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this is so nice n interesting...i just love it...

plzz add me to ur pm list...continue soon n thnxxx,,,,,
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part 6
Maan is really doing a big mistake...
whats the need to hide it from Geet when he knows thats wrong and also Geet is such an understanding wife and lover...
cont soon dear...
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Whatever it is I dont want maaneet to get separated.
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Just read both the updates...

they were very nice...
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Originally posted by: punam2712

IT IS ONLY WHEN SECRETS COME IN BETWEEN THAT LOVE GOES AWAY

MAAN IS AT FAULT AS NOW THIS SECRET WILL MAKE IT EASIER FOR SOMEBODY TO BREAK THEM APART


Very true dear.. when the secrets come... its like a entry of 3rd person...
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Fantastic Update Jo 😛
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Hey Guys...

Late to say thanks for your comments... & that the same time i like to know your feed back on my next update... should i continue or ...???????????



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@Updating

NOTE :


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PART – 7

Next Morning

Geet was surprised to see Ameya & Aryaa in their room, she was about to get up but Maan hold & told her to be with him for some time.

Maan : Geet, aaj toh Sunday hai, y r u in so hurry?

Geet : (kept her head on his chest) Maan first tell me when did they both come in the room.

Maan (taking a long breath) : sometime in middle of the night...

Geet : ok but still then we have to be careful.

Maan : Take care of what Geet????

Geet (got up) : Maan, you know very well what I want to say & yesterday in the morning also you……..

Maan (kept his finger on her lips) : Shhh…don't think too much on that Geet…. We were ok when Ameya & Aryaa came into our room.

Geet : by the way what is your plan today.

Maan: Ok after lunch, we are going out to their favourite place & you can make your list too so that by the time they play, we will finish out with it & will have dinner out, by the way you are missing something Geet.

Geet : Maan kuch toh sharam karo.

Tapping on his head, she pushed him, but after all, he is Maan, pulled her near & was about to kiss her Aryaa got up.

Aryaa (rubbing her eyes) : Papa………..

Hearing this they both separated. Geet lifted her & took her to washroom. Maan was still lying in bed & moved his hand on Ameya's hair.

Aryaa : Mamma, I & Amu wanted to sleep with you so we came in your room.

Geet : no problem, par tumne mujhe uthaya kyu nahi?

Aryaa: Papa ne kaha ki Mamma ko mat uthao… & told us to sleep quietly…

Geet: Lagti ho Papa ki beti… & kissed on her forehead. Geet tells Maan to dress up Aryaa.

Maan : (to tease her) :Geet, u need any help dear.

Geet : Fine with me Maan just do what I said. Aur haan Ameya ko bhi uthao.

After 15mins Geet came out & was surprised to see Maan still lying in bed holding Aryaa & Ameya.

Geet : Yeh kya ho raha hai….. day by day u all are becoming lazy, chalo get up & she started pulling the covers, at the same time there was eye signs made between Maan & Ameya. Maan holds Geet's wrist & pulled her near…

Maan : So Mrs. Khurana you too can join us.

Geet (looking at Maan) : Ohhh so this was your trick

Maan pointed his finger to Ameya : Geet not me it's your son…. See daughter & father both were quite.

Geet raised her eyebrows looking at Ameya poor guy, got up from the bed & went to freshen up…. This was her silent warning to Maan too… Looking here & there, he too got up finally.

While they were having breakfast, Ameya reminded Geet about their evening outings.

Geet: Ameya, you only ask Papa.

Ameya: But Mamma you said u will talk with him na.

Aryaa poked her nose in middle saying: I will ask Papa.

Geet: Ameya, we will keep quiet now….. Let her ask...

Aryaa: Papa Aryaa wants to say something.

Maan: Ohhh mera baccha kya poochna hai bolo

Aryaa: we want to go to play station & Atharva is coming.

Geet & Maan were surprise by her answer.

Geet: Aryaa, when did you ask Atharva?

Aryaa: Amu asked him & said he is coming with his Dad.

Maan : Ok we are going after lunch & by the time me & Mamma do little shopping, behave like good kids & no masti in play zone is it clear…

Ameya : ok Papa…. Aryaa we will go to our room.

Geet : Ameya later on keep yours & Aryaa's School bag ready.

Ameya : Ok Mamma…

Maan : Geet, by the time lunch is ready I will just check out with the Office files.

Geet got busy in kitchen, Ameya & Aryaa in their room & Maan in his room. At the same time phone rang, which Maan picked, but the person did not spoke so Maan kept the phone down. This happened 2-3 times and at the end with anger Maan kept the receiver on side…

After having lunch, Geet again reminded Ameya about his School bag & to her surprise, it has already done.

Around 6.00pm they all left for Shopping Mall, Atharva was waiting for them. After talking with Atharva's Dad, Maan & Geet went to do shopping in the Mall, whereas Ameya, Aryaa & Atharva went to Games section with Atharva's Dad.

It was already 10.30 when they came back home, without making further delay, Geet told both of them to go sleep as they had to get up early next day for school.

Next update soon..

Hope u liked it.



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Lovely Update... Such a cute one...

Continue soon...

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