Behind That Smile - Page 12

hi dr ... this is my first PROPER comment ...

i just read ur first chapter when i commented first and i had no idea tht this ff would be this good .. ur first pt of good but the rest is great ...

wow it is simply amazing ... sorry for being so late for reading .. i finished my exams on fri and completed reading it today ...

i did think tht i would ever be longing to read a sad story .. the way u have interpreted is perfect .. and each and every torment tht is thrown towards kushi feels like tht it is toward the me .. it really hurts .. i did think i would be this sensitive .. i think it is the way u have written .. i just feels so close to ur heart and it truly is amazing how a sad story feel so touching specially for me ... as u already have said tht the end would be a happy one it sounds more appealing ...

i am turning to be a sucker for sad stories .. but one thing the end needs to be happy😉

love the way the characters are build in ur ffs ... ASR hurts kushi a lot but dr cannt make myself to hate the guy ...

as always u have stopped at a place tht i cannt stay without finding out the rest .. god it is killing me to wait for ur next update ... btw i am glad i didnt read this in minds of my exams .. i was bound to lose my mind ... i think i have lost it after reading this .. anyways dr loved ur updates .. every single one .. i am nt buttering u😉 here when i say tht each update was better than the previous .. perfect correlation ...

i almost cried reading the last update ... i was wondering how could she smile when she is going through such a time ... the last words of Aranv should have shattered here to pieces ... i was wondering whether she will attempt to commit suicide ... or will she hang there for her father's sake ... u tell me .. before i lose it completely ...

so let me conclude by saying u are a fab writer and i love ur ff ... pls continue soon

will be waiting for a pm from u

and thanx for the previous pms dr

and also best of luck for the up coming exams and glad tht u are finding time to update this ff .. we will be waiting .. but dont fall behind ur studies ... as u always can pay us back for keeping us waiting .. by give a extra huge update ...

so update when possible .. but will be waiting to read wht u have in store for us .. wht type of turn would it take???? ... i will leave it here

so see u around dr

- - badra