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They went back to sleep and angad hugged her will sleeping. In the morning kripa woke up and angad was still a sleep. She slowly got up so angad doesn't wake up. She left to kushi and rahul. They woke up to and took shower. Kripa got their clothes on and took them down for breakfast. After few hours later angad woke up. He looked at time and it was 12. He woke up fast and found that kripa shut the curtains so he doesn't wake up. He freshen up and went down. He looked around and find no one. He saw a later on the table and took it to read it. He read it and it says that the breakfast is on the table and she is not home becz she took rahul and kushi to the park. She will be back in few hours. He put the later down and sat on the table to start his breakfast. He didn't feel much to eat and he keep thinking about kripa and her sickness when the phone ringed. He stood up and went to pick up the phone
A: hello
Someone: hello is Mrs. Kripa khanna there
A: im sorry she is not home..who is this
S: im her doctor..I just wanted to talk to her..its ok I will call later
A: im her husband. I would like to meet u..

Angad talks to the doctor and leaves to meet her in the hospital. When he reaches to the doctor.
A: I want to talk about kripa
D: yes what can I help u
A: u know that she is sick right
D: no..
A: don't lie to me I know everything
D: im sorry but she told me not to tell anyone about her sickness
A: is she really sick
D: we took check ups and the reports where the same..but
A: but what?
D: there is one way if u want to make sure the results are true
A: and that is?
D: I asked her to do another check up and on the we could make sure that she really does have long cancer
A: than do it
D: she is not letting us..she refuses to do it and says that the reports will come the same
A: I will bring her here and she will take the test…is there anyway u could save her
D: first we have to take the test then we will see what we can do
A: thank you doctor
D: ur welcome

Angad leaves back toward home when he stops by the park and sees kripa playing with rahul and kushi. He gets out of the car and watches them play. He gets tears in his eyes when he sees kripa laughing and playing with them. After watching them for few mints then he goes toward them.
A: wipes his tears and puts a fake smile) hi u guys
r,ku: hi uncle
K: hi angad…did u sleep well
A: yes after all ur where in my arms…
Rahul and kushi continues playing and angad kripa sits on the bench watching them.
A: ur doctor called this morning
K: oh did u tell her that I wasn't home
A: nods his head) yes I did
K: thanks
A: I asked to meet her and talk to her about u
K: why?
A: I wanted to know about ur sickness…
K: angad I told u its nothing don't worry about it
A: she said that u should do one more check up
K: I don't need to angad all the reports are the same
A: just one more time
K: angad plez…
A: for me once
K: looks away and sigh) fine

After few second of silence between them kripa turns to angad and smiles big
K: want to go with us out today
A: looks at her seeing her smile) sure
K: grabs his hand) ok lets go
Kripa runs to kushi and rahul dragging angad with her
K: u guys want to go there now
r,ku: yessssss
K: ok lets go
A: where are we going
R: we are going to the rids
Ku; the big ones
K: smiles to him) u wane come
A: smiles back to them) sure..lets go
They all sit on angads car and go to the mala. When they reach there kushi, rahu and kripa with out waiting for angad they run inside. Kripa stops and looks at angad who is walking slowly. She runs to him and puts her arm around his arm and pulls him. Angad still had a sad face. Kripa stops and coups his face on her hands
K: angad plez…how about we enjoy today with out worrying what will happen tomorrow plez…
A: looks at her)
K: smiles) now plez smile and enjoy with us
A: sigh and then smiles big to her)
K: now that's like a good boy
A: smiles big, pulls from her hand and runs toward rahul and kushi) let go…

They reach to the rids. The rids where like four people in one big seat. Angad was on one side and kripa on other will rahul and kushi in middle. The ride started and rahul, kushi and kripa puts their hand on air and screams will the rid starts. Angad just looks at three of them and laughs. After the few rids they beg angad
r,k,ku: can we have ice cream plez
A: no its bad for ur teeth
R,ku,k: plezzz ( puppy face)
A: don't give me that face..no.. no way …fine
K,R,ku: yeaaay
They run to the ice cream man and ask for ice cream. They each get two for each other. Angad goes to them
A: where is main
K: ops..go ahead buy ur self one
A: hey but u have two and I have none
K: im sorry there is more ice cream go ahead and buy ur self
A: no I want the ur ice cream
K: why main?
A: to kushi and rahul) see how mean ur didi is she doesn't even share her ice cream with her sweet husband
R: how rude didi
K: what? Hey u share urs with him I wont
A: I cant believe I married a cruel women
K: I knew it..I gussed right four yeas ago that u should have gone out with a guy
A: snatches one ice cream from her hand and eats it)
K: heyyyy…fine go ahead
They finish eating and run to other rids. Around 6pm they get out of mala.
A: ok now where do u want to go next
K: will we are going to movies then after that to dinner than after that home then sleep
A: wow that's long list
K: no its not
They watch movie then go the restaurant…around 10 they reach home. Rahul kushi runs to their room and kripa after them. After putting them to sleep kripa slowly comes out of the room. She goes to other room finds angad already sleeping on the bed. Angad was just portending he is a sleep. Kripa slowly sleeps next to him when angad puts his arms around her.
K: I knew u where awake
A: yes jaan I am( hugs her)
K: angad leave me
A: why?
K: I want to sleep
A: go ahead
K: tries hard to get him off but he was to strong for her so she gives up and hugs him falling a sleep.


Edited by Star* - 19 years ago
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😳 please please please con. soon it's fabulous 👏
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awww angad is gonna sav kripa!!!!! 😳 plz cont soon
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CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!! ur fanfic rocks!!! 👏 👏 👏 amazing, just amazing!
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excellent yaar.............to good...............yur amazing fan-fic just rocks..............continue soon.......... 👏 👏 👏
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Next morning kripa wakes up finding angad staring at her. Kripa sits up rubbing her eyes.
K: when did u wake up
A: looks at time) 1 hour ago
K: what so long
A: im joking jaan
K: oh u scared me..get up why are u still sleeping
A: puts his head on her lap) can I stay with u today home
K: u have to go to work and me to I haven't been to office seen we got married
A: I already took care of office there is nothing for u to do there
K: angad I want to give u ur office back…when u where gone I took care of it and now ur back so…
A: no I want u still have the office
K: I cant angad..u know soon I will die
A: don't u dare say that again…I will not leave u go..If u go I will go with u
K: angry) angadddd
A: what?
K: can u promise me something
A: what?
K: Promise me that after when I die u will marry again
A: sits up and faces her) what ur crazy?
K: plez angad promise me
A: listen kripa I only loved u and always will no matter what…and for promises u want me to make…ok I promise u that where ever u go I will be with u..and if u leave this world I will leave it to…
K: angad don't say that plez…
A: no kripa that's it I don't want to hear anything..( hugs her) I really love u
K: I..I love u to
Angad was shocked and happy that for the first time after 4 years she said I love u to him back. Angad hugged her even more tight and tears roll down his cheek
K: I really hate my self for this making u cry a lot…angad plez stop crying or I will to…I don't want to see u crying ever
A: it love jaan
K: I don't like this kind of love that make u cry ( starts crying to)
A: oh im sorry don't cry ( apart from her) don't cry now plez
K: holds her face with both of her hands and cry's more and more)
Angad didn't know how to stop her and knew that she will not stop no matter what he tells her so he just hugged her till she calm down.
A: jaan are u done now im really hunger
K: hits his arm playfully than wipes her tears) ok go ahead take shower I will make breakfast till then
A: how can u make breakfast will ur taking shower
K: what?
A: ur taking shower with me
K: ur crazy
A: its not my fault that im crazy
K: oh yea then who's is it
A: urs
K: what did I do
A: hugs her) u love me soo much that made me crazy
K: yea right who said I love u
:A u just said few mints ago
K: that was not for u I was saying for my self
A: oh really
K: really
A: apart and crosses his hands together anger) don't talk to me
K: what? Why? What happen?
A: don't talk to me until u don't say I love u to me
K: fine becz I will never say that
A: fine then ( looks away)
K: smiles to her self and gets up goes near the closet and takes out pair of clothes for him and places it next to him) here are u cloths
A: look the other way acting angry)
K: kripa goes close to him and quickly kisses his cheek saying I love u and runs out of the room)
A: really happy and shy to him self then gets up taking a bath
After making breakfast kripa went up to kushi and rahuls room to wake them up
K: get up u too
R: didi can we sleep a little more
Ku: plez didi
K: oh yea when I asked u to let me sleep longer what did u guys did was always throwing water on me so why should I let u sleep longer
R: becz ur the best
Ku: becz ur nice
K: yea right
R: pelz didi
K: fine go ahead

Kripa leaves the room and goes to angads room. Angad was still in shower becz the sound of shower was on so she sat on the bed looking at angads pic smiling to her self and talking to the pic
K: I love u soo much ( hugged the pic)
Someone came from behind and hugged her)
A: I love u to
Kripa jerked up and looked behind finding angad smiling to her
K: u scared me
A: why where u talking to my pic
K: looking down and shy) nothing just like that
A: oh really (gets close to her)
K: put ur cloths on
A: don't I just look good with only a towel on
K: I guess if that towel falls and I take a pic I will make lots of money from ur fans
A: first of all it wont fall becz I closed it hard…and second of all no one will see me but my sweet wife
K: shut up (and runs from the room)

After few mints angad comes down and sits next to kripa who was eating breakfast
A: good morning jaan ( kisses her cheek) ops I already saw u a lot so there is no use for good morning again so I will take my kiss back ( kisses her cheek again)
K: angad stop it…
A: ok.. Starts eating will staring at kripa
K: stops eating)
A: what's wrong
K: I cant eat if u keep staring at me
A: im not staring at u
K: oh yea then who are u staring at
A: my jaan
K: finish ur breakfast
A: where is the two devil
K: they are a sleep
A: cool for us
K: what do u mean?
A: now we could spend some privet time together
K: yea right ( gets up and takes her plat to the sink)
A: kripa
K: yea
A: get ready we are going to the doctor
K: I don't want to go
A: u have to… u promised
K: when did I promise
A: I don't care u are now hurry
K: we cant just leave rahul and kushi here
A: we are not they are going with us

After an 2 hours later they leave home. Angad stops by hospital and all four inter.
R: why are we here
A: for ur didi's check up
Ku: ur having a baby didi
K: embarrassed) no
A: not yet but soon will..today we are here to check if ur di is sick or not
R: she seems alright to me
A: yes but the doctor said we have to

They wait for kripa and kripa comes out after few mints. Then after another few mints the doctor calls them in
A: u two play here and we will be back
R,ku: ok

Kripa was nerves and so was angad. Angad notice kripa nerves so he hold from her hand and smiled to her
A: let go
As they went in their heart where betting fast and fast
The doctor came and looked at the reports
A: nerves) doctor the reports
K: holds tight from angads hand)
D: the reports says that she….she has a long cancer….im sorry
A: angad gets teary but fights back to hold it)
K: looks at angad and smiles) lets go back home
K: to the doctor) thank you doctor

They sit in the car and angad drives. He stops by another hospital
K: confused) what are we doing here
A: come out I will tell u later
A: u to stay in the car and don't go anywhere
R: ok

Angad takes kripa inside
K: angad what is this
A: I want u to do another check up
K: angad I don't need to the doctor
A: I don't trust that hospital..plez just do it here to
K: fine
After few mints they go to the doctor.
D: hello Mr and Mrs. Khanna….lets see ( looks through the reports) ur alright Mrs. Khanna
K: shocked) what?
A: are u sure doctor
D: yes the reports says that she is alright and she doesn't have long cancer
A: but we checked on other hospital and it says she has a long cancer
D: I don't know about that but im 100% sure that she is alright
K: what about the blood I throw up
D: will Mrs. Khanna we found some kind of diesis in ur long..don't worry its nothing..if u take ur medicines in time u will be alright…and have u taken the medicines that the other doctor give u
K: yes
A: looks at her and know she is lying)
D: u will get batter soon if u continue with the medicine
A; thank you so much doctor

They step out of the doctors room and angad hugs kripa tight will tears roll down his cheek.
K: angad why are u crying
A: its tears of happyness..im really happy today
K: me to..but how come the other reports..
A: I will try to find out about that..I think there is someone who is doing this
K: who can it be
A: I don't know but I will find out soon…

They go back to the car and drive home. Angad makes an excuse that he has work and he will be home later. Angad reaches to the hospital and goes to the doctor really angry.
A: I want to talk to u now
D: nerves) what can I help u?
A: why did u lie about kripa that she is sick
D: she is sick
A: throws the other repots on her face) this reports says that she is alright but u lied…If I want right now I will do a case on u and u will spend the rest of ur life in jail
D: no plez don't im sorry
A: the only way I will leave u if u tell me why did u do this
D: I…I
A: yells) speak up damn it
D: someone paid me to do this
A: who..I said who?
D: tells him about who paid him)
A: where can I find this people
D: I don't know they only came to my office and paid me that it I don't know more about them I swear
A: leaves the hospital angry and drives back home. When he reaches home he goes to his room. Kripa sees him walking to his room angry and goes after him.
K: whats wrong angad
A: do u know anyone named khilash
K: khilash..I heard that name
A: how about ridhika
K: they sound familiar..why?
A: they are the people who made the fake reports
K: thinks for a while then she remembers) oh I remember now
A: who is it?
K: will do u remember when I told u I was in jail
A: yea
K: will there was a police man who tried to rape a girl and I beat him up so the law found him guilty that's why he went to jail for 7 years and yes he got out of jail 2 years back….and ridhika is another police women who used to beat me up everyday…when u left I took my revenge on her and she couldn't prove me guilty.
A: so that's why they are after u
K: smiles) I guess not everyone want me to live
A: its not a joke kripa seriously
K: ok sorry…who cares about them forget it
A: kripa can I ask u a question I wanted to ask u about this along time ago
K: what is it?
A: when priya told me that u went to coma 4 years back..she also mentioned someone tried to poison u…do u think it is them
K : it could be..I don't really know..oh will lets do something else instead of spoiling our mood with does two
A: comes close) oh ok sure why not ( hugs her)
K: hey get off me
A: u said it ur self to do something else… and this is what I want to do.( naughty smile)
K: rahul and kushi
A: (quickly lets go of kripa and looks behind him finding no one)
K: laughs at him)
A: why uuu? ( runs after her around the room until catches her then picks her up in his arms.
K: angad let me go plez…
A: why? Give me a good reason
K: I need to go and make launch
A: its ok do it later
K: rahul and kushi are hungry
A: no they aren't
K: angad plez let me go
A: fine ( puts her down)
K: thanks
A: not so fast
K: what?
A: give me a kiss
K: never
A: one plez
K: no
A: plezz ( puppy face)
K: smiles to him then serious) no
A: fine
Kripa was about to leave when angad catches her hand and turns her around then kisses her
K: pushes him) ewww angad
A: why u didn't like it
K: of course not
A: ok (kisses her again)
K: what was that for
A: u said u don't like it so I took it back
K: I hate u
A: I love u to
Kripa runs down and makes launch after few mints she places it on the table and they all sit eating.
After launch they watched movie together.

Around 9 the phone ringed and kripa picked it up
K: hello
P: hi kripa its me priya
K: happy) hi didi how are u and how is everyone
P: everyone is great here how about u guys
K: we are great didi
P: we are back and I wanted to tell u to come over tomorrow
K: I need to ask …then I will call u
P: sure..bye
K: bye
Kripa run up to their room. Rahul and priya was sleeping. She reached the room and went to changed. after 5 mints later she sat on her bed next to angad who was working on some papers.
K: angad
A: hmmm( still looking through some papers
K: didi just called
A: oh how where they
K: they are all fine…angad
A: yes jaan
K: she asked if we could go over to their house tomorrow
A: looked up at her)
K: its ok I wont go I will just send rahul and kushi….
A: puts the papers aside and holds her hand) do u still think im mean to u like I was before
K: looks down and shakes her head) no…
A: then why are u asking me the way like as if Im going to say no don't go or I will hate u
K: I thought u might not…..
A: I really hate u for that kripa..u still think of me that way (looks away mad)
K: im sorry…
A: don't talk to me
K: I said im sorry..I wont do it again
A: im not lessening
K: smiles to her self and bends up quickly kisses his cheek then puts the blanket on top of her )
A: pulls the blanket of her) why are u hiding
K: im not hiding
A: yes u are
K: no im not
A: are u sleeping so early
K: yes
A: then what am I suppose to do
K: play football
A: ok but with who
K: angad stop it…
A: ok lays on top of her and hugs her)
K: angadddd…..
A: yes jaan….
K: ur to heavy ..ur crashing me
A: good.( starts kissing her face)
K: angad stop this
A: never
K: I want to sleep
A: go ahead
K: leave me then
A: nope
K: plez angad
A: only if u give me a kiss
K: never
A: fine then..( starts again)
K: ok now stop it slowly kisses his cheek) happy
A: no…I said give me a kiss not there in my sweet lips
K: no way
A: there is a way
K: wining) angad plez
A: how rude wife u are ( sleeps next to her)

They both where facing each other and kripa had her eyes closed will angad was watching her
K: still eyes closed) angad stop looking at me and go to sleep
A: thinking) how did she know…. she has her eyes closed
K: becz I know how u are
A: what how did u know what I was thinking
K: opens her eyes) u and josh are the same always think the same way
A: what u mean josh slept next to u
K: eww angad ur disgusting I didn't mean that
A: than?
K: will every time when I stood next to window some one came behind me try to talk to me I knew before who it is so I always used to say " go way josh I don't want to talk" and he would think how did I know it was him then I had to explain the same thing to him again and again..
A: laughed) I love u jaan
K: low voice so angad doesn't hear her) I love u to
A: I cant hear u speek up
K: I didn't say anything
A: I heard u say I love u back now speak up and say it or I will not let u sleep
K: I really hate u for this…loud in his ear) I love uuuuuu…..happy now
A: very much ( hugs her and both soon fall a sleep)

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