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Posted: 13 years ago
whn are u updating this one
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Hello guys…

update as u all where waiting for mahabharat..here it cums..

Mayank's problem will be handle in next part…as woh buhat bara ho raha tha…

Rplyd to u all

Thnks for loving n liking the previous update

Lov ya

Fiza

Edited by drfizaahmed - 13 years ago
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Chapter: 31

All of them entered the hal, with gunjan in irritation, Samrat unknown of all, nupur in worry and mayank was not at home.

SA: ap kyun k gunjan aur Samrat ki shadi ko kafi waqt hogay hai, tu hum humain lagta hai k zemdariya dono bahu hoon mein baat dain….

Gunajan was no full on prepared for her answer and nupur was surprised

MF: bulkily sahi baat hai..acha hoo ap ny yeah socha..

SA: tu hum ny yeah socha hai k mayank k sary kam nupur, aur Samrat ksary kam gunjan kerain gi..

Gunjan smiled a bit, as she knew she wont

Aur ghar k sary kam, ek din nupur aur ek din gunjan kerain gi, aur hum dono ko ek dosray k din kam kertay hoay na dekhain, khas ker k nupur apko hum un ky kam mein madaglilat(interfere) kerty na dekhin…

Gunjan: oyee tu yeah bhabi ny kaha hai, bhabi agar apko koi problem thi tu haumin bata dayti, hum kerlay tay, ap ny tu moqa dekh ker ami se bol diya

Nupur was looking at her shock

SA: asa kuch nhi hai gunjan baat ko maat bahra rahin hain

GUnjan: ji nhi hum tu apko apni bari behan manty thay, magar ap ny tu humari piit mein waar kiya, kam nhi kerna tha tu bol dayti itna hunjgam kerny ki kiya zarorat thi…humari shiyaat lagny k kiiya zarrorat thi…ap itni girvi hoi herkat kerain gi hum soch bhi nhi saktay tht

Samrat: GUNJAN…bhabi k baray mein ek lafhz nhi…

Gunjna: acha tu apko bhi apany aseher ker rekha hai unhony…dekha nhi kasay apk agay beechay rahti hain, ap ko bhi humaray khilaf kerdiay..smarat apt u samjhy..yeah sab in k kiya hai

Samrat: gunjan hum ny kaha k bhabi k baray mein ek lafz aur nhi..he chew his evy word

Gunjan: kyun nhi

Mayank: samrat…ap apni biwi se kahain is se pehly k hum kcuh bolain ap in ko chup keraday …

Gunjan: bhai ap Samrat se asay baat kyun ker rahy hain…apni biwi

Mayank: hum asay baat ker sakty hain, un per hath bhi utha sakty hain bhai hain woh humaray, apko aagr bachi samjh ker hum kcuh kah nhi rahy hain tu is k yeah matlab nhi hai…ap apny kamray mein jay

Gunjan: kyun jay hum, humary beechay sab fasaly hoon gay..humaray gilaf

SA: gunjan apny kamray mein jao..abhi k abhii..

MF: beta ap dono uper jay, aj hum ap kay shoro se baat keray gay.. thik hai chay shabash…

MF: smarat apni biwi se kaho baro ko lihaz keray..aur jis taraha se kaha gaya hai us taraha se hi kam hoga..

Samrat: thk hai baba….

He was too angry no matter wht nupur is too much precious for him too, and sum1 saying sumthing against her he wont tolerate….nobody can say anything against his bhabi and he never thought gunjan who always said she loves n repect her will do such a selfish act..samrat was compleyely in aware of gunjan's tactic. And was abit hurt too of her behavior as he never expected this

Mayank went inside there room and saw nupur siting on sofa, he sigh n remove his jacket and sat beside nupur

Mayank: isi din k liayn ap ko pehly din warn kiya tha..

She looked up to him n hugged him…

Nupur: hum ny sach mein ami se kuch nhi kaha

Mayank: janty hain, hum ny kaha hai ami se

Nupur: kyun magar..mayank dekhan na apny kitna hungama hoa hai..hum chup isliyan tu thay..

Mayank: magar ap k sath na isaafi horahi thi, yeah hum kyun bardasht kertay, aur gunjan ko ab kam se kam Samrat ki zemdari laylay ni chiay…aur wasy bhi aj nhi tu kal smarat ko bhi yeah pata hona chaiy k us ny apni zindagi k sath kya kiya hai

Nupur: mayank asi baat nhi hai, gunjan Samrat se sach mein buhat pyar kerti hain, bus woh yeah nhi samjhti k Samrat se pyar kerny k sath sath un k apano se bhi pyar keray gi tu samrat k kya pyar dil se pay gi..bus…hum bus yeah chaty thy k koi tu ghar mein un ko asa lagy jis se un ko izaat aur pyar milay..dheeray dheeray samjhy jay gi

Mayank: magar ab kya hua…woh baray aram se ap k faida utha rahi thi

Nupur: hum jantay hain…bus ghar mein hungam nhi chaty thy…sab ek sath rehty hain tu kisi ek ko tu apny andar bardsht rekhn hoga

Mayank: magar ab ap bulkily bhi interfere nhi keray gi, aur is k liyan um ny socha hai k ,shoro k kcuh din ap k jis din bari nhi ap ami k ghar ja rahi hain

Nupur: kyunnn

Mayank: kyun k ap se tu control hota nhi hai…

Nupur: mayanlll..

There talk was left in between wn they heard load voice of Samrat n gunjan

Samrat: gunjan mein ny tum se kaha hai, bhabi k baray mein ek lafaz nhi, mein ami se zayda un ki izzat kerta hoon, aj tu aagr is ghar mein ho tu sirf bhabi ki wajah se samjhi, warna ami kahbi razi nhi thi, aur aj tak jo tum ami k her lafz aur data se bach gai hona woh bhi bhabi ki wajaha se, aur aj jo naukari hai na meray pass woh bhi bhabi ki wajah se…

Aur tum mjhy se jhoot bolti rahin..mein sirf tum per islayn aetbar kerta raha k jab ami bhabi k sath asi thi tu tumharay sath bhi shyad..magar yaah tu kuch aur hi horaha tha..ami thik kah rahin thi tum un k sath kafi batmezi ker rahi hogi…jab aj tu bhabi k sath asa ker sakti hoo

Gunjan: tu is wajaha se kya mjhy in ki gulami keray gi…tu janty hoo mjhy gahr k kam nhi kerany

Samrat: kyun kiya yeah tumhara ghar nhi hai, is ghar ki koi zeemadari nhi hai tumhari, gunjan yeah sab tumhain sambhala na hoga…

Samrat was too loud nupur and mayank rash to there room, as they were doubting it will went out of hand…

Gunjan: mein nhi kerogi koi kam..tum janty ho..mjhy nhi atay…

Samrat: bhabi ko bhi nhi ata tha, magar unhony sambhala na…woh tumhari kitni madat kerti hai han aur tum , tum ny un ko bhi lehaz nhi kiya

Gunjna: Samrat mjhy bar bar us nupur se compare maat kero…

Saramrt: GUNJAN…he was about to rise his hand

Nupur: SAMRAT…deemgh karab hogaya hai apk…yeah kaun sa tareeqa hai biwi se baat kerny ka

Mayank: Samrat ap humara sath aay…

Gunjan was crying badly cause today in these months it was frst time whn Samrat was so harsh with her, though she knew she was wrong but she has always been , but he needs to favour her thts it

Nupur: chup hoja shabash..asay nhi rootay…

She forward her water n was spreading her hand on her hairs…

Nupur: dekho jab mard ghusay mein hoo tu us se lari nhi kertay, un k ghusa buhat bora hota hai, khamosh raho us waqt, bad mein jab woh thik hojay tu samjho apni baat warna Samrat k ghusa tu ap janti haina..woh kabo nhi ker saktay tu ap ko handle kerna hoag samjh dari se…

Gunjan hum jantay hain , ap k galat guide kiya hai sausural k baray mein, yeah k agar ap ny ek daafa bhi un ki baat mani tu zindagi bhar gulami kerni hogi, asa nhi hai, her baat nhi mano magar kuch tu is ghar ko apny ny ki khosih kero…

Asa ap is ghar ko nhi khoya gi Samrat ko kho dain gi..hum janty hain ap un se buhat pyar kertay hain, aur apki ami ny yeahi sekhya hai na k Samrat ko apny ghar walo se door kerdo gi tu woh tumhara hoja ga..

Gunjan was shocked to hear all this, as it was wht she has planned and always heard….

Magar asa hoga nhi gunjna, ap Samrat ko bhi kho do gi, janti hoon joint family system asan nhi hai, buhat comprise kerna parta hai, magar ap apno ko sath bhi kho do gi asay, akeli hojao gi, Samrat ki khushi bhi kho do gi..

Gunjan: magr mjhy yeah sab nhi ata…

Nupur: khosih tu kero

Gunjan: ap janti hai ami kasay baat kerti hai, mjhy koi kahosih nhi kerni..

Nupur: ami tu hum se bhi asay hi baat kerti hain, magar dekha hai humain pyar bhi kerti hain, un ki zaban hi asi hai, un ko un k zaban mein jawab dayna zaroori nhi hai, pyar aur izaat se baat kerk tu dekho…kya apki ami ny ap ko khabi nhi daaata…un ko bhi asay hi jawab diya hai hamesha

Gunjan: bhabi mjhy se ghar k kam nhi hotay aur na hi mein kerna chati hoon…hum apny liyan maid rekh lay gay

Nupur: thik hai…magar abhi samrat k ghusa dhnda kero warna buhat muskil hojay gi..

Gunjan: woh tu islyan ghusaa hain k hum ny….

She didn't complete her sentence and nupur knew why he is angry..

Nupur: un se kahan k hum dono k beech sab thik hai, aur ap ny mana liya humain..magar hain yeah sach hai ap ny aj humain buhat taklif pochi hai, hum ny ap se is taraha ki khuftogo ki umeed khabi nhi ki thi…hum ny apko hamesha choti behan hi samjha tha…jeetahni(eldest bhabi) ban jatay na tu ap k lyan is ghar mein saas layna bhi muskil hojata…per han aj se hum ap k kisi bhi mamaly mein madaghilat(interfere) nhi kerain gay…aur ainda is tarah ki guftagoo bardsht bhi nhi kerain gay….

Buhat afssos hoa hum k yeah soch ker k ap tak jo humray beech thaw oh sirf dekhawa tha….

Shayd yeahi ap k tareeqay hongay,, khir apny rishty sambhal lo warna buhat dair hojay gi…..hum khmaosh is lyan nhi thay k hum bol nhi skaty..per jo moqaam aj humara humray shoor k dil mein aur apny ghar walo k dil mein hai woh usi k sila hai….

Saying so she left her room..while mayank ask samart to handle her with affection, not with anger, but yet he needs to be strict at gunjan on the way she behaves with elders…

Though Samrat was dam hurt, that gunjan almost betrayed him, he trusted her so blindly yet she did so much even against him, so trusting her again was now difficult

He was to angry with her so he went to his room and lied down , without talking to her..

Mayank' room

Nupur: Samrat k ghusa kam hoa

Mayank: itna asan nhi hai aj buhat bara tamasha hoa hai, apny gunjan se baat ki

Nupur: smajha tu diya hai mayank , magar woh zeemdari lay ny ko taiyar nhi, us ny kaha ha maid rekhy gi…

Mayank: yeah larki zaroorat se zayda zidi hai….aur ek min apny un se narazgi k zara bhi izhar nhi kiya..

Nupur: kerdiya hai…mayank humari bhi self respect hai, aur ja humain sach mein buhat bora laga hai…rishty mein garwaht aai hi gai akhir

Mayank: acha zayda socho ker apni tabiyat maat karab kerain ap, he said caressing her arm, hugging her side way, lying on bed

Nupur: mayank ap MD se mily thy na kiya hua

Mayank: pata nhi nupur woh kiya khel khel rahy hain, humain kal office bolaya hai, aj tu hum ny jo legally document kiya tha woh manga tha, us ki cpy day ker aay hain hum…bus a job hi hona hai kal hojay…aur bardhst nhi horahi yeah tension

Nupur: relax kal InsahaAllah sab acha hoga, im sure..

Mayank: he smile..hmm sach..

Nupur: much…

Edited by drfizaahmed - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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BY GOD ye kya hogaya
ye gunjan tou wakei bahut bara tamsha khara kar di...
thanx GOD sam ne use daata- nehi tou had se bahutjaida bar gayi thi
how could she insult nupur????
it was too much re- i really hate gunjan here...
el prud for nupur-itna kuch hone ki baad bhi wo jis tarah se gunjan ko samjhya- it was just amazing.. hats off to her

hey ALLAH a\b tum gunjan ko thoda akal de do...
very nice update
weldone fiza
loved it loads
do update next part soon



Edited by -Faria- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
aw finally app ne update tu kiya
luvedd it
ll went so smoothly from strt to end
gunjan was really batameez...
hope everyything will be fine soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update API...
loved it lodsss...
akhir kar MAHABHARAT shuru ho hi gayi...
YA ALLAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
yeh Gunjan itni BATTAMEEZ ladki hain...uff!!!!!!!!
jee to karta hain sach mein isse mar hi dalen...
bt sirf Samrat ke liye chor raahe hain...
bt han..."GMYH" ke Gunjan ko toh main ek din sach mein mar hi dalungi...inshALLAH
iski himmat toh dekho kis tarha baat kar rahi thi Nupur se jaise uski naukarani ho...usse toh main😡😡😡
akhir kar Samrat ko akal a hi gayi...
usse iss Battameez ladki ka asliii chehra dikh hi gaya...
uff!!!!!!!!! yeh MayUr bhi na thora late nhi a sakte the...
Samrat meri wish puri karne hi wala tha...😈
n han!!!!!! ek baat se main bilkul Gunjan se sehmaat hoon...😳
ke usse Nupur se COMPARE na kare...😳
coz woh Nupur ke SANDALS ke layak bhi nhi hain...😡😡😡
usko toh ek thappar bhi kam parta...*hmph*
ok!!!!!! bht ho gayi uss battameez ladki ki batein...
my MayUr is sooo awesome na!!!!!!!
i love Mayank...

he is d bestest hubby anyone can evr get...
plzzz mujhe bhi asa koi chahiye...😳😆
he is such a sweetheart n adorable hubby...
hayyy!!!!!!!!!!!! ap ko toh pata hi hain ke iss ff ka Mayank mera sabse fav Mayank hain...he is such a janu...😍😍😍
i love him to d coreee...
aj main Nupur se bhi bhttt khush hoon...
mana ki usne meri wish puri hone se reh diya bt still...
i love her...
aj bhttt din o ke baad shadi se pehle wali confident Nupur nazar ayi bhttt accha laga...
accha hua usne usse suna diya...
loved d update lodsss...*as usual*😉
beautifully written API...⭐️⭐️⭐️
love u API...🤗🤗🤗

ps: dis is d 2nd time m writing dis comment...
pehla wala post hone se pehle hi error hoke gayab ho gaya...😔
so iske badlein i want a ROAMNTIC MayUr part plzzz n han!!!!!!!! Mayank ki problem ab solve kar do plzzz😳
Edited by 18anila1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
gunjan is so mean. she deserves a slap. I like confident nupur
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Posted: 13 years ago
hello😃.. uff bade dino baad comment kar rhi hoon.. bada achcha lag raha hai😃...
awesome update fiza-ji🤗..

love uu!!🤗

~jiya~
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: --jiya--

hello😃.. uff bade dino baad comment kar rhi hoon.. bada achcha lag raha hai😃...

awesome update fiza-ji🤗..

love uu!!🤗

~jiya~

OMG wht a pleasent surprise dear...
woh aay humaray ff khuda ke rehmat hai..
jiya ji ap ko aur apky comets ko buhat miss kertay hain...aur apki tareero ko bhi
hope sab thik thak hai
thnks dear🤗🤗🤗
lov yaaa
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Posted: 13 years ago
God Gunjan she's so mean 😡
if i was Nupur's place i don't know wat i would've done,
but she's sweatheart n understanding bhabhi
awesome part sis
plzzz update soon eagerly waiting what will happend to Mayank
thanks hun for the pm

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