: Geet mujhe kum se kum ye toh pata hona chahiyena k tum kis wajah se mujhse naaraz ho?

Geet: Aapne trip cancel kardi aur mujhe bataya bhi nahi

Maan: Trip cancel kardi ye tumse kisne kaha?

Geet: Pinky ka phone aaya tha wahi keh rahi thi k aap ne tickets cancel karwadiye aur ab jaahir si baat hai agar tickets hi nahi honge toh hum jaayenge kaise...

Maan: Achhaji toh ye baat hai?

Geet: Haan ab naarazgi ki wajah pata chal gayina ab jaayiye yaha se mujhe aapse aur koi baat nahi karni

Maan: Ab wajah toh pata chal gayi hai toh kya tum ye nahi jaana chahogi k maine tickets kyun cancel kiye

Geet: Mujhe nahi jaanna

Maan: Par mujhe toh batana haina

Saying so he starts approaching her

Geet turns her back towards him

Maan goes and hugs her from behind

Geet: Chodiye mujhe

Maan holds her more firmly

Maan: Geet kya tumhe lagta hai k main kabhi bhi tumhara dil tod saktha hoon

Geet: Aapke faltu k sawal ka mujhe koi jawab nahi dena

She tries to go away but Maan does not allow this to happen

He nuzzles his nose in her neck

Maan :Bolo na Geet

Geet: Maan...aap ye...

Maan :Jawab doh Geet

Geet: Nahi aap mera dil kabhi nahi tod sakthe

Maan: Toh phir tumne ye kaise soch liya k hum trip par nahi jaa rahe kya main nahi jaanta k tum iss trip ko lekar kitni excited ho?

Geet: Toh phir aapne tickets cancel kyun kiye?

Maan: Taaki hum kuch pal ek duje k saath time spend kar paaye hum plane mein nahi car mein jaa rahe hai Madam

Geet turns around

Geet: Sachhi

Maan: Ab toh khush ho na ji

Geet: Bilkul

Maan: Hmm...par main udaas hoon

Geet: Wo kyun?

Maan: Wo isliye k mujh jaise geniune insaan par yuhi koi ilzaam laga raha tha

Geet: Hmm... ab sorry aur thanks toh hum keh nahi sakthe toh main kya karu

Maan: Wo sochna tumhara kaam hai jo chahe kar lo

Geet: ek idea hai

Maan: Kya?

Geet: Zara apna matha neeche kijiye

Maan: Kyun?

Geet: Ofho kijiye toh sahi phir batathi hoon

Maan does exactly what she wanted him to do

Geet kisses his forehead and immediately looks down

Maan: geet maine pehle bhi kaha hai k tum sharmathe hue kafi pyari lagthi ho

Geet: Jaayiye aap bahut bure ho ab mujhe packing kar lene dijiye

Maan: Main tumhari help kar detha hoon

Geet: Maan aap apni badmaashiyon par thoda control kijiye jaayiye aur aap apni packing kariye aur main apni kar lungi

Maan: Soch lo Geet..

Geet: Soch liya ab jaaiye

Maan goes from there

After some time Maaneet leave for Amritsar

Geet: Maan ye aapne thik kiya waise bhi itne paise khrach karke hum plane mein jaate hai par waha naahi kuch dekh sakthe hai aur naahi enjoy kar sakthe hai

Maan: Geet tum khush toh hona?

Geet: Offcourse aur ye khushi dugni ho jaayegi Amritsar pauchne k baad

Maan: Wo kyun?

Geet: Adi sir bata rahe the k jiss client se hum milne jaa rahe hai unke ghar koi shadi ka function bhi hai bada maza aayega shadi attend karnepar

Maan: Hum koi shadi wadi attend nahi karenge Geet

Geet: Par kyun Maan mujhe shaadi ka mauhul bahut pasand hai yakeen maaniye aap bhi kaafi enjoy karenge waha par

Maan stops his car and comes out

Geet: Ye Maan ko achanak kya ho gaya?

Geet: Maan aap thik toh ho na?

Maan: Geet dubara kabhi shadi ka naam mat lena mujhe iss lafz se sakth nafrat hai

Geet: Nafrat hai? Magar Maan shaadi toh ek behet hi khoobsurat aur paak rishta hotha hai jo k do logo ko ek atuth risthe se bandhe raktha hai

Maan: Khoobsurat nahi ek batsurat rishta hai...ye ek rishta sabki zindagi tehes nehes kar detha hai

Geet: Aap galat bol rahe ho Maan ab aap bataiye agar do logh ek dusare se pyar karte ho toh shaadi unke rishte ko aur bhi mazboot bana degina?

Maan: Rishte ko mazboot nahi balti todh degi Geet..shaadi k baad sab kuch badal jaata hai kuch pehle jaisa nahi rehta

Geet: Maan agar aapko koi aisi ladki mil jaaye jiske bagair aap jeena toh dur saas lena bhi gawara nahi karoge toh kya aap usse shaadi nahi karenge

Maan: (thinking) Wo ladki toh mujhe pehle hi mil chuki hai Geet aur main tumhe kisi bhi haalat mein kho nahi saktha...

Geet: Boliye na Maan

Maan: Geet aaj itna samaj lo k main iss rishte mein believe nahi karta aur pls mujhse koi sawal mat karna...

There was a pain evident in his voice

Geet: (thinking) Aapke iss nafrat k peeche koi wajah zarur hai Maan main uss din ka interzaar karungi jis din aap mujhe apni saari takleef apna saara dard bata paaye

Maan was lost in his world

Geet: Suniyeji

Maan: Tumne kuch kaha Geet

Geet: Maine kaha kya raat bhar issi raste pe rukne ka irada hai

Maan: Nahi Geet chalo chalthe hai

PRECAP:

Hotel manager: "Sir humare paas bus ek hi room khali hai"😳

PLS PRESS D LIKE BUTTON N DO COMMENT

Love-Piya

PART 53: PAGE 103

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Zahra

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Posted: 13 years ago

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i thought i would have beeen the last to comment...lol...main to bhul hi gayi thi that i had already reserved...lol...haha...

i loved how maan said "ji aap bhi mere saath amritsar chalegi"...omg...i was so imagining maan saying this in a teasing way...i love when he calls her aap...

c'mon annie...cant u guess why is she blushing n smiling like this...after all she will me accompanying our great MSK...on top pf this he even gave her a kiss like you presumed...if only u had seen it...lol...kya babaji...couldnt u have made annie see them...she would have so teased them...especially geet...hihi...

adi...dunt u know that geet is accompanying maan...thatsy our mr lover wants to go by car...extra "romance" time u see...lol...

pinky cant u concentrate more on listening other than forming ur own opinions...see u misunderstood everything now...see now geet is busy wondering what made maan cancel all without telling her...

but then its goood she did this...we have got an angry geet n we can see maan manaofying his "wo"...

i loved when maan asked her whether can he ever break her heart...awww...i loved that...maan u should fake anger everyday...n then u gonna obtain a kiss daily...haha...

SHAADI...this gonna be so exciting...but...maan...he seems so upset at the very mention of marriage...i wonder why maan hates marriage like this...is it related to another girl or his parents...???i wonder...

kya baat hain Pihuuu...what a precap...i love it so much that i demand u update HM right here right now...haha...

continue soon n thnxxx...

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-knirwal-

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Posted: 13 years ago

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------edited------- hi mer mar jawa gud kha ke...tusi meri gal ta sun rahe ho g piya di...😳.apna thana hai kya ke ap muje uhi apni suniyegi se mar degi😳...''suniyeji''

u always do brilliant job..no doubt...apko hai kya? but muje nahi hai😃..apke is ff ki geet kitni innocent hai😳..booli bali...bilkul sweetheart...i imagine her making baby faces and her angry face...and other also...she is very sweet cutiepie...

geet ne ani ko direct hi bol diya ke use kisi ne kiss kiya...lol...humari pinky ji ke dimag ke to kya kehne...puri baat ka pata nahi awe hi trip cancel kardiya...😆

clients ke yaha shadi...hm..good..aur humare maan ko shadi shabad se nafrat hai...i know it...sab kehte hoge ke me kitna bolti hu...islie me kuch nahi bollogi...keep shut...😆

waiting for the time when maan said to geet...i mean why he hate wedding?wase maan sukar hai apko itna to pata hai ke vo ladki geet hai jiske bina ap reh nahi sakte..

precap...hm kuch romance ho jae...😳...vo to hoga hi...meri di ka jo FF hai..

cont soon..

eagerly waiting for more...

love u alot...nahi nahi alot se bi jyada...

ur's khushi...

muahhh

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SONU_29

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Abgina

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Posted: 13 years ago

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such a cutie pie part piya...luved it...
its truly amazing d way dey both are expressing deir luv to each other n still unaware of it...its truly adorable...
awww i sooo luved it wen geet said Ab kisi cheez se darr nahi lagta kyunki ab meri taakat humesha mere saath rehthi hai n maan held her hand assuring her...it was awesome...
maan kitna shararti ho gaya hai bechari geet ko award lete hue bhi nahin chhoda par geet bhi sahi badla le rahi thi...waise maan ki to lag gai thi use to laga sachmein geet dadima ko subah wali baat bata degi...lol...
but i luved geet's confidence wen she said ap mujhse naaraz ho hi nahin sakte...
but highlight of d part was 'suniyeji' 'kahiyeji' it was super duper cutie pie element...muah for dat piya...
it was sooo sweet d way maan surrendered n said haan geet ye sach hai ki main tumse naraaz nahin reh sakta...
maan ka note was mesmerising...my poetry STAR piya u r brilliant wid whatever u write...
ye maaneet to super cute hain yaar n totally inseparable...main is soch mein doobi hoon ki anjane mein to inka pyar itna gehra hai ki kuch pal bhi ek doosre se alag inpe bhari parta hai...jab inhein ek doosre ke pyar ka ehsaas ho jaega tab inka kya hoga???
luv u dear...

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Divya Nair (aka Piya)

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Originally posted by: crazydevil87

such a cutie pie part piya...luved it...
its truly amazing d way dey both are expressing deir luv to each other n still unaware of it...its truly adorable...
awww i sooo luved it wen geet said Ab kisi cheez se darr nahi lagta kyunki ab meri taakat humesha mere saath rehthi hai n maan held her hand assuring her...it was awesome...
maan kitna shararti ho gaya hai bechari geet ko award lete hue bhi nahin chhoda par geet bhi sahi badla le rahi thi...waise maan ki to lag gai thi use to laga sachmein geet dadima ko subah wali baat bata degi...lol...
but i luved geet's confidence wen she said ap mujhse naaraz ho hi nahin sakte...
but highlight of d part was 'suniyeji' 'kahiyeji' it was super duper cutie pie element...muah for dat piya...
it was sooo sweet d way maan surrendered n said haan geet ye sach hai ki main tumse naraaz nahin reh sakta...
maan ka note was mesmerising...my poetry STAR piya u r brilliant wid whatever u write...
ye maaneet to super cute hain yaar n totally inseparable...main is soch mein doobi hoon ki anjane mein to inka pyar itna gehra hai ki kuch pal bhi ek doosre se alag inpe bhari parta hai...jab inhein ek doosre ke pyar ka ehsaas ho jaega tab inka kya hoga???
luv u dear...

Was missing your comment i so wait for them. Thank you yaar itna achha analysis dene k liye. Yes they love each other but r unaware of their true feelings...this is called innocent love hehe hmm... maan shararathi ho gaya hai ab geet ki sangat ka asar hai...there r many maaneet moments ahead and this amritsar trip will b an imp phase of their life. Thanks dear love u