^THE JADED PRINCE^-{MANEET FF} next thread pg 151 - Page 7

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Yippie!... Finally some feelings in maan for geet...

It Was sooo cute whn geet gAve tht sorry letter superbbb

oh dat was amaizing dear tnx 4 da lovely updat

PART 6

She slowly moves her hand forward and hands over a note to him

G-i wrote this for you...it's an apology note

She says with her childlike innocence

Maan takes the note and takes a look at it. The note has a girlie and childish look to it drawn with creepers smileys etc

Maan has a small yet suppressed grin after looking at it, it was so unusual...so childish...and she drew them herself.

Maan unfolds the note to read it. It says-

To my dear husband Maan...but 'dear husband' is scribbled, and only Maan remained.

I am sorrryyy sorry sorry sorry sorry...but its again scribbled, so it's actually written-

This is to inform you that I had scarcity of clothes, so due to this reason I had to go and buy some. But I didn't want to bother you, so I went alone. But I was confused what to do with all the money in the vault so decided to take them along, I didn't want to hurt you. I plead that you should forgive me and please don't misunderstand me.

Thanking you

Regards

Geet Maan Singh Khurana

😊

He stares at the note for a while, re-reading it again and again... re-reading the scribbled out part too.

M-you don't leave this room again... without telling me first.

She nods in obedience.

G- Do you want to come along and help me shop?

Her words were like a vision from a horror movie for Maan, to tag along a girl while she shops

He quickly shakes his head and says-

M- just tell me first.

Now that Geet can see that he was no longer anger and in fact is in some what a good mode she decides to take her chances.

G- Can I go out tomorrow again?

He raises his eyebrows... he knows woman need lot of clothes but... judging by the pile he saw...he wondered was she a shopaholic.

She ignores the look and pushes forward.

G- I am bored and it's a beautiful city and I thought I can go to the nearby beach and buy some novels and stuff

She looks at Maan, she thinks he can say a flat no if she gets overboard. So she quickly adds-

k-but I can stay here and watch tv too...as you say...

Maan wants to say no. For no reason he can understand he doesn't like that thought of her sitting alone on the beach with a novel. Something is wrong with the image.But then it's morally wrong to keep a person locked up like this too.

Nobody can understand better than him the feeling of being caged; physically and emotionally.

He can't decide what to do with her.

At last he asks-

M-which beach?

She happily gives description of the one nearby.

M-no, it is not a good one.

So she names another one and he says-

M-that's too far away

She mentions a 3rd one and he says not the one either. So she understands that he won't allow her.

She just nods when he refuses all the options. She had wanted it so much to see the beautiful city, her heart was filled with joy and hope when he had almost agreed on letting her go, but...it was her fate...how can something good happen to her.

She looks close to tears but doesn't cry. She fights back her tears and clears up the table silently.

Now, Maan can see what is going on and he is feeling very uneasy with what he has done. Even before while hitting a person or lying to someone he hasn't felt this uneasy.

He thinks he is immorally imprisoning her and he believes that she is crying coz he is being cruel.

He watches tv for some while, in mean time she clears up everything gets ready for bed and goes off to sleep.

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He is sitting in front of the tv but he can see her profile outlined in the dark from the corner of his eyes.

He thinks, he can't buy books for her coz he doesn't know what she likes nor does he want to. He can't go shop with her coz shopping with girl gives him chills and allowing her to go alone is like letting her snatch away his security blanket.

He realizes that in all the time they had been married she had always been there. He had always known where she will be at which time of the day and he liked knowing that.

He didn't like not knowing where she is, he hated not knowing where she is, not being readily available to him even if it's just to sit quietly by his side. He likes that and hates not having it. All these realizations are troubling him even more.

He finally switches of the tv to go to sleep... which doesn't come easily to him... so he slowly creeps a hand to her side and touches her loose long hair and curls it tightly around his wrist making sure not to wake her up. Only then he can breath easy, it just reassures him that she is nearby even when he is asleep...reassure him that she is for real and she is for him.

She didn't pinch him today, she just turned around and went to sleep. He was feeling even more insecure unconsciously missing the skin contact between them. Even though it highly disturbed him at first now he is used to it.

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next mooning-

Geet wakes up.

As she moves her head to get up, she feels her hair entangled in something. She looks around and gasps slightly to finds her hair in his hand.

She thinks of waking him up to untangle them from his hand, but decides in otherwise. She decides to try and free them herself.

She is struggling hard to pull them out of his grip, using all her energies.

Maan slightly opens his eyes as he feels something moving. Geet fumbles with her hand trying to do the task as fast as possible, but in the process of confusion she loses her balance and lands on him with her lips planted on his cheek.

Wohooo I'm first to like and comment today :D
Loved the update sooo much!
Geet's note was so cute and maan actually smiled reading it =]
Maan is slowly changing I think..he is used to having her touch him unknowingly at night and since she never that evening he had to hold on to her hair! Awww :D
I felt sad when he indirectly refused to let geet go to the beach
Hopefully he will let her go soon
And omg the ending!!!! :O ;) !
I bet like a jolt of electriticty will shoot through maan and burn him when he feels her lips on his skin ;)
Can't wait for the next part
Continue soon
Thanks for the pm
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Awesome update!... Really luv'd the apology letter and the kissie part... <3

Awesome...

sooo beautifull tnx 4 da update