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disha

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Posted: 13 years ago

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amazing update...
loved it 😊

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Divya Nair (aka Piya)

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: udeshi91
sorry for late commenting dear 😳 coming to the update, beautiful update dear loved it very much loved the way how geet understood the unsaid pain maan went through while acting very rude to her it was so sweet how geet helped him to overcome from her guilty with her lovely words 😳 wow she made msk smile again 😉 only she can do that magic to him 😳
glad that maaneet have found their happinesss again in each other's embrace

finally maan gave a name to their beautiful relationship , friendship

really happy about the slow yet steady progress of their everlasting relationship

frienship is the first step towards love , slowly their friendship have reached to the shade of love

maaneet only need time to understand the depth of their feelings for each other

hope the immense care , trust and unspoken love will lead them towards that realization soon

aww maan gave geet his suprise 😳 it was so beautiful dear , msk 's choice is always unique😉

maan made her wear that , how romantic 😍 oho maan was so ziddi asking geet to wear that always 😲 bechari geet 😆 how can she deny such a cute demand 😉

ah geet found some word in it 😲 msk was tensed 😲 something is fishy ha 😉 zaroor dhal me kuch kala hai 😉 well don't worry maan your smart geet will surely find out your secret dude 😉

huh maan cleverly distracted geet and took her home 😲 kya quicky action hain maan babu 😆

loved maan's this picnic idea 😳 hope we can see some cute romance of maaneet during this picnic 😉 afterall it is msk's idea na 😉

loved it how maan answered annie 😆 poor annie , how will she know what is running in her bro's brain 😆 she doesn't know that she is gonna be a kabaab mein haddi 😆 are maan babu kuch tho karo besides thinking 😉 well hope our great msk will surely find a way to be alone with geet 😉

ah dude was happy that geet geet didn't find out his raaz 😉 well just wait & watch msk 😉

bechara was so confused about how to shoo away annie 😆 well nothing is impossible dude 😉

waitng to know maan's plan of akele -hum - akele - tum 😉😆

oho maan intentionally came late 😲 what a suggestion he gave to adi 😉great going msk 😳

looks like munda has already planned out everything for his mission 😉 haiye kya pyaar hai😉 😳

loved maan's suprise dear, it was so serene and pure like their bond 😳

again you selected one of my favourite song for maaneet , loved it dear 😳

loved the entire song sequence and those cute romantic lines

loved the way how maaneet are getting more comfortable with each other

loved it how maan was mesmerized by geet's innocence and how they lived that moment while getting lost in the spell of their magical love 😳

great job dear 👏👏👏

thanks for the pm and replying to the comments , it's so sweet of you 😳

please continue soon

Thanks dear yes Geet understood the unsaid pain and it was only geet who could have removed his guilt... yes u r right there is definetly a word engraved in the bracelet sahi time pe u will cm to know right now i can tell u it is a romantic word

picnic n msk khurana thoda ajeeb hai par pyar mein toh kuch badav aayengehina

yes they have a name to their relationship and now with every passing moment their bond will strengthen ...love u dear

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Divya Nair (aka Piya)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#203

Originally posted by: hinal_maaneet
wowww loved it
i think maan has got it done maaneet or geet in the bracelet No ur guess is wrong

n loved the song n the way they were enjoying 😊😊😊

picnic ka kya huva??????? picnic hoga dear

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Divya Nair (aka Piya)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#204

Originally posted by: crazedfan19
amazing song choice! I really wanna know whats engraved in the bracelet!!! thanks for the pm! update was amazing as always! 👏

Bracelet ka raaz sahi time pe khul jaayega

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Divya Nair (aka Piya)

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: -afsha-
Can u believe it that i read ur whole FF in one go
N Nw its 3.30 at nyt here in India

Loved ur FF

Maaneet are fab

Jus loved their relation

But reaching so ahead in relation they named it as frndshp

Thoda ajeeb laga but loved it

Lets c wats ahead

Thanks dear regarding their relationship slowly they too will realize that it is more than friendship

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: 234Diya426

it was amazing!!👏 i wounder wat was written in urdu?

Thanks dear

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Divya Nair (aka Piya)

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: disha_Maan.GC
amazing update...
loved it 😊

Thanks dear

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Divya Nair (aka Piya)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#208

THANK YOU FOR YOUR LOVE AND SUPPORT

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Divya Nair (aka Piya)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#209

Thank you for your love and support dear friends. I have replied to each of your comments individually.

Here is the next part and this is the 50th part of MH 😛😛😛 so thought of making it romantic

From next update I will start the new track

love- Piya

PART 50

"Simat jau aaj meri baho mein

Aane dho mujhe kuch aur kareeb

Bhool jau tum apne saare gamo ko

Aaj buland ho jaaye kuch iss tarah mera naseeb"

Both were lost in each other's embrace

Just then Maan's mobile started ringing

Maan: Dev ka phone

He attends the call

Dev: Bro aap log kaha ho abhi tak pauche kyun nahi hum kabse aapka intezaar kar rahe hai

Maan: Haan Dev bus hum raste mein hi hai wo traffic jam ho gaya haina bus hum pauch hi rahe hai

Dev: Thik hai bro jaldi aayiyega

Maan disconnects the call

Geet: Maan baaki sab kaha hai?

Maan: Geet sab picnic spot mein pauch chuke hai

Geet: Toh phir hum kaha hai kya ye wo picnic spot nahi hai?

Maan: Geet ye sirf tumhare liye tha aur haan yaad rakhna kisiko batana mat k hum yaha aaye the warna yuhi sab sawal pe sawal puchne lagenge

Geet: Magar Maan humare batane ya na batane se kya hoga unhe toh aise hi pata chal jaayega

Maan: Wo kaise?

Geet: Wo aise Mr. Khurana hum dono k kapde bheeg chuke hai aur zahir si baat hai agar hum inn kapdo mein unke saamne gayi toh hum pakde jaayenge

Maan: Hmm...waise baat toh tumne sahi ki magar iska solution hai

Geet: Kya?

Maan: Batatha hoon pehle car mein toh bait jau

Saying so he lifts her in his arms and carries her to the car

Geet: Maan ye aap kya kar rahe ho koi dekh lega

Maan: Shh...koi nahi dekhega chalo

Maan starts his car

After sometime Maan stops his car in front of a shop

Maan: Madam k liye ek achha sa salwar suit dikhayiyen

The shopkeeper shows him a variety of dresses

Geet selects a green dress but Maan stops her and gives her a red colored dress

Maan :Geet iss rang mein tum bahut pyari lagti ho

Geet started blushing she took the dress and went to the changing room

Meanwhile Maan too selected a formal wear for himself and got ready

Geet comes out and indeed she was looking gorgeous

Maan: Dekha maine kaha tha na iss rang ki toh baat hi kuch aur hai. Ab chale

Geet :Ji

Maan paid the bill and both of them come out holding each other's hand

Meanwhile

picnic spot

Annie :Ofho ye bhai aur Geet kaha reh gaye abhi tak aaye kyun nahi ye

Dev: Annie wo dono traffic jam mein phase hue hai bus aathe hi honge

Dadima was smiling

Annie: Dadima aap muskura kyun rahi hai?

Dadima: Aap dono ki bevakufi par hasi aa rahi hai

Dev: Humne kaunsi bekakufi ki baat kar di?

Dadima: Dev bete maan ne keh diya k traffic jam hai aur aapne yakeen kar liya

Dev: Haan

Dadima: Maan jhooth keh rahe the wo toh darasal Geet k saath akele mein waqt bitana chahte the issliye unhone ye bahana banaya

Dev: Ye aap kaise keh sakthi ho Dadima?

Dadima: Dev aapne dekha nahi kaise subah unhone hum sab kabaab mein haddiyon ko ek saath rafa dafa kar diya aur jab humne unse puchha k Geet ko bhi bula lijiye toh unhone kya jawab diya k Geet taiyaar ho rahi hai... magar humne toh subah hi geet ko dekh liya tha wo pehle se hi ready thi

Annie :Bhai toh bade chupe rustam nikle Dadi

Everyone started laughing

Adi gets a call on his mobile

Adi: Thank you Sir

Dadima: Adi bete ye aap kise thanks keh rahe the

Adi: Dadima woh actually police station se phone tha Arjun k case mein jo bhi progress ho raha hai uski pal pal ki jaankari hume mil rahi hai

Annie :Par Adi bhaiya ek baat samaj mein nahi aayi pehle baar toh Arjun ko aasani se bail mil gayi thi magar iss baar aisa kyun nahi hua?

Dev: Wo iss liye kyunki Bro ne saare vakilo se ye kaha hai k jitna paisa Arjun unhe apna case ladne k liye dega usse dugna amount Bro unhe denge agar unhone wo case nahi liya toh

Adi: Haan Annie maan sir bilkul bhi nahi chahthe k Arjun dubara kabhi Geet ki zindagi mein wapas aaye

Geet and Maan had already arrived and they were listening to their conversation

Geet was really touched

Geet: Maan aapne ye sab...

Maan: Shh.. geet tumhi ne kaha tha na k hum beeti hui baato ko nahi dauhrayenge toh bus ab ye aasu pochlo mere rehthe hue inn aakhon mein ab aasu kabhi nahi aayenge

Saying so he wipes her tears

Annie: Liyijiye Bhai aur Geet aa gaye

Dadima: Are aa gaye aap dono traffic jam se jald hi nikal aaye haina?

Maan: haan...daadi...wo kafi time tak hum phase the aap chahe toh Geet se puch lijiye

Everyone started laughing

Geet: Aap log has kyun rahe ho?

Dadima :Kuch nahi bete are waah aapki dress toh kafi khoobsurat hai kab khareedi aapne

Maan :Dadi ye toh kafi purani dress hai Geet ki

Dadima: Maan bete humne Geet se sawal pucha tha aapse nahi waise aapke kapde bhi naye lag rahe hai

Maan :nahi Dadima ye bhi purane hai

Annie: Ofho ye aap logh kya sawal jawab mein ulaj rahe ho hum yaha picnic manane aaye hai enjoy karne KBC khelne nahi

Dev: Achha tumhi batau hume kya karna chahiye

Annie: Skating

Dev: Skating?

Annie :Haan bhai yaha skating ka ek competion chal raha hai skating karte karte aapko dance karna hai haan magar sirf couples allowed hai

Dadima: Toh ismein kaunsa problem hai aap aur Dev ek team bun jaayiye, Adi aur Pinky ek saath aur Maan aur Geet ek saath

Geet :Nahi...

Maan: Kya hua Geet tum mere saath nahi aana chahthi

Geet: Aisi baat nahi hai Maan mujhe skating nahi aathi agar main aapke saath gayi toh aap haar jaaoge

Maan: Agar tum mere saath ho toh agar main haar bhi jau tab bhi mere liye wo haar jeet se bhi badkar hogi

Maaneet eyelock

Maahi...Maahi...

Adi: Huh huh...

Maaneet come back to reality

Dadima :Toh teh raha aap sab uss competion mein participate karoge

Everyone together: Yes

Pinky: Par waha jaane se pehle kuch kha le mujhe bhook lagi hai aur mere chips bhi khatm ho chuke hai

Adi: Aap fikr kyun karti hai pinky main aapke liye chips lekar aaya hoon

Pinky :how sweet Adi Sir

Annie: Chalo ab jaldi se kha lijiye phir hum sab skating karne jaayenge

Aftersome time,

Dadima: All the best dekhthe hai kaun jeetha hai

Annie :Jeetenge toh hum hi kyun Dev bhai?

Dev: Bilkul

Geet: Maan main keh rahi hoon hum haar jaayenge mujhe skating nahi aata

Maan: Mujhpe yakeen hai Geet

Geet: Khud se bhi zyadaa

Maan: Toh bus chalo

He extends his hand. Geet happily gives her hand in his

Maan signals her to sit on a chair. He takes the skates and helps her in wearing it

Geet was still nervous

Maan signalled her to get up

Geet gets up but immediately loses her balance

But Maan catches her before falling

The music starts and all the couples start dancing

Maan: Geet ghabrau mat bus meri aakhon mein dekho aur kahi mat dekhna bus meri aakhon mein aaj kho jaau...kya nazar aa raha hai tumhe

Geet: Bus apni jhalak ...

He slowly helps Geet to get up

Geet was lost in his eyes she did not realize that she was standing properly with the skates on

Maan: Geet mere saath dance karogi?

Geet: Ji

Maan carefully places her hand on his shoulder and supports her by holding her waist

Maan: Tumhe darr toh nahi lagega na

Geet: Aap saath ho toh darr ki kya aukad k wo aapki Geet k aas paas bhi mandara sakhe

They start dancing. Geet was becoming more and more comfortable with each dance move

Maan: Geet waise tumhara favorite song kaunsa hai?

Geet: Pehle aap bataiye k aapka favourite song kaunsa hai phir main batungi

Maan: geet ye cheating hai

Geet: Cheating hai toh cheating hi sahi agar aapko mere favourite song k baare mein jaana hai toh pehle aapko batana hoga

Maan: iss cheating ki saza toh tumhe zarur milegi Geet

Saying so he lifts her

Geet: Achha aap mujhe saza doge jaayiye main aapse baat nahi karti

Geet was about to go but Maan catches her hand and pulls her towards himself

Maan: naaraz kyun hothi ho main batatha hoon

They again start dancing

Maan: Waise pehle toh mujhe koi song achha nahi lagta tha par jabse maine tumhari aakhein dekhi hai tabse mere hotho par ek hi nagma hai

Geet: Kaunsa?

Maan takes another dance step and then looks directly into her eyes and starts singing softly

Maan: Aapki aakhon mein kuch mehke hue se raaz hai... aap se bhi khoobsurat aapke andaz hai...

Geet started blushing

Maan lifted her

Maan: Ab batau Geet tumhara favourite song warna main tumhe neeche nahi utarunga

Geet: Thik hai batathi hoon pehle neeche toh utariye

As soon as she comes down Maan turns her and palces his head on her neck and they continue to sway in the rhthym of the music

By this time many of the other couples were already out including Dev Annie and Adi Pinky

Maan: Bolo na Geet

Geet: Waise toh bahut saare songs mujhe pasand hai par jab bhi aapko dekhti hoon ek hi gaana yaad aata hai

Maan turns her around and now they are face to face

Maan: Kaunsa geet?

Geet: Jab koi baat bigad jaaye jab koi mushkil pad jaaye tum dena saath mera ho humnawa...

Maan: Song toh mujhe bhi pasand hai chalo milkar gaate hai

Both of them start singing

Jab koi baat bigad jaaye jab koi mushkil pad jaaye tum dena saath mera o humnawa...na koi hai na koi tha zindagi mein tumhare siwa tum dena saath mera o humnawa...tum dena saath mera o humnawa...

They get lost in each other's embrace

Everyone starts applauding. Maaneet had won the competition

Maan: Dekha maine kaha thana agar tum mere saath ho toh main kabhi bhi haar nahi saktha

Geet: Maan hum jeeth gaye

Maan: Haan Geet hum jeeth gaye...thanks geet mera saath dene k liye

Geet: Thanks toh mujhe kehna chahiye Maan aap meri har mushkil har uljan itne aasani se kaise suljha dethe ho bina kahe bina sunne mere dil ki har baat jaan lethe ho... aap k bagair main kuch bhi nahi hoon maan

Maan :Galat bol rahi ho Geet tumhare bagair main kuch nahi... mujhse vaada karo uhi humesha mera saath dethi rahogi chahe haalat kuch bhi ho jaaye

Geet: Aap bhi mujhse vaada kijiye k aap bhi humesha mujhse uhi samalthe rahenge chahe kuch bhi ho jaaye

Maan: Vaada karta hoon Geet main humesha tumhare saath rahunga

Geet: Main bhi vaada karti hoon Maan aap bhi mujhe humesha apne saath khada paaoge

They look at each other lovingly and get lost in each other's eyes

PRECAP: Maan: "Geet hum Amritsar ja rahe hai"

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Love-Piya

PART 51: PAGE 62

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Edited by piya- - 13 years ago

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Zahra

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Posted: 13 years ago

#210

i was feeling so sleepy yesterday that couldnt even read your update...lol...

maan singh khurana being afraid of being questionned...this is something new...haha...he even asked geet not to mention about his surprise...haha...

but mr MSK...you should have known that you cant hide anything from our witty and intelligent dadi...she is smarter than her granchildren...haha...

maan that was so sweet of you to have chosen a red dress for your "wo"...and then you even agreed to pay all the lawyers in order not to advocate arjun...really i can never stop falling for you...at least not now...i loved it when maan ied about their outfit being old...hihi...

hey Pihuuu...from where do you get these ideas...dancing while skating...now i know why you said you would be doing something romantic...i loved it...n the way maan made her date with her n skate all the while...while talking to her to make her forget everything...was awesome...

geet is reminded of "jab koyi baat bigad jaaye" song on seeing maan...awww...this is amazing...and the best is that they won...not that i doubted it with you being around...

i loved these two lines...

Agar tum mere saath ho toh agar main haar bhi jau tab bhi mere liye wo haar jeet se bhi badkar hogi

again this was so sweet of maan...with geet around..he can never fail...i guess this is it...both are each other's strength...

Aap saath ho toh darr ki kya aukad k wo aapki Geet k aas paas bhi mandara sakhe

if someone like arjun can be driven away...then geet is definitely secure n protected from all with maan around...

continue soon and thanksss for the pm...love you...

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